Maneet Os/SS: Reason for success (completed)

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Maneet Os/SS: Reason for success

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Several cars enter the gates with two jeeps in the front, a black BMW in between which had black windows and two cars at the back. The car stops at the entrance of the hall. Soon the dead silence was replaced by huge gasps...The guards clad in black uniforms stand by the car and the rest form a chain blocking the media from nearing the person who is about to come out of the car. There are camera flashes everywhere...the media is waiting for the star to come out and show his face to the entire world...
News Reporter: Today we are here to give you the news for the most well renowned business awards...the 'Youth Entrepreneurs awards''. Here we are waiting for the person who has created havoc in the business world...Yes we are talking about the one and only the great Maan Singh Khurana'...So viewers stay glued the TV screens as we are giving the live news of the current events.
Soon the car door opens and there person's right leg moved out...very shiny shoes came into the view. Next his sparkling hazel eyes, sharp nose and perfect M-shaped lips. And soon he came out...wearing a black tuxedo. There were hooting everywhere and why not, that was because it was the most eligible bachelor of the city...quite handsome and stunning personality.
He was moving away from the car towards the hall...in between the media was asking him questions...He was walking and the people were rushing to take hold of him but no whale as his steps were large enough...
Many people were dying to get his autograph...to get pictures with him...but he ignored everyone.
NP: Sir can you tell us how are you feeling today?
M: As you can see I am happy today...after all this is my third time that I have been nominated for this award and two times I have also won it.
NP: Sir who do you give this credit for your success?
M: To be honest...There was one person who is behind my success...
NP: Sir what's that person's name???
Maan was about to enter the hall and when he heard a voice from behind and the moment he just stopped.
Person: Sir Can you give me your autograph please. You see I have been waiting for the past few years to get your autograph...but couldn't meet you...
Maan didn't want to turn...he just closed his eyes and he could only see the owner of this sweet voice...her grey eyes, pink cheeks, her hair tresses falling on her cheeks, pink lips...

I am a big fan of Maneet and have read so many works on them. Writers I am big fan of all ur works. Do give it a try and like the post if anyone wants the next part.😊

Index:
Part 1: Scroll up
Part 2: Page 2
Part 3: Page 4
Part 4: Page 5
Part 5: Page 5
Part 6: Page 6
Part 7: Page 6
Part 8: Page 7
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Part 2

Maan soon turned...his heartbeat just stopped as he saw her.

There everyone was surprised to see this scene as the person who was walking till now with large steps just stopped by the call of a mere ordinary girl and that too she was only asking for an autograph...while there were many others too asking for the same...
Maan saw a girl clad in a simple white shalwar kameez with braid on one side who just looked the same before 5 years... was smiling looking at him...and her eyes were shining out of happiness...tears brimming from her beautiful eyes...As soon they looked into each other's eyes the whole journey came rushing in their minds
Flash Back:
Today is the first day of University of London. And here all students are excited nervous and above all scared because of the ragging. The rumours say that here there is a guy named Maan and his gang gives the most daring dares.
Well all are trying to avoid this but no one can escape the great Maan Singh Khuranan, the prince of University of London. Maan is in the second year of university, and is the most handsome guy of this university. He is charming, has a golden heart. But this side is only seen by his close friends that are Adi, Yash, Abhay, Meera and Pia. And also his beloved grandmother. Maan is only close to his grandmother, he shares everything with her.
Maan is from a very rich family in India. His parents are involved in Construction business. He was born with a golden spoon. And being the only son he was well pampered. Since childhood he had servants running around him. So since childhood he is fond of ordering people. Bossing around, is something that comes naturally to him.
Maan's parents wanted their one and only son to get the best education so one day they can hand over the Khurana Empire to him. But his parents were utterly disappointed when they saw that Maan had no interest in business or studies. Maan turned out to be irresponsible, carefree and rebellious teenager. Who cares about nothing besides having fun. His carefree nature and irresponsible behaviour was not acceptable for his father, who decided that now for his university he will send him to London. Maan was against this because he did not want to stay alone. His mother was also a little apprehensive about this decision. So his mother sends Maan's grandma with him.
Maan on his first day of University becomes very popular, thanks to his very good looks. At first people think that he has a very arrogant nature. On day one he made many friends but his best buddies were his group.
Coming back to the University, now all the fresher's are hell scared. They are all trying to run away or avoid this but still they run into one or another senior.
This is a sweet treat for all the seniors. And they are taking full advantage of it. Here Maan and his group are enjoying this. They are making people do crazy stuff. Maan is in a great mood. He's teasing everyone and that was when he saw a girl entering through the university gate. She was wearing a pair of jeans with a floral top that came till her thighs and has a white scarf around her neck. She was going ahead and then she stopped and turned around. A girl who had a pack of chips in her hand was running for her. Both of them were walking together and then Maan saw that she was carrying a file in her hand. Maan looked closely and saw that she was carrying a file and the front side was on the back. Her name was in carved at the front. It said in big bold letters GEET HANDA.
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Geet Handa. She is a middle class family girl who had received a prestigious scholarship from University of London. She is a very hard working and sweet girl. She is the only daughter of her parents. When she was 8 her mother died, leaving her alone with only her father. Since then her father has taken care of her. But still his father could not always give time to his daughter because of his job. Geet at a very young age developed an understanding of a mature girl. She had great wisdom but still looked at the world with the eyes of a five year old.
Today is her first day of at the university. She has come to London with her childhood friend Pinky. She walked into the gates of the University and thought " well I'll be here for the next three years"
Geet was walking in and that was when someone called her...
Pinky: Ohh Geet wait!. You left me behind. Where are you lost?
Geet: Nothing Pinky. I was just thinking that now for 3 years we'll be here.
P: Yeah I know. So exciting, I mean we are in London. These 3 years are going to be the best part of our lives.
G: Well we should get going. I want to look around before the classes start.
P: Umm Geet I think that we should stay a little somewhere safe. You know because ragging is taking place and I'm a little scared.
G: Come on Pinky. You know that ragging is going to happen and what is so big in it. They are not going to ask for your life.
Both were walking while talking and that is when Geet herd someone calling her name.
GEET HANDA!!!!!
Now Geet was confused, because no one knows her here.
G: Who is calling me???
Geet turns around and saw a guy calling her. He was with a group. Geet figured that this was probably her ragging time. Geet thought Let's get this over with'. But still what confused was that how did he know her name????
Geet walked forward with a calm face.
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Maan called out her name and that girl turned around. He saw her looking a little confused. And then walked forward with straight face . Maan thought that she probably figured out that it's her ragging.
Well she came ahead and said...
G: Yes?????
M: Give me that file. (He pointed toward the black file that had her personal information)
G: What????
Geet asked with a confused look.
M: I said give me that file.
G: Okay..
Geet handed him another file.
M: No I want that file.
But Geet did not wanted to give him this because it had all of her personal information. She was not comfortable in giving a stranger that file which had all her information.
G: I can't give you that file...
M: I want that file.
Now Geet was frustrated at this.
G: Why do you want that file for???
M: Oh just give it will u!
When Geet was reluctant Maan snatched it. Geet mouth turned in perfect O-shape but she remained quite because she didn't want to create a scene for such a small thing and wanted to get over it. Maan began to read the file with concentration. Later there was an amused expression on his face. His group was behind him.

So guess what dare he is going to give Geet! 😉
Edited by sparklingeyes11 - 11 years ago
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Nice start ,good narration of story they met before in London.why he needs tht file😕.anyway wat is he going to give as task,looking forward to it.

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