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Part 7
Then her already big eyes became bigger in realization and then she yelled...
G: ARE YOU TRYING TO KIDNAP ME??
Maan swore that his eardrums would burst any minute.
M: (told her honestly) Till now have I done anything wrong that you don't believe me. If I was a wrong guy than I would have done something to you before rather than waiting.
G: I don't believe you (and raise her head high and turn away)
Maan became frustrated
M: (self-thought) Here I am trying to help this girl and look at the way she is throwing tantrums on me. Maan... wait a second... and thought that she is already drunk and will believe any stupid nonsense. After giving a thought of taking her own stupidity ahead he formulated a plan and then he smirked and decided to put the plan in action.
Maan turns towards Geet.
M: (Saying as is telling a kid) Look Angel I am not kidnapping you in that sense. I was telling you for a KID---NAP in my office. Look since you are behaving like a kid and I am sure you are sleepy that is why we are going to my office for a KID---NAP.
Maan looked at her averting his eyes and crossed his fingers, hoping that she will fall in the trap. When he finally looked at her he saw her in a deep thought.
Here Geet gave a deep thought and then broke into a smile.
G: Haww! Panda I never thought of it in that way. Let's go!
She started walking ahead. Maan starred at her back unbelievingly.
M (Self-thought): She actually believed me! This was the most stupid explanation Maan Sigh Khuranna ever gave.
He started moving towards his car with Geet still walking ahead and murmuring the song that she heard in the club in various accents and Maan could only pick out a few words. As he reached to the car, his stylish sleek black BMW.
G: Ooo! Shiny Car. Sports Car My Favorite!
Maan literally laughed at her accent.
M (Self-Thought): What is she?
He shook his head. He tucked her in the car, put the seat belt on safely, and moved to the driving seat.
He started to drive and meanwhile he was stealing glances of her. Geet was lost in her own world.
Meanwhile as she was lost in her own world... She asked Maan
G: Are you my prince... Has my father sent you...?
M: ...ummm (totally confused).
G: You know what my father promised me to marry to a person who will keep me like a princess...
G: Prince will you take me home every day when you marry me.
Maan was astonished to hear these words from angel's mouth... But as soon he saw he saw in her eyes... he could only see pure innocence... he didn't know to reply to her pleading but he didn't want to respond negatively which will bring tears in her eyes which he didn't want to see.
M: Yes... I will do whatever you want.
As soon as he said this sentence he could see a smile which surely reached her eyes... there was a natural glint in her eyes...
They reached his office. Maan straightaway went to his cabin along with angel, where Adi was also present. He made her sit on the couch.
M: You sit here quietly and have your Kid---Nap (said sarcastically) while I finish off my work quickly. Is that ok???
After a second
G: But I don't want to have my KID---NAP right now.
M: (in an ignorant way while he was checking a few files on his desk) Ok Geet than just stay quiet and don't disturb me.
Geet put finger on her lips just like a child listening to someone in authority and turned her face away... Ohh my god! She looked so adorable. Maan could not stop admiring her.
He took the file to give finishing touches to it while Adi was completely confused to see Maan with a girl. He had never seen Maan with a girl over the time he was working with him. He could not see her faces clearly as her hair were coming on her face...and he was a little distant.
A: Who is this girl sir???
M: Ohh Adi (totally caught off-guard) It's a long story... will tell u later... ok tell me is anything else left???
A: No sir
M: Ok then you can leave... I will finish it off... you go as it is already very late.
A: Ok sir...take care...bye
Adi left and Maan got busy in his work.
Geet was just observing her surroundings... she was feeling very relaxed today... there were many incomplete blueprints kept on the table adjacent to the couch... she glanced on that and saw that it was incomplete. She slightly peeked towards Maan and saw that he was busy... she again glanced towards the blueprints and decided to complete them... She added the idea of a garden with swings in it... and an indoor play area which consisted of a swimming pool, sand area where the children can play with sand. She also added a pottery section as she thought that the children like playing with mud. She also edited a few design by adding different cartoon character motives in it ... She added more creative ideas to it and also wrote notes on the paper that was kept for different ideas for the walls, play area...etc... After adding these things she smiled at her creation and got so worn out that she drifted off to sleep.
After about an hour Maan finished his work and glanced at Geet. He just got lost in her...she was just looking like a baby while sleeping. He was distracted by a phone call... He glanced at his cell phone but it was not his call ringing but it was his Angels cell phone ringing. Here Geet stirred in her sleep. Maan didn't want to wake her as she looked so serene in deep sleep. So he got up and attended her phone call by getting her cell phone from her clutch.
He saw the caller id... It said Pari... so he picked it up...
P: Hello!!! Where are you...???? I am trying to reach you for the past few hours. Why did you leave the club so suddenly??? I am so stupid I should have not left you alone...knowing you...Will you speak? Are you okay?
After muttering so much questions she took a sigh of relief... hoping that Geet would now start answering her questions.
M: (after hearing the muttering and actually thinking that how much this girl talks) actually the girl is with me... she was at the beach and not feeling well so she is with me right now.
Pari was caught in an awkward situation thinking that how come a boy is with Geet. As far as she knew Geet was never this kind of girl. And then being an over-protective friend started investigating regarding him.
P: (hyper) Hey! Who are you? How the hell are you with my friend? Don't do anything to her or else I will take you to the court.
Maan's ego was a little hurt therefore he retorted back.
M: Hey! Miss Who-ever-you-are? Where you were when you're so called friend needed you the most. It was me who took care of her for these few hours. And dare you say anything against me. You don't know who I am and I can take you to court too by filling fake cases. So be Careful Miss who-ever-you-are.
Pari thought that this is not the time to argue. She thought that he seems to be a noble guy. Therefore it will be better not to anger him more.
P: I am sorry...its' just that I became a little panicky... Actually I am also at the beach... can you bring her here. It's quite late and we have to go home.
M: Its ok I understand...I am coming.
P: Ok I will be waiting for you.
Here both ended the call. After the call he remembered that Angel got hurt on her elbow... so he rushed to take first aid from the drawer to bandage her wound. He very carefully applied the antiseptic and bandaged her arm. After that he saw her that she is still in deep sleep so without any thinking he picked her up in his arms... Where she snuggled closer to him and smiled... a smile also crept on his face... he thought how a person can be so cute looking even in sleep and who could smile...
He carefully tucked her in the car and moved to the destination. There he reached where Pari was waiting for them.
P: Thank you!!! So much for taking care of her.
M: No it's my pleasure.
P: May I know what your name is???
M: You can call me Maan.
P: Thank you once again.
He transferred Angel from his car to the other. He didn't want her to leave her. His heart was saying all that but his heart also believed that if destiny will make us meet again then it definitely has decided some thing for us in future... and then he will move forward but not now.
Here Pari drives the car to the mansion without disturbing her sleep and bought her in her room. Put the quilt over her and left.
She put on the alarm for her as she knew that tomorrow is a very important day for her.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
hi thanks 4 da pm n terrific update! Maan takes her with him! Adi asks abt her! Pari calls n Maan answers! Pari accuses him bt Maan blames her! Mana takes Geet to Pari. well written! update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
Cute geet!!
Hopefully this part will end there search 4 each other!!!😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
Awesome update
So sweet maan
Loved how maan made geet agreed
Update next soon
Thx
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
BEAUTIFUL DEAR
MAAN'S REASONING FOR KID-NAP WAS HILLARIOUS😆


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Posted: 11 years ago
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i came across this FF and i read all parts in one go...
i am really loving it...
geet is feeling lonely because her patents died in accident from then she became ruthless person for outer world but inside she is craving for some one who take care of her...
on the other hand maan father died with heart strok when maan needed his father most he also became shrued ruthless businessman in the process of developing his empire
maan searching his angle without knowing that she is there infront of him...
geet forgot her diary at beach and maan kept it securely with him
geet accidently drank and went to beach and there met with maan maan saw her and observing her cute antics one time she is smiling and next moment she is crying remembering her parents
maan has taken her with him to his office...he involved in completing his work whereas geet finished some unfinished blue prints...
waiting for the next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
nice s tory
amazing prt
cont soon
thnx fr pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
Read all the parts
Loving the story 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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jab maan apna blueprint dekhega tab kya hoga...

wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 4 - 6
nice updates
loved it

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