MG SS~SUBAH AANE KO HAI Pt12/Pg27, Note/Pg31 11Apr - Page 14

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome updates
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Part 11

The Old Age Home

The next morning Armaan and Geet reached the place where the camp was supposed to be held. Geet met with Khushi near the parking, who was not in her usual self today. Geet tried asking her aakhir baat kya hai but she faked about her not feeling well. Geet decided ek baar camp khatam hone dein phir dekhti hoon kaise nahi batati mujhe. Both moved towards the entrance and saw the huge board entitled 'Sahara Vrudha-Ashram'. All the interns had gathered in the lawn in front of the old-age home. Armaan being the incharge first took their attendance, divided them into two groups and then gave them necessary instructions.

"Good Morning Interns!! This place is divided into two sections. The group under supervision of Dr.Atul will work in the left partition which will include room nos 1-50 and the group under supervision of Dr.Sapna will work in the right partition which include the remaining rooms from 51-100. Before you all move to your assigned sections 1st we will have a small parayer service with the people staying here."

After the short prayer service all moved towards their assigned sections. Luckily and on Armaan's strict warning Geet was paired with Khushi. Both were allotted room nos 91,92 and 93 by Dr.Sapna. Geet and Khushi examined the people. They took their ECG scan, blood test, monitored their glucose, cholesterol levels and also prescribed them necessary medicines. Khushi looked seriously gloomy and depressed. Though she was present physically and attended the patients with care and concern but she wasn't present there mentally. Geet felt like giving her some space so told her to start examining people in the other room. The people were really co-operative and loving, God knows why their children felt them as a burden and sent them here. Sometimes in between Armaan also came to check on them. Geet had finished room nos. 91 and 92 and thought that Khushi would have finished with the other room. It was nearing lunch time and she was also feeling hungry. Geet was moving back to the lawn area when she heard a sound of a metal thing being dropped. It came from room no. 93. She hurried towards it and peeped inside to see an old lady aged around 75yrs who was coughing very badly. She was trying to reach the glass of water but couldn't as the cough had turned severe. Geet instantly ran towards her and gave her a glass of water and patted her back, soothing her cough. After she had it and was feeling normal Geet made her comfortable on the bed rest.

"Aap thik hai na..?? R u getting more cough…??"

"Nahi beta… Woh thoda gala sukh gaya tha issiliyein…"

"Par aisa lag raha hai ke aapne subah se kuch nahi khaya…??"

"Haan Beta… Aaj woh medical camp ke bacche aanewale thein na… Toh bas hamara fasting blood sugar check karwana tha issiliyein kuch khaya nahi…"

"Kya subah se yahaan par koi Dr nahi aaya..?? " (Spoke shockingly and getting worried)

"Nahi toh Beta… Hum toh kab se raah dekh rahe hai…"

Geet self thought OMG isska matlab Khushi yahaan aayi hi nahi toh woh gayyi kaha..?? Then looking at the lady she self thought par innko undekha kaise chhod gayyi.. Bechari ne kuch khaya bhi nahi.. I need to examine her first aur phir jaldi se lunch ka intezaam karti hoon.

"Aap bas rukhiyein main abhi aati hoon.."

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Geet went out and brought her medical kit which had all necessary equipments and medicines.

"Main Dr.Mallik hoon Sanjeevani se.. Medical camp humne hi organize kiya hai… Sorry meri colleague attend karnewali thi aapko pata nahi kaha chali gayyi…"

"Koi baat nahi Bete… Aap kar dena mera check-up.."

Geet examined her medical history, took her blood sample and did the necessary tests. As the test was done she brought lunch for the lady. As the lady was having her lunch Geet looked at her furiously and the lady looked at her angered face. She forgot what was called swallowing the food actually.

"Lagta hai aapko mittha khaane ka bada shauk hai na…??"

The lady wanted to clarify but Geet didn't let her talk.

"Aap roz check-up nahi karengi isska yeh matlab nahi kii humein pata nahi chalega… Aap ka sugar itna high hai uppar se aap khana thik se time par nahi khayengi aur woh bhi mittha khayengi toh kaisa chalega…??"

The lady looked at Geet remembering her daughter-in-law. Her tears started flowing down the cheek and Geet came back to her Chui-Mui form.

"Sorry Sorry..!!! I nvr wanted to shout at you… Main bas aapki tabiyat ko lekar tensed ho gayyi thi…."

With that she also started shedding her precious pearls. The lady wiped her tears firstly.

"Aap ko kisne Dr banaya…?? Aap toh andar se itni naram hai… Patients ko kaise dekhengi phir…??"

Geet looked at the lady with her teary eyes and pouted again.

"Main ek acchi Dr hoon, bas kissi ko rota nahi dekh sakthi… Galti aapki hai.. Na aap apni health ko ignore karthi aur na main aapko daatthi, phir aap rone lagi aur mujhe bhi rula diya…."

"Thik hai Beta… Sorry iss buddhi Dadi ko maaf kar dijiyein… Ab se hum apni sehat ka pura khayal rakhenge par ek sharth hai hamari…"

Geet got happy listening to her par yeh sharth kyon..???

"Aap humein milne aayengi na dobara…??"

"Issmein sharth ki kya baat hai..?? Main ab se aapko aisen undekha nahi chod sakthi… Kya pata aap phir se koi aur bahane bana logi… Toh m not leaving you alone from now on… Aapse toh week mein do baar toh milna pakka…"

"Tum aisen kaise ho Beta…?? Lagta hai Maa-Baap ki eklauti hon…"

"Maa-Papa ki eklauthi hoon par woh ab nahi hai mere paas (Spoke sadly) Lekin Bhai ki sabse chahethi hoon… Waise aap yahaan akeli hai, aapko milne koi toh aata hoga…??"

"Haina… Hamare pote hai… Har roz aate hai humse milne aaj nahi aayega kissi dost ka janam-din hai na issiliyein…"

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Both chatted as if they knew each other from months. Geet also had a sip of coffee with her before leaving. The camp was successful and Sanjeevani staff and doctors were praised for their gesture. Every one was gone and Geet was left alone waiting for Armaan who was having a brief talk with the incharge. Khushi had left quite early faking about not feeling well but Geet very well knew something was really wrong with her. After Armaan was done both moved towards their car and settled in when Armaan remembered he forgot the attendace file in the lawn.

"Bhai.. Aap rukhiyein main abhi lekar aathi hoon…"

"Jaldi aana…"

Maan managed to sneak from Meera's party all thanks to Yash. As he wanted some privacy and Maan too wanted to come out from there. He couldn't miss meeting his Dadi at all. He parked his bike outside the old-age home and entered inside giving a smile to the security guard. He was going to enter inside when he saw HIS braceletwali again. Unlike the other days he had seen her leaving her hair but today she had tied them in a braid. He spoke involuntarily.

"I like them open…" 😳

She was looking confused this time, again something new he got to see and when she found the thing perhaps a file she smiled broadly, something again he was getting to see after her worried and laughing expressions. She moved towards the exit and then he remembered Maan tujhe bracelet lautana hai. He ran towards her but she had exited soon. He ran towards the parking to see her sitting in a car and the car moved away.

"Shit… Maan yeh kya yaar..!!! You missed her again… Pata nahi usse dekhte hi tu kaha kho jata hai… Sach mein… Yeh ladki mujhe ek din pagal kar degi.." (Cia missed this line... I hope u'l too..)

He moved his fingers through his hair and moved inside to meet his Dadi. On entering he moved towards the left and went inside room no. 93.

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Precap : He moved towards the bed lifted the mug of coffee and moved it closer to his mouth.

"Ruko… Maan…. Nahi… Maan… Ruko… Beta…" 😲

Dadi shouted out for him to stop but he had already taken a sip of the coffee. 😳

Plz Do like n comment…

Love Cia 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice part
bahot wait karaya yaar
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesme update as always buddy
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the update
so its maan's dm
y kushi was acting like that

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Posted: 12 years ago
GEET WAS SO CARING TOWARDS DADI
BOTH ARE ALIKE - START CRYING WITHOUT REASON
BUT WHY IS DADI IN OLD AGE HOME AND NOT WITH MAAN
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow cia very nice...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
geet is such a sweet angel yaar..what happen to kushi yaar...😕😕😕wonderful update..pls cont soon..waiting next part...

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