FF: Love, Well almost [Chapter 50,51 - P 35] Mar 21 - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: dqno1

font is too tiny to read peacefully 😕

Let me know if it's okay now
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Posted: 8 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: dqno1

font is too tiny to read peacefully 😕



Increased the font size. Let me know if it is readable now :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#13
Notmepls... U both r trying to kill me here 😆
My other assumption was correct though,
But pls don't tell me that veil is really a GUY 😲😲


Really, thts what are called problems like that guy mentioned,
Poor him, so many to make a cut in his pocket
The theory is quite right though if u think of it
bigger boobs = more love 🤣

Yes I agree with him ki she talks all over the place ... Topics a to z... That's right
But she shd understand that men can't keep up to it, they have a tiny brain which rarely works 😆
Noting the points... Hm good idea, that's the secret of him doing well at it...

Until u write again 😆


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Posted: 8 years ago
#14
Thank you. I enjoyed reading this.

The girl really is everywhere in her writing and thought process. But also she sounds cute.

And what seems to be the complete opposite of her is her email buddy. How the heck did these two unlikely ppl meet?

I hope you continue.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#15
Liked the concept.
Love your writing.
Girl is cute and I kept noting how many topics she covered in the letter.
Looking forward to this one. Plz update one day also.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#16
Thanks for changing the font

I knew I am taking a risk reading the both of you as the updates will be slow and I am not a patient person

Nevertheless I can't help it 😆

Very lovely concept

Lifestories in emails

Intriguing possibilities as writers and exciting for readers

Dekhte hai how you keep us glued 😃

I am waiting already.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: Sundari.

Notmepls... U both r trying to kill me here 😆

My other assumption was correct though,
But pls don't tell me that veil is really a GUY 😲😲


Really, thts what are called problems like that guy mentioned,
Poor him, so many to make a cut in his pocket
The theory is quite right though if u think of it
bigger boobs = more love 🤣

Yes I agree with him ki she talks all over the place ... Topics a to z... That's right
But she shd understand that men can't keep up to it, they have a tiny brain which rarely works 😆
Noting the points... Hm good idea, that's the secret of him doing well at it...

Until u write again 😆




You didn't know?
Veil is a guy. And a very charming and handsome one at that. 😆
You should really talk to him sometime 😉
I'm sure you'd love him. 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#18

#3

From: shutabulgirl@xyz.com

To: notmeplease@xyz.com

Sub: Cute woman who doesn't notice you?!

Hey

First things first, How many times do I have to tell you that I'm not a KID!? So stop KIDDO'ing me.

Now coming to the main point, you have a CRUSH? Like seriously? Wow wow wow...tell me everything about it. Kab, kaise, kahaan huya? A Cute woman who doesn't notice you? How dare she!?

Bhala kaun hai woh hamein bhi batao...ye kisse sabhi ko sunate nahin hai magar doston se chupate nahin hai. Tere dard e dil ki dava hum karenge aur na kuch kar sake toh dua hum karenge

And I hope that the guy who's hitting on you, he gifts you a red red rose this Valentine! Bada maza aayega. And maybe he will write some love sonnets for you. Something like, I crave your mouth, your voice, your hair...I hunt for the liquid measure of your steps. hahahahah

You're worried about dressing? Dress to kill you want right? A t- shirt and nice pair of jeans, a little bit of studied nonchalance. It's as simple as that. BTW, I never took you as someone who'd want to impress others. Par ye umar hi aisi hai and now we have a cute woman in the picture too. You know what Uday Benegal had to say about his dressing? He said, "I don't really give a shit how people see me. If I wear something it's because I want to and it feels right." And guess what he is counted among the best dressed Indian men.

And yes almost everyone has told me that I talk a lot (I would like to take pride in the fact that I am one of the most loquacious people to have ever graced the Earth.) But you are first vichitra prani to mention the drunk man peeing analogy. However, I have to say you're quite informative. I have never had the opportunity to witness the micturition style of a drunk man (Come to think about it I have not witnessed micturating style of a sober man too.My cousin was six when he had removed his pants and threatened to pee all over me so I think that doesn't count) but thanks to you, I can totally visualize it now, the peeing style of a drunk man.

Booze, boobs, bai and Cigarettes ??? Ye sab shaukh bhi hai aapke? Bas bike ki kami reh gayi ! Why the guys I know they are always talking about this or that bike and car's model.

And here I thought that for once I had found a decent guy. When we first chatted in the gaming forum, you appeared as if you were the descendent of Yudishthira himself. So well spoken. You tricked me big time! Dheere dheere rang dikhaya jaa raha hai apna.

You really disappointed me with all this bigger boobs= bigger love. I hope you don't like this cute woman only for her assets.

And and and when I mentioned size it was only for fun. And I was talking about the chest size only. So you better don't get any wrong ideas.

Charm my socks off huh? Quite confident are you? But my dear Charming Prince, I am quite focused when it comes to work. So I hope your work is as impressive as your social skills.

And did I tell you P (in case you forgot to note down who P is, She's my roommate) was again bragging about her boy friend. How it was Chocolate Day yesterday and he had gifted her basket full of chocolates and how she wanted to share it with me but couldn't because her janu / baby / shona etc etc had asked her to finish all of it on her own. I hope she suffers from tooth decay or even better Gingivitis!

Now before I go, let me tell you a story about another poor guy .

He wanted to study in DU but couldn't. Why? Because he was poor. Duh.

So he completed his studies from a normal government college. Got a pretty normal job with not so good pay scale. He continued to labor hard. Took loans. Joined an evening B- school. Then soon he got a better post with better wages. But the money he earned he couldn't spend on himself for he had two sisters of marriageable age sitting at home. Yeah, I know you must be rolling your eyes and must be thinking, Funny story, that it makes for a good script for a tele series.

So the day he had married off his youngest sister, he thought he was finally free of the burdens of life. But still the struggle had not ended. Fell in love with a girl who was already engaged to someone else. Just when the newly born Devdas had taken to alcohol, the honorable CM decided to ban the consumption of it in their state. Talk about luck now! But it is during this hard phase, he found some of the most beautiful people in his life. Who stood with him during the tough times. He also found that he was stronger than he thought he was. So dear mister poor single guy in big bad city I hope you are a fighter. That despite all the problems that you're facing now, you focus on living your life fully. That you're not the 'Why me' guy but the 'Try me' guy.

P.S. - This kid has a lot of assignments to solve but she believes in procrastinating the work until the day before the date of submission. Aji aaj kare so kal kar, kal kare so parso, sab kuch agar time pe kar le, toh insaan khidki se bahar dekhega kab?!

P.P.S. - Why will I watch a X and Y or Z men series when I have the option of drooling over a man who has intense eyes and whose love does not get carried away by some dimensions of the prominences found on the upper ventral portion of a female body. And dare you make fun of me! I prefer to watch N&S for I get to watch the sincere love of a man which is so rare to find these days. Always an honest man he even lies to protect the reputation of the love of his life even when he assumes that she loves someone else.Sigh.

Hamre to bas Mr. Thornton dusro na koi.

Until you tell me more about your crush

Yours

not so voluptuous ladki

Edited by ardentfitzcy - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#19

#4

From: notmeplease@xyz.com

To: shutabulgirl@xyz.com


Sub: Life lessons


Ladki,

I'm going to give you some life lessons today so get your pen and paper ready.

Lesson 1: A gentleman would never maketh a lady uncomfortable unless... the lady in question isn't somebody he was hitting on.

If the lady (one more time I call you a lady, I will die laughing. It's so hard to do that since you're a whopping three years younger to me) is considered a bro, then a gentleman is allowed to be honest. If you don't know this already ma'am, in a guy's world honest = disgusting.

Lesson 2 : It is laughable indeed if a lady uses all the following in one single line, depicting their importance to be similar.

Booze, boobs, bai and Cigarettes?

Now now no gentleman would consider all of them equal. A Bai is always the most powerful one amongst others.

Without a Bai and her tantrums, who would cook and clean? (Although I bet I can cook a thousand times better than her, and you can't ever make out if she actually cleaned the room because you find specs of dust everywhere, that's besides the point).

You can find yourself a girlfriend pretty easily than you would ever find a Bai. And that, my lady is why you don't underestimate her power.

Lesson 3: A gentlemen is allowed to laugh at a Lady's roommate and her weird initials.

You call her P? As in pee? Did I ruin the name for you now? Sorry, not sorry.

As for the chocolate day, who remembers that? You know the stereotype about how gentleman aren't good with dates? Well that's true.

If a gentleman doesn't remember birthdays and anniversaries, isn't it a little preposterous to assume he would remember these confusing mayhem of a Valentine week with meaningless things such as rose day, chocolate day, biryani day (I just made that up)?

Chances are your roommate bought the chocolate herself just to rub it in your face.

PS: I could have made fun of the story about the Devdas guy, but then my superpowers started working. Are you sure this is just a story? Or is it that our little kiddo finally has got a crush on a certain Devdas?

PPS: I'm going to pretend you never said anything about how you're rooting for me to end up with a guy

PPPS: About the girl, well she's not in my team and she's very cute. She might have caught my fancy but so is the case with at least half of the office population. So it's neither here nor there.

I have a strong feeling you are going to ignore all of the letter and jump right back on the crush topic.

Am I right or am I right?

Signing off till you eat my brain,

Notmeplease.

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Posted: 8 years ago
#20
These two are certainly the odd couple 😆 not that they are a couple.

She has her feet firmly planted in la-la land though I do admire her devotion to Thornton. At certain phases in life, Thornton does have his attractions.

I tend to agree with him however 😆
Why dream of dead people when there are half of six billion options?
He is the practical to her flightiness.

The importance of a bai is 😆 so true for a male.
What would the male populace do without someone to cater to them?

Interested to see how these two carry forth.

Thanks for updating so swiftly.

Mazaa aa gaya 😃

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