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priya

@priya111111

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

congrats mahi for the new story

wow its looking really different 👏

just loved it very much

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gill123

@gill123

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Nice story congrats 4 new ff

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anjalisen85

@anjalisen85

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

awesome concept👏👏

maan is rober😲

maans father is very brave and wants to get holy coconut😊

update soon

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fariya20

@fariya20

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

nice story

is ka ending sad toh nahi hai naa

mera ko aaisa q lag raha hai the devil mahi ka khorafati dimag mein kuch na kuch pak raha hai

now iam fearing ha

well story line is nice

maan sing khutrna the daku lol

mahi pehley tapori ab dako

poor he pehley sirf Sr khurb karti thi ab profession bhi heheheheh

intersting waitng for next

holy coconut??///

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

interesting starting...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

continue nxt prt soon plz...

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gunjar

@gunjar

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Congrats mahi on the new story opening..
mahi they say na yaar that each success person does something unique to reach the next success just the say way ur mahi..
jiis tara app nayi nayi stories likthi ho wo ek se badkar ek hotha hai yaar...
simply unique dear...
mahi app aisse concepts lathe kaha se yaar????
app har baar aise kucth likh dethe ho jo hum soch bhi nahi sakthe...
u are extra ordinary baby... 👏
sach mai yaar the story line is just so intresting...
abt the story...
Mukhiya is a nice man...
he is thinking so much about the village and worried about not being able to celebrate the Goddess fair ...
Maan's papa is very disturbed by his talks
and the poverty at home...
the way maan spoke was so cute...
his way of saying ofho baba its MAAN VEER SIGH KHURANA...just reflects his attitude dear...
the way maan said ajj pet kharab hai was just very emotional...
the small baby maan said such maturely so that his father doesnt feel hurt was lovely..
nd veer being a papa understood his sons unsaid words was lovely...
precap is intresting mahi...
continue soon...
eagerly waiting to read more and more of this...
u have done a great fabb job mahi..
love u...🤗

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mani24

@mani24

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

hey mahi di in love wid this concept aur loving ke our maaneet love saga will be told in the past century just loving this thought only di😊 par di sad to see ke how little maan was telling his father ke pet kharab hai tau nahi khaya aur di veer knows ke ek din the whole world will know his son in the bright light di waiting for veer to get tht holy coconut aur di loved maan's POV aur jo woh kar raha hai sahi hai ek hadd tak di aur woh zaroorat mando ki madad kar raha hai jo ek nek kaam hai di me wiating for the title of this FF aur waiting for the next update eagerly😊

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Mahimaan

@Mahimaan

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: mani24
hey mahi di in love wid this concept aur loving ke our maaneet love saga will be told in the past century just loving this thought only di😊 par di sad to see ke how little maan was telling his father ke pet kharab hai tau nahi khaya aur di veer knows ke ek din the whole world will know his son in the bright light di waiting for veer to get tht holy coconut aur di loved maan's POV aur jo woh kar raha hai sahi hai ek hadd tak di aur woh zaroorat mando ki madad kar raha hai jo ek nek kaam hai di me wiating for the title of this FF aur waiting for the next update eagerly😊

welcome dear in maaneet world
just love your comment glad you like this
thodi tense thi historical hai to response
kaise aata hai but now happy
and please no di di bahot dur ka relation
lagta hai just called mahi