Manan FF - The Possessive Brothers (note on pg 69) (Discontinued) - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
#61
promo and chappy both were amazing
nandu was seriously LOL
kitne question karti h yeh ladki
manik ne tape hi laga diya... hahaha
omg marriage but manbir dad came at the right time
ab aage kya hoga
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62
Read all d parts in 1 go...
Luved all d updates...
& d promo is really interesting & hilarious...
Plz continue soon...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Read all d parts in one go
Beautiful
Amazingg
Lovd it
Awesome promo
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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super funny update ...u always manage ...to makes us smile with ur lovey duvey update ...jus loved itt ...n promo is jus super duper awesome...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 5:



Nandini Pov:I was starving..Manik didn't come back yet...I will eat these ropes now..seriously..if he doesn't comes in 1 minute...

After 1 min

Here he comes..finally...

Nandini:what took you so long..my stomach is growling and demanding food!

Manik:ok ok..wait...

He sat beside me and started feeding me macaronis...my favorite...ooh..they taste so good...

After feeding me...

Nandini:Manik..plz open my hands..I promise I won't run..my hands are hurting..plz!

Manik:umm ok...

He untied me...

Manik:are you ok?

Nandini:obviously not..what do you think...my psycho future husband is forcing me to marry him so u think I'm ok? 😲

Manik:I'm not a psycho ..it's just that I love u a lot..ok!

Nandini:duhh...whatever...I rolled my eyes

He sat beside me and cupped my face

Manik:Nandini..I really really love you..Main tumhe hamesha khush rakhun ga..I promise..plz bus tum mujhe aik chance de do...plz just trust me once!

Nandini:trust you?..ok then tum mujhe jaane do...that's how I will trust you that u r right for me...

Manik:nahi yeh main nahi kar sakta..I want you to stay with me..

Nandini:but I dont...tumhe samaj kyun nahi a raha?

Manik angrily stood up

Manik:u r not going anywhere..tomorrow is our marriage..end of discussions!

Nandini:ok...waise I wanted to ask another question!

Manik:plz stop eating my mind...should I bring more food?

Nandini:I'm serious!

I kept a serious face as my question was very serious..and I wanted to know!

Manik:ok fine..ask!

Nandini:as we are marrying...so...where will we go on our honeymoon?😊

Seriously Nandini..honeymoon...aik taraf you don't want to marry...doosri taraf u r asking about honeymoon...damn you...but still I want to know..

Manik smirked:already honeymoon ki planning shuru?😉

Nandini:no..I'm thinking let's go to our honeymoon alone...I mean u and cabir go..and I and navya will go alone..what say?😆

Manik slapped his forehead...

Manik:Nandini I'm not gay..and u r not lesbian...plz...for once be serious!🥱

Nandini:no I'm serious...it's like friends honeymoon...or brother sister honeymoon...

Manik:Nandini..if you say another word...then main yehi tumhare saath..abhi...suhagdin manaon ga...

My eyes popped out of my sockets...I didn't say another word..

Manik:that's good...not another word...and yes for ur information...I'm thinking we will go to Paris...

Nandini:Manik..I don't want to have babies right now..I'm serious...

Manik:we will have our babies after some years...don't worry...

I sighed in relief...as I don't want to get fat..I love my physique..wait a second..Nandini u r seriously discussing about having babies...u have to think about how to not marry mr.akru no1...think about that stupid...

Manik:hello..where r u lost?...so u r ready to marry me..right?

Nandini:well..no!..don't get happy so early...not gonna happen in your wildest dreams...

Manik:actually it already happened in my wildest dreams...u know I was just close to even marking u mine...then damn that stupid phone...

I'm confused..what is he saying...his talks are like flying over my head..they are not going inside my ears..😛

Nandini:sorry..I didn't get that!

Manik:forget it...ill be back in a minute...

Nandini:it's ok..if you don't come back..ill be very grateful!..thank you!

He glared at me and we went out locking the door

I sighed as he wont listen to me ..I know...I walked toward the window and saw those chimpanzees standing and guarding...I just wish I had a gun right now and I would shoot all of them..idiots...well what is their fault..they are just doing their jobs..I pity them as they have to bear their arrogant monster Boss too..urgghhh...I so wanna kill those akru no 1 & 2 both...I wonder what is navya doing right now...is she ok???

Navya Pov:cabir brought me inside our room..and put me on the bed...and locked the door too...I was scared what was he gonna do now...then he calmly went and sat in front of me...but didn't say anything...kehi use bukhar toh nahi...cheekh nahi raha hum per wo...that's new...

Cabir:are you hungry?

Navya:no!

Cabir:ok...

Navya:cabir Hume tum se kuch poochna tha!

Cabir:yes?

Navya:tum hum se bohat pyar karte ho?

Cabir:u think..of course I do...u can't even imagine...u know the first time I saw you..I went head over heals for you...

Navya:at a very young age..seriously?

Cabir:pyar karne ke liye bare hone ki zaroorat nahi hai...it was love at first sight...bachpan main hi ho Gaya tha...

Navya:ok bas bas...aur nahi Sunna...agar tum sach main hum se pyar karte na..toh aise zabardasti apne pas baand kar nahi rakhte...u have to give space to your loved ones...aise un pe hukum nahi chalate...yeh sirf tumhara pagalpan hai...tumhe is se kuch nahi mile ga...abhi bhi wakt hai..peeche hat jao...yeh shaadi mat Karo...aur apne bhai ko bhi keh do..yeh pagalpan chore...aur meri behn ko bhi azaad kare...plz...agar tum aisa Karo ge..I won't hate you...

Cabir:ho Gaya...ab chup raho..mujhe koi lecture nahi Sunna...mera bhai Nandini se bohat pyar karta hai..aur main tum se...agar hamara pyar tumhe pagalpan lagta hai toh yehi sahi...lekin hum peeche nahi hatein ge...dimagh main yeh baat baitha lo...

Navya:u will regret this one day cabir...u will regret this!!

Cabir:I won't...

Navya:kisi se zabardasti pyar nahi karaya ja sakta...dimagh main yeh baat tum bhi baitha lo!!

Cabir stood up and grabbed her harshly...

Cabir:tum mujh se pyar Karo gi...dekhna...

Navya:choro mujhe...

Cabir pushed her on the bed and went out...leaving a crying navya behind...

Nandini's Pov:I was sitting on the bed and watching tv...and I was bored too...I want some entertainment...even Manik is not here so that I could irritate him..and I even don't want him around him...waise I just love irritating him...it's my favorite pass time...still he doesn't lets me go...huff...I was watching my favorite serial kaisi yeh yaariyan...I just love that show...I'm really addicted to it...if I miss even one episode..ill go crazy..seriously...this show shows us true love ...I'm also in love with the fireflies and stars...I wish I had them...hehe...

Then Manik entered the room..and turned off the tv...and I shouted

Nandini:what the hell!!!!

Manik:what...I wanna show you something...

Nandini:no..I wanna watch my show..miss ho jaye ga...

Manik:u can watch it later...

Nandini:no..I wanna watch it now..get aside..

Manik:no!

I was seriously going mad..as I can't bare to miss it...

Manik:ok fine...he threw the remote back at me which he snatched...

When I turned it on...it was showing the end...urrrghhh...I will kill him now...I harshly grabbed his collars and shouted...

Nandini:Manik malhotra..do u have any idea..what u just did?😡

Manik horrified:what?

Nandini:u turned off the tv...and I missed the end..u jerk!!

Manik:so what..u could watch it later...

Nandini:urgghhh...I will kill you...

I pushed him..and took the pillow from the bed..and started running behind him shouting I will kill you...and he was also running...a tom and Jerry show was going on...

Manik:Nandini ...Nandini wait...I'm sorry ok...stop it...

I cornered him and he had no where to go...and then I started beating him with the pillow...and he was defending himself...

Manik:baby..I'm sorry...plz..stop...

I finally stopped...the feathers from the pillow had fallen out...

I started crying...

Manik:baby..why are you crying..it's just a stupid show..you could watch it later...

Nandini:what ...did ...u ...just ...say...??

Manik:I mean..it's not stupid...ok I'm sorry

Nandini:I won't forgive you for this..Manik...mujhe end dekhna tha...I started crying more

He cupped my face and wiped my tears with his fingers...

Manik:ok..stop crying..ill do anything what you say..but plz.stop crying...

Nandini:ok...I want 5 diamond necklaces...

Manik's eyes popped out:5?

Nandini:yes..5...

Well perks of being soon to be Mrs.malhotra...hehe...wait...I'm not ready to marry him..why do I forget that again and again...

Manik:ok..

Nandini:no I don't want it...

Manik:why?...ill just order it...

Nandini:umm nope..mood badal Gaya...

Manik:u have weird mood swings..seriously...

Nandini:acha batao..kya dikhana tha mujhe?

Manik:oh...yeah...I wanted to show the tickets...I booked them

Nandini:of where?

Manik:of Paris..we will be leaving after 2 days...

I didn't had anything to say..I was just staring him...eyes wide...

Nandini:I'm not going!

Manik:whyyy?

Nandini:because...of you I missed the serial..that's why...

Manik:that's a stupid reason Nandini...and I'm not hearing a no...get that...

Nandini:plz..could you explain..I didn't 'get that!'

Manik:urgghhh...just leave it...it's no use getting in an argument with you...

Nandini:I know...

Next morning:

I was sleeping peacefully..dreaming about unicorns...I was riding them...well weird dreams I get...and I could also feel that monster clinging to me tight...and I can't do anything about that...I wonder sometimes...is he a fevicol or something...always has to get chipku chipku with me...and wait...reality hit me hard...today's the day...the Dooms day!!...the day of my marriage...I wish I could just throw him in the Bermuda Triangle...so that he would never be found...haha...ok..time to get up..and hide somewhere before he starts ordering me...

I was trying to get out of his hold...but his hold just gets tighter and tighter...I just feel like kicking him in his balls...so that he would scream his lungs out...and would not be able to get up..but then I thought it's not a good idea...because it can also damage his insides...and what if he would not be able to become a dad...how will I get kids then...urgghh...shut up nandu...I so hate myself ...for thinking about this...I think I have some partial amnesia problem or something...that I keep forgetting that I'm not 'marrying him!'

I saw Manik opening his eyes...finally!

Manik:good morning baby!!

Nandini:good morning jaanu!..I faked smiled...

Manik:wait..is this a dream or something...u called me jaanu!

Nandini:yes..it's the reality...

Manik:call that again...

Nandini:what...monster?

Manik:no..jo tum ne abhi bola...

Nandini:ooh...akru

Manik:no...

Nandini:then chimpanzee...

Manik:nooo!!!jaanu...

Nandini:ooh...that...ok...

Manik:say na...

Nandini:kutub minar!!!!⭐️

Manik:where should I bang my head?

Nandini:well..there are walls...but I think u should bang in the colorful one...red!..u love that color right!

Manik:I'm seriously gonna go mad..staying with you!

Nandini:then who is saying stay with me...u could just throw me out..right now...not a bad idea it is!

Manik:no..that's not gonna happen...

Nandini sadly:ok!

Manik:and todays the day...

Nandini:which is called as dooms day!!

Manik:no..it's marriage day!

Nandini:which is also called dooms day!

Manik:where is it written?

Nandini:in my dictionary!

Manik:then shut ur dictionary..for God sake!

Nandini:how will I close it...I don't have the key...u could buy it from the market..ill be waiting...come quick...

Manik:where is the tape?

Nandini:I think it's there in the 2nd drawer!

Manik:thanks for telling me that!

Manik went and took out the tape and put it on her mouth...

Manik:now stay quiet...till we get married...

I signaled him that I wanted to say something...just once...he took it off

Manik:ab bolo?

Nandini:what about...we name it Hell day!

He put the tape back on my mouth..damn you...it was a good name..too!!...well I think...

Manik:I'm going getting ready...ill bring your dress too..wait here...I nodded...

PRECAP:dads entry..manbir scared...Nandini to have fun...



Edited by LovelyKat - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66
thanks for the pm
can Nandini stop with her PJs and crack some better jokes
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67
Awesome update
M ssly in love with this story
Specially nandu
Bt plzz kuch to karo
Make both of them good boy
Atleast for sake of creating good image ⭐️⭐️
Thanks for pm
Thanks for update
Waiting for next update eagerly 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#68
Nandu pjs just hell hilarious
Can't stop my laughing



Nice





Superb




Mind blowing





Tooo good
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Posted: 9 years ago
#69
Awesome
Amazingg
Superbbb update
Hahahaha nandu kitna bolti ho...bechara manik...mzaa aa gea...lovd it
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#70
Oh my god..wht a antic piece nandu is...dooms day..hell day...hehehe...loved d update.. Plz continue soon 😆

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