Manan FF - The Possessive Brothers (note on pg 69) (Discontinued) - Page 19

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Posted: 9 years ago
Wooow awsme aaj to kuch zyada hi funny tha wooow nandini suicide gaon walo bhut maza aaya tooo amezing
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hello I read ur story it's very funny lol😆😆
Nandu is so sweet manik really love her n all chapters are really awesome not for a sec I feel bored n still laughing... Jr malhotra hehehe... Nandu loves to annoy manik... Please update soon...
Please pm me...
Lots of love

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Posted: 9 years ago

hilarious update... 🤣... cant stop laughing...
u rocked it ...

loved bedroom scene...nandini is so naughty...he loves to irritated manik

pani getting married...haw...loved nandu drama...it hilarious conv.😆

Nandini suicide scene was too hilarious...don't knw what will happen to manik in future...

Waiting for soha scene...how she is pregnant now...nandu n nandu's pj...

Now nandu manik ki band baja rahi hai...

All d best for exam...

Thx for this awsum n mindblowing update...cant forget this update...

Keep smiling...😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
First of all sorry for not commenting
I was really busy
All parts are awesome
So funny
Nandini is a parth fan
Manik is jealous of parth
Manik's dad also like parth
Jr malhotra and Nandini's plan to irritate Manik
I wish pani status was true
Suicide part was amazing and damn hilarious
Nandini is falling for Manik
Cavya scenes were also good
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago


Chapter 12:


Nandini's Pov: I was still sitting on my bed...waiting for monster Manik to come...he told me not to get off the bed...

1 hour...

2 hours...

Ayiappa...enough...mere ko neeche Jana hai...

I jumped off my bed and went downstairs...I saw navya sitting and reading magazine...

Nandini:hello navya!

Navya:Han g...ab aap theek hain kya?

Nandini:never felt better after hearing that disheartening news...what do u think!!

Navya:hahah

Nandini:stop laughing!...I said sternly

Navya:acha acha... Haha...

Nandini:navya mujhe zoo jaane ka dil kar raha hai...lets go na

Navya:nandu we r not kids!

Nandini:acha..toh kya wahan board per yeh likha hota hai 'only kids allowed'...

Navya:are jab is ghar main do janwar hain toh zoo jaane ki kya zaroorat hai...hahahahaha

Nandini:oye...mere Manik ko janwar ni bulao!

Navya's eyes widened!!!

Nandini:wo..mera matlab hai...only I have the right to call him names na...bus that's why...

Navya:ooh...ok

Nandini and navya both are in the living room talking...and some girl entered!!

Girl:Manik!!!!

We looked as who is shouting and calling Manik's name...Manik too came there listening to the voice...

Manik saw her and made an annoying face: Soha?

Soha ran and hugged him tight...

Soha:aww I missed you so much...kaise ho tum...

Manik thinking:oh God...yeh chipku...phir tapak pari na jane kahan se...

Manik: what a surprise...soha!

Nandini was burning in jealousy seeing them close...

Soha broke the hug: aww ur still the same Manik!!

Manik:hmm u too!...Manik turned his face away...

Nandini:Manik who is she?

Soha:I'm Soha...Manik's college friend!!

Manik: friend?...we were not friends!...wo toh bus mukti Alya ki waja se...

Soha:oh come on Manik...we're more than friends too!...she winked and Manik rolled his eyes...

Cabir came there:oh hey Soha...wassup?

Soha:I'm good...aaj hi Wapis ayi London se...aur mujh se raha nahi Gaya...toh bus a gayi apne Manik se Milne!

Nandini's eyes widened in shock

Nandini came towards her: tumhara Manik nahi hai wo ..samjhi u bimbo!!!

Soha:excuse me...who r you...he is my Manik!

Nandini:no he is my Manik...

Soha:shut up...mera Manik hai...

Nandini:nahi mera...

Soha:mera...

Nandini: meraaa...

She shouted so loudly that everyone had to cover their ears...

Manik was smiling sheepishly seeing his Nandini declaring him as hers...

Soha:youuu...tum ho kon Han...what do u think of yourself...Manik kisi bhi aire ghaire ko bhao nahi deta...Zada hi sar per Chad gayi ho...

Nandini:excuse me...kya kaha tum ne...tumhare Baal notch lun gi main...agar aik lafz aur kaha...

They continued fighting...navya was in shock seeing Nandini like that...Manik was happily seeing Nandini fighting for him...

Cabir:wah re...aisa kiya kar diya tu ne...yeh itna badal kaise gayi...kon sa jaadu kiya hai...mujhe bhi bata taake main navya pe bhi kar dun...

Manik:Han magic hi hai...hamara pyar!!...he said dreamily watching her...

Cabir giggled...

...

Nandini: main Manik ki 'soon to be wife hun'

Soha:yeah right..dream on!!
...Manik lets go out na...

Manik smirked at Nandini and thought of an evil idea...

Manik:yeah...sure!!

Nandini's mouth was open!!

Nandini:Manik how could you do this to me??

Manik:main ne kya kiya Nandini...ab tum ne hi toh kaha tha...you don't love me...ab jab Soha mujhe itna insist kar rahi hai toh why shouldn't I go...at least I will be in peace...

Soha:dekha...Manik likes me..not you!!

Raj also came there: oh hi Soha!

Soha:hello uncle!

Raj: tum yahan achanak...?

Soha:Manik se Milne ayi thi...now we r going on a date...

Nandini: excuse me miss.poha!!...Manik is not going anywhere with you!!

Soha:firstly he is going...and secondly I'm Soha not poha!

Everyone were giggling silently...

Nandini:Han wahi toh kaha Poha!

Soha:.. S..O...H..A...not Poha

Nandini:Poha!!!

Soha:oh God...plz take me!

Nandini:invitation khula hai...jao...no one wants you here...

Manik:excuse me..I want her here...Soha..lets go...

Nandini:Manik tum us ke saath kyun ja rahe ho...?

Manik:because I want to!..get that!!...Soha is not that bad

Nandini got heartbroken!

Nandini:fine jao...mujhe kya..huh!...

Manik:chalo Soha...

Soha:okay!!

They went out...

Nandini got slight tears in her eyes...and she went running to her room...

Raj happily:dekha...Nandini got jealous of her!!

Navya:Han hum ne bhi dekha...Nandini ko kehi pyar...

Raj: Han mujhe bhi wahi lagta hai...finally I'll get Nandini as my daughter-in-law...he said happily...

Navya:lekin Nandini toh nafrat karti hai Manik se...

Cabir:aaj use dekh ke laga ke wo nahi karti...kaise wo Manik ko apna bata rahi thi...

Navya:Han..baat toh sehi keh rahe ho...lekin Manik ko Soha ke saath nahi Jana chahiye ...wo Nandini se pyar karta hai..use yun nahi karna chahiye tha...

Cabir:Manik ne yeh Nandini ko jealous karne ke liye kiya ...ab dekhna...it won't be long Jab Nandini will herself confess to Manik!!

Navya:hmm...

------

Nandini was sitting in her room angrily...

Nandini: samajta kiya hai khud ko...mujhe koi Farak nahi parta...wo jis ke saath jaye...huh...lekin then why did I say to poha ..my Manik?
Mujhe kehi sach main pyar toh nahi ho Gaya...
Agar hua hai toh...lagta hai ab bohat Der ho gayi...Manik is not in love with me anymore...late realization Nandini murthy!!...
Manik ne mujh se sacha pyar nahi kiya...Tears started flowing from her eyes...
Manik ab mera nahi raha...ab toh parthu bhi single nahi raha...ab kis ke paas jaon...
I think I should go for shah rukh kahan...wait he's married...then..umm...what about ranbir kapoor...no Katrina kaif will feel bad...

I was blabbering when navya entered inside...

Navya:hum ne sab suna...
She sat beside her...tumhe Manik se pyar hai na?

Nandini looked away:nahi..nahi toh...main kyun us se pyar karun gi...he's a monster...and I hate him for going with that Soha ki Poha!!

Navya:haha acha...phir tum jealous kyun ho ri ho?

Nandini:nahi toh...kyun kyun jealous Hun gi...kuch bhi Han...

Navya: nandu...Hume pata chal Gaya hai..tumhe Manik seand pyar ho Gaya hai...toh ab see mat Karo...use bata do...

Nandini:Han I love him...har wakt bus Manik ke bare main sochti Hun...Han gaalian Bari deti Hun...per dil se nahi...she said sheepishly...us ke baghair raha ni jata ab...bina use pareshan kiye...use tang karte hun jo khushi milti hai na..I can't tell you...but still wo tang ni hota mujh se...lekin...

Navya:lekin?

Nandini: ab he loves Poha!!...she said angrily...

Navya:nandu...Manik ne tumhe jalane ke liye kiya dafar...

Nandini: haawww...sachi kiya?

Navya:Han...hahahahah

Nandini: so mr.malhotra is playing with me...okkk...abhi toh pehle main us Soha ko batati Hun...then I'll see that Manik malhotra...she said mischievously...

Navya:yeh hui na hamari nandu...

Nandini told her the plan for Soha...

...

Manik was sitting in a cafe...not so interested in her foolish talks...

Manik:Soha...I think it's quite late now...lets go back...Nandini just be waiting for me...

Soha:oh come on Manik..we just came here...and Nandini just leave her...us ki kise parwa...huh...

Manik angrily:shut up...I'm going...if u wanna come ...then come...if no...get lost...he said angrily and went from there leaving an angry Soha behind...

PRECAP: Poha's face black...Nandini's unexpected confession and Manik fainted...


One more chappy coming up...stay tuned!!!




Edited by LovelyKat - 9 years ago
avneetmalhotra thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wooow awsme nandini ko finally relies hooo gya soo happy fr manan n soha ka poha was amezing waiting fr confession
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for pm
It was amazing
Finally nandini confessed
Can't wait for navyas turn ahah
N this Soha poha thing was too funny
Now that Nandu knows he did that to make her jealous
Even she should pay him back like make him jealous or somethings haha
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Posted: 9 years ago
Jaldi se update karo
Wait nhi hota

But I want nandini thoda aur tease kare manik ko yeh pyaar ka confession karne mein
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update continue soon waiting...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesomee
Amazinggg
Superbbb update
Fibalky nandu ko realise huya...jealous nandu...nandu ek baar manik ko bhi jealous krwayo apne pln mein...lovd it...continue soon

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