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Posted: 11 years ago
#51
sry 4 not commenting from sooo long
got ur pms everytime but not able 2 comment
i hate this rahul 😡😡 kill him soon yaar
when will maan see the blue print
awesome written
i am really sry 4 commenting late
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
awesome dear
geet dont remember anything that happened last night
so this rahul is related with geet's past. he want to destroy her

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Zeba702

sry 4 not commenting from sooo long
got ur pms everytime but not able 2 comment
i hate this rahul 😡😡 kill him soon yaar
when will maan see the blue print
awesome written
i am really sry 4 commenting late


Its ok dear!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
awesome ff..
read it in one go..
loved the starting
waiting to see how the story mould itself
great work
add me in ur pm list
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Posted: 11 years ago
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and ur title is nice... loved it...!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 10
Here Geet dressed up and went to her office...as usual her daily routine... There first she saw the newspaper and found her picture on it...
G: Thank God... the person has only captured my side pose... and no one can recognize me... it's very difficult to live in media...
This is when she felt that someone was remembering her...she paused for a moment...and it felt that someone is congratulating her wholeheartedly for her achievement...Later she shrugged off the thoughts and made herself focus on work
Then Geet called Pinky in her cabin...where Pinky briefed about the meeting where all the business delegates where invited with their proposals...
G: Ok gather few people who are best and start doing the project...this project is very important for this company and for me...to gain a secure position in the business world...therefore I want no mistakes...
P: Ok...ma'am I will make sure...that there are no mistakes...
G: Ok then...leave...and bring me my tea.
P: Ok ma'am anything else...
G: No thanks...
As Pinky was moving towards the door...she turned again...
P: By the way Ma'am, you were looking very nice yesterday... Did u see your picture in the newspaper??
G: Yeah I saw that! Thank you Pinky for your compliment...
P: Ma'am why don't you want to come in front of the media... why don't you want to disclose your identity...Why are you living an ordinary life...although you have all the fame...and people die for fame...for being treated as a celebrity...
G: I am not interested in this entire Pinky...Pinky you are my childhood friend and you know me... I am never a proud person. I believe in living in an ordinary life...as this point in time a girl has a dream to marry her prince charming...to move from her parents' home to her husband's home and take the responsibilities of the house and also to support her husband...a girl has many fantasies but as you see life has put me on this point where I was given the responsibility when it was my age to dream about this...that I can't think about it... and my only focus is to fulfill my parent's wishes and this is my mission... I am not a materialistic person...and never can be...fame is something that comes and goes... I believe in taking those things that remain forever with you...
P: Geet I know you have through a lot...but you should look forward to your achievements... rather than past... Ok I will not put you into an emotional mode as I know that you are very emotional person.
G: Yeah!!! Ok...who can know me better... It's only you or Pari who so near and dear to me...
P: where is Pari these days??? Though I saw her yesterday only for a brief moment.
G: She is at my house living with me..
P: And you didn't tell me.. I wanted to meet her... after hearing a lot from you...I want to meet her...please ...Please!!!
G: Ok come to my house... and we will enjoy today...and I am sure that she will also like you...as she has a very similar personality as you...
P: Thank you...Thank you!!! (Moves towards her and hugs her)
G: Ok then we will have a girl's party at my house...But Pinky don't you think that work is the first priority...
P: Yeah sure Ma'am... Work is the foremost priority...
G: Ok then See you later...
P: And yes Ma'am I forgot to tell you that the deadline for the project is exactly after a month and the meeting is going to be held in London...
G: Thanks for telling...
P: By the way...this is going to be tough as all of our rivals will also be there.
G: Pinky you know that I like challenges... Ok then...
Pinky moves out...and starts to do her work...she was really excited for the meeting in the evening today...
Here Geet also got busy in her work...
***
On the other hand Maan woke up. As usual...according to his routine...he dressed up and moved to the Office...
As soon as he reached, he seated himself on a his seat and this when his sight got hold of the picture in the headlines...then he read the headlines which read..."the girl who is achieving the award for the past 2 years did it again for the best architect award"...and then his eyes caught the glimpse of the girl...though it was a side pose with her hair all on one side and the picture was taken from distance...but somewhere his mind told him that she is the same person he saw at the beach...and he was sure as he had seen her from very near...from the side pose it felt that she was smiling as he could see her dimples on her cheek...
Absentmindedly he congratulated her in mere whisper. That was only audible to his ears...
Then he shrugs off the thought and was disturbed by a knock...
He welcomed the clients and started the meeting...today he had back to back meeting therefore he didn't get time to read the entire report...
For both of them the entire day was extremely tiresome...
Later Geet went to her house where Pinky also came along and they enjoyed the entire night...sharing their experiences...Later Geet as she was tired went to her room and asked Pinky to stay here as it is not safe to go at this time as it was almost around 1:00am.
Later Pinky and Pari started to talk...and became pretty good friends in a few hours...
Pa: You know what I want Geet to get all the happiness in the world...I some time feel that she is extremely alone. Although she has good friends with her but still...
Pi: I totally agree with you... I hope she gets all the happiness... we can always pray for her well-being...You know what she has a split personality...in office she is a ruthless human being...but as a person in reality she is extremely sweet... No one can recognize her when he has seen her in the office...after so many years I have seen that sweet innocent fun-loving Geet returning.
Pa: She is really sweet...I hope she gets a good life partner...as now she has lost her parents and her future entirely depends on her future life...
Pi: Whenever she gets a partner first we will test him then he will reach his princess...
Pa: Right!!!
Pi: You know what she has always treated me as her small sister... I want to return back all the favors she has done on me... but I don't know how...but surely I will if I get an opportunity...
Pa: I know...she always comes up to me whenever she has difficulty in making some decisions...I always help her... I am always protective about her... God protect her from all the evils... she is angel who doesn't know the reality of the world to the extent that it is...
Both Pinky and Pari prayed for her well-being together... and it was as if God had accepted there prays their and then...
Later:
Pi: I have to sleep or else my boss would eat me raw if I get late...
Pa: Yeah I know her!!! Ok let's sleep...
Pi: Yeah...
Here Geet, Pinky and Pari all went to sleep...thinking about the future...
****
On the hand Maan also retired to his home and slept...He almost forgot about the newspaper...to read the entire report...though at that time he wanted to...
***
The rest of the days went in peace as both Maan and Geet were working really hard for their project and almost forgot about their dream projects...and here Maan also forgot about the beach meeting etc...
Finally the day arrived for the dead line and both reached to their destination London along with their teams...
Maan's team consisted of... Adi (his right hand), Piya (architect), Meera (Maan's friend cum the head of marketing department)
Geet's team consisted of...Pinky (her assistant), Yash (Geet's friends though mot the closets), Abhay (finance director)...and Pari also came along as she had to go London within a few weeks but as Geet was going there for 4 days therefore...she also came along...
They arrived one day before the meeting so that they adjusted well with the surroundings and the next day was the Mega-meeting...


Thankyou for commenting and hitting the like button!
Sorry for updating late... Forgive me... and ignore any mistakes...
Also tell me if u get bored...
Also updated my Os.. do check if u have not read it
Painful love:

Do comment and hit the like button for this part tooo... will be waiting eagerly!
Edited by sparklingeyes11 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
Nice part
Now maaneet will meet at the meeting 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
wow nyc update...
will love to see their meeting... waiting for next
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
nice update...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#60
beautiful dear
maan remembering geet and geet is feeling it
so maaneet r working on same project😊

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