MG SS~SUBAH AANE KO HAI Pt12/Pg27, Note/Pg31 11Apr - Page 16

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Posted: 12 years ago
oh ho ho...maan toh abhi se hi latoo ho gaye geet par...dekhte hai kaise milte hai apne braceletwali se...

awesome n beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 12 years ago

P.S : preethia, Hanishadevi, ritzy09, chavvi16, gill123, geetsmile

Arrey jab CC khatam hoga toh KHUSHI ka kaam mein mann kaise lagega… 😆 Leavng jokes apart… This updt dedicated to you all for getting worried for Khushi… 😉

Part 12

I still exist..

Maan entered the room to see it empty.

"Lagta hai Dadi washroom gayyi hongi…??"

He moved towards the bed lifted the mug of coffee and moved it closer to his mouth.

"Ruko… Maan…. Nahi… Maan… Ruko… Beta…"

Dadi shouted out for him to stop but he had taken a sip of the coffee already. As soon as he took the sip, he smiled relishing its sweetness. But the taste sweet alarmed him and he looked at Dadi furiously.

"Yeh kya hai Dadi..?? Aapne chupkar mittha pina bhi shuru kar diya…??"

"Yeh hamari coffee nahi hai Maan Bete… Aap ko kaha tha rukne ke liyein par aapne pehle hi pee li… Woh aaj koi milne aaya tha humein ussi ki coffe thi…"

Maan instantly kept the mug on the table and looked at Dadi angrily.

"Aapki coffe kaha hai…?? Roz toh aapki coffee ka last sip mein leta hoon na..?? Aaj jaldi coffee kyon peeli aapne…??"

Dadi moved towards the bed and layed on it.

"Aaj medical check-up tha na Bete… Ek Dr. aayi thi, Dr kam aur bacchi jyada thi… Ussi ke saath coffee le li…"

"Accha.. toh kaisa tha aapka check-up sab normal haina…??"

"Haan sab normal hai Beta… Dr.Mallik ne itni acchi tarah se saare test kiyein… Aur pata hai jab hamara sugar level high dekha tab.."

Maan didn't let her speak.

"Kya aapka sugar high ho gaya..?? Ab toh main aapko kuch khane ke liyein launga hi nahi… Aur haan ab toh koi nurse rakhni padegi aap par nazar rakhne ke liyein yeh dekhne kii aap kya khati hai aur kya nahi…"

"Maan aap toh bilkul Dr.Mallik ki tarah baat kar rahein.. Nahi chahiyein humein koi nurse-vurse.. Dr.Mallik ne kaha hai ke woh do baar aayegi har week hamara check-up karne aur milne bhi…"

"Accha hai koi toh hoga joh mere alawa aap par nazar rakhega…"

"Yehin toh chance hai hamara Maan… Aap har waqt humein dhaatthe hain aur gussa karte hai par woh toh nahi karengi na…?? Aapse acchi toh Dr.Mallik hai…"

Maan was pissed off hearing about Dr.Mallik now. Here he sneaked from Meera's B'day Party only 2 meet Dadi and she is going ga-ga over so called Dr.Mallik.

"Dadi… Bas bahot hogaya… Aap ko yaad hai na aapka koi pota hai… Kab se Dr.Mallik ke goon gaaye ja rahi hai… I too exist pata hai na aapko…"

Dadi looked at him surprised and smiled naughtily pulling him next to her.

"Awww… Mera J pota… Aapko kaise bhool sakte hai hum… Aap ke siva aur kaun hai hamara iss duniya mein… Par dare you talk non-sense about my new poti Dr.Mallik… Barson baad aapki Maa ki chhavi nazar aayi hai humein unn mein…"

Maan sensed the longing in her words and spoke sadly.

"Dadi… Aapko kya lagta hai..?? Maa thik hongi na…"

"Pata nahi Beta..?? Shaayad ho ya phir… Hum apne aap ko kabhi maaf nahi kar paayenge Beta… Hum kuch nahi kar paayein unnhe dhoodne ke liyein…"

Maan wiped the tears from her eyes and nodded for a no.

"Aap apne aap ko kasoorwar mat dehraiyein… Mujhe pata hai Maa hai iss duniya mein, unnhe kuch nahi hoga… Galti aapki nahi thi Dadi.. Galti nahi balki gunaah kiya hai aapke uss aiyyaash Bete ne.."

"Maan… Dad hai woh aapke…"

"Uss insaan ko Dad kaise maan loon Dadi jissne meri Maa ko kissi anjaan jagah, anjaan logon ke bich, besahara chod diya… Kyon sirf issiliyein na taaki woh apni aiyyashi enjoy kar sake…?? Issmein faayda toh unnhein hua na… Major bank A/c unnke naam hai… KC chal rahi hai mere kaaran par aish woh kar rahein hai… Kaash aap mujhse woh vaada nahi karti… Toh aaj unnhe pata chalta mehnat ki kamaai kisse kehte hai…"

"Maan hum majboor hai Beta… Humne aapke Dada Ji ko vachan diya tha hum humare purkhon ki izzat yoon nilam nahi hone denge… Hamare paas aur koi raasta nahi tha… Aapke Dada Ji ne pehle hi KC ke Co-MD ki jagah Megha ko di thi… Aur Shekhar ne zor-zabardasthi se woh hadap li… Humein bilkul bhi andaaza nahi tha ke woh Megha ko hum se humesha ke liyein iss kadar juda kar denge… Aap hi batayien America itna bada shaher hai kaha dhundte hum unnhein… Unnka passport bhi Shekhar ne apne paas rakha tha… Aisen mein aapko lagta hai wahan rehna aasan hoga unnke liyein…??"

"Joh bhi hua ho Dadi par iss ke liyein main unnhe kabhi maaf nahi karunga… Aur main janta hoon Maa thik hongi…"

With that Maan left Dadi, wiping his tears. He looked up in the sky towards the twinkling sky.

"Dadi ne aas chod di hai… Par main janta hoon aap meri Maa ka khayaal rakhenge… Maa aap par bahot vishwas karti thi… Aap unnhein dhoka nahi denge…"

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Geet was worried with Khushi's behavior. As soon as she reached home she freshened up quickly and called Khushi.

"Hello Meoww… Main Geet..!!"

"Haan.. Bol… Kya hua..?? Sorry I was not feeling well issilyien left early…"

"Dekh yeh not feeling well ke bahane kissi aur ko dena… Bata kya hua..??"

"Tujhse toh kuch chipa bhi nahi sakthi… Sab baatein pata chal jaati hain tujhe… Woh kal Maasi se baat huyi…." (With tears in her eyes)

"Mujhe pata tha… Kuch aisa hi reason hoga… Kyon baat ki unnse…?? Call cut kar dena chahiyein tha na…"

"Pehle bahot acche se baat ki… Phir wahin purani baatein… Geet kya main sach mein usske laayak nahi…??" (Tears started spilling out now)

"Meow… Dekh ro mat… Main bhi ro dungi… (Khushi instantly wiped her tears bcz Geet ro padi toh usse chup karane usske ghar jaana padega) Maasi chahe job hi kahe… Tera woh toh tujhe hi pyaar karega na…. Saari phasad ki jhad main hoon na… Sacchi mein Meow main tum dono ke bich kabhi nahi aana chahthi thi…"

"Chui-Mui… Ab tu rona mat shuru kar dena… Aur haan tum humare dono ke bich aa chuki hai… (Geet felt ground slipping from her feet and more teras welled up her eyes) Lekin humari sabse acchi dost ban kar… (Geet took a sigh of relief and smiled) Hum tino ki dosti ke bich koi nahi aa sakta… Bas mujhe Maasi ka darr lagta hai…"

"Ek bar India aane don unnhe… Phir Maasi ko main handle kar lungi… Main bhi dekh lungi kii woh kaise mujhe unnki bahu banati hai… Dulha toh mujh mein interested hi nahi hai… Lol..!!!"

"Iss baat ki wajah se main zinda hoon Chui-Mui… Filhal ke liyein bas meri honewali Sasu-Maasi ko impress karane ke liyein thode tips de dena.. I mean tips to become a perfect Chui-Mui…"

"Dekh tu jaisi hai waisi acchi hai… Aur shaadi tu Sasu-Maasi se karnewali hai kya…?? Dulha toh tujh pe lattu hai… Aur kya chahiyein tujhe… Aur phirse rondu shakal mat banana… Pata hai I missed you so much today…"

"Dekh kaun bol rahi thi… 'Phirse rondu shakal mat banana …' Lol… Tujhe pata hai na… Main kissi ki baat dil par nahi leti par Maasi I can't ignore her… I don't know aisa kya dikhta hai tum mein joh mujh mein nahi hai…"

"OMG… Meow… Tum mujh se J kyon ho rahi hai… Dekh Bhai aur Dii ko bhi pata hai Maasi ke intentions of making me her Bahu… Par maine tumhare bare mein bata diya hai unnhe so tumhari bhasha mein… Chill Babes…!!!"

"Aur tumhari bhasha mein… Hum aapka yeh ehsaan kabhi nahi bhoolenge… (Spoke dramatically) Chalo sleep now kal milenge Sanjeevani mein…"

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Precap : Tears brimmed her eyes and her mind started taking her back to the horrible past she escaped from. She stood clutching her bag, when a guy roughly pulled the dupatta from her neck...😲

Love Cia 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the update
oh so maan's mom is alive and is lost hate his father how can he abandon her like this
now got the reason for kushi's behaviour
waiting for the next
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Posted: 12 years ago
Edited by Temporary99 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update

maan and dadi t00 g00d dear

I0ved hw she was saying abt dr maIIik and p00r maan

par precap
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
love maan nd dadi bonding
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice part...

Awesome...

Precap ke liye waiting...
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Posted: 12 years ago
SO THAT IS THE REASON KHUSHI WAS UPSET
BUT MAUSI SEEMS DUMB
SHE WANTS GEET AND NOT KHUSHI AS HER DIL

MAAN HAS A SAD PAST
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks for clarifying dear...
nice update...i specially loved Maan-Daadima convo..it was full of fun, J, care and lastly emotions...
Geet-Khushi - wellf rankly speakign mera emotional touch nahi hai is name se it was ok...just two friends talking...

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