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Part 8
Maan on the other hand went back to the mansion, as it was quite late, no one was awake. Today he was in a very pleasant mood... a smile kept on coming on his face by remembering her cute antics, talk's, innocence, which had depth in them...He kept on remembering the cute names that she had given him...
M (self-Thought): Panda, Grandpa! Wait a second did she say Grandpa...that's what angel use to say to me. But how can she be angel? He shrugged of the thoughts as he was in no mood to pressurize his brain into so many details and wanted to live in the present.
Soon he drifted to sleep. Today he got a very peaceful sleep. He didn't have the tension of the next day.
Next day:
Maan woke up early in the morning, and went to the gym. After doing his exercise for about an hour...during this time his mind was only occupied by angel...thinking that whether they will meet again or not. After a while he went to his room... which was a very simple...yet elegant...with light purple curtain...a couch on one corner, a table where office work was loaded... and a large king size bed with off-white bed sheets on it. As soon as Maan entered... His sight saw that how unorganized his entire room was... No one could believe that a person whose everything is so organized will have such a room...in the meantime his mother entered...
MM: Maan why don't you put your things on the right place... for the past ten years whenever I enter your room it is upside down...always you forget to put the files on the table... the laptop on the couch and look it is also not closed... and oh my God these wires... can't you put your laptop on charging on the table... and look at the bed... all the sheets are on the ground... and the blanket half on the carpet and half on the bed... will you be ever able to live on your own... and now you will start to shout after entering the bathroom...
Where is my towel???? Where is my attire that I will be wearing today??? Where are my socks?? Etc. etc.
M: Mom!!! You always tell this whenever you enter my room... you know that from childhood I don't keep my things on place... and now what do you expect???
MM: But Maan this is not how you are supposed to behave... what will happen when I will not be there???
M: You know that you can never leave me???
MM: But what will happen when you will get married... than I will not come to your room to fix your things...
M: Then there will be my wife to do it... (My Angel in mere whisper...these words came to his mind unconsciously)
And rushed to the washroom...His mother was completely astonished to see this new avatar of her son... as he never mentioned the name of marriage... and whenever they tried to talk about this topic... he always use to shrug it off by saying that he didn't want to marry any one. His mother was surprised as when did her son change his mind...and also by saying that his wife will do everything when he gets married. His mother was really happy for seeing the change in him. Also she saw the change in his attitude... as he never got angry. But replied to her that too without thinking
MM (self-thought): Thank God that my son at least has accepted that one day he will give this responsibility to his wife... now I think that I should start searching for a girl... yes I will talk to sasuma about this... yes this will be good...
This was a daily routine of his mother to first go to Maan's room and organize it as she knew that her son will never change. After arranging everything she went to ask the servants to prepare Maan's favorite breakfast... Lasagna...
Maan on the other hand was feeling really light today... he wanted to tease everyone in his family... he felt that the things he was searching for so long he got it... After dressing up, he went to the dining room, where his mother and grandmother were already sitting. While his mother was talking about marriage of Maan which Maan couldn't hear.As soon he reached to the table both of them stopped talking and his mother served his breakfast.
Today Maan was not in the mood of eating continental cuisine...
M: Mom can you make me Aloo kay parathas... I really don't want to eat this tasteless food.
MM: But you love this food... and you take this everyday...
M: Mom today I am not in the mood of eating this... I have said you that I will prathas and that is final and if u don't make it I am leaving...(standing upfrom the table)
MM: Wait Maan.. I am going to the kitchen
His mother shrugged her shoulders and went into the kitchen thinking that what has happen to this guy. She had seen a drastic change in him...is this because of a girl???
Maan's mother saw the clock in the kitchen and said
MM: It will take some time Maan... Aren't you getting late for office...(shouted from the kitchen)
M: No Mom, today I will go late.
While his mother were preparing parathas... He poured some black coffee and was sipping it. His grandmother after having breakfast... bid him bye and went to her room to think about of what his mother has said to her.
Meanwhile he was sipping his coffee he drifted to past...

Flashback:
When Maan and Angel use to meet at beach... One day... Both Angel and Maan were having a fight as which cuisine is better...whether the international or the desi...
M: I am saying you angel that pasta is more delicious then your so called aloo kay prathas...
G: No Maan I am telling you that Alloo kay prathas are more delicious then you're so called Pasta... It's so tasteless... No spice in it...
M: Ok then it's a challenge... You will bring aloo kay prathas and I will bring pasta and then we will see that what tastes better...
Next day both bought... here Maan asked a servant to make the pasta... And on the other hand Geet made alo kay prathas all by herself by threatening all the servants in the house that if they tell anyone then they will see the worst. Though the servants were standing right beside to help her. She also burnt her hand a little bit...
M: Look I have bought pasta for you...
The pasta was well presented... and also was looking delicious and mouthwatering... she tasted it... she felt that this is the best. Upon tasting the pasta she thought that the prathas she mad were in no competition with the pasta so she kept the box in which she had bought prathas at her back... as if she wanted not to present it.
G: It's really delicious... Yummm... you were right this is sooo good...
M: Now I want to taste you r prathas... give them to mee...
G: No Maan I didn't bring them (hiding the box more behind her)
Maan felt that his Angel was hiding something from him so he tried to snatch the box from her.
M: Give it to me... I know that you have bought it... I can smell it..
G: No Maan you will not like that...
After a lot of snatching finally Maan got hold of the box and opened it...
M: What kind of prathas are they... All have different shapes... doesn't anyone in your house know to cook.
In the meantime Geet got tears in her eyes... Which got noticed by Maan... And he immediately came near her...
M: Why are you crying.. Ok you win...
G: (in a broken voice): I made these prathas by my hands...
M: you made it yourself...
G: Yes... (said meekly)
Maan reached her hands and immediately his eyes got the sight of her burned hand... And tears rushed to his eyes... He couldn't see her friend in tears...
He immediately blowed on her hands... as if it could soothe her pain...
M: Why didn't you tell me??
G: I thought that you will not like it, as when I saw your pasta ... it was looking really nice and my prathas are a disaster.
M: No they are not... look I am eating them...
Maan took a bite... and he was in clouds as they tasted so good... although the shape wasn't good...
G: How are they???
Geet eagerly asked
M: They are awesome Geet... Can you bring them every day...
G: Yes I will bring them...
M: And Geet you were right that desi food is really delicious... You win...
G: You are only saying that for my sake...
M: No Geet they are really awesome... and I hope that you will bring them every day...
G: Sure...
Geet was delighted to hear this from Maan... Every day they used to share their prathas with each other...
Flash Back Ends

Maan's mother called him, and this is when he returned to present... a smile was creeping on his lips every now and then...
MM: Maan where were you lost???... Look I have made them... Taste them and tell how they are???
M: Nowhere Mom... just waiting for the delicious prathas...
Mann took a bite... And
M: They are awesome Mom... but still I miss those prathas which I used to eat in my childhood...
MM: I don't know what you are talking about... You never use to eat prathas in your childhood...
Maan ate the whole pratha...
M: Mom you don't know everything about me... (Smiles)
His mother was astonished to see her son... First the marriage thing... Changed attitude and smiles, lastly prathas... Today she was really happy as she had seen this smile after a very long time.
Maan then rushes to office after bidding bye to her mother...

Thankyou everyone for liking and commenting! Hope u all like this part too... Will be waiting for your feedback eagerly.

Edited by sparklingeyes11 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hi dear! Lovely update! Maan thinks she is Angel! Past n present well incorporated! well written
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow. Awesome update
Maan remebering his childhood.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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maan ko apna angel mil gaya...khush toh hogahi na...

wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice part
Maan could recollect that she said grandpa
Flash back part was too good
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Posted: 11 years ago
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beautiful dear
just one meeting with geet and maan is totally changed person all smiling😊
waiting to know if geet remembers anything
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 9:
Geet on the other hand woke up... her head really heavy... she was totally confused as to who put the alarm as she always used to wake all by herself... then she suddenly remembered those eyes...it was a flicker of memory... Those eyes which showed concern, trust for her which she had never seen from anyone.
After that her eyes caught the sight on a note... which was kept on the side table. The note was written by Pari and there was also lemon juice kept and some medicines...

Geet when you wake up drink this lemon juice... also take a tablet... you will be alright... last night you were drunk...that is why your head is heavy... I know you don't remember anything...don't strain yourself...
After taking this immediately dress up as you have a very important day...

Geet than remembered that there was a ceremony to be held in the evening which she was attending for the past three years.
She immediately dressed up and first of all went to the office... There she did her breakfast as she did not do it at home as she was getting late...after that she returned to her work...
In between she was getting flashes of what happened yesterday... but she could not exactly figure out whose eyes those belong too. Also Pari was sleeping so she couldn't ask her.
Then she got busy in her work and informed Pinky to just remind her for the ceremony 2 hours before because she would go back to her home and get ready...
***
While Maan entered the office... he could hear the rushing sound of every one... and smirked... he could clearly read every employees mind... he knew that they use to talk behind his back... also call names but he didn't pay heed to it... he was only interested to see their work.
Whilst, if any of the employees would see him outside office he was really different... he even helped some of the employees financially and the workers were proud to have such a boss, although they could see that if his anger goes up then it's very difficult to handle...therefore they preferred to maintain the things perfectly in office. Although Maan believed that the circumstances of life has totally changed him but still there was some humanity present in him...which urges him to help people...this characteristic of helping people he adopted from his father who contributed towards charity openly... and also took care of the needs of the workers that were working under him.
Maan came out of the lift and was greeted by everyone... but today the employee were shocked to see their Boss late in time...that instead of coming at sharp at 9:am...he came at 10:00am...and further he was not in a bad mood rather he was smiling accepting their greetings wholeheartedly.
After the greetings he went to his cabin. He sat at his seat and rested his head at the back... to relax himself... Today Maan didn't knew... he was feeling that he is complete now... the person he was searching for...came and now he does not need to search anymore...
Adi knocked the door...
M: Come in...
A: Sir I wanted to highlight the meeting that you will to need to go to...
M: Go on I am listening...
A: Sir first...there is multinational company who is holding a business delegation from overall world in which the delegates from various companies will be representing their proposal on behalf of their company and whose proposal would be the best would be chosen...Sir if we get this project...we can make a land mark in the world and this will give our company new heights...
M: Ok Adi I will handle this project personally and I want you to assist me in this project...and also make a team of four other people who are best in their positions and put them in this project...we will start to work on this project from right now... And Adi you know that I don't like mistakes... Make sure that you choose the best people... I am sure we will get this project...
A: But sir the competition is really tough because many of our rival companies will also be present there...and sir if they give a lower budget for the project than us than sir...
M: Adi I don't want any arguments...when I am saying that my company will get this project than I am sure...
A: Ok sir...I will make things do... (Starts moving towards the door)
M: Adi ask the peon to bring me my coffee...
A: Sir why don't you keep a secretary for all your work...
M: You know that I handle my office work myself... I don't need a secretary...
A: Ok Sir if you need one than tell me...
M: Ok... now go...and make sure that the coffee is sugar free...
Maan starts working on the new project...that was the project of a new mall of 110 stories...which would be the biggest mall of the world...also this building was not just a mall. It consisted of a few seven star hotels...10 cinema halls in which 200 people in each cinema could be occupied at a time... also consisted of an arcades where the people play games...and many other things...
Here Maan got busy in the project...
On the other hand Pinky reminded Geet about the ceremony... She went home...and started to prepare for the ceremony...
She opted to wear a sari of net, which was black in color with silver stone work on top and a grey blouse which matched the stones to go with it... which complimented her skin tone.
She changed and was looking extremely gorgeous... she only wore long earrings...with minimal make-up and was looking extremely stunning just like an angel. And who ever saw her would just die there and then...
She also made Pari to come with her to the ceremony. As she was extremely close to her... Here Pari wore a black dress up to her knee...completely formal with a fine-looking necklace along with lovely studs to go with her dress...
They moved towards the car and moved towards their ceremony... as the venue was a little far from where they stayed ... they were followed by two cars...which was for their security... ...they started to talk...
P: Geet you look drop dead gorgeous today... you know what anyone who saw you today... will be flat...
G: I know Pari that I am hot... (Winks)
P: (observing her) Geet you have changed a lot...
G: You know me Pari...People change just like seasons...
P: Yeah! (In a confused voice)
While they were talking, they reached... Geet stood out of the car and was welcomed by flashes of the camera but immediately her security guards came and shielded her and Pari from the media and took them in...
Media Person: Today we again missed to see the woman who is taking this award for the past 2 years...and this year again she is nominated for the award that is for the "Best Architect"... internationally... But we are very sure that one day we will capture her...
Geet entered the hall and every one greeted her... as they were also other people present who were also been nominated for different awards...
Mostly people shake hands with her... all the people knew her from the very beginning...and respected her...as most of the very close ones knew the pain she had gone through to get all this...
P: Its soo good Geet... Here... look at the respect you are getting...the fame... (Dramatically)
G: Pari I have fame but I don't have those things which other people have (said with a sad smile)
Though she said it to Pari with a smile but the depth of the words was far beyond understanding of Pari...
After some time the award ceremony started and one by one... the people started to get awards...As Geet category was a little late...she went to the corner to attend a call. As soon as the call finished a fine looking person clad in black suit came forward towards her...
R: Hi my name is Rahul...
G: Hello (a little reluctantly)
R: I know you don't know me... but I know you...You are the owner of the Handa industries...the most famous of all time... and in short the best architect for which you will be getting award...I am a big fan of yours... (said the last sentence in a buttering way)
G: I am sorry but I didn't recognize you...
R: Ohhh!!! I am sorry I forgot to introduce myself. I am the only son of Mr.Chopra...the owner of the Chopra industries...
G: Ohh Ok... Chopra uncle... I know him...Good to see you!!!
R: Well... I just came to say that you looking sizzling hot in this sari. And I have seen many seeing you...for the past hour...
G: Thank you!!! (A little reluctantly)
Geet did not like the choice of the words Rahul was using with her and the way he was talking to her she was getting uncomfortable... also she was getting bad vibes from this person.
Rahul (self- thought): So Miss Geet Handa we meet again.
Rahul put forward his hand to shake it with her hand..
R: Geet Can we be friends???
G: How can we be friends...? Its only 5 minutes that I have talked to you... and you want to start friendship...You know what I take time to decide about my friends.( said the last sentence in a proud way)
R: I am impressed...
G: Sorry but I can't accept your friendship... And call me Miss Handa... which looks a bit formal...(with her head tilt high)...
This when Pari came and interrupted their conversation...
P: Geet its time for you go on the stage...
G: I am coming...
G: Ok Mr. Rahul...See you then... Bye...
And she moved towards the stage...
R: (self- thought) I see Miss Geet Handa things really haven't changed. And it seems that you have taken after your father. It's been almost 20 years since that night. You might have escaped that time but this time no one can save you!
While over there Geet accepted the award... And thanked the people for the ceremony... she also introduced Pari as her friend...and then everyone congratulated her...
On the other hand Rahul was extremely getting annoyed by seeing her smiling... he wanted to suffer... just the way he had...for years...This day he promised that Geet will repent for every mistake that her father did!
Rahul (murmured to him-self): Geet I will destroy you now... just wait and watch... I promise to take my revenge...
He moved out of the venue...
Here Geet was extremely joyed and her happiness knew no bounds... although she felt the missing presence of her parents... but she believed that this is how life is... and little by little she was making herself strong...to absorb all the pain...
Later many camera person tried to take her pictures with the award but couldn't capture her full face... in most of the pictures her side pose was visible or not at all...
Later Pari and Geet moved towards the exit...went back to their home...In between their route...Pari started the conversation.
P: Geet Congratulations once again... I knew you would get it...(hugged her)
G: Thank you Pari...
P: By the way this calls for a treat...
G: Ask me I will give it to you...
P: I will ask you when I will need something... so this treat is pending...
G: Ok as you wish...
P: By the way Geet I did not like the person who was standing next to you when you went to attend the call
G: Who?? Rahul...
P: Yeah!!! I think...
G: I know I was also getting bad vibes from him...
P: Stay away from him... I did not like the way he was staring at you.
G: Pari I know... there are so weird persons that an individual meets in life...
P: I know... but I was just telling you to protect yourself from him...
G: Ok my elder sister... I will keep this in my mind... (Said chirpily)
P: No Geet's it's just that I am over protective about you...
G: I know that is why I gave you the relation of a sister... and this is not my Pari...where is that Pari who wanted to see me all happy..
Geet looked towards her... and this when Pari stopped her...and immediately hugged her... then Pinky also was included in that
Soon they reached to their home...and as they were really tired they straight away ate their dinner...did some conversation and then moved to their respective rooms... and immediately drifted to sleep. Pinky also stayed there for the night since it was too late fir her to go back.
***
On the other hand Maan worked the whole day on the new project and was very busy the whole day... that he didn't get time to do anything... He finished his work late at night and moved towards his home. There he was greeted by his mother and grandmother...they had their dinner together...and family time and then all moved to their respective rooms and immediately drifted to sleep.

Precap: Next day
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Posted: 11 years ago
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beautiful update...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da pm n fab update! sorry 4 late likes n comments. Seems like Geet has changed! She remembers a pair of eyes only. Geet attends the function and wins! Geet looking lovely! Pari impressed! Hate Rahul! Wt is he up to? Wt happened 20 years ago? Bt Geet tells him off n he is angry! Maan workinh hard 4 da new project. well written! update soon
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Nice part
Rahul wants revenge...he want to destroy geet
Maan didn't see the blue prints geet made
Eagerly waiting for maaneet meeting again

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