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Posted: 10 years ago
#71
veer is so brave ...teaser is good and powerful...
cont soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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mahi in love wid the teaser way too much aur ab tau me dying for the update aur scared for veer too par jaldi se update dijiyega will be waiting😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Will veer die while fighting???😕
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome update!!!👏👏Loved Veer and his mother❤️ wow!!!what a brave and Awesome family👏👏 Glad that Veer get holy coconut with his friends is Amazing
⭐️⭐️ Suraj singh is Adi's father??Precap😭 waitong eagerly for the next update Thanks for the PM dear😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da pm n amazing teaser! update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#76
nice teaser waiting for update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow great teaser please update soon
I can not wait for the next part of your story
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Posted: 10 years ago
#78
Mahi 🤗...awesome teaser 👏...the first link is not working ...not able to see the 1st pic also...loved the pics of Baby Geet and all the fighting scenes...waiting for the update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#79
Part 3

mukhiya - lakin waqt bahot kam hai tum logo ko aj hi

veer - ho jayega mukhiya ji

just you prpair for fair , hum aa rahe hai holy cocoanut ke sath raat hone se pehele chale suraj singh

ji said suraj sing

just than veer feel pull on his dress he look down there she standing in her green ghagra and pinky choli with small bangel , small ear ring and small maang ticka , long hair , too long for her age , she have question mark on her face she just ask

4 year girl just run near veer and pull his dress veer just sit on leg and say kya hai baccha app kaha ja rahe ho aur ek sher ko marne kya

geet make big eyes , veer just kiss her forehead and say ha meri pari sher jaisa hi kuch samjhi kya geet

geet make frown and app pari bola accha lagta hai baba

veer say baba nahi chacha beta

geet ku wo khadoos to apko baba hi bulata hai na

ku ki main unko beta hu samjhi cuhiya , sound come from door and all turn to door , there veer family standing on door , mukhiya just called them in ,geet just bend near veer ear and say ye billa yaha ku aaya hai

veer just want to laugh , he know geet can't say anything to maan just complaint him always , she always quite before maan she just hide behind veer and peep from veer back geet again mummer in soft voice , don't go any wear I just come

veer nodded un yes , and maan turn red in J , veer always pamper geet and maan don't like to share his baba to anyone specially this cuhiya

just than geet come along with her mother rano , odani in head , veer and maan just bend their head , it is tradition , no other man look to women face other than his family member it is respect for women

rono just make aarthi of suraj and veer

rano is geet mother and mukhiya DIL his big son wife ,Mohinder wife

savitri say , kitani samjadar hai geet , veer just took her in arm and say hu meri pari hai hi itani smajdar , ku maan , veer just tease maan , maan make grumpy face like golgappa


mukhiya say in serious voice veer maan ko chidana ban karo


veer just nodded in yes and maan give big smile , all just nodded in no

all feel emotional veer and suraj just say bye to all aditya come near his baba and say come soon ,suraj nodded in yes and say aditya promise me you always with geet and maan

aditya don't get more but he nodded in yes

veer just took maan with him and come out near his horse , veer house is pride of village , all say that it is holy horse , have so much power , really closed to maan and veer , maan just bend near hourse and say Chetak baba ka khayal rakhana , take care of baba


chetak just react another way when veer try to sit he just denied and start to stand on back two legs , veer get his mind along with savitri , veer just once look to savitri and went near chetak , I know you get that what is happening in few hour but we have to do this for our village , for our people , for your maan

cheatak just bend his head in approval it is say that animal feel dangerous or bad things which is happening in future


Edited by Mahimaan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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part 4

till now all village get news and all just start to gather in front of mukhiya house , veer friend come with their horse and weapon all just took blessing from god and old person and say in loud voice

All - jay ho devi ma , vijayi banana



veer just bend near maan , and cup his face and say , now onward , if I come not back you have to look to all this including family of mukiya and geet family with adi , and all this village , which thing we brought in our village you have to protect that thing from all evil , get it , samje gaya na maan , you are my pride and this is your aim of life always protect weak person ,You are protector all this just remember this always and no tear for anything ok hamesha yaad rakha Rakshak ho tum ise village ke

all just sit on horse and start their journey which result no one know

mukhiya - hamare bache shaam tak lot aayenge , fair ki taayari shur kar do ,maan just llok to way where his father went , geet also feel something different she want to go near maan , but she alwyes feel something to face him, poor soul is so confused



veer and all just stop in middle of forest , that village is middle of forest forest have so deep that sunlight cant reach land in jungle so much noise of diff animals veer have to wait till evening because that coconut ceremony start on sunset when that coconut will be all village on horse he have to took that time in front of all village

that village is in between dark jungle , no source of light after sunset

they all just reach near village and start to get voice of Dhol and ect , they get it it is perfect time


veer - suraj sing , me and my some friend entering in village and brought that cocoanut to you and you and other one just took that to village , and when you reach their just make three sound of fire ok


suraj - veer main ku nahi I will brought that coconut


veer no you cant , it is my job no other word tume meri kasam


suraj - hamesha aisa karta hai tu I hate you and hug him

all just sit on horse suraj say take care veer just nodded to suraj


and all his friend and just took speed ride in full speed to that village , they just enered in village like storm and veer spped hid horse and just reach near coconut horse

before anyone get it what is happening he just snatch that cocoanut and turn back to jungle in full speed and reach near suraj sing and say now you have to reach this in village , me and my other some friend try to stop this people just go just go ...

veer voice first time get emotional and he say mere maan ka khayal rakhana suraj sing suraj sing just hug him and say main tumara intazar kar raha hu apne village main and suraj just took few man with him and went to his village

now veer know he have stop this village , in that village they get so angry because veer don't give them chance of second to protect that coconut that hit them hard they just run behind veer direction with weapons veer stand there on his horse , he just tight his greep on his sword , he just say in cold tone , not single person should go from hear get it , al just nodded and say yes and there group of people just attact on them , all forest feel with sound of sword and human sound , painful sound and voices of devi maa


veer just attack on them like lion , just cutting who ever come in front of him , his sward is full of blood along with his face , in dark his face feel like some one is red face , in this he start to get injury on his hand , back , chest but he is no wear stop , like some god come in his body he is not stoppable , just than someone hit him on his head and he fail down from horse he cried in pain but aging stand on foot and start to fiaght


veer just fight like lion he just cutting so many with his sword ,all feel like god himself come in his body , so much sharp move he don't giving time to another to think and attack blood start to come out from his body , but he is not stop for second he start to feel weak , but his hand is not stopping just than someone again hit him on his head and ...and

veer fail down on ground he closed eyes in pain but he not make any sound from mouth , all get surprised , he is human or what , so many injury but he never once hiss in pain and little maan face come in his mind like he is saying come on baba come on baba and veeer who is have injury on whole body stand like lion and say devi maaa madat karna and again start to fight with them



and just than he hear sound of fire three time and veer just lose his greep on sword , and all just attack on this veer who stand there without weapon , so many cut on body but he have smile on face , he just mummer we won ,maan we won and just lost his ...last...

precap

Veer body bruised in several injuries tied to tree near his village boundary

maan 12 year and geet 10 year , maan working in mukhiya house and someone just push him and start to hit him with ...


Edited by Mahimaan - 10 years ago

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