NEW MG FF-DEKHA EK KHWAAB...!!! Part6/Pg24 25DEC

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Believe in your dreams and they may come true;

believe in yourself and they will come true'

Prologue

A lady aged around 35yrs is lying on a bed and breathing heavily. A man aged around 40yrs was caressing her forhead and spoke concerningly.

"Rano' Dheeraj rakho' Main abhi vaidhji (Ayurvedic Doc)ko lekar aata hoon'"

The man assured Rano and moved towards the door and looked worriedly at the young lady aged around 27yrs standing at the door and left to get the vaidhji. The young lady entered the room and sat beside Rano and spoke taking her hand in hers.

"Rano..Dekh Bhaisaab gayye haina vaidhji ko laane' Bas kuch der ki baat hai'"

Rano spoke with difficulty trying to calm her ragged breath.

"Sona' Mere paas ab jyada waqt nahi hai' Vaidhji ko bulaakar koi faayda nahi honewala'."

"Rano' Yeh kaisi anap-shanaap ki baatein kar rahin hon' Kuch nahi hoga tujhe' Bhaisaab bas aate hi honge'"

"Sona' Honi ko kaun taal saktha hai' Lekin marne se pehle mujhe ek baat ki tasalli de dein'. Vaada kar mujhse'"

Sona couldn't stop her tears looking at her best friends condition. She kept caressing Rano's hand with her palm.

"Sona' Dekh mere jaane ke baad ek tum hi hon jiss par main vishwas kar sakhthi hoon..Meri Geetanjali bahot chhoti hai' Usska khayal rakhogina' Usse Maa ki kami kabhi mehsoos nahi hone dena' Rajkumari ki tarah sambhala hai usse..Uss par koi aanch na aane dena' Rakhogi na meri Geet ka khayal'"

Rano spoke with tears in her eyes. Sona assured her nodding at her each insistence.

"Main vaada karti hoon Rano' Main rakhungi uss ka khayal'"

The man returned with the vaidhji. The vaidhji started examining Rano but her condition just worsened up.

"Suniye Ji..Aap bhi' Vaada kijiyein mujhse' Aap akele nahi ..sambhal... paayenge.. hamari Geet ko...' Aap dusri shaadi karenge naa'."

"Rano' Yeh kya bak rahi hon' Tum aisa soch bhi kaise sakhti hon'??"

Vaidhji realized it was too late to treat her, giving up he gave a sorry look to the man and spoke.

"Mohinderji' Bahot der ho gayyi hai' Maaf kijiyein par ab kuch nahi ho sakta'"

Rano's breath started becoming uneven. Her body was covered with sweat but she was adamant to get her promise.

"A..a..p' Vaa'da.. Ki'ji..yein' Laa..yen'ge' na.. uss'keliyein' ek nayi' Maa'"

Giving up on his wife's stubbornness Mohinder replied with his heavy tone.

"Haan' Rano Main vaada karta hoon'."

Rano smilingly yet with a gleam of sadness turned towards her right to see her apple of eyes, her 5yr old daughter Geetanjali clutching her doll close to her heart looking at them confusedly. Rano just kept looking at her drinking her figure in her eyes, which gave her a soothing effect, taking away her pain. Unknown to the people around that she had breathe her last'

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I know I have two more stories in hand but when it comes to Maaneet I can't stop myself putting them in different characters'

This FF I dedicate to all the girls who dream of having a special prince charming in their lives and also to those girls who have found their prince charming'

Waiting For Your Lovely Comments...

My 1st On-going SS~SUBAH AANE KO HAI...

My 2nd On-going SS~SUHAAGAN

Love Cia ❤️

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congrats for new ff
seems to be interesting
continue soon
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congrats on the new ff
emotional prologue
continue soon!!!!!!!!!!
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congratulation for new ff
will be waiting for update
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Congrats on new ff dear
interesting concept mainly title
waitmg for updates
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wow...
veri nice concept...waiting...😊
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congrts on new thread
awesome dear
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CONGRATS FOR THE NEW STORY
LOVED HE START
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congrats for new ff cia
nyc concept nd title tooo
waiting for updates
all the bst 😊

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