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Posted: 6 years ago

50.



From: Annie_007@xyz.com

To: notmeplease@xyz.com

Sub: Hullo Lover boy!


Why hello there lover boy!


Isn't love in the air these days? Can you feel it? I bet I can.


What's with the strange behavior of yours in phone yesterday. You actually were quite happy, and chuckled once at my joke. CHUCKLED. You are alright I hope. Did the love bug bite you yet?


And do not deny it.


Plus I have my eye witnesses to the entire fiasco. Pyar hua ikraar hua? How come two people caught cold on the same day? Plus the little moment of a beautiful woman walking by your desk today, and placing a sheet of tablets for cold didn't go unnoticed by the shaatir nazar of my jasoos.


Spill it Mister.


While you're at it, let it be dramatic please. Oh before you wave me off, remember you do not want to make your poor sister sad in a letter (again).


Annie.



From: notmeplease@xyz.com

To: Annie_007@xyz.com


Sub: Drama


It was raining that night. I know that is one of the lamest introduction possible, but hear me out. I am not making it up.


It was raining pretty bad and I was having the most crappy day at office.


To top it, my car went flat tire.


Now imagine, raining, crappy day, flat tire. If I could, I would have yelled at the top of my voice but I am not that dramatic so I was just minding my business, inspecting the tire, crouching next to it, when I felt the raindrops stop falling on my shoulder.


I looked up to see someone carrying an umbrella, standing by my side peering at the wheel.


It was her. Nithya.


"Hi she said with a warm smile. It didn't look like she was conversing with some stranger. She was smiling at me like she would with a friend. Maybe she recognized me from the office. It's hard not to miss my good looks (Pun intended)


"Need help? she asked and somehow my reply was a surprise even to me.


"Why, is helping an invalid left in your list of good deeds for today?


I didn't mean to sound mean, but I know I sounded very bitter. I wouldn't blame her if she would walk away, flicking her middle finger up.


Her smile did waver for a moment before she wore it back like an armour.


"Is taking help from a weakling like a woman would reduce your male ego? She challenged.


I... quite didn't see that coming. So much so that I forgot I could get up and stand instead of crouching like a loser.


"Where did that come from


"From where your accusation arrived


I left a deep breath and got up. Thankfully she didn't come to aid. Must be killing her so much to stand there, just an arm's length away. She seemed like a doer, you know, someone who would want to get her hands dirty, someone who had to help. But she stood there and saw me struggle.


"I appreciate that I told her hence.


"What


I didn't answer. But I guess she knew already.


"I know I'm unwelcome here. That much you made it clear but let's be practical. I need a ride home and you need to not miss office tomorrow and the efficiency increases if we work together. So basically we are just helping each other. Will you let me change the tire, along with you


I looked at her wordlessly for a moment before going to get the stepney.


"You need a ride?


"Yes


"Get the wrench"


That was the end of our conversation before we got into menial labor. I'll let the details pass and once we were done, as promised I dropped her home.


"I am Nithya by the way she had said when we stopped right before her apartment.


I know, I wanted to say. But I didn't. Instead, I gave a nod as acknowledgement, and belatedly remembered my manners or lack thereof.


"I'm Maan I said as she was getting down the car and closed the door behind her.


She turned, smiled at me and said "I know



PS: I've a feeling I am going to regret telling this to you but you emotionally manipulated me and honestly I miss my share of dramatic letters I used to get earlier. So.



From: Annie_007@xyz.com

To: notmeplease@xyz.com


Sub: Your Game


I like your game. Being very rude to women and yet they would come fawning over. How do you do that? I guess it has to do something with the good looks that comes with genes. (If you have not realized already, I am giving you a compliment and also including myself in it shamelessly).


Well, I have to give it to you. This woman is the first who could make you bite back your words. Me likey.


Is it too early for me to plan an innocent visit to your place, and you know happen to catch you at office?


I do want to meet my future sister in law.


Yes Maan, I am quite jobless. I need to get a hobby else I would go crazy thinking about your snail paced love life.


Which reminds me of your friend.


Did you get a chance to apologize to her yet? Maan, don't delay it so much that you apologizing would not mean a thing to her.

Edited by Veil - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
51.

From: notmeplease@xyz.com

To: shutabulgirl@xyz.com

Sub: Hey


Hi there,


Maybe this is too sunny for someone who fought terribly. Let me give it another shot.


Drashti,


Um. I think usage of your name didn't work out well with us. I'll try again.


Ladki,


I know you will be pissed off if I call you that and you know I live to piss you off. Have you ever wondered why though, because I trust you to not leave me and run in the opposite direction despite of me making it my top priority to annoy you all the time.


I know we have had a rough patch which sort of worsened because of my reaction to your attempt of extending olive branch. What can I say, I am... sorry.


I do not have any other explanation that both justifies my actions or proves my sanity.


I am pretty sure this letter would have made you smile a little for I took a couple of potshots at myself.


I want you to keep that smile intact, although half of the time, I strive really hard to bring a frown on your face.


Yours forev--


Never mind.


Your friend,


Maan.


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From: Mail Delivery Subsystem

To: shutabulgirl@xyz.com


Sub: Re: Hey


Address not found

Your message wasn't delivered to shutabulgal@xyz.com because the address couldn't be found. Check for typos or unnecessary spaces and try again.


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From: notmeplease@xyz.com

To: shutabulgirl@xyz.com

Sub: Strange


Don't kill me yet, I know you want to, the moment you get this mail. But there are two strange things I wanted to share with you.


  1. I sent you a heartfelt apology (Yeah, I know the question. Do I have a heart? Do I? Honestly I don't know the answer to that either) with no amount of sarcasm (surprise!)

  2. And the letter didn't reach you. It bounced back. This would make you mad I know. How dare I forget your mail! I didn't I swear. No idea why I was unable to send though.


Anyway I really apologize for my behavior last time and for the time before. I know I am a difficult person to be friends with but so are you. You are a blabbermouth, sometimes annoying, easily irritable little girl and I put up with you don't I? Uh oh. This letter was supposed to make you feel better, not annoy you further.


Um friends again ladki?


Will be waiting for your sarcasm,


Maan


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From: Mail Delivery Subsystem

To: shutabulgal@xyz.com


Sub: Re: Strange


Address not found

Your message wasn't delivered to shutabulgal@xyz.com because the address couldn't be found. Check for typos or unnecessary spaces and try again.


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From: notmeplease@xyz.com

To: callofdutyfan@xyz.com

Sub: What happened


I know you expect an apology first and I will give it to you in abundance, but first tell me what happened to your other mail ID? Mails sent are bouncing back. Yeah, that's enough proof that I tried contacting you. For what you may ask, for apologizing of course.


But what happened to you? I can't imagine why should you delete it? Is it because of me? I think I am giving myself too much importance. Knowing you, you aren't someone who will run away. You will fight it out, call me a million names. Which is why this sounds so unlike you. Where have you disappeared to Drashti? Just tell me you are safe.


Maan.

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From: Mail Delivery Subsystem

To: callofdutyfan@xyz.com


Sub: Re: What happened


Address not found

Your message wasn't delivered to callofdutyfan@xyz.com because the address couldn't be found. Check for typos or unnecessary spaces and try again.


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From: notmeplease@xyz.com

To: callofdutyfan@xyz.com

Sub: Safe


Be safe, wherever you are.

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From: Mail Delivery Subsystem

To: callofdutyfan@xyz.com


Sub: Re: Safe


Address not found

Your message wasn't delivered to callofdutyfan@xyz.com because the address couldn't be found. Check for typos or unnecessary spaces and try again.


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Edited by Veil - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
Thanks for updating :)
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Posted: 6 years ago

I found this after eons...

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Waiting for you to continue

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Posted: 6 years ago

chapter 50 and 51

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Posted: 5 years ago

Absolutely loved this story, it was out and out entertaining to read the letters between all characters. All the email ids, the characters are so interesting and fun. I just couldn't stop smiling while reading all chapters.

Enjoyed the wit, sarcasm and drama and emotions in the letters exchanged.

The chemistry between Meera and Ashwin Handa is as interesting as Maaneet's.

Can't believe there are such cute guys like Ashwin and glad that Meera is in love with him since almost a decade.

The strong bond between Geet and Meera and also Ashwin and Sana is super sweet. Geet being a engineering student and Meera being a medical student, they are so busy with studies but still share every little detail of their life. Such pure friendship is so rare, childhood friendship is amazing.

The letters between Geet and her roommate was so funny.

The whole idea of communicating via emails is so unique and intriguing. I loved the friendship between maaneet, how openly and freely they communicated without the worry of judgement. They conversed such random topics, day to day activities, crushes, it was damn interesting.

The dramatic way in which they use to talk, the bond that they formed, Geet's interest in Maan's love life, Maan's protectiveness for Geet, his jealousy with Abhinav and Geet's relationship, everything was so cuteeeeeee..

The fight between Maaneet and their stubbornness was very relateable. Maan's response to Geet's sorry email's stating it is an automated reply was hilarious and I couldn't just stop laughing.

Sister's are always interested in bro's love life, I love Sana's interference in AshwinMeera's love story and Annie's interest in Maan's love life and how they wish the best for their siblings.

Meera getting a chance to stay at Ashwin's house is such a sweet surprise.

I loved the budding friendship between Geet and her roomie.

Geet's first love failure and heartbreak made me so sad, she is such an innocent soul and so trusting, Maan was right about his judgement that not everything as as good as it seems.

Maan meeting Nithya was unexpected, I thought Maan made up that character in his letter to geet.

So many shocks, Maan being an invalid left, Geet being framed in some posters, her email ids being deactivated.

Who has done such a shocking and shameless act to spoil Geet's reputation, what is happening, and who is this Khurana guy Geet's roommate was talking about.

Maan must be worried sick about Geet, the only way to get in touch with her, that the emails are not deliverable to Geet's email ids.

How is he going to contact her, can we contact a person by knowing an IP address?

I am so very looking forward to next chapters, addicted to this story.

Please dear writers, kindly update this story if you get free time.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Hey Fitzcy,

just finished reading your married to a fam girl and must say I liked it a lot, Geet obviously bares resemblance to all us fan girls lol


unfortunately, I can’t imagine what Maan went through as much as I can feel on geets part, I suppose comes mutually since she too belongs to the ‘sisterhood fandom’ as you nicely put it.

After reading this, I’ve come to realise either I really haven’t read a lot of your work Or you don’t write often. Either ways I hope to find more from you


I really liked the Taste of reality in this fiction, Maan as usual was a dream especially joining the forum and showing his support. Geet is forever my treasured creature and loved her here too, just a little surprised: how can she not realise marriedtoapanki (was it, sorry got confused with the UN) was maan, he even left half his initials, M lol.

Anywho loved the work and thank you, I am really hoping to get back to GF and I’m glad yours was the start


thank you


Soph

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Posted: 5 years ago

read all parts...this is one fantastic story ..and I am in love with your writing skills...you are an amazing writer..pls update soon

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