Manan FF - The Possessive Brothers (note on pg 69) (Discontinued) - Page 20

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
Loved it
Nandini so cute
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Posted: 9 years ago
awsum update...
nandini is jaleous ...
nandu ne..soha ka poha kar diya ...hahhahha
nandini realise that she loves manik..wow...
waitg to c nandu plan...
loved it...
take care...

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update dear
Love it
Jaleous nandu
Soha poha 😡
Waiting for nandusplan for poha
Plzcontinu soon
Take care
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Posted: 9 years ago
😃😛😆👏
what an updates..
God..jello nandu..soha ki poha baba diya..
mere manik..
ab parthu bhi gya,shahruk to pehle se hi shadi shuda..
fabulous updates..
waiting for more
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Posted: 9 years ago
hahah finally nandini realised her love for manik
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update
So funny
Nandini jealous of soha
Nandini realised that she loves manik
Waiting for confession
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hahaha
Epic one


Manik poha ka face dehkya faint hogya ya pher nandu confess sai

Yaar please update kardo

I can't wait anymore

Hilarious


Awesome


Superb
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Posted: 9 years ago


Chapter 13:

Nandini's Pov: I was waiting for Manik and Poha both...I was sitting on the hall and saw Manik entering inside...but Poha is not with her...that's strange...

Nandini:how was your date mr.malhotra...I hope it went well...

Manik sat beside her: yeah..it was awesomeee...kiya bataon main...we toh even...

Nandini raised her eye brows: you to even...?

Manik:nahi..kuch nahi...

Nandini:but ap ki Poha hai kidr?

Manik: ati ho hi...she had some work..

Nandini:ooh...

I angrily grabbed a cushion from the sofa and started beating him...

Nandini:us poha ke saath maze kar rahe the na...yeh lo...aur khao...yeh lo...

Manik:are Nandini kayaker rahi ho..lag rahi hai...plzzz...stop

Nandini:nahi...ab toh wo poha tumhare liye bohat important ho gayi hai na...

Manik:kyun..ur jealous? He smirked...

Nandini:huh...main jealous...stop dreaming...I toh don't even care...ok

Manik:ooh like that...

Nandini: u...u should go on multiple dates with her...shaadi bhi us se karna...bache bhi paalna us ke saath..ok?

Manik:okay..if you say so!

Nandini:urgghhh!!!!!

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That poha is staying here for some days...now her eyes will be always on Manik...but main bhi Manik ki jungle billi Hun...dekhti gun...agar Manik ke Kareeb ayi na...khoon chus lun gi...but how will her blood taste...eewww...

I went toward her room and saw her sleeping peacefully...I smirked and called my baby junior...

Nandini: go n pee on her bed near her face..okie?

Jr: woof woof...

Jr. went in and did as she told and came back...

Soha was making weird faces in her sleep...she slowly opened her eyes...

Soha:what's this smell...?..eww...it smells disgusting like a dog peed or something...

She then saw her bed wet...

Nandini entered inside...

Nandini:haww..Poha...you peed in your bed???...eww...ur so chii chii chii...don't you have manners to use washroom...

Soha:shut up..and I didn't do this...samjhi...now get out from here..

Nandini:I will tell everyone tumhari harkatein...ur so disgusting...yukhi yukhi...

Soha:you...

Nandini ran outside laughing...

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It was soon morning...Soha freshened up..and came outside...she was about to use the hair dryer...when she turned it on...the black powder spread all across her face...

Soha:WHAT THE HELL??????

Nandini's Pov:we were doing our breakfast when we all heard Poha's shout...plan successful!!

Soha came running downstairs...angrily

Nandini:ayioo...tum black kaise ho gayi...ur looking like a 'West Indies Woman!'

Soha:who did this???...tell me???

Nandini:ayioo...tum hum logo pe shak kar ri ho...very baddd miss.Pohaaa!!!!!

Soha:I know is ke peeche tumhara hi haath hai...I won't leave you like that...

Nandini:toh ao na...darti Hun tum se Han...a aur bata...main bhi tujhe bataon gi...what is Nandini murthy!!...Han main ne kiya...kyun ke tum kal Manik ke saath bahir gayi thi na...us ke liye tha...ao na batao..kiya karo gi????

Manik:Nandini..by the way...plan was nice...I mean seriously she's looking like a ...no words to say...hahahahah

With this everyone started laughing including raj

Soha was very very angry on Nandini and went from there stomping her feet...

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Everyone were in the living room waiting for Nandini as she had some news to tell them...

Nandini came finally...

Navya:kiya baat hai nandu...tum ne hum sab ko yahan kyun bulaya?

Nandini went toward Manik...and said...

Nandini: I'm pregnant!!!

Everyone were shocked listening to this...

Nandini:with Manik's baby!!

Manik's face paled...when did he become a father...

Manik thinking: I have to search on Internet...does kissing lead to pregnancy...??

Navya:yeh kya keh rahi ho tum...

Soha:what the hell??...this can't happen!!...Manik say that this is not true...

Manik is still in shock ...he couldn't react!!

Nandini:are meri poori baat toh sun lo..mujhe aaj kuch confess karna hai Manik se...

Nandini went towards Manik and held his hand...

Nandini: Manik will you make me pregnant with your baby??...plz say yes...mujhe yeh kehna hai ke I love you...I love you so much...thanks to this Poha...I understood my feelings...plz marry me...

Manik couldn't believe his ears...firstly is this the way of proposing him...secondly...he is still thinking is he dreaming or something...

Nandini:Manik plz say na kuch..I'm waiting...will you marry me...??...I want to spend my whole life with you..to annoy you..to make you suffer...plz accept Nandini murthy's proposal!!

Soha:what the hell...just shut up...Manik say no to her!!

Manik didn't even blink his eyes...and then he...fainted the next moment...

Nandini held him: ayioo...this boy fainted...mera answer toh de deta...now who will answer me...

Raj:Doctor ko bulao koi...Manik beta Utho...

Nandini:future father-in-law...lets take him to his room...

Soha:leave my Manik...

Nandini angrily stood up and grabbed her hairs in her hands

Nandini: kiya kaha...kis ka Manik???

Soha:mera Manik!!

Nandini:aik baar dobara bolo...main tumhe yehi ganja kar dun gi!

Nandini then pushed her and she fell on the ground with a thudd...then they all took Manik to his room...doctor soon came and checked him...

Doctor:lagta hai inhe koi bara Shock laga hai..jis ki waja se yeh behosh ho Gaye hain...

Nandini:obviously..its Nandini murthy's confession...shock toh lage ga na...lekin Doctor uncle...shock Lagne se mental asylum toh ni bhejna pare ga na??

Doctor:kiya...nahi toh...

Nandini:ooh..good good...

Doctor went after his check up...

Cabir:bhabhi ji...ur way of confessing...mind blowing...awesomeee!!!

Nandini:thank you my soon-to-be-devar ji!!

Navya:had hoti hai nandu...koi aise kehna hai kiya...will you make me pregnant...tumhe koi Akal bhi hai ke nahi?

Nandini:are ask ayiappa...unhe pata ho ga na...after all ...I'm his creation!!

Raj:chalo ab..Manik ko araam karne do..Nandini beta..you stay here...

Nandini:okie...and Han..agar poha idhar ayi na...main us ke peete peete kar dun gi..Han nahi toh!!!

Everyone laughing went outside...

The Nandini lied down beside Manik admiring his sexy face!!

After a while..Manik woke up with a jerk

Manik:Nandini...myra is crying!!

Nandini confused:Myra kon?

Manik:are our daughter...!!

Nandini: but Manik we don't have kids!!

Manik slapped his forehead: ooh...it was a dream...wired dream that was...I also saw you proposing me in a weird way...

Nandini laughs: Manik that wasn't a dream...I did propose you...

Manik:Han sachi...u...u proposed me?

Nandini nodded happily...

Manik:matlab...you...you also wanna marry me??...he asked happily...

Nandini:yes...so now ab hum officially boyfriend and girlfriend hue..till we r married...she winked and Manik hugged her tightly...and madly kissed her whole face...

PRECAP: intezar karo😛

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Edited by LovelyKat - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazinggg
Superbbb update
Hahahaha ndndu sach mein soha ka poha bna diya...wowww nandu propose kr diya ...lovd it
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
EXCITED FOR THE NEXT UPDATE!!!!!

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