mg ff Yoddha The unknown warrrior update on 148 page - 9june - Page 30

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Posted: 10 years ago
WOW!! it was so beautifully written...good job dear...👏
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part 5 aur 6 ka like button kam nahi kar hai
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thanks dear lakin it is not mine its my bhai birth date
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Originally posted by: Mahimaan



thanks dear lakin it is not mine its my bhai birth date

oh
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how are you dear
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Part 8

maan just make her sit and give food which he brought to her and say just finish and don't tale anyone


geet just took that food and start to eat like she is hungry from days maan get some tear in eyes , he just look to her and mummer baba ye kya ho raha hai just than geet chocked with food , maan just run to her and give her some water and say slow down , pari geet just look to him and smile foolishly maan just want to pull her cubee cheek


when she finish her food maan just give her milk she just grab like small kid and finish it in one go, she give full smile to maan and maan laugh loudly


geet just scare with his big voice laugh she just mummer ye bila to sher jaisa laugh karta hai she give glare to him , maan just hold himself and say look your face , she make question face like Ya mirror kaha hai , maan just pointed to river , she just run and saw he face and she get she get white muche because of milk , and she also giggle on her face


than maan just drop her to her home now this rooting of both maan always brought food for her


geet again come near river and maan brought food for her


geet just start to eat and just than one monkey come near her and just snatch piece of roti geet just froze in her place than just run to maan and hug him tightly and say my roti , bander kahi ka ,maan just want laugh but looking to her face he control himself


but when geet just cried in fear and hug maan


maan just laugh and say chuyiya kitani darti hia



geet cribed veer baba is bile (Cat) ko bole hasana band kare de




maan - geet we can go inside in forestgeet na baba i am scaring i am with come on geet just nodded in yes with fear she just pray to her Veer baba please baba bach lena ye bila to paagal ho gaya hai she just walk behind him , maan lesioning her cribbed but he just ignore it


both entered in deep in forest oh it is beautiful both just lost in beauty of that place it is so beautiful ...don't know when both hold each other hand and just than both saw a beautiful old mandir their and both entered same time like both taking first step , they holding each other same time one bird just sit on bell of mandir and that start to sound ...like god blessing maaneet ... togetherness





they got new place for their play thou rano get idea but she trust maan and she want geet happiness so she hide it from all and start to give food in that cloth reason for geet outing washing cloth which always wash by maan

last 5 , 6 month really bliss for them they just enjoy with each other and slowly geet start to open with maan their bounding become more tight day by day


one day

geet just say with so much scare maan they say tomorrow have to cut my hair maan get memory of that day when they cut geet hair he think for sometime and maan took geet and went to that man who cut that hair


maan - kaka koi apse puch to bol dena apne geet ke baal kaat diye


kaka - sab daatenge muje



maan apko koi kuch nahi bolega he say with authority like his father


when kaka don't say anything maan say in low voice veer baba ke liye maaneet look to him with hopeful eyes


that old man just get senti he know how veer love geet and he just nodded in yes and say lakin bitiya hamesha sir (head) cupake rakhana

both just go from their after saying thanks to kaka but someone heard their talk and start to follow them

maaaneet walking in forest maan feel someone following him he feel it from that kaka house jus than maan turn and grab than person that person fall on ground


geet eyes winded in shock she called bhiya aditya bhiya and she just hug him with happiness , kaha the app she cried wo logo ne mer shaddi ki fhir bolt era dulha mar gaya and dekho kya kiya apke gudiya ko , dekho she just pull her duppata from her head app nahi aaye muje bachane ko , katti katti ,


aditya eyes start to get teary some tear fall from his eyes his gudiya hair , beautiful hair aditya just hug her tight and say maaf kar do gudiya exam thi na

aditya son of suraj geet cousin brother and 16 year old actually suraj get first child before Mohinder geet papa out of village for study


learning in city , open minded person because of city life , he just say ab nahi hoga gudiya nahi hoga


just than he look to maan who silently looking bound of bro - sis


adi just come front of geet and say gudiya ye kon hai and tu iske sath kya kar rahi hai ( veer death adi have to go back for his exam and he don't know maan because of his less coming in village ) and he is coming after veer death now

maan - just Msk son of veer singh khurana and just than geet tale everything to adi


aditya just hug maan and say thanks thanks for taking care of my sis thanks , from now this is lifelong help from you for me maan kya main tumara dost ban sakta hu maan just nodded in yes and adi just hug maan and maan don't know why but some tear fall from his eyes he mummer dost ...after baba death tear come from his eyes but when his eyes fail on geet face that she is verge of cry he just control his emotions


that day maan get his dost like his shadow which is with him till life long first their father sharing such beautiful dosti now they both adi went back for some days


and hear that place become maaneet second home , all just happening their one day geet just brought her gudiya and she want the marriage of gudha and gudiya


she ask maan to hold gudha ...maan make such yuck face an dgeet just look upper side and mummer veer baba ...


maan just smile on her antic and say don't make complaint to baba chalo lakin sirf 10 min ok and geet just start marriage with happy smile , she perfectrly follow all ritual , thou maaneet fulfilling all ritual from jai mala to fare and both don't get that , they together bounded with this play , maan just took guda in his hand and start fare of gudiya , maan front and geet behind like they getting married but it is just play for maaneet and for destiny it is BIG play

precap

leap of 4 year


adi 20

maan 16

geet 14


geet look ceremony and tear come in her eyes

song of ceremony


Hmm...

aa...

(janma baaicha baaicha khup ghayee cha

ek aai cha aaicha ek taai cha ) - 2

hmm...

birth of women so hurry in everything

one of mother and one is sister

bahuli ho ti khel kheyaya - 2

jaahali moti mohare kaya - 2

gham ghame sara, gandha jaai cha

janma baaicha baaicha khup ghayee cha

ek aai cha aaicha ek taai cha

hmm...

yoy are doll for play befor some day

but now become blossom like flower

all over smell of of flower ( jai )

birth of women so hurry in everything

one of mother and one is sister

kay mi sangu kaay he jale

kaa tula sakhaye nahane aale

may hi sange aartha maaye cha - 2

janma baaicha baaicha khup ghayee cha - 2

ek aai cha aaicha ek taai cha

how I told you what happen to you

why you get this ( period )

your mother told you meaning of motherhood


birth of women so hurry in everything

one of mother and one is sister






Edited by Mahimaan - 10 years ago
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awsm upd mommy..
its our gang see...

aww... maan feeling soo bad for geet..
poor him..😭
geet ka toh kya kahu..😕😭😭
she doent even know ki uske saath kya hua hai ya kya ho raha hai..😭😭

geet attackking on food like hungry from ages...
and her "billa" laughing like sher 😆😆🤣


"Ya mirror kaha hai "
how can i be there..?
mai toh apne ghar me hu na 🤣

aww...she get white muchhi
i love it.. she smiled😃

ye in dono ko jungle k andar jaane ki kya sujhi
bachhe hai... darr nahi lagta kya inko😡😡

n maan is on full teasing mode😆😆
and geet
😆

ohh... time just flies when you'r happy..😃
maan asked the kaka not to cut geet's hair.. and he agreed😃


someone following them 😲
initially i got scarred reading that
bt jab pata chala its adi.. me

adi is geet's bro..😃
impressed by how maan took care of geet..😳
and maan-adi became friendzz😃

maaneet shadi with gudda-gudiya shadi 😃
hmm.. i liked the idea😛😆😆


ps: wo video dekha maine... its nice😃
Edited by p_OO_ja - 10 years ago
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cong dear hatrick of res on Yodha 😡
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahimaan




cong dear hatrick of res on Yodha 😡


😲😕😳

teaser ka comment di thi na 😛😆😆

will edit this one 😆
Edited by p_OO_ja - 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: p_OO_ja


😲😕😳

teaser ka comment di thi na 😛😆😆

will edit this one 😆





oh my god tease ka comment diya tha
mahi kitani khus hai dekh 😭

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