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Hello People! I am new to the world of writing. I have read so many works on Maneet and a big fan of all the writers on IF. If any of my post is similar to any of the works i am really sorry that's only because i have read so many works. This is my first time I am writing anything like this. I don't know how it turned out to be. Posting the first chapter. Do give it a try.



Sunrise- The Beginning of Hope
Hope is a little voice you hear whisper "maybe" when it seems the entire world is shouting "no!"

Part 1

Today the sky is again getting into tones of red and orange, which reflects the process of the sun going down from its zenith assuring everyone that the day will end at a sweet note and a next day will surely come with full new hopes and beginnings. Sometimes a person does not know what next day will bring with it. Sometimes it just takes a matter of few seconds of the day to turn your whole life upside down, whether it is in good terms or in bad terms.

Two people walking on the edge of the cliff, unknown to each other, seeing the sun set... how it changes into a sunrise the next day which predicts the starting of a new beginning. Both have a very different life in the morning but at the end of the day they are themselves.

A girl in black dress pants, white crisp cotton fitted shirt, her coat in hanging in her left hand, in other words fully in formal attire, after some time sits at the edge of the cliff seeing the whole world beneath her feet, thinking how life takes turns. She is thinking how the life changes within a span of 4-5 years. When she was smaller, she was the apple of her parents who fulfilled her every necessity, every wish and now no one is there to fulfill her happiness in life, no one is there is to protect her...shield her, her life. She is the same girl who was nurtured with a golden spoon, used to ask from her parents every tiny of detail... n they used to protect her from all the evils of this cruel world but now since they are not present anymore... life seems to have been changed. Now all her life seems to revolve around work, work and work as she had to fulfill her fathers and mothers last wish, which was to see their daughter well settled and their business flourishing. She had molded herself hard from outside that no one could say anything to her. Her image in front of others was of strong women who use to take all the problems as challenges...and use to solve them fully. No one knew that she was not so strong enough. The real self of the girl was only known to some who were very close to her. Who knew her for the past years and they could clearly differentiate between the two personalities.
She still remembers that it has been 4 years since she returned from London and that is when his father asked her to join their family business which was well renowned now. At that time she did not consider that job as her ambition but certain changes in life make those things nearer to you that you never have been serious on. She was still remembering how when she entered in her mansion, which was a huge bungalow, with roman architecture, beautiful arches, and given the touch of old roman catholic building, the walls were given an antic effect, with a garden on the sides of the bungalow which consisted of all the flowers in the world, with a beautiful sitting area and a fountain in between the garden. The voice of the water falling seemed so pleasant to the ears.
She still remembers how happy her parents were as their only daughter was returning from London after 2 years after completing her master's in Architecture. Remembering the day tears rushed into her eyes. Life seemed to have been so sweet at that time and now it seems to be clearer that happiness does not lasts for longer... Nothing stays forever.

From the first day when she returned she used to help her father in the office duties. After six months of her arrival, her life drastically changed. That is due to death of both her parents in a car accident. From that onwards she completely changed herself; she became completely ruthless for the real world. She showed no emotions...she turned into a body with no life in it...she forgot the meaning of fun which was the first word in her dictionary...she would never smile and even if she would smile it would be a formal one which would never reach her eyes.. Now she seemed to believe that whoever loves you more dearly leaves you. Everything now in her life revolved around fulfilling the last wishes of her parents.

No one knew the past life of this girl, but they knew the person who had achieved so much name and fame at a very early age in the business industry. No one knew that she is the same girl who for the public was stone hearted, strong, successful business woman, but still use to cry at night, got frightened from the darkness and thunder and lighting. Still she was waiting who could cure her pain, protect her from the cruel world, and treat her like she is a child, take care of her. She truly wanted to return to that life which she was living before, free from all the worries. She was never a materialistic person and would never be, she was the same girl who even now becomes happy by eating chocolates, who use to get happy by getting stuff toys from others as gifts, who use to love seeing children playing, who use to get hurt and cry to take her inner pain out. She never disclosed her real self in the public.
***
On the other hand there was a very handsome man standing, wearing black dress pants, and light grey shirt, with a blazer on the top and a loose tie hanging around his neck... the first few buttons opened, standing in front of his car looking at the world adjacent to him. His thoughts were also very similar to what that girl was thinking. He was thinking of how life teaches us to step forward even though one having a very unbearable, painful past and guilt. He was thinking how life took the person he loved more dearly from him, the person who was an inspiration for him .He was left alone with his grandmother and mother, who looked after him through all the hardships. His life completely changed. He also became from a kind hearted, fun loving person to a ruthless human being. His father was taken away from him when he needed him the most, at the stage when he was about to enter the business world, to teach him the ABC of business, God had taken his inspiration from him who would teach him how to take decisions right, the strategies to be used as this comes only from experience.
Flashback: (I will be using P for the person and PF for the person's father and PM for the person's mother)
He still remembers that he was given a golden spoon, the things he wanted came before he even demanded and because of this he had become a little spoiled. After completing his master's in Business Administration from a well renowned university he was asked to join the family business. He was reluctant to do it as he wanted to enjoy his life. He didn't want to take responsibilities at an early age.
PF: Child why don't you join the family business?
P: Come on Dad I don't want take responsibility of large empire at a very early age. You know that I want to enjoy my life first.
PF: But child you will have to take it some time. Though I don't want to force you but still.
P: I don't want to join it. And that's final.
PF: what are you saying? I have built this empire not for myself but for you, for my grandchildren.
Soon this talk turned out to be a heated argument.
P: I am leaving... My friends are waiting for me at the club. And don't wait for me at the dinner I will come late.
PF: You are not going anywhere until you answer my question... When will you join?
P: Dad I don't want to answer your questions.
PM interrupted the heated argument between father and son and son left from there.
PM: Please don't stress yourself. Already you are not feeling well. He will take his responsibilities very soon. After all he is your son.
PF: No... I want him to take responsibilities right now so that I can help him. You know handling such a large empire is not easy. One has to be very careful while doing business deals.
PM: You don't worry, he will understand.
PF: Can you take me to the doctor as I am not feeling well. I don't want him to see me in this condition. I don't want to tell him that I am a heart patient.
PF already had 2-3 light heart attacks before and the doctor had told him that stress is not good for him. He hadn't told his son about this.
And he already started moving towards the door oblivious to the entire talking taking place. As soon as he moved towards the end of the corridor to move out he heard her mother's and grandmothers' scream. He rushed back and saw his father's one hand on his heart and he was on the verge of falling down. He rushed towards him and asked his mother to call the ambulance. This for the first time tears gathered in his eyes. But since the ambulance was taking too long he rushed his father to the hospital on his own car.
Soon he reached the hospital and rushed towards the emergency ward where the doctors took control immediately.
Soon the person's mother and grandmother also reached the hospital in the other car.
The person's father was in a very critical condition. This is when his mother told him that his father was a heart patient.
P: Why didn't you tell me?
PM: Your father asked me not to tell you, he wanted you to take responsibility.
P: But...
The doctor came outside and informed them that he was in a very critical condition and may not survive more. The doctor also told that he murmuring his son's name again and again. He rushed inside ICU.
P: Dad I am here. Please talk to me... I will take my responsibilities seriously but please don't leave me.
PF: Son I just wanted to hear these words from your mouth. Now I can leave this world peacefully.
P: No dad you cannot leave me. You know that I need you...
PF: Child I don't have much time. I want to tell you a very important thing. Listen to me carefully.
PF could not speak much but still started to tell him though he was having a breathing problem.
PF: Son I wanted to tell you that I had a best friend who helped me a lot during my hardships. Once when you were 7 years old, although you don't remember much but my business suffered a lot of loss, and we were on the verge of coming to the road but it is he who helped me pay up for all the loans etc. But after that he just stopped contacting me and then I didn't know where he went. 2-3 days before I came to know that he and his wife died in an accident. But I don't believe it. They also had a daughter. I don't know whether she came back from London after completing her studies... But child let me tell you... I owe that person a lot. He helped me and my family when even our own relatives did not helped us. I ask you to find out about their daughter and help her... Protect her... She was so innocent... please will you keep your promise child!!!!
P: Yes Dad I will. I will find their daughter. What is her name?
PF: I don't know her name but everyone in her family called her angel and many times I have heard her parents saying angel. She is the one and only daughter of my best friend.
P: Are they the same people who we used to meet up at the beach?
PF: Yes child they are the ones.
As soon as the person's father uttered the words he started to take deep breaths...
PF: annnddd...childdd... Also takeee careee of ...your... Motherrr... And Grrandmother...
P: Yes Dad I will.
As soon as he uttered these words his father expired and he rushed out of the ICU... crying... It was very hard for him to cope for him after the loss of his father as he considered himself as the killer of his father. He felt really guilty after that incident. He changed completely after that day... He tried a lot to find about the Handa's in London but he couldn't find them... but he didn't knew that he was searching for angel at the wrong place as after completing her studies she had returned to her homeland and was in the same city as he. He never asked his mother and grandmother about their best friends as his father asked him not to tell it. She could not take this as his mother and angel's mother had a deep friendship and his mother would not be able to bear with this bitter news. So he kept quiet. Also he did not want to lose his others support. So he thought that it's better to keep quite.

After his father's demise he was officially announced as the owner of the business empire. He was a completely changed man now... He took everything very seriously... no one can identify him as the previous one. He used to work late at nights for the projects of the business. He wanted to take his family business to reach the peaks where his father wanted it to see. From that day onward he had nothing to do other than work and to make his family business number one. He could do anything for the success of the business.
***
Where he was standing no one would recognize him neither that girl that they were most wanted by the media. They had never shown their faces or identities in front of the media. The girls died to see the glimpse of a handsome businessman and the boys used to wait for one glance of that girl. Only their names were visible in the headlines whenever any major business milestone was created by both the companies.

These two companies were rivals of each other but till now there were not any clashes. Although both of them used to keep a watch on the others business activities but never came up fighting for similar projects.

Yes the man was none her than the great Maan Singh Khuranna the owner of the" Khuranna Group of Industries" well renowned in the whole business industry internationally.

On the other hand was the Geet Handa the owner of world famous "GH group of industries".

Both were construction companies and they had also a range of other ventures.

Geet was also the owner of a few boutiques around the world but she never communicated this side of her personality to others. The media only knew that she is the owner and the dresses designed are through different other designers under her. Although this was to some extent true but sometimes Geet herself use to design the very special orders. No one knew that the great Geet Handa was designers as well expect her parents and a few friends. Her boutiques were known as "GH Boutiques "and after her parent's demise the passion for designing started to fade a little but still when she used to get fed up from her daily routine she use to design.

Maan on the other hand was also the owner of many hotels around the world such as in London, Sydney etc. He had a chain of hotels named as "Khuranna hotels"

Here Maan was unaware that Geet Handa is his angel as he was oblivious of the fact that the letters GH' stands for Geet Handa and that is why his all efforts in finding his angel went futile.
***

After spending some of their time, when the sunlight completely drifted away, they had to leave. Here Geet stood up and brushed her hands to get rid of the mud. On the other hand Maan went back into the car thinking that he would come again as it was his daily ritual.

As soon as Geet stood up she was distracted by her cell phone ringing. She knew that it could be none other than her friend Pinky who stood up all against the world for her.

Pinky was Geet's childhood friend who became a shoulder to cry on when no one was there to help to get her out of the pain. And she knew that she will be always there when in need. She wiped her tears which were rolling on her cheeks and attended the call. Pinky was also her most loyal employees in the office.
P: Where are you??
G: I am coming... (In a broken voice).
P: Were you crying???
G: No just coming... And I am not a kid that I will be crying!
P: Geet you know na that you can't lie form me. Tell me what happened?
G: Just remembering my past.
P: Just forget your past and see what future holds. When your mother and father will see you they surly will be proud of you. Now just forget all that. I forgot to tell you that you have a meeting in the next hour. Everything is prepared...you just have to present to the clients the main elements of the project.
G: Yeah!!!! I am coming.
Geet ended the call and made her way towards the car.
***
On the other hand Maan also go an important call from the clients and moved toward the car for the meeting.
Both Maan and Geet used to come over the cliff everyday but never saw each other. The cliff was situated in such a way that there was sea with a beach on the left hand side and where the sea ended on the corner the cliff started. It was very long.

Geet found that place when she returned from London and Maan was coming to that place from his childhood. Whenever you are alone, one find's a place to share your pain with the nature. The gushing sound of the water helps soothe the pain that your heart holds.

After a long tiring day both went to their mansions. By saying they had all the luxury to spend a peaceful life but, as they say material possessions do not make life peaceful. There are also other things that a person requires for peace in heart.

As soon Maan entered his mansion... Which was a very beautiful bungalow... designed by his mother, and was built by his own company. When he was smaller his mother had made the design of the mansion.
After entering the mansion he was greeted by his grandmother and mother. They talked on the new business venture which the company was about to launch, ate their dinner and went to their respective rooms. The entire mansion was really big with uncountable rooms, outhouse, swimming pools, lovely gardens and every corner decorated with the classy decorative pieces. Maan went into his room and crashed on his bed for sleeping but seemed like that sleep was nowhere to come. Therefore he started to do his work on his laptop. Later he slept.

While Geet after attending the business meeting and obviously getting the contract of the project went to her home. As soon as she entered she could hear and see the images of the laughter of her parents as they have never left her alone. As if they are congratulating her for her success. She had tears in her eyes remembering those memories.
Soon her most loyal maid came and took her bag and coat from her.
Mary: Would you like to eat something Ma'am?
G: (in a stern voice) No...Not right now.
M:(sighed) Ok Ma'am..
Here Geet went away in her room for sleeping and relaxing as tomorrow again her robotic routine would start.
In the meantime Mary asked Stena, another maid to clear the table.
Stena had been working as maid and joined recently. Since she was scared to voice her thoughts to her boss. She hesitantly asked Mary
S: Mary, I cleaned all the rooms today, but the last room on the right in the upper floor was not opening. Also I couldn't find the key to it.
M: OH!!! That room...Nobody has ever gone there for years. And the key is only with Geet Ma'am.
Stena got a little curious as why no one has ever gone there. So she asked Mary again
S: What's in that room?
M: It's her childhood room. After her parents expired she locked this room and now she rarely goes to this room. There are many memories attached with that room.
S: ohm! I see!

In the time being both Maan and Geet landed to their journey of dreams did not know that the upcoming days would change their life completely. Again happiness would knock in their lives.

Index:
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Part 15: Page 19
Part 16: Page 21
Part 17: Page 24
Part 18: Page 26
Part 19: Page 26
Part 20: Page 29
Part 21: Page 30
Part 22: Page 32
Part 23
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Part 2

Next day:
Geet woke up, freshened and dressed up for her office. Similarly Maan also dressed up.
Both move towards their respective office. The cars of both their stopped at the same traffic signal but both didn't see each other as the windows were blackened. Maan was on call with a client. Whereas Geet was completing presentation on her laptop. As soon as she finished her work she took a sigh of relief and this is when she saw that the car had stopped at a traffic signal. She was waiting for the traffic signal to open when her sight caught the image of a blind man on the other side of the road who was carrying a cane in his hand and was not able to cross the road. She asked the driver to wait for her on the other side of the road and she will meet him in mean time. She crossed the road and immediately helped the old man to cross the road. Geet although was wealthy, but she did not stay away from helping people. Geet was a really down to earth person. At the time of helping others she doesn't see that any one is looking at her not. No one can imagine that the owner of the business would stand out of the car and offer for help. She was never proud of her fame. But she did not know that a pair of eyes had noticed her sweet gesture.
It occurred when Maan ended his call he caught a glimpse of her as she moved from right in front of his car. Maan was astonished to see a girl, dressed up in a formal attire to offer help. A smile appeared on his face when he saw her smiling towards the old man and making him cross the road. He was thinking that no one in today's world would help a complete stranger, and she being a girl did this. He also knew that she is not an ordinary girl as through her classy dressing sense, and a classy car, depicted that she was wealthy enough.
As soon as Geet reached to the other side of the road the man thanked her. To which she replied.
Man: Thank you so much daughter. No one helps us blind people now a day.
Geet: It's ok uncle. Take care and pray for me...
Man: You too take care daughter. Ok bye!!!!
Geet: Bye uncle.
When the man raised his hands to give her prays that's when Geet had tears in her eyes that were about to rush any time. She smiled at the old man but somewhere Maan knew that that this smile did not reach her eyes. He could see pain on her face. Here his face also turned to show emotions of pain and his stomach churned. He thought that somewhere he has seen those eyes. Those eyes called him as there was some relationship between them over the years. He had an urge to console her but soon the traffic signal opened and there the car moved. Similarly Geet sat in her car and moved towards the office.
Both moved towards their respective offices, where they were respected by all means. Though both were of quite different personalities but both somewhere had some soft corner, which made their personalities distinct.
As soon as Maan reached his office. He put up a stern face with oozing attitude walked in from the parking lot with body guards on his sides. The voice of his shoes and the lifts sound made everyone was rushing here and there. Some people had papers which had to be completed at any cost, as they knew that if the files are not completed, that would cost their jobs, which no one wanted as working in such a well distinguished company is dream of many people but only those survive here who are fully capable to show their abilities.
He entered into the office with full class. After a few seconds he exited the lift and entered the main hall, where everyone greeted him, but he just accepted their greetings by nodding, he entered his cabin ad called his most trusted employee, Adi to come to his cabin.
His cabin had off white wall with abstract painting, with classy furniture, and blinds surrounding the whole cabin. He rested himself on the easy chair where he has been sitting for the past 5 years. His mind went back to the scene which he had seen in the morning and the image of the girl comes into his eyes, as if her eyes were asking something, to give her back which she had previously. He thought that somewhere he has seen these eyes which pleading him to restore the liveliness in them. He was in deep thoughts that where he have seen these eyes when he was distracted by a knock.
M: Come in. (in a stern voice)
A: Sir.
M: Bring me my black coffee...ummm sugar free. And also bring me the files for the new projects as I want to see the progress immediately!
***
On the other hand Geet also reached her office in the meantime. The employees started moving here and there as they have seen a monster. The ticks (voice) of her high heels were the warning to many. She put the mask of a blank face and moved towards her cabin. Her cabin consisted of some classy furniture and was decorated with fresh flowers. As she entered her cabin the soft fragrance of roses cooled her mind and drifted away from the past memories. She called Pinky into her cabin, her assistant cum friend. In mean time she was checking the files that were kept on the table for checking and different projects.
P: Yes ma'am
G: Tell me the detail for today's meetings and schedules?
P: Ma'am today you have a meeting within the office on the new venture that you are trying to open. Then you have a meeting at the West-point' restaurant with sponsors for that venture.
G: This project is really important for me. Ok give me the details of the project and I want no mistake and carelessness from my staff. Make them understand this.
P: Ok ma'am. Anything else...
G: Yes bring me a cup of tea... Remember I take 2tsp of sugar. You people always forget that!
P: Yeah sure... I know that and ... (Smirking).
As Pinky closes the door... Geet remembers her parent's talk which pushed her to do the project of an Old Age House.

Flashback:
Everyone was laughing and taunting Geet when she came back from London. That is that she has completely westernized thoughts about living and for relationships... But somehow the discussion takes a turn and turns out to be serious.
Rano (her mother): Geet will you also forget us when we get old and send us to an old house. You see every child now a day's wants to do like this and does not want anyone to interfere in their lives.
G: Mom how can you say that. Do you even believe in this kind of thing... and do you think that the way you nurtured me I will turn out to be like this. Don't ever let this thought come to you. ... (She thinks to lighten the mood as it turned out to be too serious which she could not take). You know what that even after my marriage I will bring my husband to this house and we will both stay here with you... remember I once said and will always say that I will not leave you until death surrounds me. I know you think that I am burden to you.
Rano: Geet just shut your mouth... what are you saying. Don't ever take that word out of your mouth. Daughters are never burden to their families but they are the happiness and laughter of the house.
Geet's father: You may not remember Rano but I remember when Geet was born I was relieved that our house has got an angel... that too so cute... and will make us proud from her deeds.
And then Geet's father hugged her while smiling.
While hugging Geet's father said: And Geet... my princess it's wrong to say that you won't go to your husband's house... every girl has to after a certain age.
G: I understand dad but still I don't want to leave you guys.
GF: Ok... so here is a deal I will marry to you whom who gives you permission to come every day to meet us?
Rano: what if she is married abroad???
GF: Then Geet he will be wealthy enough to bring you by air on his private jet everyday... is that ok?
Rano: You both talk nonsense. How can he bring your daughter every day? Like he will not have anything else to do...Right???? Your father-daughter cannot be understood.
Flashback Ends
Here Geet comes back to present and has tears in her eyes. She glances at the files that Pinky had given her in the morning for checking and signing.
***
On the other hand Maan was as usually working hard on making a blue print for a project, which was very close to his heart. In order to come out of the guilt he was trying to build something that would benefit the people in his homeland. Yes he was constructing a Hospital where the people of all age group would have every kind of facility, and where also the poor people can treated free of charge... He wanted to make sure that this hospital consisted of every facility for every disease which can be treated. He was also looking forward for buying well updated equipment from abroad. He wanted every ward to be present there... Cardiology, OPD children's wards etc. But the owner of the great empire was stuck at one thing, the Children Ward... He knew that children do not like a formal setting... but he couldn't put the idea in the blueprint. After when he was fed up from the entire project he glanced at the clock as it was quite late at night. Therefore he decided that he would carry his work the next day.
***
Here Geet also finished her meeting at the hotel which was last scheduled on her timetable, although this project was giving a headache as she was working on it for many years, but still she wanted to do it as it was her dream project. Don't know how she will do the further; as she was having problems in the buying of the land, she was not able to fully put what she wanted on the blueprint.
She still remembers that her parent's last wish was to get the idea to be implemented, as one day before there accident her father asked her to complete this in any circumstances, as he believed that there are many old people who are deprived of homes and these children who are selfish to make them go out of their homes.
Today Geet was feeling very low she went home straight away. After some time as she was getting bored and the silence of the house was haunting her, she told her maid that she is going outside and will return later and that she should not wait for her for dinner. Then she changed her clothes from business attire to a very normal casual shalwar kameez white in color which complemented well with her complexion. She took her bag and moved towards the car. She reached to the beach which was her favorite place of all times and whenever she was feeling low she would hurry to the beach where the cool breeze helped her to take her all the sorrow. She went there and saw the sun had already gone down. She sat near a palm tree and kept on admiring the nature.
***
On the other hand Maan was not in the mood of going home; therefore he decided to go somewhere else. He called his grandmother and told that he would return later home and she would not wait for him till dinner. Though his grandmother scolded him for burdening himself with the workload but somehow was convinced by him.
Today he was in the mood of going to the beach. As may be the gushing sound of the waves help him clear his mind and maybe he get some ideas regarding the project. The sound of the waves did do a benefit to him in calming him down. After the sunset usually the crowd at the beach use to leave and only a few people were there. Therefore he removed his shoes and started walking bare on the beach. Maan felt very pleasant when the water touched his feet. It felt that the coldness of the water touched his every part of the body. He was walking and another flashback came in his mind.

Precap: Maan meets Geet! 😛

Right now I am just developing the characters so the initial parts can be boring!. Just wait for 1 or 2 parts more.. that is where the real story starts. And it will not be a depressing, emotional one I tell u!
Edited by sparklingeyes11 - 11 years ago
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hi congrats on the FF! All da best! Superb start! Well written! Js read Part 1 n 2 nw! Maan n Geet were happy bt their lives were changed by the tragic demise of her parents n his dad! Geet nw emotionless n a workholic! MAan lookin 4 his angel- Geet Handa! He promised his dad bt unabel to find her! Awesum precap! update soon
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Part 3

Flashback:
When Maan was very young at around the age of 7 he use to come every day with his parents to this beach... they used to enjoy a lot and when returning they used to have an ice-cream from a nearby stall.
One day Maan and his family as usual were on beach. They were enjoying themselves when Maan's sight caught a glimpse of a girl of around the age of 5, dressed in a sleeveless pink frock with two beautiful pins clipped on her curly brown hair which though were little messy, sittings with her knees bend and her head kept down. It was as if she was crying over something. She was all alone there. Maan went there and asked her a few times that who is she, why is she is crying but she didn't reply.
M: Hello... Who are you?
G...???
M: Why are you crying???
G...???
M: Did anyone say something to you???
G...????
M: Why are you not saying something???
Maan panicked as to why that girl was not saying anything... Did she know how to speak... Could she hear me...he went to his parents and bought them with him.
(will be using MM for Maan mother and MF for Maan's father)
MM: Child... Who are you...?
MF: Why are you crying??? Why are you alone???
G...???
Just then Maan's mothers picked her head up and saw her face was all wet due to the tears flowing freely. Her cute, hazel eyes which were prominent the most on her face were red due to crying for some time.
Geet just became scared of the three people surrounding her.
MM: You don't need to be scared of us child. Tell us why you were crying... Where are your parents?
Still Geet was scared of them. Just then Maan's mother picked her on her lap and hugged her.
MM: Beta don't be scared of us... you can tell us your problem... maybe we can help you.
Just then Maan thought why such a cute girl is crying all of a sudden and why is she scared of us... we are not monsters that she was gaping at us like that. But still Maan had an urge to soothe her. He searched his pocket and took out a chocolate and gave it to her.
M: Look now we are not strangers... we can become friends... look I have a chocolate to start our friendship with...let's start...
M: Hello I am Maan. And you are???
G: I don'ttt talkkk to strangersss. My mother said that don't talk to anyone else if you don't know.
M: Look I told you my name. So we are not strangers anymore. And I also have a chocolate to start our friendship with.
G: Okk. (In a breaking voice)... my name is angel...
M: How come your name is angel... it should not be something nonsense. Doesn't your family know how to keep names?
G: Geet got hurt...and started to cry even more...in between she said that everyone in my house say me angel... and I like my name and don't dare you say anything to my parents.
Maan's parents start to giggle by seeing her sweet innocent face.
M: Okk... I was just joking. Angel is a very sweet name. Ok take this chocolate.
G: Ok if you say so.
Geet took the chocolate and started nibbling it. This is when Maan's father and mother asked...
MM: But beta can you tell us that why are you crying as now we are not strangers.
Geet's face again become sad and she told
G: (in a breaking voice)... WO I am lost... I don't know where my mother and father are. There was too much crowd and suddenly I don't know where my parents went.
MF: Ok we will find your mother and father. But can you give a description of what they looked alike.
G: Just like you and aunty...
Again there was a smile on their faces by listening to her innocent talk.
MF: MM you wait here and I will ask the guards that if they have any complaint regarding some child being lost.
As soon as Maan's father reached there he saw a man and woman talking to the guard regarding this issue. Maan's father went there and told that there daughter was with his wife and son. As soon as Geet saw her parents, she rushed toward them and hugged them.
Rano and Geet's father thanked them from giving them there daughter.
G: Thank you Maan for the chocolate (smiled towards him).
The dimple on her face felt so cute... Which Maan can never forget...
M: You are welcome Angel and take care of yourself... you should be always with your parents all the time. Don't leave their hand even for a second. Lastly keep smiling as you look cute when you smile, not when you cry.
G: Ok Grandpa!
M: Who is grandpa???
G: You are.
M: I am not...
G: (in her babyish voice) The way you are giving me advices...it seems that you are a lot elder than me that is why I am saying you grandpa and will always say that.
M: No I am not. It seems that I have wrinkled face, with broken teeth and a stick in one hand. (Maan actually started looking himself in that image)
G: No I have given you this name and you have to accept it. Or else I will not be you friend!
Maan did not want to dishearten Geet anymore therefore he accepted little reluctantly and also he thought that if he would refuse than surely her eyes would start shedding pearls which he couldn't bear.
After a little bit chit chatting both the families bid good bye and left to their houses. This was the first meeting of Geet and Maan.
Flashback Ends

From that day they became best friends and they came every day to the beach to meet. They use to share every single thing between each other. Also both Maan's parents and Geet's parents became good in terms of relationships. During when they meet... one day Maan gave Geet a box which consisted of two beautiful swans dancing on a slow piano tune... and Geet gave him a wooden aero plane which had ribbons at the end. They both decided to put in the tree house that was abandoned and that was there favorite hide out. They promised themselves that they will open only when they meet again...
But after 4-5 months Geet stopped coming to the beach and also her parents. Maan parents tried a lot to contact them but they just disappeared in thin air. Later they got to know that there was a conflict within their family which led rivalry with in their families and caused their business to suffer a lot and finally financial crises so they had to leave their well-establish business and had to start a new beginning from another place. Therefore they had shifted to a small place. After that both the families had no contact with each other... and both became busy in their lives. The also forgot that they even have been friends. They may have forgotten everything regarding their friendship. But still at the back of their minds... they do remember the wonderful memories that they shared.
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Will update soon 😉

Edited by sparklingeyes11 - 11 years ago
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Its a good story to start with I liked the first part of the 3 parts u hav posted so far
Sorry 2 mention ur writing style seems too familiar
Do I by any chance know u !!!
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Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28

Its a good story to start with I liked the first part of the 3 parts u hav posted so far

Sorry 2 mention ur writing style seems too familiar
Do I by any chance know u !!!

Thankyou! I think u must have read my other work too.. Reasons for success!
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Originally posted by: sparklingeyes11

Thankyou! I think u must have read my other work too.. Reasons for success!

Oh yes !!
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awesome story dear
loved the way u described maan and geet's character
both has lost someone close to them and living a life just to fulfill the last wishes of their loved ones

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hi dear! Thanks 4 da fab update! Maan n Geet went wen they were young! Maan remembering the past! Geet crfyin n Maan sees her n his parens help her! Maaneet became friends n met at the beach! superbly written! update soon! Do try n pm pls !Thanks
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Awesome...Both are lost in memories and searching for the one who can bring them back...

do continue soon

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