FF: Love, Well almost [Chapter 50,51 - P 35] Mar 21

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Love, Well Almost

Index


Chapter One - Below

Chapter Two - Below

Chapter Three - Page 3

Chapter Four - Page 3

Chapter Five - Page 5

Chapter Six - Page 5

Chapter Seven - Page 6

Chapter Eight - Page 6

Chapter Nine - Page 7

Chapter Ten - Page 7

Chapter Eleven - Page 8

Chapter Twelve - Page 8

Chapter Thirteen - Page 9

Chapter Fourteen - Page 10

Chapter Fifteen - Page 10

Chapter Sixteen - Page 14

Chapter Seventeen - Page 14

Chapter Eighteen - Page 15

Chapter Nineteen - Page 16


Chapter Twenty - Page 21


Chapter Twenty One - Page 21

Chapter Twenty Two - Page 21

Chapter Twenty Three - Page 21


Chapter Twenty Four - Page 21

Chapter Twenty Five -Page 22

Chapter Twenty Six - Page 22

Chapter Twenty Seven - Page 23

Chapter Twenty Eight - Page 24

Chapter Twenty Nine - Page 24

Chapter Thirty - Page 25

Chapter Thirty One - Page 25

Chapter Thirty Two - Page 25

Chapter Thirty Three- Page 25

Chapter Thirty Four - Page 25

Chapter Thirty Five- Page 26

Chapter Thirty Six - Page 26

Chapter Thirty Seven - Page 27

Chapter thirty eight - Page 28

Chapter thirty nine - Page 28

Chapter Forty - Page 29

Chapter Forty One - Page 29

Chapter Forty Two - Page 30

Chapter Forty Three - Page 30

Chapter Forty Four - Page 30

Chapter Forty Five - Page 30

Chapter Forty Six - Page 30

Chapter Forty Seven - Page 30

Chapter Forty Eight - Page 33

Chapter Forty Nine - Page 33

Chapter Fifty - Page 35

Chapter Fifty One - Page 35

Hello beautiful people!

This is an Epistolary; a work purely in the form of letters; co-authored by me and my good friend Fitzcy. Characters would be introduced as and when the story progresses. Leave your thoughts behind if you love/hate it.

Much Love,

V & F



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Abhinav Shukla






Sana and Rahul


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Posted: 8 years ago
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From: shutabulgirl@xyz.com

To: notmeplease@xyz.com

Subject :- Eid ka Chand

Hey Mister

How are you?

In the blue of health, I suppose (I thought maybe you'd get offended if I associate the girly color with your health. My twelve year old brother does! And that reminds me that Goa election commission has taken Pink for Girls to to another level. Pink polling stations to woo women voters! Like seriously. Samajh ke kya rakha hai hai hamein?! Color dekh ke voting karte hai hum. And gifting teddy bears to first time woman voters, such gender discrimination. I feel bad for men in general, now. They are so taken for granted)

Anyways, it's been two weeks since we last wrote to each other and I kept waiting patiently that may be, this time you'd write to me first, but mazaal ho jo aisa kabhi ho! Not good, mister, you shouldn't keep the ladies waiting.

Now that we are done with formalities, let me start eating your head off. BTW, are you sleeping? If yes, then please wake up and lend me your ears. Technically, it should be eyes, so lend me your eyes, O' my mail buddy.

You know, I was looking out of my window, staring at the inky sky and at the winter moon, pale and wan. ( Wow I can be poetic too) The sight outside was really beautiful. But looking at the vast sky that seemed endless to me, I felt alone. Somehow the starless skies had intensified the desolate feeling inside my heart. I had talked to Mom in the evening. And told her everything is alright. I'm doing great. And to be honest, life IS fine. It's just that I am sad tonight without any reason. Has it ever happened to you? This feeling of sadness engulfing you, distancing you from your friends? You keep searching outside for the reason. But maybe the reason resides in your bosom. Oh sorry I forgot, bosom is not used for men. You have a chest. How many inches? No no, I'm not interested in knowing your size, just that Mr. PM has ruined it for me. 56 inch se kam koi jachta hi nahi hai! Lol. Yeah, so I was telling that the reason is there inside you. God! I'm not making sense, am I? After 1 am, I usually don't make sense. You must have come to know that by now.

So, since the sight outside my window made me feel lonely, I turned away from my window and decided to watch the movie, Bajirao Mastani. I know it was released last year and you must be thinking why haven't I watched it till now? Not much of Bollywood movies buff, I am. My best friend had said such good things about it and wanted me to watch it and I simply kept procrastinating.

The movie turned out to be more depressing. I don't mean it as an insult to the people who've worked hard in it. Individually, the actors did a marvelous job and it was a feast for the eyes to see Ranveer in such a hot Marathi avatar. But I couldn't enjoy Mastani and Bajirao's love story. Every time Bajirao looked into Mastani's hypnotic eyes, I kept thinking, Dude, you have wife! How could you do this to her?! She loves you so much. And then he says in the movie that he loved both of them. But how could he? You can't love everyone equally. There's always one person whom you love a little more than anybody else in the world. It was really unfair to Kashibai. i guess it's just me being me!

Since you are a guy, I want to ask, is it possible for you to love two different people at the same time?

And so to uplift my mood guess what I watched? North and South. Yes , Again. For the sixth time. I think I am in love with Richard Armitage. He's my dream man. His eyes and his voice, God! I watched The Hobbit only for him. Who knew hobbits could be so dreamy!

BTW, do you have any particular fondness towards any actor? Me being my nosy self, I know. But I'm really curious.

Do you have any favorite? Angelina Jolie or Madhuri Dixit? Please don't tell me you like Deepika? Sab wahi bolte hai.

Keira Knightley? Pretty face but too thin.

I have a girl crush on Anne Hathaway!

Did you watch the series though? North and South of course. What else? You promised me you would. I want to know what you think about it, about them. If you would find Margaret pretty? At least read the book. Come on now; don't be like those guys who look down upon romance novels. It's not even romance. It's a CLASSIC. And you'll get to know about Industrial Revolution also.

Okay, I've talked enough. Am feeling good. Should go to sleep now.

P.S. - Have you listened to any of Talat Mahmood songs? They're awesome. For starters, listen to Itna na mujhse tu pyar badha. It's from the movie, Chhaya.

P.P.S- You better reply fast this time.

Yours

shutabulgirl
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From: notmeplease@xyz.com

To: shutabulgirl@xyz.com

Sub: RE: Eid Ka Chand


Ladki,


Did anyone ever tell you how much do you actually talk?

And do not get me started on conversations post 1 am. I think I make more sense when I am sleep deprived and hung over than when I am in my ultra professional mode, delivering a presentation. Take my advice, do not become a corporate slave like me ever. Start up, like you always have wished to.

All that senti talk aside, ladki, did anybody ever tell you, you talk all over the place, like a drunk man trying to pee. You think you aimed it right, but you end up messing the entire thing up.


It boggles my mind how you jump from topic A to topic Z. I have to prepare notes of all the topics you've covered to be able to reply to them individually.


Let's start with the interesting topics first. I've watched North and South like for five minutes. The chick is hot. Voluptuous. Why would women starve themselves in the name of hotness, I say?

The water cooler conversations in office are filled with woman talking how far they look. Funny story, those who are fat don't mention they are. They're body positive according to themselves. Those who are f**king thin, that you can make out their bones think they have to diet. Like what?


You women are funny. Unintentionally of course.


Next time you look out of the window, do try to remember you have to get your assignment done first. How jobless are kids these days to feel sad for nothing. I'll give you a bunch of reasons to feel sad about.


The woman you think is cute doesn't notice you. Your job sucks. And there's a slight chance of a male colleague hitting on you. There, these are called problems. Add student loans to the mix. Why do they never end? It's as if the moment I get my salary, I'll have more mouths to feed than I can afford. My bank manager, my owner, my roommate, the milkman, my bai, you get the drift.

How can a poor single guy live in a big bad city like this? How can you dress up to kill, figuratively of course? How can you spend on the occasional booze and cigarettes? Just how?

It's a good thing you're going to be an entrepreneur . If I ever want a job, I can charm your socks off and make you offer me one.

Now if you ask about loving multiple people, well I've always loved all of the spice girls equally. We men are easy that way. If you all look the same, you all will get equal love from us. However, bigger boobs = bigger love.

As you mentioned size does matter. I am so proud of myself within two months of association you started talking about inches.

Sayonara kiddo, before either you virtually kill me or my boss would actually do the honor if I screw up this presentation I have due tomorrow.


PS: Did I not ask you to watch X men series? Why are you after people who were sad and dead?

Till you write again,

All yours,

Notmeplease.


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Haha... Can't complain if u are coming up with something new, even if I want the old one badly...

Another word added to my vocabulary
Wen I googled "epistolary"
Last was "rendezvous"
It would be interesting, like all others I am sure
Waiting for it to unfold 😃

Waiting for that one day
Wen u will update just one day 😆

Do consider bcoz its been long since the last part
N I am all
Edited by Sundari. - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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you better reply fast 😆
Edited by ardentfitzcy - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: ardentfitzcy

you better reply fast 😆


Hi
Is that for me? Or veil?

Just curious😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sundari.


Hi
Is that for me? Or veil?

Just curious😆

For the notmeplease guy 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: ardentfitzcy

For the notmeplease guy 😆


Well then, not me obviously
Ouch!!
The pain of wrong assumptions

While I was at it, it was really nice,
The feeling wen u find someone whom u can share ur thoughts with w/o the fear of judgement is extraordinary
I just love it, n while she was being all weird... I find it knida cute too...

Love to read more...
I am yet to read ur OS from bon voyage, I read one today slow n steady😃

Great job here 👏


My name is Pooja,if u wish to know/ n chat...
Just being wishful😆

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Jaane woh kaise log the jinke pyaar ko pyaar mila
I wonder what kind of people find their love reciprocated
Humne to jab kaliyaa.N maangii kaa.NTo.N kaa haar milaa
Whenever I asked for flowers, I received a garland of thorns

😭
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Posted: 8 years ago
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font is too tiny to read peacefully 😕

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