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Gudiyeet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#241

part 5 painful update

veer thoughts maan words again fighting he want won

his last breath only spell we won maan

maan was shocked his baba died

suraj feared and froz maan reaction bravily he cried shout veer name

geet was talk to veer statu her marriage

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Gudiyeet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#242

part 6 😭😭😭

i thought maan heard geet conversation

she didn't like marriage

dulha insult maan and give more work its not related him

maaneet talking eyes nicely

i hate the rituals sad for geet

she don't want cut her hair ...she only called veer name

finally maaneet meet veer statue

maan was understood her eyes asked him he too not save her that rituals what about maan thoughts waiting for next update

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preetidhawan

@preetidhawan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#243

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! So painful update

Geet became Baal-vidhwa,poor her

Ab maan kya kerega uska apna bachpan bhi time se pehle khatam ho gaya

Eagerly waiting for his thoughts

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Mahimaan

@Mahimaan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#244

i get this idea about geet character
with my closed relative
she married in age of 11
and she send to sasural
in age of 15 when she got
her period but unfortunately
she become widow in 15 days
and till that 15 days she is
virgin than we saw her
we not follow hair cut ect
but her loneliness i always think why
family not remarry her , she is so lonely
that alwyes hurt me and that is coming in this
story

Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago

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Mahimaan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#245

part 7

when that man cut that beautiful hair , he just want to punch him hard he cant look more and went from there to near veer statue, he have qus in his eyes why ...

next day when he saw her in white sari without hair ,his heart bleed with pain , that girl just lost her smile from her face he mummer slowely ye to baba ki pari nahi hai just than his eyes met with her eyes and he shake with pain and question

like she asking him you also not save me from that na

maan feel so helpless yes he is maan who disturbed with all and don't know why his heart pain with her pain why without his own knowledge his leg start to move to her , she all lost someway , she not cried once after cutting her hair

he just sit near her and called first time as pari which veer always use for her , before that he always called her cuhiya a sob escape from geet mouth , she just hug maan like serching this shoulder she just cried mere baba hote to koi nahi haat laga pata mer ko koi nahi wo apni pari ko sambhal lete , veer baba come back come back pari need you please maan just caressed her back , her full body shaking with cry he just hug her tightly and say don't cry geet baba ko acha nahi lagega please

aj main nahi bacha paya lakin I promise you I will protect you like baba at list try to protect you please don't cry lakin mere bal ku kate diye she ask with teary eyes

maan - pata nahi ku muje bhi janana hai main puchunga dadi se now stop your cry bal to phir aa jayyenge

geet- lakin phir kaat diye to

maa n- hum kisko batange nahi n ake baal a gaye hai

geet - make q mark face and ask how

maan - maan smile softly , I will manage that ok ,bhook lagi hai kya

geet - like small child nodded in yes

maan - you wait hear I will bring something from rano ma ok

maan just went to rano and ask for lunch , rano ma get happy that atlist now geet can eat something she just make dish for her and give extra and say maan tub hi kha lena uske sath

maan just run to geet with dish and give her , geet just took roti hurriedly to eat but someone push her dish ,maan just glare that person it is brij uncle wife she is alos like him just J with geet

maaneet look to her , ek widow ko ya nahi simple khana chiye and tu yaha kya kar raha hai

maan did not like her question

maan - geet ku nahi khaygi ye khana maan ask with anger

brij wife - dastur hai tradition widow have eat simple got it she only it roti with blund sabji get it so he don't get wrong thought you get it now go from hear , and you she turn to geet , chalo ghar main , hum dete hai apko khana and she just drag geet in house , tear is just falling from geet eyes she start to hate this word marriage and vidhawa she just mummer main to apni gudiya ki shadi bhi nahi karungi veer baba ki kasam

maan all hurt just follow them , he just want to pull away geet from chachi but ...

maan saw she mke eat geet that roti and sbji

maan just saw that geet friend entering in house he just stop her and say tale geet to come other side of river where baba always practicing fight ok she just nodded in yes

maan just run to his home took some food it is not testy like geet house but atlist good than that roti and sabji and took some dhoodh also which dadi save for him he know chuhiya love milk he just reach their and

he just waiting for her and their she come with full of bucket of cloth

maan - ye cloth ke sath kya kar rahi hai

geet just come closed him she now also have fear abouthim ke ku bulaya ,apne ku bulaya ask geet

maan wo baad main first tale me what is this

geet wo rano ma ne diya boli koi datega nhai

maan got it he just took her little inside of forest it is full of greenery place is beautiful

maan just make her sit and give food which he brought to her and say just finish and don't tale anyone

geet just took that food and start to eat like she is hungry from days maan get some tear in eyes , he just look to her and mummer baba ye kya ho raha hai

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may be ek nayi surwat /new start of life

and maan thought

Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago