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Cynthia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: sdlife19
nice update me stiII feeIing s0rry f0r geet

Thanks 4 d comment..It means a lot for me... I got inspiration frm your writings...😃

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Cynthia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: anshra
wow
loved it
awesome

Getting a comment of appreciation from you is like a blessing to a shishya frm his guru...😊

Thanks 4 d comment... It means a lot...😃

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anky_s

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

very excruciating part !!

cnt. soon

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LadyArwen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

beautiful story... and a very brave Geet... keep it up...

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ritzy09

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Cia - bahut Bahut gussa hoon main tumse...how can you...I never expected this from you

why do you call me Di...haan...when you did not even bother to PM me when you started a FF...after 5 parts I got a PM from you...

well tumne PM nahi kiya but I will give comment on each chapter...

Chap1 - wow loved the starting...tension was palpable. I loved the authentic Haryanvi language you used...it just gives a different feel...

Thank God she ran into Armaan and Ridz who see Piya in her...

chap2 - Poor soul...her parents died and already she became bojh for the relatives...khud ki ek beti ek behen hote hue bhi insaan itna gir sakta hai...yeh nahi socha ki kal agar woh mar gaye toh unki beti ka kya hoga...chi...and naive Geet she still beliebves in goodness of people

Chap 3 - oh dear...they sold her to a family in Haryana...so scared for her...off course Netra will not help her

Chap 4 - actually female fetocide is so high in Punjab and Haryana that it is a very real problem which you have highlighted here...and worse is that instead of starting to respect they still treat women as objects having no respect even for their mothers... a very sad fact. They grow up seeing their fathers abusing thier mothers and believeing the role of women as jsut to fulfil thier lust and give birth to heirs...

Chap 5 - She was very lucky to escape in true sense and find a brother like Armaan...

Awesome start Cia and even though I am still a little angry, I am happy that you decided to write. You are a very good writer and I loved the way you have started this story. It is very gripping and u bring out right emotions making it a very good read...

waiitng to read some more very soon...

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Binish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

superb yaar.. geet went through sooo much but thank god that devil didnt go all the way.. cont soon hun

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Cynthia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: ritzy09
Cia - bahut Bahut gussa hoon main tumse...how can you...I never expected this from you

why do you call me Di...haan...when you did not even bother to PM me when you started a FF...after 5 parts I got a PM from you...

well tumne PM nahi kiya but I will give comment on each chapter...

Chap1 - wow loved the starting...tension was palpable. I loved the authentic Haryanvi language you used...it just gives a different feel...

Thank God she ran into Armaan and Ridz who see Piya in her...

chap2 - Poor soul...her parents died and already she became bojh for the relatives...khud ki ek beti ek behen hote hue bhi insaan itna gir sakta hai...yeh nahi socha ki kal agar woh mar gaye toh unki beti ka kya hoga...chi...and naive Geet she still beliebves in goodness of people

Chap 3 - oh dear...they sold her to a family in Haryana...so scared for her...off course Netra will not help her

Chap 4 - actually female fetocide is so high in Punjab and Haryana that it is a very real problem which you have highlighted here...and worse is that instead of starting to respect they still treat women as objects having no respect even for their mothers... a very sad fact. They grow up seeing their fathers abusing thier mothers and believeing the role of women as jsut to fulfil thier lust and give birth to heirs...

Chap 5 - She was very lucky to escape in true sense and find a brother like Armaan...

Awesome start Cia and even though I am still a little angry, I am happy that you decided to write. You are a very good writer and I loved the way you have started this story. It is very gripping and u bring out right emotions making it a very good read...

waiitng to read some more very soon...

Dii aapne toh pehle mujhe dara diya...

I felt tears brimming my eyes 4 havng hurt you...

Sacchi mein (holding my throat) 1st of all I was so scared to put up dis FF...

Self-confidence bahot kam tha aur u could se tha hi nahi...

I had also made up my mind k I'l PM all the buddies in my list

Lekin some1 came up vd the thrd statng to stop showng up r*** scenes, 18+ contents and dark stories unknwngly pollutng innocent minds... (No grudges vd dat person, she is right in her place)

In don reasons ki wajah se I felt pata nahi kisi ko pasand aayega bhi ya nahi...

Par hua ulta as soon as posted the 18+ part I got more likes..

Issilye I thought of PMng all the buddies...

Plz Dii... main kaan pakadng plz mujhe maaf kar don...

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mahimaneet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

wow i liked d first look of this story...

have bookmarked it...

will read it n comment for sure...

god bless😊

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ritzy09

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: CiaMaaneet

Dii aapne toh pehle mujhe dara diya...

I felt tears brimming my eyes 4 havng hurt you...

Sacchi mein (holding my throat) 1st of all I was so scared to put up dis FF...

Self-confidence bahot kam tha aur u could se tha hi nahi...

I had also made up my mind k I'l PM all the buddies in my list

Lekin some1 came up vd the thrd statng to stop showng up r*** scenes, 18+ contents and dark stories unknwngly pollutng innocent minds... (No grudges vd dat person, she is right in her place)

In don reasons ki wajah se I felt pata nahi kisi ko pasand aayega bhi ya nahi...

Par hua ulta as soon as posted the 18+ part I got more likes..

Issilye I thought of PMng all the buddies...

Plz Dii... main kaan pakadng plz mujhe maaf kar don...

Maafi maan leti hoon baby...lekin how can you have such low self confidence.

You have written much better than many and it is a very gripping story.

Also that post was abt showing too much details unnecessary or showing Maan in bad light. I think one should just be a little realisitc and do as the story demands. Too much of anything is bad na...

This story has all the right elements. It is not about being dark or Rape or anything else. It has a strong base...a story to tell and right balance of emotions.

You are doing a fabulous job and I love this story.

Aage se aisa kabhi mat karna...

koi doubt hai toh puch sakti ho but we all are friends here and to support each other...no one is a proffesional writer and it is our love and expression of maneet and their magic...

so enjoy writing and give the next update soon...