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Posted: 11 years ago
good job.. nice update!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n fab update. well written
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Posted: 11 years ago

Beautiful update.

Awesome

Dadi n Maan talks. It was fun to read. Dadi n his mom desperately searching for a girl.

Geet also back. At Khurana office everyone surprised to see her. Tasha complementing n Shasha jealous. She is up with her evil plan.
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Continue soon.
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Part 18

Next day Maan came to her office a little early then the time she had given...as Geet had not yet come he was waiting for her in the waiting lounge...
He could feel the replica of his own office...same luxurious furniture...same luxurious cabins...etc...He could clearly relate it to a fine business man's work area. As he was thinking about...he felt a hustle outside the waiting lounge...so he decided to peek...As soon as he opened the door slightly he could see every one running for their lives...as if some monster was behind them...Soon Pinky and Abhay...stood at the entrance of one cabin which was the largest among all the cabins...Soon there was tick tock...that was the voice of heels heard by all...Soon his eyes went to the feet of the person...and later he could see a fragile figure entering coming with full authority and confidence...a few minutes later she stood by the door and called Pinky and Abhay inside...At this moment a smile crept on his face automatically...it was as if he was seeing a mirror of himself...Later Geet called Maan in to her cabin...
G: Sorry to keep you waiting Mr. Khurana...
On one hand Maan liked the true professional which he expects from everyone but still most girls don't understand that. He said..
M: Geet you are forgetting something???
Geet was totally confused and raise her eyebrows and then it immediately grasped her brain...
G: Sorry Maan. Actually I am too used to call every on by their surname that is why...I apologize.
M: Geet I said that I would not accept your apologies!!! Now I will take payback for it.
Geet started murmuring: Geet what were you thinking when you called him Mr. Khurana...Now see what happened...Now what will he do... Please Maan please don't ask for something that is too hard to give...
Maan could hear her murmuring but didn't want to stop her as he liked her sweet talks...
M: Geet I want to have coffee right now...(Maan added with a smirk) But you will have to make the coffee
G: Ok fine (Geet moved out)
Geet went into the pantry...Everyone was dumb stuck that how come their boss is making coffee and that also 2 cups. But no one had the guts to voice their thoughts...
When Geet was about to enter her cabin she noticed that everyone were staring at her. She turned and said:
G: I don't pay you all for staring at me! Now get back to work!!!
Maan heard a thunderous voice from outside. He could not believe that such voice could come from that fragile little women.
Geet came back with coffee.
As Geet used to take a little more sugar so she put the same amount in Maan's cup...
Maan as soon as took the first sip he seriously wanted to spit the extreme sweet coffee out but that would be very rude to Geet. If this was his office the guy would have been fired by now!
G: Maan what happened?? Did you not like the coffee??
M: It's Ok Geet...The Coffee is really good..(Taking small sips)
G: But the looks you are giving seems like you hate it...( said with a questioning face)
M: No Geet...
G: Maan you can tell me...
M: Actually Geet...Who...I take a no sugar at all
G: Ohhh... (Bit her tongue) I'm sorry actually I like extra sugar and absent mindedly (looking at his cup) added in your cup too. I'm sorry. (Making a cute face like child caught in crime)
Maan started laughing loudly.
M: (in between laughs) Geet why are you so hesitant in telling this...
G:Actually when I was a child everyone use to laugh at me. And whenever the sugar finished in our home every one used to blame me...and told that that I will get fat... and my friend also used to call me Old fashioned as use to take tea instead of Coffee...because I like tea more than coffee... but caffeine in coffee makes me awake for long hours now...
G: Tell me Maan that am I fat...Do you become old fashioned if you drink tea???
M; No Geet you are absolutely fine (Fragile to be precise he added in his heart)... and No everyone has their own choices...and a true friend should accept the other's interests whole heartedly...No
Maan in between could see the change of emotions...In between when she was speaking about her family...there was mist in her eyes...that did not came out but still Maan could see...
Maan did not want to see her helpless therefore he diverted her mind by talking about various other things and most importantly the PROJECT!!!

Days were passing by and Maan and Geet's friendship was blossoming and almost 1 month passed...they used to work in each other's offices alternatively...
On day Geet came to meet him and discuss the project...it was 6:00pm therefore very few people were there in office...and saw that Maan was not usual...He due to the hectic routine was having a severe headache...when Geet entered his cabin he was leaning his head by the back of the chair and had his fingers on his head...he was pressing his fingers on his head in order to relieve himself from the pain.
G: Maan what happened???
M: Geet!!!You came...ahh it's nothing...
G: Maan...you are hiding something??
M: Geet I am not...it's just that I was having a headache...
G: (said in a concerned voice) Maan than you need to rest...why are you here???...you should take a tablet and I will ask your driver to drop you back home...
M: No Geet...I will be fine I will take coffee and will be okay...
Geet brings the first aid box and took out a Panadol...bought some water and ordered him to take it...and Maan started acting childishly...
M: Geet I will be fine...I hate medicines they are so bitter...I can't take this...
G: (said in a stubborn manner) Maan I am not telling you to take it...I am ordering you...and why are you throwing tantrums...you know that I will not leave you until you eat it...
M: Umm Geet
But before Maan could utter another word Geet took the tablet and shoved it in his mouth and in a reflex action Maan took water from her hand and drank it...
Still Maan was having a headache as the tablet will work after sometime...
G: Maan we will discuss the project some other time...
But Geet did not want to go...and neither could she see her friends in pain... She closed the blinds of the cabin...called his assistant that no one should come inside. No calls etc...
She asked Maan to shift to the couch and seated herself also on the couch. Took his head on her lap and started massaging his head with the help of a balm which was kept in the first aid box for pain relief...
As soon as her fingers started massaging his head...Maan felt a shiver ran down his spine...her finger were doing magic...and his headache was reducing...after sometime he fell asleep on her lap and later when Geet saw that he was asleep she didn't want to wake him up therefore she decided that she would wait until Maan wakes up. Maan was looking so serene in his sleep...while watching him she also fell asleep...Maan woke up after around 2 hours and saw Geet that she was sleeping in a very uncomfortable position...he felt guilty as because of him she could not move...he immediately removed his head from her lap...When Geet felt the warmth missing...she immediately woke up and saw Maan...
G: Maan you woke up...Is your headache better????
Maan could see concern for him all over her face...
M: Geet I am fine...My headache is gone...Thank you for taking care of me...( he said genuinely)
G: Maan you said that I would not accept others to say thank you...so same goes for you as well and friends are always there...
M: yes...by the way how will you go???Should I drop you home...
G: No my driver is waiting outside...I will go...take care and go home right this instant...
M: Okay my Lord!!!!
Geet went to her house and later Maan also reached his home...the whole time Maan was thinking the way Geet took care of him...although it was a minor headache and any friend would have ignored that but she did not...

Precap: Geet in not a good condition!!!
M: Where did u get these scratches from??

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Edited by sparklingeyes11 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update...
maan is seeing his mirror image in geet at her office...
their friendship is blossoming...
loved the way geet cared for maan...
loved it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
great update.so sweet of geet taking care of maan
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nice 1/... waiting fr more...😊
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Part 19

After a few day...Maan was discussing the project...and in short was in a meeting with other team member...along with Geet's team members. This is when Maan saw some scratches on her arms, hand and neck...which she had very carefully covered with the help of the scarf but Maan could see...Even Geet was not concentrating on the meeting...after the meeting ended...everyone dispersed and left the room. Only Maan and Geet were left in the room...Geet was lost in her thoughts...
M: Geet did you get hurt...these scratches...Where did you get them??
G: Maan...I ...actually...fell down from stairs...she said that without meeting his eyes...
Now Maan knew that she was lying...
M: Geet you know what actually if you don't know how to lie than why do you bother???Tell me exactly what happened??
Right then the lights went out...and immediately Geet grabbed Maan's hand... and started murmuring...
G: please don't leave me...Please don't leave me...Please...i am very scared of dark...He will kill me...He will kill me...He will not leave me...
Maan was shocked to hear that...who will kill Geet...Did that person try to kill her...are those marks...No No Maan you are thinking wrong...I will ask her directly...
But when decided to ask Geet...he could feel her that she was shivering of fear...so he embraced her in his arms...and consoled her. Geet's hold on him become tighter and tighter.
M: Geet I am with you. Nothing will happen to you...Please calm down...(rubbing her back in a comforting manner)
Maan could not see her like this... After a few seconds Geet felt unconscious and fainted...Maan immediately put her on the couch in the room and at the same time the lights came...Maan called the doctor...After the doctor checked her...
D: Mr.khurana she fainted because of the fear of darkness. She will be fine soon...but the marks on her hand and arms...seem that she was attempted to be killed...It's evident that she struggled...and that's the cause of these marks.
M: Yeah I also saw these... I was asking about this when the lights went and then she fainted...I will see to it... Thank you Doctor...
Maan asked her relative team member to go back...and Geet will come later...as Geet was not feeling well. He did not tell them that she fainted.
Maan went inside...
M: Geet you can rest here...then I myself will drop you home...
Geet just nodded her head...Maan couldn't see Geet like this...she was fully distressed...her hair were messed up and tears were continuously moving out of her eyes...Maan did not wanted to ask further about the incident but he was sure that there is something very serious that might have happened. As far as he knew Geet she was not a women who would breakdown like this in front of everyone...but he knew that there is another side of her that he was still discovering and every time he was surprised by her antics.
Geet rested for a few minutes but then she became restless. She wanted to go back home...
Maan guessed this and took her out of the cabin...till now no one was in the office. He supported her by putting her arm around his neck and his arm was around her shoulders...both walked and soon reached his car...Maan had already had asked her driver to leave...and he will drop her home..
Maan called pinky and asked her about her place...as till now he did not know her house...although Pinky was a little suspicious but later when Maan told that she was not feeling well and was sleeping and also her driver was not here than she told the place...
Maan reached her place...In between their travel...Geet didn't speak a word...she just leaned towards the window and was watching outside blankly...Maan was still feeling a little confused ... who would try to kill a girl too innocent like her???... Soon Maan nudged Geet to go to her home...Geet came out of her thoughts...and silently went out of the car...Maan stayed there for a sometime until she completely disappeared...
As he was moving towards the exit the lights suddenly went out along the path way and the entire area was enclosed with darkness. As soon as the lights went out he remembered the way Geet reacted to the absence of lights in the office...he raced his car back to the mansion and ran inside...
Here Geet went inside and was going to her room...was on the stairs when suddenly the lights went out...Geet took no other name except for Maan's as she knew that he was the only one who can save her from being lost into darkness again. As soon the lights went out she ran downstairs and moved towards the main entrance...She came out and bumped into a rock hard being...first she got scared and started to move back as flashes of that fearful night came into her mind immediately...but when she heard the person calling her name she knew that he is non-other than Maan and immediately hugged him... who just came inside...

Precap: Maan in Geet's Mansion.. Now what will happen...
And a very interesting entry.

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Posted: 11 years ago
very nice updates... loved it... loved ur writing style... sorry for not commenting till now... I didn't get the pms... but now I m regular reader...👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
thank you..thank you for back to back update...love the first part where we can see lady msk😃😃😃 maan is impressed with geet and love the way geet took care of maan..part 19...some one try to harm geet..and attacked her..hope maan will protect her...amazing part..pls cont soon..

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