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Posted: 11 years ago
#81
hi thanks 4 da pm n terrific update! So Maaneet have dinner together n r nw friends! Maan wants to knw more abt her n she thinks he is good person! They have yet to realise tht they knw each other frm childhood! update soon! Well written
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow new development friends ha!!😉
Good going!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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very nice n waiting for next update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely update
hope to see more of maaneet ...new bonding
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
Nice update dear...
do pm about the update,s...
eagerly waiting for next update...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 14
On the other hand the team mates also return...
Y: Guys!!! As we don't have much work tomorrow then we can plan to go to watch movie... my favorite movie... Mission Impossible 4 is in the cinema's now.
M: I think that is good idea...
A: I don't think Maan sir will allow us...
P: Adi sir why are you so scared of him...you know he is too hottt!!!
A: Pinky ji you don't know him...he will kill us... if we don't complete our work on time...
P: OH!!! Really... Same is the case with Geet...She pushes herself off the limits and expects other to do the same...
Piya: Wow our bosses have so much in common...
Abhay: (Said in a defending manner) I think...this shows their responsibility...that they are too passionate about their work...
Piya: Abhay you just shut up...You too don't have a life...Every time...did u do this...did u did that...
Abhay: Piya!!!
Piya: I know that my name is Piya..!!
Abhay: Just forget it... You should be admitted in a mental ward..
Piya: Abhay don't cross the line..
Piya said in a dead whisper
Abhay : Try me...
Y: Guys!! Cool down I didn't mean to get into a fight between us...
P: Only Pari can help us in this thing...she is only one who can take permission from Geet for us...
Pari: No no... Guys...keep me out of this...You know Pinky Geet...she won't agree...you know yourself when she is on a business trip she is only into work...
P: But Pari you are the only one who is able to convince Geet...
Pari: Ok I will try but I cannot assure you...
Adi: Guys who will ask Maan sir...The same is with Maan sir...
Piya: Meera can you ask him...you know him from quite some time...Please Please!!!
M: Ok I will but if he says No...then I can't do anything...
Y: Okay then it is decided that Pari will convince Geet and Meera will convince Maan...
Then everyone went into their respective room and prepared for tomorrow's meeting...then slept...they were all very excited to watch a movie ...
Next day
Maan and Geet as usual right on time... Both enter the hall at the same time..
M: Ladies first..
G: Quite a gentleman...
Geet replied with a smirk.
They went in and sat at the end of the row, together.
G: Maan I was thinking about the project and I thought about the few changes
M: Yeah! Geet tell me
Adi and Pinky had their mouths hanging. Both had one thing in their minds. Since when did they start calling on first name bases?'
Adi: What am I seeing? The first time when someone called Maan sir by his name he called the deal off.
Pinky: The same is with Geet... Geet Ma'am slapped the guy.
Both were thinking. But later brushed it off. The meeting went well and Both Maan and Geet made a few changes. Now it was time to take the permission. Geet went out with her team and Pari was waiting for her. Maan's team was still inside. Maan was talking to Adi.
M: So Adi when we reach India I want you to finish this file. Okay
A: Yes sir!
At the corner Piya was pushing Meera to talk to Maan.
P: Come on Meera talk to him...'he won't eat you'
Piya imitated the same line that Meera used on the day of presentation.
Meera: I know that...But I am just scared if he gets angry...you know how work is his first priority...
Piya: I know about that but still try We have finished all our work...Plzzz
Meera: Fine!!!
Meera went towards Maan.
Meera: Maan I want to talk to you...
Maan: Yes Meera..
Meera: Actually it's not related to work...
Meera said with a nervous smile.
Maan: Okay I'm listening...but he was still looking into a file...
Meera: I was thinking...no we were thinking...Me, Adi and Piya ...that it is our last day so can we go out for a movie with Ms. Handa's team... (And closed her eyes and crossed her fingers)
Maan thought about it
Maan: Okay you all can go...
Here Meera was damn sure he will yell at her so she started babbling...
Meera: Sir I told them that it was not a good idea and I stopped them and they did not listened I told them that we were here for a business trip we should act professional. ... Wait what did you say?
Here Piya was trying to stifle her laughter.
Maan: You can go...
Meera: Umm you sure about that?
Maan: yeah I am... you all completed your work and so it's okay...
Meera: Okay Thanks!
Maan just smiled. Piya saw this and fainted is Adi's arms...
Adi: What is with this girl? Whenever she has to faint she just has to faint on me
Meera: OMG!!!!!!! Did he just smile...
And Meera sat on the couch with a dreamy sigh.
Adi: (said rolling his eyes) Girls...
Here Geet's team went out and Pari was waiting for them.
Pari: Hey Geet
Geet: Hey Pari . What are you doing here?
Pari: I had to talk to you...
Geet: Yeah Pari...
Pari: Umm Geet we were just wondering that umm ...you know that you guys have completed your work so umm...
Pari just trailed off
Geet: Pari what are you trying to say I don't understand get to the point
Pari: Geet we just want to go to see a movie with that beach guy's team...That is if you are okay with it..
G: (asked confusingly) BEACH Guy! Who is beach guy??
P: Ahhh I meant to say Mr. Khurnna. I don't know where this beach guy came from.
Pari said nodding her head left to right.
Geet was utterly confused with Pari behavior.
Geet: Umm okay you guys can go
Pari: Are you coming?
Geet: Umm no I have a little work...
Pari: Okay ...you sure
Geet: Yeah I am
Pari: Positive
Geet: Pari Go! Before I change my mind
Pari: Okay ...I will see you later...
Pari met up with others and told the good news. Meera also joined them and all were ready go.
Geet was going to go to her room but remembered that she forgot the file that she had to study. She went back to get it
Here Maan was going to go to his room that he got a phone call. It was from home.
M: Hey Dadi!
D: Wow Maan you finally remembered that you have a family that actually cares about you!!!
M: Wow wow Dadi cool down I was going to call you but I was caught up with work...
D: Maan beta you are always busy...sometimes a person should think about something else besides work.
M: Dadi you know that this project was important.
D: Maan you say that all projects are important..
M: Okay Dadi enough about me...What about you.. How are you feeling??...I hope that you don't go to the kitchen to sneak out sweets...
D: One enquiry machine is your mother and one is you...
D: I am perfectly fine... and yes i sneaked to get sweets but you mother has locked all them up... so the mission was a complete fail...
And Dadi started laughing
Maan also smiled to that
They conversed a little and then
M: Okay Dadi... Take care I will call you later at night...
D: Okay
M: Okay. Love you...bye
D: Bye

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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
awsemmm update dadi maan bond fab
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
nice update... dadi's sneaking part was really nice..
waiting for next..
thnak's for the pm dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89
beautiful update
maan and geet both r talking to each other without fighting
i was not expecting this after their last meeting😆
loved maan and dadi's convo
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da pm n wonderful update! Well written! Maaneet talk without arguing! update soon

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