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Posted: 11 years ago
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ho kya raha hai...

beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Updating Soon.. Anyone waiting???😉
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Part 12:
Maan went in the conference hall. Now they were starting the conference. The board of directors were pretty sure that there was a tiff going between the two owners...therefore they decided to cool it down as they didn't want to put the project in danger...
BOD1: I see that you are quite uncomfortable with each other and let me tell you that you two are equally good with your intellectual skills and that is why we chose your teams...Your projects were equally good and we could not find any glitches...
In order to make you comfortable and also that you become aware of each other's ideas we would like to show you the videos of each other...
M: No its okay... I am pretty sure that you would have selected the best...
G: Yes...(with gritted teeth) I am sure that you would have selected the best...
M&G: We are ready to work together...
BOD: R you sure???? But still I want you to see each other's ideas...
M: Ok then...
The board of directors did the honors and started the videos...Both Maan and Geet were stunned by seeing pure professionalism from both the sides keeping the small incidents aside...here Geet's team laughed when Piya was shaken by Maan's loud voice when her file had fallen...here Geet could not control her laughter and Maan was like...what does this girl think of herself... Ok I will see that whether she has done any mistake in her presentation... After Maan's video Geet's turn was there... Here Maan and his team mates laughed when the incident of slide changing took place...and Geet was like...Why he is making fun of me... I will see him...Hmmm...
After showing them the videos the board of directors told them the further details of the project that it will be further carried in their homeland and the actual construction will take place in Sans Francisco.
Geet got really excited about the construction plan... And her eyes were reflecting pure innocence...it was as if a child was given his favorite candy... Maan kept on admiring her but later came back...
After that the board of directors exited so that both the teams could sort out their differences... and told them that they are giving them 2 hours so that they can come up with a combined plan...
Here both the teams started to combine their ideas and both were awestruck by the confidence of each other...although Geet wanted to throw Maan out of the project...but when it came to the project he became purely professional...and no where she was uncomfortable with him... While Maan also wanted to Geet to become comfortable with him as this will help for the project...
After 2 hours both the teams came up with a full fledge plan...
2 months of planning... etc etc and it also consisted of staying for 1 month in Sans Francisco. For the final touches and the opening ceremony...
Here the board of directors were struck by the two going well together...the way they were completing each other's sentences it felt that they knew each other for the past years... after the discussion both teams were congratulated by the directors and were left alone...
G: I am stunned to see you work... It will be pleasure to do my work with you Mr. Khuranan...as I will get more experience...
M: Chalo atleast you admitted. Same here Ms. Geet it will be pleasure working with you...
Both shacked hands..
Here Maan decided to tease Geet a little bit...
M: Geet still you wanted to throw me out of the project??
G: No its just that...
M: No Ms. Geet you can tell me.
G: No I was just a little pissed off...as I had worked a lot on this project...but I have seen that there is even some one else who is worthy...
M: So that means that you admit that I am also the BEST'
G: I didn't say this...
M: It seems like whoever you don't like you throw them out of your life...
Now this comment hit hard on Geet's heart though Maan didn't say it by heart...but this comment bought tears in her eyes...though she did not want to show herself to Maan in vulnerable state but she didn't know that Maan had already seen her in the most broken form when she was pouring all pain out...She turned around to stop her tears.. .And
G: Wooo i have to go... Ok I will see you around...
The tears got noticed by Maan and he understood that she was hurt on something that he had said...He promised to himself that he will not bring tears in her eyes...

After both the teams went to their hotels...there both refreshed...
Here Geet was lost in the thoughts... How could she be so sensitive in front of any one...she promised herself that she won't show the vulnerable state to anyone.
Here she was distracted by Pinky's loud voice...
P: Geet don't you want for dinner... the dinner will not walk to you... Geet eat me... I am very tasty...
G: Pinky... I don't feel like..you go...
P: By the way we are invited by Mr. Khurana's team to a nearby hotel...
G: No Pinky... You go... I need some rest and I will do my dinner by myself downstairs itself... Say Sorry on my behalf to Mr. Khurana and his team...
P: But you should have come... It would be relaxing for you...
In between Pari also came to ask her out but she denied going... In the end all went for the dinner leaving behind Geet in her room...
On the other hand Maan also felt that he didn't want to go.. So he asked Adi to take care of everyone and say sorry on his behalf...
M: Make sure that they are comfortable as we are will be working with them for the next 6 months... This is the cheque book... Handle everything... and enjoy...
A: But it would have been better if you would also join...
M: Adi don't argue with me... I said that I am not coming... now leave...
Adi left...
Maan (self-thought) Sorry Geet I can't come in front of you... You know I can't see you in tears and that too because of me... I know I have hurt you... But I will make sure that I will cover that...I will see through it that there will be no tears in your eyes because of me...
Here both the teams left... And were having a pleasurable time... They were enjoying as the bosses of both the teams were not present so they were free...
In between Maan called Adi to see that whether everything was alright...
M: Adi... is everything fine??
A: Yes sir...
M: Ok then make sure that that they have no complaints..
A: Ok sir..
M: And Adi... Make sure that Ms. Geet is also comfortable...
A: Sir she is not here...Here team gave apologies on her behalf...
Maan was shocked to hear that... That means that she is all alone here... This girl will make me crazy...
M: Ok Adi I will call you later...
Maan straight away went to her the reception and asked about her room and reached immediately and knocked the room...
Here Geet was getting ready to go to the hotel in order to have dinner... also she was feeling very low... she dressed up and that is when she heard the knock...
Geet... Who is there...as far as I remember everyone has left to dinner, May be it is the house keeping... Ok I will open the door...
She opened the door and was shocked to see that no one was there...
Here Maan had left after knocking the door thinking that it is not professional to ask her that why did she not go...
Geet closed the door... and went into deep thoughts...later she shrugged it off...that may be someone by mistake would have knocked...
Later she went downstairs and ordered her favorite Pasta... She still remembered the glimpses of the fight that she had with her friend when she was small... here Geet was lost in the thoughts...
G: Where will he be...? I know that you will be proud of me... You know what I never broke your promise. Look now company is even handling international projects... I am still waiting for you...
then she had a flashback...
Flashback:
In between when Maan and Geet used to meet on the beach they used to make further plans... also...
M: Angel you know what when I will come bigger just like my dad... I will handle the entire business that my father is taking care of...
G: Ohm than you will forget me... you will be so busy...
M: Angel how can I forget you... when you will be also there with me...
G: how can I be there???
M: Angel when you will also get older that you will also handle your father's business...
G: Yes I will but...I don't know how to handle it... how will I shake hands with other people just like Dad does when there is a deal...Look my hand are so small (looking at her hands) and I am also so short...
M: Ohm. Come on Angel... when you will get older your hands will also grow bigger...
G: What will happen when I will be in a big problem... you will not be there to help me...
M: Angel I will always be there.. I will give you the solution...
G: But Nerdistien you and I will not be working together... than you will be my enemy... Just like Dad has...
M: Angel... how can your Best friend become your enemy...and as far as not working together is concerned...we will combine the two companies together and then we can work together... and we will make our companies reach to the heights...
G: Really Nerdistien... I am proud of you... You have answer and solution to my any problem... I hope we will always be best friends...
Here the parents of both kids smiled and rolled their eyes on their talk... Sometimes the children say big things so innocently...that they themselves don't know what they are saying...
Here the flashback ends...
And the waiter came with pasta that she had ordered...

Precap:
Maan: (asked suddenly) Are you the girl who got the best architect award..

Please hit the like button and do comment... I see that i am not getting a good response on this FF so i will be discontinuing it or ending it soon.
Edited by sparklingeyes11 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awsem update maneet conversation past is fab
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing part..cant wait for maan to find out geet is his angel,,,,,yaar..this an amazing story..pls dont even think of discont..pls...every week i'll desparately will be waiting for a singel update..pls yaar..😭😭

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da pm n lovely update. well written. Pls continue! update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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God I'm really getting impatient!!
That too only for this story don't know why!!!
Maybe ur coz of the strong backdrop u hav created!!
Or just to feel there magical moments in ur style!😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 13
On the other side Maan was following her and sat on the opposite side of the nearby seat so that she cannot see him... Later when he saw that that she was lost in her thoughts...Maan was about to go to her when the waiter came with the order...Here Maan also approached her, after the waiter left...
M: Ms. Geet how you doing??
G: Ohm I am fine... Please take a seat...
M: Ms. Geet how come you are alone... I gave a treat to you and your team...you should be there...
G: I am sorry Mr. Maan...actually I was not feeling good that is why I did not go... What are you doing here???
M: Then you should have taken medicine...Do you want me to bring medicine??
Maan got up
G: No it's okay...U can sit down...it's just a headache...it will soon get over...as I was taking too much tension of this project... So what brings you here??? You should have been with your team???
Maan did not want to tell the actual reason therefore he preferred to lie...
M: (averting his gaze) actually I had an important work to do...
G: (Nodding her head in an understanding manner) I know the business men have no life... they always have something on their hand...
M: Yes you are right... After many years I have seen someone saying my line...
G: Ok what would you like to have...??
M: So you have given me chance to have dinner with you... how can I miss this opportunity...Ok then I will order...
Maan also ordered Pasta...and asked to bring the order promptly...and then the waiter left...
G: I will wait till your order comes and then we will eat it together...
M: Ok then...
G: You also like Pasta...
M: No actually I like desi cuisine as someone has said me that desi is much better than continental...
Here Geet remembered the word said by her when she had a fight with Maan in her childhood on Desi Vs Continental...
G: Ohm ok...
M: By the way it seems like you also like Pasta..
G: Same here someone also told me that Pasta is much better than Desi...
Maan tried to make the conversation go ahead!
M: So Ms. Handa tell me that for how many years you are in this business profession...
G: Oh I am in it for the past 5 years...
M: (asked amusingly) than how come I haven't met such a fine business women who got success in such a short span of time.
G: Actually I tend to keep away from media as I don't want others to notice... I am not a attention grabber...you see...
Maan thought that is she the same person who got the best architect award...how come I don't remember her full name...
M: I have to admit that you are quite impressive... but still I have also not seen you in parties... seem like that you are not a party animal...
G: You guessed it right Mr. Khurana... I am not a party animal... I am always so busy ...that I don't get time to do anything else...
M: (asked suddenly) Are you the girl who got the best architect award..
G: (was taken aback from his question but answered promptly) yes you are right Mr. Khurana I am the one...
M: I am sorry actually I couldn't recognize you as there was no picture of you in the news...
G: No its okay... I don't prefer my picture on the front page every morning... I prefer a simple life...
M: So do I ... and they laugh at their own personal joke.
Here the waiter interrupted as he had bought the order and then both had their dinner.
G: It was a pleasure having dinner with you...I am quite impressed...
M: Yes same here... it was a pleasure having to meet you like this apart from professional life.
In the meantime the waiter came along the bill...Maan took his wallet out and was about to give money but Geet stopped him..
G: Mr. Khuranna I am paying... You don't have to...I was the one who invited you???
M: It's Ok Ms. Geet I will pay... I don't mind...
G: Mr. Khuranna I don't keep favor from any one in my professional life.
M: Ok then... You can keep a favor from a friend...Geet we can be friends...
G: I decide my friends with great difficulty you see...Being my friend is not so easy...said the last sentence with raised eyebrows...
M: I think I can manage..
G: Ok than you bought this on yourself Mr. Khuranna. So friends...
M: Friends...
M: Call me Maan Ms. Geet
G: And you call me Geet...
After Maan gave the money both stood up...
G: Thank you...See you later...
M: Geet I don't have thank you and sorry in my friendship dictionary... I will never say these words nor will I accept you to say these words...
G: Ok than see you in the morning Maan...I have to sleep as we have a meeting in the morning...
M: Ok then... Sleep tight...Sweet Dreams...
G: Bye...(Smiled)
M: Bye(in a laughing manner)...
When Geet returned to her room...she was lost in the thoughts... I think Maan is a good person...I judged him wrong at first...
On the other hand Maan returned to his room...Geet I want to know you more...I know you are not like other girls...there is something deep inside you that you have kept hidden but I will wait till you open up...
Today both slept a very peaceful sleep...


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Posted: 11 years ago
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loved it a lot just waiting to c maaneets budding frndship hope to. c d next update soon
plz do pm me n update soon
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beautiful update...






loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...




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