mg ff Yoddha The unknown warrrior update on 148 page - 9june - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
#41
congrats for new story
its very different concept mahi but i don't know ki kya kahu maine ye start do baar padha but still confused with many things i understand ki mukiya n veer are good person but reason of maan being daku is still very much confusing in my mind n thing wt he lost ...
waiting for story to unfold more so that my confusion got clear thoda samjha ki shyad goodess ke village main na hone se village main poverty o gayi hai but i don't know something is still not coming in my head grrr


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Posted: 10 years ago
#42
congrats for the new story dear
nice concept
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
congrats for new story dear
very nice concept
waiting for more dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
Wow great story please update soon
I can not wait for the next part of your story and congratulations on the new story
thanks for sharing your story with us.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
congrats on the new story. Looking forward to it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
congrats for new story
new concept
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
note

in this story that time farming is one business
all food depend on this
and villager of veer thinking that
they lost right of fair of goddess
so they face this pain ,poverty etc
so for then goddess fair
is qus of pride and progress
of their village


this is for you
meri samjdar beti
love you and big hug
cant say no to you 😃



Edited by Mahimaan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48

part 2


veer get that again no food in house , his eyes moist , his son tailing lie so he don't get hurt ...veer just caressed maan face and say pani pi le aur so ja , kal bahot kaam hai

veer just took one sword and went out his mother want to stop but she know he will not stop now

veer just start to play with that sword with anger , he cant give proper food to his family , that sword just shining in moon his sharp move and he handle that sword like world soft things he just took out all his frustration on that , after every one and two day they have to face this hunger , no food in house

at last he sit down when he feel tired his ma come near him and ask

ma - kya hua beta , what happen

veer -kuch nahi ma

ma- apane ma se cupayega , you want to hide form your own mother veer just put his head on ma lap and say , ka such main god get angry on us ma , such main bhagwan rute gaye hai hamese

ma- just caressed his head and say ku bol raha hai aisea , why you talking like this

veer - mukhiya say we don't have goddess fair in our village so

ma- ha beta , kya haia na we have faith that god doing all things , so when we don't get progress , happiness we start to think like this beta

veer - to phir kya ap nahi maante god ko

ma - maanti hu na ku nahi maanti lakin we have to make them power not our weakness na

veer - ma kabhi kabhi apki baate mere sir ke upper se chali jati hai

ma- just slap his head ku ki tera dimmag bhi tere tarah stone ka bana hai ,usmain kuch jata nahi

veer - kya ma , ma kab tak aisa chelga , na main app logo ka accha khana de sakta hu na chori kar skta hu , (I don't give good food to you all and I can not do robbery even ) bahot bura lagta hai jab mera 6 saal ka beta , zute bolke without food so jata hai kya karu ma

ma- lakin veer beta tum huamin self respect ke sath jine deta hai na wahi kaffi hai beta

veer - ma ye holy cocoanut apne village nahi aa sakta kya

ma - ku nahi aa sakta aa sakta hai , jab koi true lion hard man will born in this village jo wo cocoanut phir se apane village laayega aur phir se yaha devi ka fair hoga puja hogi

veer just mummer hu

savitri get tense with veer silence , she get it her son is upto something

lakin kya ...kahi wo co...hey devi ma raksha karna

savtri just make him sit and cup his face and say We belonging to very brave warrior , when you have to choose about village and your family choose village always and she kiss veer forehead , she is scare as veer ma but she proud also on her child

veer face start to shine with happiness , he get ans all ans , he just hug ma and say thanks ma thanks ,shukriya and he just took his pagadi and went to mukhiya house it is 4 am , sun is ready to give new sunshine to all world and this VEER is ready to give sunshine to his village with fair of goddess

he just went to mukhiya house mukhiya get surprise with his sudden entry and veer say his thought , tear just come in his eyes he just hug veer and say ye hui na bath mere sherdil

just than they hard voice ,main bhi hu tumare sath both turn to look it mukhiya sabse small brother , father of aditya

mukhiya - lakin waqt bahot kam hai tum logo ko aj hi

veer - ho jayega mukhiya ji

just you prpair for fair , hum aa rahe hai holy cocoanut ke sath raat hone se pehele chale suraj singh

precap

veer have to wait till evening because that coconut ceremony start on sunset when that coconut will be all village on horse he have to took that time in front of all village

that village is in between dark jungle , no source of light after sunset

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veer just nodded to suraj and all his friend and just ride his horse in full speed to that coconut horse and , before anyone get it what is happening he just snatch that cocoanut and reach near suraj sing and say now you have to reach this in village , me and my other some friend try to stop this people just go just go ... veer voice first time get emotional and he say mere maan ka khayal rakhana suraj sing suraj sing just hug him and say main tumara intazar kar raha hu apne village main

3

veer body bruised in several injury tied to tree near his village boundary

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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
Mahi 🤗...thank u for the awesome update and pm...made me so emotional 😭...so proud of Veer and his mother...what an amazing and brave family 👏...is Aditya's father Suraj Singh?...glad Veer could get the holy coconut...but worried for him...already waiting for the next update 😊
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Edited by --Ratna-- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
emotional update mahi veer's mom showd him d way nd he is ready 2 do anyhthing 2 bring happiness 2 his village waitng 4 d nxt part😃

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