MG SS~SUBAH AANE KO HAI Pt12/Pg27, Note/Pg31 11Apr

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Hello.. Every1 here...😊

You all may not be knowing me as I am a silent reader on this forum...

Maaneet are very dearest to me after my family...❤️

There's no 1 in the Telly industry who can beat their chemistry...

Its being 8 months now that GHSP has ended😔 yet I watch the old episodes all over again and relive them reading the wondeful FFs here...😃

This is a small token of gratitude to Maaneet and GHSP Team...!!!

Secondly, the writings of anshra, muskanp, ritzy09, Angelic_mishty and my only friend in my hometown sdlife19 + there are many more in my buddy list who have also inspired me to start writing...😊

Writing is 1 of my fav hobbies be it any thing, as my hand writing always makes me proud of writing... (Though you all cant c it here)😆 I am not that good enough in putting my thoughts into words, so in this way will also improve my writing sense.😕

Plz do feel free to criticize or correct my mistakes as am writing for the first time... This story just came in my mind and was haunting me for last 3 months. Finally I am putting it down. I never intended to copy any 1s idea or concept...Plz do forgive me if I have done so...

Ok.. Enough of me the chatter-box getting to the story nw...😳

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Introduction

Life is unexpected.

Nobody can tell you what fate has set for u.


Difficult situations are indispensable part of your life.

Sometimes they might knock you hard, than you can ever bear

to only make you stonger each time.


'As everything has a reason'

And

'Joh hota hai woh acche k liye hota hai'


So

Let go your past and stop being afraid

What happened, happened.

You can't change the past, but You can better shape your future.


Sometimes its better if you forget whats gone,

appreciate what still remains,

and look forward to what's coming next.

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Never felt this scared even for my boards...😕

My hands were actually numb typing this'😳

Its my 1st time frnds...

Plz do like and comment...😳


Index

Prologue - Below

Character Sketch - Below

Part 1 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/65524658

Part 2 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/65604503

Part 3 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/65747094

Part 4 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/66190603

Part 5 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/66695856

Part 6 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/67596138

Part 7 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/68091511

Part 8 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3200261/mg-ss-subah-aane-ko-hai-pt12-pg27-note-pg31-11apr?pn=15�

Part 9 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3200261/mg-ss-subah-aane-ko-hai-pt12-pg27-note-pg31-11apr?pn=17�

Part 10 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/69428219

Part 11 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/70445713

Part 12 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/70902888








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My 2nd On-going SS~SUHAAGAN

My 3rd On-going FF-DEKHA EK KHWAAB..!!!

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Prologue
Journey of a young 17yr old innocent girl Geet who is ditched by her family. How she is abused and later saved from the prisoned life... How her saviour manages to protect her and take care of her... What effects the past has on her life and how she moves on...

Character Sketch

Geet Handa


Deven Thakur


Dr.Armaan Mallik and Dr.Riddhima Mallik


Khushi Malhotra


Maan Singh Khurana


Savitri Singh Khurana


+ some more characters will be introduced as story progresses...

Edited by CiaMaaneet - 12 years ago
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me first?!!🥳
interesting prologue..
do continue!!
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dont be so nervous ... give your best shot ... am sure it will turn out well ...
all the best for your story ...
waiting for the updates ...
love
Sana
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CONGRATS FOR YOUR FIRST STORY
DONT WORRY, JUST WRITE ON MAANEET
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interesting ...plz give part 1 also jisse confusion na ho...bhale hi ye sad ya emotional ho par want happy ending
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Part 1

The Escape

Deven tried to balance himself holding his bleeding head. His eyes filled with rage and anger. He mentally promised himself.

"Itni aasani se na jaane dunga thaare ko Chhori... Mhaare andar ke jaanwar ko jaga dala se tanne... Aur tu jaane na ghayal sher toh aur bhi khaufnak hove..."

He took out his hanky and tied it around the back of his head on the wound. He fished out his cell and called Chandu and told him the entire story as he couldn't have found Geet all alone.

Geet ran in the woods without once fearing and thinking about the wild animals there. Right now it felt easy for her to escape the wild animals then the devil humans. While running in the dark she stumbled on a stone and fell on thorny bushes, getting bruises on her elbow and her knee. She got up in a hasty manner. Unfortunately, her dupatta got stuck. She couldn't leave it over there or else the devil could easily track her. She pulled her dupatta, tearing it into pieces which she couldn't notice in the dark. She ran until her legs could help her. She crossed a cold stream in the woods. Since the current was strong enough, 1 of her footwear just came out of her feet. She had no time to wait and search for it. But she also couldn't move bare-foot in this creepy forest. She tried looking for it until she heard the devil's sound.

"Wahaan dekho... Dupatta mila se... (Crumbling the dupatta in his hand) Chhori bhi mil hi javegi... Idhar aas paas hovegi..."

Geet cought hold of her torn dupatta on her mouth to block the sound of her ragged breath. She couldn't wait any longer now. Without looking behind, worrying about her wounds and her bare-foot, she ran like a zombie. After running about 2 miles, she was completely exhausted + her bruises had started bleeding and throbbing excessively now. She slowed her pace reaching a huge banyan tree to take in few breaths. She was panting catching hold of her waist and her sweating had completely drenched her. She scanned the area here and there to see some flickering and lights moving parallel to the forest. She had to move there to get some help.

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At the same time on the Haryana-Delhi highway a couple in car having some romantic talks or rather say fight...

"Yeh kya baat hui, hum toh kal nikalnewale they na?? Phir ab achanak plan kaise badal gaya..." (Pouting cutely)

"Jaan! Tum jaanthi hon na... Main tumhe aisi haalat mein wahaan bilkul bhi rukne nahi deta... Toh stop arguing with me now..." (Casually saying and lookng straight at the road)

"Kya matlab aisi haalat?? (Angrily) For your kind information Dr.Armaan Mallik aap ko pata hona chahiye kii aisi haalat mein travelling bhi thik nahi hain... "(Tauntingly)

"Jaan.. Pata hai.. Bas kuch ghanto ki baat hai, ek baar hum aur Champ ghar pahonch jayenge phir tum mujhe joh chahein sunana..." (Getting irritated)

(Opening mouth wide) "Kya kaha tumne 'Champ'???

Tumne socha bhi kaise kii champ hoga?? (Pointing out her finger)

Maana kii tum Doctor hon... Par mujhe lagta hai meri Pari hi hogi..." (Caressing her huge bump and shooting daggers at Armaan)

"Ohh God... Ridz tumhare yeh hormones mujhe chain se jeene nahin denge.. (Sighing irritatingly) Behes karna ho toh koi tumse sikhe... (Giving up) Par Basket iss baat ki puri gurantee deta hoon kii Champ hi hoga" (And twitched her nose)

Riddhima holding her stomach with 1 hand disagreeing his remark snapped his hand. Armaan grabbed her arm and slowly pulled her towards himself, locking his gaze with hers and spoke huskily..

"Tumhe bhi pata hai Jaan... K bachche ka sex father pe depended hai"

Riddhima's cheeks grew red blushing at his straight comment and turned towards the front to escape his naughty gaze only to see a girl coming in front of their car. She yelled out in fear holding her bump cocooning it in her arms..

"Armaaan... Armaan... Aage dekho... Apply the brakes..."

Armaan who was lost in his wife's red cheeks, shockingly looked ahead to see a girl just mere inches away from their car. She had her hands blocking her face bcz of the effect of headlights. Armaan abruptly applied the brakes taking care, not to cause any harm to both Ridz his Jaan and the girl. He turned towards Riddhima to check whether she was fine.

"Tum thik ho na Jaan... (Cupping her face) aur Champ... (Touching her bump) Are you both fine??? (His eyes turning misty)"

(Holding his shoulders) "We are fine Armaan... Dekho.. Pehle Humein uss ladki ko dekhna chahiye... Chalo..."

(Wiping his eyes) "Main dekhta hoon... Tum bahar mat aana..."

Armaan got down of the car and moved swiftly towards a lifeless Geet. He saw her bruised body with torn clothes. Her feet had wounds with stones pricking her heels. He went forward and leaned on her and pulled her shoulders towards himself. The sight made him numb actually. Her innocent, weak yet glowing face reminded him of...

"Piya... Lekin aise kaise...?? Wohi maasumiyat, wohi chulbulapan, wohi saadgi'"

Riddhima started getting restless inside. She just couldn't understand why Armaan was taking time. She got out of the car taking care not to hurt their baby. She went to Armaan looked and glanced at the girl and at the same time touched him. Armaan got startled with her touch and just spoke in a trance.

"Ridz dekho... Piya...!!!" (Pointing at Geet)

Riddhima understood his dazed state and taking control of the situation spoke.

"Armaan... Humein isse immediate medical attention dena hai... Uss ke ghav dekho kitne gehre hai... Bleeding stop karni padegi... We can't wait a min here... Come on.. Hurry up... Utao isse..."

Armaan came back from his reverie and took Geet in his arms and rested her on the back sit. Riddhima too sat in the car. Being Doctors the patient was their 1st priority. Armaan had started getting a strong attachment to this girl. He couldn't waste time. Within an hours time they reached Delhi and in another 10mins Sanjeevani. Geet was taken to the casualty ward. Armaan explained all the details to his colleague and on duty Dr.Sapna Patel. Armaan and Riddhima sat outside thinking of Geet's state, what could have happened with her? What would have happened if the brakes weren't applied on time? + her condition unwantedly brought all the bitter memories back again. After few mins Dr.Sapna came out of the casualty and saw a worried Armaan and Riddhima sitting together. She moved towards them and said

"Maine uss ke ghav par stitches kar diye hai... Filhaal woh sedatives ke wajah se behosh hai.. Kuch waqt mein hosh aane ke baad kuch keh sakthe hai...

(Patting Armaan's shoulder) Don't worry sab thik ho jayega... "

Taking some relief Armaan just heard her words and moved towards the window of the casualty ward. Riddhima came and kept a supporting hand on his shoulder.

"Tumhe pata hai Ridz, aaj 3 saalon mein pehli baar mujhe Piya ki jhalak phir se dikhayi di.. Aisa nahi ke main ussey bhul gaya par aaj aisa laga ke maine ussey khokar bhi phirse paa liya hai..."

Riddhima started getting emotional with his talks.

"Iss ladki ki maasumiyat, iski saadgi, ne mujhe Piya ke paas hone ka phirse ehsaas dila diya hai... Aaj agar issey kuch bhi ho jata toh main apne aap ko kabhi nahi maaf kar pata..."

Armaan started crying. Never in his life he felt so weak and lonely. Piya was the only 1 left in his family after his parents died in a plane crash. His sweet adorable sister... His Gudiya' never said no to her for anything. But fate had something else in store. The 26/11 Mumbai terror attack snatched Piya from him when she had gone for some college training camp there. It was only Piya the cupid to bring Armaan-Ridz closer. Riddima couldn't see his weak state again. She gave him a tight hug assuring him he is not alone. She will be always there beside him.

(Wiping his tears and cupping his face) "Armaan... Tumhe pata hai na.. Piya tumhare chehre pe udaasi dekhkar kitna bura mehsoos karegi... Kya tumhe accha lagega usska woh murjaaya hua chehra?? Accha lagega yeh jaankar kii Gudiya ki Bhabhi usske Bhai ko kabhi khush nahi rakh paayi..??" (Turning her head and wiping a lone tear from her eyes)

(Shook his head) "Sshhh aisa nahi hai... Jaan! Piya ke baad ek tum hi toh hon jis ke liye main zinda hoon..." (Wiping her tears and caressing her cheek)

"Toh cheer up... Come on (Wiping her tears) Tumhe laga na iss ladki mein Piya ki chhavi hai??"

Armaan just nodded his head looking at Geet from the window.

"Mujhe bhi.." (Smiling weakly at him)

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Next day, while Armaan was in his cabin he was informed that Geet got her consciousness back. He and Riddhima came outside the ward where Geet was shifted to see a worried Dr.Sapna. She told them that Geet's medical reports had arrived which showed that she was sexually molested. Geet after coming to senses also shoved away a ward boy in a wild manner when he had accidently touched her while trasferring her on the bed. Armaan started recollecting what Piya had endured in Mumbai. History was repeating itself in the same way. Riddhima caught hold of Armaan's arm and assured him through her eyes that everything will be fine. Armaan decided he would take up Geet's case, he was a Neurosurgeon. He felt the need to himself help Geet in getting her out of fears from men and forgetting her past.

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Haath kaap rahe thein yeh type karte waqt...😕

Its my 1st time frnds... Sorry for any mistakes..

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Also let me knw in ur commnts if u need PMs on this SS'😃

Love Cia..!!❤️

Edited by CiaMaaneet - 12 years ago
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awesome update...
thanx for the pm
cont soon
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intersting concept
continu soon and pm me
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Firstly would like to thank all the buddies below for liking and commenting... You all have motivated me to continue writing... Thanks a ton Dearies!!!🤗
PoorvaArora, priyasree, swabi, SweetestPari, gawjusangel, Paingel, magyshah, mamatha.,
But still want more likes and comment...

Part 2

The Evil Plot

For the 1st few days he made Riddhima become friendly with Geet. sHE didn't allow any male doctors, ward boys around her ward. When Geet started getting a little better Riddhima introduced Armaan to Geet. At 1st she felt little weird in getting to know him. But Armaan was determined to open herself to him. He started getting friendly with her only in Riddhima's presence. Slowly slowly Geet started getting familiar to his presence. His caring behaviour, the way he brought breakfast, lunch for her, the way Armaan-Ridz had dinner with her, the way he gave her timely medicines made Geet to form a soft corner for him. He had indeed being successful to win her heart. His love filled voice, when he called her'Gudiya' made her feel pampered like the way she was treated by her parents in HP. But the memories of HP made her gloomy often. This was not gone unnoticed by Riddhima. Being a woman herself and knowing about Geet's medical reports she felt though Geet's external wounds were healed but her heart was deeply wounded and would surely take time to get healed. The mental trauma and the physical stress she had undergone had to be disseminated to make her lively and active in true sense. The very next day Riddhima made a decision to know her past. The next day when Armaan-Ridz entered Geet's ward they saw her sitting on the bed resting her back on the pillow. Her face was dim, with dull expressions, her eyes were red. They knew she had being crying early in the morning. They came in, Armaan just snapped his fingers in front of her face making her come out of her mysery looking blankly at him.

"Kya Gudiya... Tu hamesha suddenly kyon murja jaati hain?? Lagta hain mere hi chehre mein kuch kharaabi hain..."

"Gudiya.. Tu na isski sun mat... Bata na koi pareshaani hai?? Main hoon na tere paas.. Darr ne ki koi baat nahi hai.." (Taking Geet's palms in her hands and giving them a smooth caressing massage)

Geet couldn't hold her tears looking at the care and concern they had been showering from days. If only her family had treated her this way she wouldn't had landed here. Armaan wiped her tears and holding her shoulder spoke.

"Gudiya... Dekh tu ro mat.. Tera Bhai hai na tere paas... Befikr hokar bol dein... Uss dard ko bahar nikal dein, apne dil ko halka kar dein... Accha lagega... Sacch mein..."

Geet getting reassured with his words spoke."

"Mera naam Geet Handa hai. Main Punjab ke Hoshiarpur gaav ki rehnewali hoon. Mere Papaji, Meri Maa ne kabhi mere aankhon mein aansun na aane diye. Mujhe ek rajkumari ki tarah sambhala, pyaar kiya. Yeh nahin ke main ziddh karthi thi, joh thik aur sahi tha wohi soch kar mere liye kiya. Abhi kuch mahino pehle hi maine apni 12th board ki exam answer ki hai, aur main acche marks ke saath class mein 1st aayi thi. Maa-Papaji issiliye matha tekne Amritsar gurudware gayye thein Lekin..."

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Flashback

A 17yr old girl clad in a baby pink salwar kameez looking all worried and restless. She was walking the length of her room, twisting her dupatta continuously and looking at the wall clock. Then looking up at the ceiling she speaks

"Babaji, Maa-Paapaji ne toh kaha tha kal raat tak pahonch jayenge' Kaha reh gayye..??? (Pouting) Kal bhi Maa ki godi mein sone nahi mila, neend bhi thik se nahi aayi'"

Suddenly the door of her room opens and a 12yr old girl comes running towards her shouting her name loudly.

"Geet Didi' Geet Didi..!!!"

"Arrey, Rajji' Tu haaf kyon rahi hai..?? Kya hua?? (Holding her shoulders) Itni ghabrai hui kyon hai??"

"Didi (Very slowly as she was panting) Aap bas niche aajao' Woh niche.. (Taking Geet's hand in hers) Police aayi hai'"

Geet just heard her words getting surprised with the unpleasant entry of the Police. She hurriedly ran downstairs with Rajji following her. As soon as they reached downstairs, Geet saw her Tayaji, Tayiji and Brij Veerji waiting in the courtyard and then 1 of the Policeman spoke.

"Baat yeh hai kii Amritsar highway par kal raat ko ek bahot bhaiyanak hadsa hua.. aur humein bade dukh ke saath kehna pad raha hai kii Mohinder ji aur Rano ji iss hadse ke shikaar ban gayye. Ambulance bodies lekar aathi hi hogi'"

Geet just fell on the floor hearing the dreadful words. Her face lost colour making it pale. Rajji and Tayaji rushed to her supporting her weak body.

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In the afternoon as soon as the bodies arrived Tayaji and Geet's cousin Brij completed the rituals of crematation. The Sarpanch, villagers paid their final visits to Mohinder and Rano. They were very known and respected in HP. While Geet sat as a lifeless soul, no tears in her eyes. Only thoughts lingered in her mind.

"Babaji, aisa kyon hua?? Paapaji.. (Mohinder's face came in front of her) Mujhe roz dudh pilane ke liye zidd kaun karega?? Mujhe college kaun chodne aayega?? Aap kyon chale gayye' Mujhe akela chod diya' Maa' (Rano's face came in front of her) Aap bhi chale gayye' Mujhe godhi mein sulayega kaun?? Kitne khush thein hum sab' Achanak aisa kyon ho gaya .. Babaji' Aisa kyon..???"
Her hazel brown eyes were all misty but tears weren't spilling out of them. She was trying to drench all the pain inside.

At night, Rajji just brought some light dinner for Geet in her room.

(Sitting close to Geet) "Main janthi hoon Didi.. Aap Tayaji aur Tayiji ko bahut yaad kar rahe hon'"

Listening to this Geet couldn't stop herself from letting out her pain. It had always been Rajji with whom she shared all her happy incidences, worries etc etc. Rajji couldn't see her tearful state, though she was the 1 who would calm her, tease her, help her, support her always but God knows this time she couldn't control herself firstly and just ran from there.

As Rajji was running to her room, 'Geet' Didi's name from her father's mouth just made her hault in her tracks. She stood outside her parent's room and was about to hear their conversation when her brother's thundering voice caught hold of her.

"Rajji, Tu yahan kya kar rahi hai??"

(Getting scared and gulping her saliva) "Woh' Vee..r..ji..!! Woh main bas Geet Didi ko khana dekar aa rahi hoon' A..u..r.. Ab bas sone jaa rahi thi'"

"Hmm.. Raat bahut ho gayyi hai' Jaa'"

After Rajji went away Brij entered their parents room, locking it behind he spoke.

"Paapaji, aapko kitni baar kaha hai hamesha savdhani parakhar baatein karne ke liya' Lekin aap toh aap hi hon.. Sunthe kaha hon.."

"Ohh.. Haan Puttar' Sahi keh rahein hon tussi' Pehle hi ghar mein kam musibatein hai joh aur mol leni hai'" (Frowning a little)

"Musibat'!!! Mummyji, Paapaji jab tak yeh Geet ka manhoos saaya iss ghar se na niklega, tab tak toh musibat hamare uppar mandrathi rahegi'" (Spoke with immense hatred)

"Brij, thik keh raha hai Ji' (Lookin towards her husband) Bhaisaab aur Parjayiji ne iss bhoj ko humare uppar aisa dala' Hayye hamari phooti kismat.. (Hitting her forhead) Kam se kam kuch toh chod jaate, na zevar, na jaaydad' Saara paisa iss par kharch karenge toh hamari Rajji ka kya hoga Ji' Mainu toh aage ki sochkar hi fikar ho rahi hai'" (Getting scared)

"Tussi chinta na karo Mummyji' Mere paas iss musibat ka hal hai'"

Saying this Brij pulled out his cell and made a call.

"Hello, Sasriyakaal Ji!! Main Brij Handa bol raha hoon'"

"Aaj joh baat hui thi, uss ke bare mein aapne kya socha hai Ji..??"

"Dekhiye, hum bas aakhri baar keh rahe hain.. Daam nahi badalne walaa' Lena hai toh bataiyein..??"

"Toh samjh lijiye sauda pakka' Maal kal sham tak pahauncha denge aap ke yahaan'" (Smiling broadly)

(Irritatingly) "Daam kam kyon karwa diya' Hun??"

"Mummyji yehi final deal hui hai' Aur bala jitney jaldi chali jaaye wahin accha hoga na'?? Ab 20 hazaar toh kahin aur se mil jayenge, lekin musibat ko gale ka phanda banakar thode hi ghar par rakh sakte hai'"

With this all three started clapping and laughing.

"Bahut shauk tha na Kudi ko college jaane ka' Ab hum dikhayenge usse ke kudiyon ke liye college kis chidiya ka naam hai.." (Mentally spoke and started grinning evily)

Geet was gazing at the starry sky through her window. She remembered her Paapaji had once told her.

"Betaji, tum chahe kitni bhi udaas ho apne aap ko kabhi akela mat samjh na. Tere yeh Paapaji bhale hi tere paas na hon par hamesha tujh par nazar rakhenge."

She remembered her Maa saying.

"Laado, jab bhi akela mehsoos ho toh Babaji ko yaad karna aur hum toh tere paas hi hai' Humari rajkumari kabhi akeli ho hi nahi nahi sakthi.."

All these words made Geet to think about her family members. 'Yes' she had Tayaji, Tayiji, Veerji and Rajji who would support her, love her. She wiped her tears, trying not to get weak and got consented with her parents words. She was supposed to join college, study hard and be the 1st graduate girl in HP. She had promised her parents and she will fulfill this for them.

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Next morning Geet got up early with a new hope. She went to the gurudwara, thanked Babaji for making her strong and reminding her of her parents wish. She hurried to the Haveli to tell her Tayaji that she was thinking of her further studies, although they knew but after her parents her sole responsibility was on him. On reaching Haveli, the talk with her Tayaji, Tayiji and Veerji made her jump in air.

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There is more to it'😳

Will continue soon'

Plz like and comment'😊

Love Cia...!!❤️


Edited by CiaMaaneet - 12 years ago

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