mg ff Yoddha The unknown warrrior update on 148 page - 9june

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Maan

hi i am maan singh khurana
son of veer sing khurana
who never like robbery thief ect


today i am big dacott / daku
of this area and i proud of on that
if living with self respect is wrong than
i am wrong
if i rob that rich people who all ready
to drink poor blood is wrong
than i am wrong


my father live for this village
and i become robber for this village people only
an i proud on that


but in all this l lost ...
a beutiful pair of eyes in come front of him



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Index

part 1




https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4119929/mg-ff-yoddha-the-unknown-warrrior-update-on-148-page-9june


part 2

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4119929/mg-ff-yoddha-the-unknown-warrrior-update-on-148-page-9june?pn=8

part 3,4

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4119929/mg-ff-yoddha-the-unknown-warrrior-update-on-148-page-9june?pn=15

Note
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4119929/mg-ff-yoddha-the-unknown-warrrior-update-on-148-page-9june?pn=19

teaser
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4119929/mg-ff-yoddha-the-unknown-warrrior-update-on-148-page-9june?pn=28

part 5,6

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4119929/mg-ff-yoddha-the-unknown-warrrior-update-on-148-page-9june?pn=33

part 7



part 8



9-10





part 11

part 12

part 13
part 14----95
part 15-----105
part 16-----108
part 17-----112
part 18 -------118

part 19 -----128

part 20 ------134
part 21 ...139
part 22-------142
part 23-------148
part 24

Edited by Mahimaan - 10 years ago
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maan family


maan father -Veer singh khurana
age 30



rough and tough man never fear about
anything , always ready to help
anyone , his body injury marks tale
story of his bravery

save mukhiya girl from lion
but so self respected person
just say no for reward to sve that
girl his self respect is life for him


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Yodha The unknown Warrior

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Year 1852

a small village of India , there is darkness everywhere just sleep like dead person , but one person lost his sleep is mukhiya of village , have so much rich so much property but sad really sad they lost chance arrange goddess fair from last 10 year , because there neighbor village man just took snatch this right from him from their village



he is so irritated that no one is so VEER in his village who bought that right back , just than he hard noise in front of door he just called , who is there

sarkaare hum hain veer singh khurana

mukhiya - come in veer singh

veer - ji sarkar and he entered in haveli he just make namste and say , don't sleep till now

Mukhiya - kitane dino se soye hi hai veer

veer - kuch hua hai kya sarkar app intene pareshhan

mukhiya - i feel very sad , our village lost its shaan veer

veer - means

mukhiya - without fair it lost his shaan veer , look that other village they arranging 2 fair in year and we ...

veer - kya kar sakate hai

mukhiya - you are right when we don't have any brave man all are just ...naam ke man

veer - why you say like that , you yourself is brave person

mukhiya ,ha age 55 year brave person , you know 10 year before that villager man just come in fair alone took that coconut in front of all villager and just take that with him , he get so many injury in that but he won and now fair of goddess just went to him and we hear ...just like that my village is so big and I don't have anyone why not one brave man in my village who brought back that right to our village why he have pain in his voice , veer just get his pain they are lucky got mukhiya like this , he always try to help villagers , never use his power to abuse them

he just say bye to mukhiya , but his word just in veer mind his pain , goddess fair , why not in his village till now why he cant thought about it why Veer singh Khurana his par dadaji got some land as gift for behavery but that land now distributed in next generation , all just deepend upon rain , kam hua to bhi loss and jada hui to bhi loss , poverty start to show its color and some people start to robbery , robbery of crop just crop , to eat he don't like this so many time he and his family sleep without food because he don't like that robbery and all , he also want goo life for him his family , his village can really goddess get angry on us because we loss right of goddess fair


in all this thought he just reach near his house , little away from main village , light source is moon and diya in house


he just enered in his house as usual his mother Savitri waiting for him along with his wife same time someone closed his eyes and ask

guess me who am I

veer know who is it but he say ,oh so much dark hear idont get who are you

that voice oh baba I am MAAN VEER SINGH KHURANA , you don't know me

veer just laugh with his son attitude his son 6 year old he just pull him in front of him and ku nahi main kya son all word know you one day ,Ha lakin acche kam ke liye ok veer just hug him , maan pride of veer , all say that maan is god bless child so sharp ,brave and fearless to his age



veer just look once to sword collection of his house and mukhiya word again come in his mind


veer - maan abi tak soye nahi ,maan nodded in no ,veer narrow his eyes khana kyaya , maan stop for second and say na aj pet kharab hai mera


veer get that again no food in house , his eyes moist , his son tailing lie so he don't get hurt ...veer just caressed maan face and say pani pi le aur so ja , kal bahot kaam hai


veer just took one sword and went out his mother want to stop but she know he will not stop now


veer just start to play with that sword with anger , he cant give proper food to his family , that sword just shining in moon his sharp move and he handle that sword like world soft things he just all his frustration on that

precap

Veer decision enter in that village fair for that holy coconut

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Mahi 🤗...congratulations and thank u for the new story...different and interesting concept👍🏼...Mukhiya is a nice man...thinking so much about the village and worried about not being able to celebrate the Goddess fair ...Veer is disturbed by his talks and the poverty at home😕...Maan is such a cute and brave child.❤️...so sad he has to sleep hungry😭...wonder what Veer will do now...plz continue soon 😊
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lovely and different concept...
Veer is such a good person and love his son Maan...
Mukhiya is nice who thinks about his village and villagers a lot...
Veer feeling bad for Maan who slept hungery...
precap sounds good...cont soon...
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wow its awesome continue soon
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congrsts for starting a new story.
is it robinhood types?

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