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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: khwaishfan

hi congrats on the FF! All da best! Superb start! Well written! Js read Part 1 n 2 nw! Maan n Geet were happy bt their lives were changed by the tragic demise of her parents n his dad! Geet nw emotionless n a workholic! MAan lookin 4 his angel- Geet Handa! He promised his dad bt unabel to find her! Awesum precap! update soon

Thanks dear for commenting always. thanks for the encouragement! :) U anaylse the update really well.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thankyou so much dear! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: gurti30

awesome story dear

loved the way u described maan and geet's character
both has lost someone close to them and living a life just to fulfill the last wishes of their loved ones

Thankyou dear! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I AM CONFUSED
PART 1 YOU WROTE
MAAN'S FATHER BEFORE DYING SAID THAT HE HAD A CLOSE FRIEND WHO HELPED HIM DURING THEIR TOUGH TIMES WHEN MAAN WAS AROUND 10
PART 3 - HERE YOU HAVE SAID THAT THEY ONLY MET WHEN MAAN WAS 7 AND AANGEL 5 AND KNEW EACH OTHER FOR ONLY 4-5 MONTHS BEFORE HER PARENTS DISAPPEARED AS THEY HAD FINANCIAL TROUBLE
SO HOW COULD THEY BE CLOSE FRIENDS
AND BOTH WERE IN FINANCIAL TROUBLE
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: punam2712

I AM CONFUSED

PART 1 YOU WROTE
MAAN'S FATHER BEFORE DYING SAID THAT HE HAD A CLOSE FRIEND WHO HELPED HIM DURING THEIR TOUGH TIMES WHEN MAAN WAS AROUND 10
PART 3 - HERE YOU HAVE SAID THAT THEY ONLY MET WHEN MAAN WAS 7 AND AANGEL 5 AND KNEW EACH OTHER FOR ONLY 4-5 MONTHS BEFORE HER PARENTS DISAPPEARED AS THEY HAD FINANCIAL TROUBLE
SO HOW COULD THEY BE CLOSE FRIENDS
AND BOTH WERE IN FINANCIAL TROUBLE

Thank you for pointing that out! that's my fault...Maan was 7 not 10 (i will edit it later in the post) when Geet's father helped Maan's father and this happened in those 4-5 months. Maan and Geet's family knew eachother for only 4-5 months... during this time father of both became really close friends that both started sharing everything. In between in Geet's family there was a conflict which lead to rivalry and then Geet's family vanished in thin air.. They had to start again from zero. that is where Maan's father lost contact and all...
I hope that now u understand the story now.. if u have any more queries that do tell me.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -indu-

Awesome...Both are lost in memories and searching for the one who can bring them back...

do continue soon

Thanks dear! Will update the next part soon :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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read the 3 updates
nice updates
loved it
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Will be updating soon! anyone waiting???
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Ignore any mistakes!

Part 4:

As soon as Maan's foots touched a sea shell he came back to the present. This is when he saw a girl clad in white with minimal make-up sitting near a tree and looking purely an Angel. Oh wait did he say Angel... this name is only for his Angel who became his best friend in a very short span of time.
When Geet reached the beach she searched for a quiet place which was a nearby tree. There she took out a folder which was in black in color with the heading written in a beautiful writing "My Diary". She took out her diary and started to write. She wrote in this diary whenever she felt devastated and this folder kept all the pain that she tolerated these years, how much struggle she did to secure her future. This diary consisted of all her works from when she was 5 years old. After writing in it she kept her diary on the sand and just sat there inhaling the cold breeze to calm her down.
All the while Maan was looking her but her face was not visible enough as he was standing at a long distance and also her hairs were covering her face. Just then he saw that she got frightened of just a phone call.
P...???
G... I am just coming
P...????
G: Oh my god!!!! You are here and you never told me. I am reaching home in just 10min.
P...????
G: Bye...!!!!
Geet stood up in a hurry and left her diary over there on the floor itself. From her face it looked that she was quite excited. She just took her bag and rushed from there.
***
Maan, who was a silent spectator to all the conversation between Geet and the other person, became suspicious and when he saw her rushing towards her car and forgetting her diary he tried to reach her in time to give her diary but was unsuccessful as Geet already drove away from the beach. He felt like a part of his heart was moving away but couldn't do much. And this is when he saw that the folder was covered with black soft material with white lilies on top of it and with a silver edging and the writing read "My diary". He gave a glance to the diary and then to car the car which was at quite distance now. Because he believes that diary is someone very personal possession he will not open it and will return to its owner as soon as possible. He drove back to his mansion and kept the diary safely in his cupboard. After that he drifted to sleep immediately thinking about tomorrow meetings and hectic schedule.
***
On the other hand Geet rushed towards her house and raps that person in a bear hug ...
G: OH MY GOG!!!!OH MY GOD...Pari, it's you...I cannot believe this...you are here...gosh you finally remembered me after all these years. I missed u so much... Now I am not letting you go this easily and will take revenge of all the time when I wanted you here and you were not here. Tell me how is life going???? And did you got along with any person as yet or not???
P: Stop showering questions on me. I will give you the answers to all your questions but now I am really hungry. Please give me something to eat.
G: Ok let's cook something for you as my maid have left.
P: No don't cook we will just order pizza and in the mean time we will talk.
G: Yeah!!!! Just like old time... Gosh those unforgettable dayss!!!
Both the girls went to the guest room where Pari will be staying and hopped on the couch to revive their old days.
They talked, giggled and ate, talked about random stuff, and remembered the good times that they spent together. Pari was Geet's closest friend when she stayed in London during her studies. They both were roommates and in a short span of time they developed deep friendship for each other. Pari was always there during the ups and downs in her life and gave her shoulder to cry on whenever she missed her parents in London. Pari would console her and most of the times acted like an elder sister. That is why Geet was too much attached to her and shared her feelings only with Pari and Pinky. Although Pinky knew her from childhood but still there was a formal relationship between her and Geet but this was not the case with Pari.
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Next day: When the maid entered the house she was curious as Geet was always awake till this time and how come she is not to be seen anywhere. She went upstairs to Geet's room and saw that she was not there. Then one by one she started looking all the rooms and when she reached the guest room and entered it. The room was a mess. The pizza box was opened on the side table, the cushions were on the floor, the pillows were on the foot side, the bed sheets were messed and the blanket was on the floor. Later her eyes caught the sight which she could not believe. She was astonished to see Geet and one other girl sleeping on the couch while sitting.
The maid was working with the Handa's from when Geet was born and all the way now. She had seen her change her due to the circumstances. And nowhere could she believe her eyes what she was seeing. She felt that the old Geet is back as when she was a teenager, her room was always like this and she used to organize everything, but after the death of her parents she completely changed and did all the things by herself. No one could recognize Geet now from her changed antics.
After that the maid woke Geet up to be ready for the office and she will prepare the breakfast. Geet got ready did her breakfast and asked the maid to take care of Pari and introduced to her as her friend from London. And she also asked her to don't disturb her as she wakes up late.
On the other hand Maan woke up again, exercised, dressed-up, did breakfast and left for the office. This was his daily routine.
On the other hand Geet also forgot everything as Pari use to keep Geet busy enough that she never went to the beach after that day.
As the days were passing Pari noticed the difference in Geet's behavior as lately she started to remain in a very gloomy mood. One day Pari insisted her to go to a disco where they can enjoy themselves. Pari was a party freak when it comes to discos while Geet was different, she would rather enjoy a book and a cup of hot chocolate on a cozy couch on a Friday night. She was not a loud person unlike Pari who insisted on going to parties. While she was in London she used to stay back while she was out partying or on a date.
Pari convinced Geet that they were going to the disco and that was final. Pari and Geet went to get ready.
Pari came out in a Purple short dress. While adding the final touches to her dress .Geet came out in baby pink top and skinny jeans. The color of her dress was complementing her rosy cheeks, in other words she was looking like a delicate rose.
As soon as Pari saw Geet...
P: OH MY GOD!!! What are you wearing Geet ...we don't wear these types of dresses in a disco. Wear something like a short dress or a short skirt.
G: Pari you know that I don't wear such dresses...and I feel uncomfortable.
P: But Geet you won't get a date if you're in this. Come on Geet don't act those all serious types. It's like you have forgotten the meaning of fun. Geet sometimes in life we need to let go all the problems in our life and just live for yourself and just ...party and forget the world...
Pari went on for about five more minutes
P: Geet are you convinced or do I need to talk more?
G: Okay!!! I will go and change I don't need another 15 minutes of your so called lecture. But I don't have a dress.
P: I'll give you one...
Pari said that with a smirk and went in her room to get it. Geet felt a little scared of Pari's plan. Pari came back with a whine red short dress with stone work on the border below and its sleeves had straps. The dress could come up to Geet's knees. This was just unacceptable for Geet who never wore such dresses that would expose too much of the body.
G: No ways Pari this is just too much reveling. I can't wear this. No
P: Oh please please!!! Geet. You will look stunning in this dress.
G: No...
Geet told her straightforwardly.
P: Fine don't! I am going back to London if you don't wear the dress.
G: Are you black mailing me???
P: Think of it whatever you want.
G: Fine I will wear it don't get upset.
Geet wore the dress and she looked out of the world. Geet tied her hair in a beautiful Swiss bun, held a clutch in one hand to keep her necessary stuff and wore high heels. Though she was not comfortable with the entire attire and felt a bit of uncomfortable because it had been years that she had worn stuff like this. She had stopped even beautifying herself. But alas this was only for Pari, her dear friend.
P: Now you look like my friend Geet...
G: Ok as of now I am ready...Can we leave now as I have to come back early as I have a very important meeting in the morning.
P: You and your MEETINGS! Geet have a life. And forget about your meeting till I am here.
G: Ok now can we leave!
P: We are all set to go.

Anyone who want further updates for this ff buddy me!
Edited by sparklingeyes11 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da pm n terrfic update! Maan lookin at Geet! She gets call frm Pari! Geet n Pari meet after so long! Emotional reunion! Maid happy seeing the old Geet! Pari convinces Geet to go the disco n nakes her change her dress! well written, update soon

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