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Ok here is another Os! I was just surfing the Tv and a clip came infront of me... based on that i couldn't stop myself from writing! Hope u enjoy!
Plus I don't know what name i should give to this work! so please help me out with this!
Part 1
A man about six feet tall, lean, smart with sharp hazel eyes and perfect M-shaped lips light stubble and a pointed nose just entered from the main door of huge, lavish mansion. He had loosened up his tie with a coat in one hand and a laptop bag in the other. He was a little bit earlier than his usual timings and was just about to shout on his servant for not standing at the door to carry his bag and take away his coat when his ears caught a melodious voice.
A girl's back was towards him and she was talking to someone and had kept the phone on speaker.
Person: Geet beta wo tumhara khayal to rakta hai na?
Geet(in a laughing manner but had tear shining in her eyes) Haa mama khayal... yeh app kya keh rahi.. wo to mujhe uthne hi nahi dete chahe koi bhi ghar ka kaam ho... wo to mai khud hi forcefully kaam karti ho.
In between saying this morning incidents came into her mind and more tears started brimming in her eyes...
Flashback:
Geet was making coffee and parathas for her husband in the kitchen. She has been married to the city's most handsome, successful man, none other than Maan Singh Khurana with oozing attitude and proud personality. Geet was making the parathas when accidently put her right hand on the hot tawa and it got burned and at the same time the tea was about to boil and in order to stop it from pouring on to the stove she clasped the hot pot and got her other hand burned too. This happened too fast that she didn't have the time to react and forgot to take a cloth or glove to hold the pot. Immediately a maid came and switched off the stove...
Maid: Geet madam! Are you Ok?? What did you do? You should be careful. Wait just let me bring the first aid box.
Geet couldn't say a word as the pain was too much for her to bear. The Maid came and put medicine on top and bandaged it.
M: Madam!I will make Maan sahab's breakfast. You should take rest.
Geet just sat at the chair nearby.
Outside the kitchen
Maan(shouted): Where is everyone??
Maid ran outside from the kitchen
Maid: Sahab wo Nakul is not here. He is on leave!
Maan: Ok bring my breakfast immediately. I am getting late for office.
Maid: Ok sahib. Will bring it
Maid rushed inside and came back with cheese omelet with parathas and tea.
Maan tasted it and threw it out of his mouth
Maan (shouted): Kis ne banaya yeh? Haa..yeh bhi koi breakfast hai?
Maid( in a meek voice): Sahab mainay
Maan: Geet kaha hai?
Maan(self-thought): Bus againa yeh larki apni aukat par. Just wait Geet!
Maid: Sahab wo kitchen mai
Maan without hearing the maid fully took long steps to the kitchen.
Here Geet was sobbing due to the pain and when she heard steps she immediately wiped her tears and stood up... and hide her hands inside her dupatta and kept them back.
Maan: Geet mainay tum say kaha hai kay mujhe breakfast sahi time par chaheye aur tumhara hath ka bana hoa. Why don't you understand a simple thing?
Geet trembled a bit by the loud voice
Geet (in a meek voice): Wo na... I woke a little late so that is why...wo abhi dubara bana dete ho.
Maan: Nahi abh koi zarorat nahi hai...Mai sahi tha tumhare barey mai... tum sai shadi karna hi ghalat tha...barey ghar mai aye nahi kay apne tewar aik hi mahenay mai dekhaney shuru kardia... tumhara baap bhi aisa tha aur tum bhi... abh plzz rona na shuru kardena.
Geet was getting tears in her eyes but immediately wiped them by her dupatta...
Maan saw a red mark but ignored it...and went from their...
Flashback ends
Rano: Beta to ro rahi hai?
Geet: Nahi maa... mai kab... bus app logo ki yaad arahi hai bus...
Rano: Geet jab say teri shadi hoi hai tu aik dafa bhi ghar nahi aii? Tujhe hamari yaad nahi ati?
Geet remembered her first night in this house
Flashback:
Maan came in the room and like every bride Geet also had expectations that the person will keep her happy and fulfill all her wishes and all... But Maan entered and slammed the door and by this Geet got scared but she did not show.
M: Suno Geet... don't expect anything from me ok... I don't know what I did at the mandap... I don't accept this wedding at all and I think this was a shock for u too... But since now u are my wife I accept u to do your dutiful duties... I want my breakfast, lunch, dinner made by you...I don't want the servant to think wrong about us nor your family members... we will be act as a couple outside this room.
Geet was shocked when she heard this but still held her composure and talked to him.
G: Did you bought me here for working in the mansion yah mai kaho aik maid ko lai hai. I won't work like this... what is with you? If you didn't want to marry me at the first place why did you do it? My mother was not begging you. I didn't want to marry at the first place! Why did u destroy my life!
M: Just shut up...no words from u... U were just a burden for them now, that is why I married you... And keep this in mind that you won't go from this house anymore and meet them. You have to cutoff every tie with your parents and siblings Do you get this?
Geet was again amused by hearing all this
G: Par Maan what are u saying? Mainay aap ka kya bagara hai... mai to yeh shadi karna bhi nahi chati thi... it was you who made me do this... I sacrificed my life for them
M: Bus you can't meet them and neither can they and u will not go out of this mansion without my permission... Do you get it?
G: Par
M: In this mansion I only have the right to say anything not you... So just move to the guest room right that instant and don't show me your face.
When Geet did not move, Maan just went out of the room and slammed the door yet again. Geet just sat on the floor crying her lungs out.
G(self-thought): Maan app kyun kar rahe hai... Mujhe meri ghalti to bata de...
Later Geet just went out to the other room
Flashback ends
G: Maa bas itna kaam hota hai na... kay time hi nahi milta..Maan mujhe chortay hi nahi... Boht pyar karte hai muj say
Saying this Geet couldn't control her emotion and just put her bandaged hand on her mouth inorder to stop any voice to reach the speaker
R: Haa tu to hume bhul hi gayi hai
G(sobbing): Nahi maa yeh app kaisi bate kar rahi hai...
R: haa aur nahi to kia... Aaj shadi kay aik maheenay baad to teri pehli dafa call ayi hai... Mainay itni dafa koshish ki liken to kabhi call back hi nahi karti
G:Maa bas..
R: Geet beta Maan ka boht khayal rakha kar... wo boht acha insaan hai...
G: Haa maa mai unka aur wo mera boht khayal rakte hai... App ko pata hai mai jo cheez sochti ho wo next day meray smane hoti hai...
Geet again remembered...
Flashback:
Geet after one week of her marriage was in a mood of ice-cream. She looked in the freezer but there was none so she walked into her room and looked for into her wallet but that money was not enough for even one scoop so she decided to ask Maan
She knocked his room
M: Yes
Geet came in
Maan without looking asked sternly
M: Now Geet what do u want?
Geet reluctantly asked
G: I need only 50 rupees. Can you lend it to me. I promise I will return it to you
M: Yeah Yeah... now you are asking for 50 rps... Later u will ask for 50,000 and then 50 lacks.. I know you so better not mess with me... Get out and shut the door.
G: But I only want to have an ice-cream
M: Just go... I know u r also like other girls who first ask for these small things and then later you will demand diamond sets, gold earrings. You all girls are after my money... So just will u leave? I don't want to listen to you nor do I want to see your face. Just leave from here! I am busy!
Geet left from there really hurt
Flashback ends
Geet came back from her hurtful memories when Rano called her
R: Kaha kho gayi?
G: Haa Maa idhar hi ho... bus kuch yad agaya..
R: kuch yaad agaya yah Maan ki yaad arahi hai
G: Nahi Maa aisa kuch nahi
R: Dekh beta... jaha par teri pehli shadi honay wali thi... shukr hai waha par nahi hoi... warna pata nhai wo tera kya haal karte... wo to dowry bhi itni zaida maang rahe the... phir jab loan lene ka socha to tumhare baap na Maan betay say baat ki... liken pata nahi us din kya hoa kay tumhare baap ko heart attack hoa and he died... Us din to barat bhi a chuki hoi thi aur unlogon ki shart thi kay jab tak unko 200,000 rps nahi mil jatey wo tum say shadi nahi karengay.. Us din jab tumharey baap nai un to sachai batai kay paiaso ka bandowast nahi hoa to your in lawyers refused this proposal... and took the baraat back...and then people started taunting u... phir Deko Maan betay nai tumhara sath diya aur tum sai shadi ki... warna tumjhare say kon shadi karta... Na to hamarey pass itnay pasey the dhehej kay liye... phir teray bahn bhai ki bhi fees wa pay kar raha hai aur hamara day to day expenditure
G: Haa maa mujhe sab yaad hai.. mai samajthi hoo tabhi to is shadi ko successful rakhene ki koshish kar rahi ho... I am indebted to him... Mai unko khush rakne ki pori koshish karti ho
R: Haa beta..
G: Maa Maan atey hi honge abh mai rakhti ho
R: haa beta apna kyala rakh aaur phone jald hi karna...
Geet switched off the speakers and put the phone back on the position... she tried picking up the phone and keeping back on the side table but was unable to do that since her hands were all bandaged.. Somehow she put it back and stood up from there and went back to her room... her only place where she cried day and night...
Next part: Maan's Pov
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