MG SS~SUHAAGAN Part9/Pg45, Note/Pg51 11Apr

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Prologue

A handsome dashing young man dressed in a business attire stepped out of his shining black BMW. Four black uniformed well built bodied persons came on his either sides. He commanded them with his hands not to follow him. He started walking towards the huge Haveli infront of him and knocked on the door. A lady aged around 45yrs dressed in a salwar-kameez opened the door and scanned the stranger in front of her and spoke confused.

"Ji Aap Kaun?? Kaun chahiyein aapko..??"

The man bend towards the lady's feet as in taking her blessings and spoke happily.

"Rano Maa.. Pehchana nahi mujhe'?? Main aapka purana padosi Maan Khurana, Savitri Devi ka pota..."

The lady looked at him amused and spoke excitedly with tears in her eyes.

"Maan Puttar' Kitna bada ho gaya hai tu' Hayye Rabba kissi ki nazar naa lage tujhe'"

With that Rano took Maan inside and re-introduced him with all the Handa family members. Mohinder Papaji, Darji chatted with him, asked him about his Dadi, family business etc. Unknown to them was that his eyes were searching something or say someone in the Haveli. Getting impatient with that person's absence he took the initiative to ask them about HER...

"Papaji.. Kab se dekh raha hoon' Geet kahi dikhayi nahi de rahi hai'??"

As soon as he took her name he saw the changed expression on their faces. Darji's eyes had become red, furious with anger. He tried asking again but Darji cut him.

"Maan Puttar tu uss ladki ka naam bhi mat le iss ghar mein."

"Par Darji' Geet.."

Mohinder tried making him understand.

"Suna nahi tumne Puttar' Geet iss ghar ki koi nahi hai ab... 3 saal pehle hi mar chuki thi woh hamare liye' Hamari purakhon ki izzat, hamara aatma-sammaan sab mitthi mein mila diya tha ussne.."

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"Parivaar ki maiyno ki baat naa hi karo toh accha hai Maan Puttar.. Kaise apnayein usse jissne ek baar bhi hamare bare mein nahi socha, apne uss do kaudi ke aashiq ke saath bhagne se pehle.. Humare sanskaro ka behrehmi se gala ghot diya aur bhaag kar uss Gurvinder se shaadi kar li' Chi.. Mujhe toh bolne mein bhi sharam aa rahi hai' Aur uss ladki ne toh yeh sab kar dikhaya'"

Maan was shocked hearing this bitter reality from Darji. He felt his heart shatter into numerous pieces. Never could he imagine his Geet doing something like this. He just remembered her words she had said 5yrs ago, the day he left for his abroad studies.

"Aap jaa rahe hon lekin khaali haath nahi.. Aap ke saath mera dil bhi le jaa rahe hon.. Jaldi laut aayiega' Main aapka intezaar karungi'"

Looking outside the window he spoke determingly.

"Meri GEET kabhi mujhe dhoka nahi degi' I knw dat..TUM SIRF MERI HON GEET.. Iss duniya mein koi bhi.. Koi bhi tumhe mujhse juda nahi kar saktha.. Naa TUM' Naa tumhara woh PATI.."

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Another SS friends the concept just came into my mind and couldn't stop putting it here..😳

Tell me what you all feel about it..😕


My 1st On-going Maaneet SS~SUBAH AANE KO HAI...

My 3rd On-going Maaneet FF-DEKHA EK KHWAAB..!!!


Love Cia ❤️

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CiaMaaneet thumbnail
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Congratz on new ss
interesting cncept
i hope wo sab sach na ho sirf galat faimi ho
oh no!geet ke pati sirf maan wo toh maan ki geet hai na
no1 can seperate them as maan said
cnt sn n
pm me when u update
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Congrats on the new SS
please update soon

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awessome concept
pm me after updating
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nice one dear do cont soon...
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awesome prologues dear...waiting eagerly for story to unfold...
i just hope her parents were wrong and she is probably somewhere alone still waiting for her Maan...
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awesome start😊
continue soon

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congrats for new ss i loved both ss
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interesting prologue waiting how the story unfold it's self

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