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KawaiiGeet

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Posted: 8 years ago

#161

update!!!!

yay...

although i haven't caught up after 10 parts,

but taking sadistic pleasure in being first😎

as usual, it must be one hell of an update😆

will catch up asap...after diwali

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Sundari

@Param-Sundari

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Posted: 8 years ago

#162

aha! this is the situation that led to invention of the phrase "digging your own grave"😆

now she has to bring her current bf to a trip with her prospective bf...

so i am thinking the plans to seduce lifetime celibate handa goes down to drain,

unless off course she comes up with another interestingly stupid idea, we know after all she is geet's friend!!!

couldn't relate to food talk!

i don't like talking about exams after they're done... but only until the results... as that is always the best time for me😆😆

shall we look forward to trip?

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Sundari

@Param-Sundari

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Posted: 8 years ago

#163

miss u mail by bro is kinda sweet,

Ashwin is in Delhi, where's geet? & Meera?

has that been said yet?

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Sundari

@Param-Sundari

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Posted: 8 years ago

#164

Ek date me loveria hua...

waise sorry to burst bubble, but but definately he wouldn't be affected the same way,

guys don't do micro analysis of every day of their lives,

though the "Breathtaking beautiful" would give some ideas, but i wouldn't read too much into it!

the subtle mention of maan and his description suggests she isn't over with that yet.

funny how few conversations would make some faceless person part of your life!

Why would she think about not sharing the details of her date with her only best friend,

i mean we like to do that, sharing stuff, don;t know the reason though😆

Ye AS toh genuine nikla, and he's sitting UPSC,

geet Madam abhi se IAS bf ke sapne dekhne lagi... wouldn't blame her

but it's too dam hard, i think to try myself a couple of times but chicken out😳😳

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KawaiiGeet

@kawaii_geet

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Posted: 8 years ago

#165

and finally i catch up.

**bows bows**

you know you are vella and kaamchor when you are sitting in office and catching up with ffs when you are supposed to be working.🤣

anyways girls, i think i must author a book on how not to fall in love with you guys. 🤔 planning to give it a serious thought.

this story is just so... ahh, can't describe. i am blank actually. have no words to say how i felt with each chapter. from meera to sana to Ashwin to geet and Maan...I loved every character.

Okay maaneet had a fall out...well, dooriyan bhi hain zaruri, zaruri hain ye dooriyan.

But whenever maan signed off as yours forever, my heart skipped a beat. damn it, mujhe bhi koi aise mail kare😆 although i would have thought him to be a pervert and probably would have blasted at him with every colorful word in every language i know till date.

ohh how i loved meera flirting with ashwin. cute. when you are texting or emailing, you are just not very concious. you are in your reckless abandon for not being judged. and i loved that about this story.

aur bhi bahut kuch hain kehne ke liye but still blank.

(well, not that blank considering how much i have ranted.)

ladkiyon, you found another ardent follower of yours here.

if you pm, pls do. I have this bad habit of losing track

waiting for next...dil thaam ke!

love

kawaii

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Veil

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Posted: 8 years ago

#166

#27

From: rumormill@xyz.com
To: Rahul.Jain@xyz.com

Sub: Dil Kya kare jab kisi se

Dearest Husband,

Why you no love me?

Why have you gone to the stupid business meet? I mean, fine I get it, you had to go for a project but isn't the timing really messed up? What am I to do alone at home? Who is going to cook for me? Who is going to put up with my tantrums?

I have become so pathetic that I have been listening to this old song on loop and then finding new meaning in it.

I terribly miss you dearest husband, so much so that I almost forgive the last sort of fight we had when you were here. Come back soon.

Love Love love you,

From: Rahul.Jain@xyz.com

To: rumormill@xyz.com

Sub: Re: Dil Kya kare jab kisi se

Wife dearest,

You should have ended the letter a line earlier. Because you reminded me we had an argument. It wasn't a fight per se. I consider it a rare opportunity for us to discuss our different line of thoughts. It is but knowledge sharing.

Ok sarcasm over, coming to the point. I know meddlesome is your middle name. I hate to love that about you. I know I can't change that so that isn't my problem.

My problem was that you were spying on someone's personal email. Not just anyone mind you, one of your closest friends'.

Now just consider that this friend of yours wouldn't ever suspect you doing such a thing. Plus he had also had a bad experience and although I won't blame you, we all know you had played a major part in him getting hurt the last time.

I don't want either of you getting hurt. Also what do we know about this Mayra girl liking Ashwin? It can be your assumption.

PS: If it makes you feel any better, my secret song that I listen to when I miss you is cheesier than that.

Ae mere Humsafar.

Beat that!

Pps: Guess who's coming home super soon?

Love,

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From: rumormill@xyz.com
To: Rahul.Jain@xyz.com

Sub: Jab rulana hi toh hasaya kyu

Husband,

There are so many things that have enraged me about your previous letter that I am shifting my muse to a new song.

Okay, so let's begin with the very beginning. You know Newton's law of motion right? Any object will be at rest unless an external force is acted upon it. Ashwin is the body at rest. I'm merely following the good old Newton. How am I at fault? Plus, I have not done anything yet. Miss Sana Meddlesome Jain hasn't acted upon her impulse but soon that's gonna change. You will see. And it will all be your fault. You accused an innocent despite her patience.

My fingers were itching to slap Ashwin on his head after the recent mail. (Now that you and I know I ain't stop spying on his mails, no point shying away from mentioning it openly). That girl, whose name is Meera and not Myra btw, has invited him to a trip and he says, bring your boyfriend along. What boyfriend?

She's flirting openly and that is visible to even someone as thick as say, you. (Ha! You take that). But my sweet old brother is making this a family trip. What exactly is his problem?? I think he has gone asexual after Dhara angle. Which reminds me of the next big thing. You still think I am the reason he got hurt?

You know I am trying real hard to believe I am not the reason, although even on my best days, I feel I'm lying to myself.

Ashwin is a gem. And I am a bitch for pushing him, teasing him and ultimately taking it up on myself to make him believe Dhara harbored feelings for him.

But is it really my fault that she has turned out to be a bitch of the first kind?

It would have been easy had Ashwin treated me differently from earlier. But he had been the same with me and he hadn't gone out with another girl ever since. Oh, I feel terrible again. Come home you jerk.

I miss my pillow.

Now you made me cry.

Hate you,

Sana

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From: Rahul.Jain@xyz.com
To: ashwinhanda@xyz.com

Sub: Hello

Hi Bro,

How's everything going on?

I'm not sure if Sana has mentioned this earlier, I have been away to Paris on a business trip and although I don't need to tell you this, wanted to ensure Sana is taking good care of herself.

Will you see to it that she would have her meals and meds? Thanks.

Oh also, don't mind if her hormones act up. I know you wouldn't, but just a heads up.

Also, it's been a while since you've come home. Let's catch up. I'll come home this Friday. So why don't you come down for the weekend, yeah?

This might seem a little weird, but just wanted to know if you guys lock your laptop before leaving the seat? I mean, there was a random incident happened in office the other day to an entirely unrelated person. He didn't lock his laptop and as a person who is passionate about Network and security, I am just taking it on myself to educate as many as possible. Nothing personal though.

Alright then see you next weekend?

Rahul.

From: Rahul.Jain@xyz.com
To: rumormill@xyz.com

Sub: The Game

Baby,

Remember we have never gone on a honeymoon. The timing wasn't just right. With the initial problems we had had with the wedding, with all the showdown with parents, we were but in any mood to go on a vacation. Now that I'm away from you, I see you how much you would have loved a normal wedding and a normal life.

Things would have been different had we remained the friends we were all our life. But we didn't, did we? We took that chance, we didn't give up on us.

The initial days were rough, weren't they? You were tough but I have seen the pillow wet with tears sometimes. It killed me every night and it only made me love you more for trying to be as cheerful as ever.

I wouldn't ever want to make you cry. But I know you wouldn't want to hear anything but the truth. So yeah, you trying to set her up with him was from the best of your intentions. I won't blame you. It wasn't your fault that she lead on Ashwin and cheated on him and worse got caught.

The problem was he didn't have an outburst. He walked away from it and there was no reaction from him ever since. It is not normal and we both are concerned about it. Since he didn't see anyone else from then, you might be worrying about it a tad more and now that some girl is interested in him and Ashwin being his polite self might be entertaining her, you're building that perfect life you envisioned for him again.

I'm asking you to stay out of it because we all know by now we aren't perfect judge of characters. We both have made our own mistakes in the past too, so let Ashwin take the decision this time.

Anyway, now the ball has left your court. Not only you can meddle Mrs. Jain. A certain Mr. Jain will meddle with your matchmaking. You watch.

Be happy that you have read the last letter because that's the last one you are ever going to read.

The game is on.

PS: Your pillow is going to be next to you before you realise.

Love,

Rahul.

Edited by Veil - 8 years ago

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KawaiiGeet

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Posted: 8 years ago

#167

Res...

Okay this one pakka after this weekend

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phew. Finally back.

such an adorable update ya!!

All your characters are so lovable and I loved loved loved rahul here.

man... he was amazing there. being in love or being married doesn't only mean you appreciate each other's good qualities. it also means to to be honest about every good and bad thing about your partner and guide them through that without making the other feel embarrassed about it. Sana and Rahul owned me there. such beautiful characters and such sorted answers...

I hope Ashwin goes out for that trip and sees meera the way she wants him to see😆

i remember me hitting on my bestie's bro during college times and he even gifted me a huge Bournville cranberry (my first gift from a guy **blushes**) but then we eventually lost contact. he is just a name in my phone now but that time was fun😆

so, yeah i can totally relate to all your characters because at some point of time, I think i have been through similar experiences.

which reminds me, remember Nisha di's Captured through the viewfinder?

well, i had been crazy about her pandit since then and bugged her about it so much. and if you could ever believe, I was on a train journey, a few weeks after that OS contest and I did meet a pandit (a handsome one at that...what how why, long story it is😆) and from then onwards, pandit ka saara bhoot utar gaya🤢 I still get chills thinking about that incident and Nisha di takes such pleasure in teasing me.

but that encounter was just so funny and crazy. and this update actually reminded me of tha and I don't know why.

waiting for next.

next update jaldi pls.

waiting already

Edited by kawaii_geet - 8 years ago

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#168

magnificent updates! well written! Geet likes Abhinav! loved the emails btwn Rahul and his wife! continue soon

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Sundari

@Param-Sundari

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Posted: 8 years ago

#169

Oops I missed to see the update for so long, I'll get back to u on this soon.

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bhakbhartifan

@bhakbhartifan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#170

I didn't even realize this was updated.
Loved both the update..

How sweet of Ashwin to ask Geet to come to Delphi..
Geet was so cute describing all the date..
looks like husband/wife are in meddling affairs business..