Sunrise- The Beginning of Hope-ON HOLD Note on pg40 - Page 11

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Posted: 11 years ago
beautiful update
geet getting jealous 😊
maaneet went for sightseeing in london and having good time together
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 16
G: Ok then...let's go...
Both Maan and Geet went towards the car and this time Maan urged to drive the car...Very soon they reached the place...
Maan took Geet along with him and ordered Tiramisu...
M: You know what this best place for desserts. And the best dessert is Tiramisu..
G: How come I don't know about this. Ok then let's see...
M: Whenever I come to London I always come here to eat this dessert. This is my favorite dessert...
Soon the Order came and they enjoyed a lot eating that dessert...
G: Thank you so much for the treat Maan I really enjoyed with you...
After the dessert they went and they were strolling.
M: Hey Geet I know that here nearby is a beach let's go ...
G: umm Okay!
They reached the beach. It was not very crowded as it was very late. Maan and Geet walked in silence for a while. Both had very deep connection with beach. Geet went ahead and sat down on the sand. Maan joined her. Geet was quietly looking at the moon.
M: Geet what are you doing?
G: No I was just... Nothing (Sighs)
M: What happened?
G: Nothing Maan it's just that you bought me to a place which has very deep connections with my life..
M: How is that so?
G: It's a long story...I'll tell you some time later...
M: Okay...
They sat quite. Maan was remembering their last meeting at the beach. It was hilarious and he started with a giggle but soon it became loud laughter. Geet was confused.
G: Maan are you okay?
M: No I just (laughs) ...I was remembering something
G: What?
Maan could not tell her directly..
M: Nothing... it was that once I saw a drunk girl on the beach!!!!
G: So?
M: Nothing I was just laughing because of her funny acts..
G: What did she do?
M: She had her sandals in her hand and she was talking to her shoes...and you know she was actually very cute..
Geet was a little jealous because Maan was calling a girl cute..
G: Well that's not cute that's stupid!!
M: No Geet she was cute and she was calling me prince charming... Unlike you...
G: You know maybe that girl was too much drunk because she actually called you prince charming and have you seen your face in the mirror...
M: Yes I have seen myself and I am very handsome
G: I don't agree!!
M: But I do...
G: Okay let's stop... But if you think that you are so handsome so I guess that you will marry before me so Maan have you chosen that drunken girl to marry you...
Maan looked at her
M: As a matter of fact may be ...I have chosen her...
G: WHAT!!!! Are you crazy...you are gonna marry that dumb girl
M: Hey!! Don't call her dumb...I just said may be and Geet it's okay to feel jealous...
G: What the... I am not jealous I am just...Ummm ...worried as you are my friend and I don't want you suffer with a drunken girl...
M: Really Geet...( raised an eyebrow)
G: Yes...okay so you will show me first your so called dream girl...that is if u find one
M: Okay I will
Sometime later...
G: Maan I think that we should get going...I mean it's late and we have a flight tomorrow
M: Okay let's go
Both came back to the hotel where they were living...it was very much late therefore there were not many people there...
They were about to go to their rooms...but the receptionist stopped them...
R: Sir...Ma'am
Maan turned...along with Geet...
M: Yes
R: Actually Sir. Ma'am you team mates asked me to inform you that you flight is postponed...that is 9:00am tomorrow.
M: Thank you for informing us.
G: ahhh finally I will get some sleep from this tiring day
M: Ok Geet than meet you in the morning...as we should be there 3 hour before the flight and it's pretty much late now therefore we should sleep now.
G: Yes Maan...Ok then Bye see you in the morning
M: Bye...

Precap: Talk with Dadima and comeback of MSK n GH

Thank you ppl for liking the last update and commenting!!
And Sorry for updating this late.. was busy with exams and all
Comment and like this update too... and i will give the next part soon cuz I have already written it...😉


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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely yaar..the beach convo is sooo cute..geet is jealous of the drunken girl and she dont know she was the one..hwww sweet...wonderful update..pls cont soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome part
loved it
maan and geet went to beach
maan remembered geet at beach at other day and he laughted out loud
geet is feeling J hearing maan saying some other girl cute
eagerly waiting for the next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hmm that was quite interesting day out!!!
Got 2 know each other!!
I'm missing the base story of this ff..
Waiting for the next !!
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update geet feeling jealous
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update...
maan told geet abt the drunk girl he met at beech...bt didnt tell her it was geet only...
geet is jealous bcoz maan call the girl cute😆
loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
beach convo was so cute!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
beautiful update 😊
maan and geet went to beach and maan told geet about beach girl and geet is getting jealous not knowing that maan is talking about her😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsemmm update geet j with herself

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