an AR experiment [DMG]

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pg 18 - Elmer and Rouge I

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1268898/an-ar-experiment-dmg

pg 20 - Elmer and Rouge II

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1268898&TPN= 20

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hey aria,

That was a great oneshot.

I was so confused with the beggning about it until i realized that it was an Act. Good one...Actually it reminded me of a presentation-cum-act which I had visited just a few days back..There was a Water as a Prop for them and Many scenes were coincided with this one here...from the first and some more paras.

My word, Aria... I chanced upon this, and thank my stars I did. I love the way it's been written, so I think from the story, is it alright to assume that it's a one shot. For some odd reason, while reading this it was sort of reminding me of Oliver twist/ Shakespearean plays. I know it sounds odd to add the likes of Charles Dickens and Shakespeare together, but I have no idea why that came in my mind whilst reading it, I guess may be there was something in the way you had written it. I felt as if I was reading/watching an old English play.

Aria, in simple words this was absolutely beautiful, I loved loved it. I for one prefer to read stories to see how a writer weaves the story in their words and I think the way you write is mesmerising. I was wishing that this piece of writing hadn't ended. I love the way you play with words; it adds a certain charm and gives life to the story and the characters.

I prefer reading one shots, I think it's because impulsive thoughts turn out better than planned stories. Also I think one shots leave a lot to ones imagination. So I think you can safely assume that you will be seeing me on this post more often. Looking forward to reading more such wonderful writings.

Aria; I apologise I haven't been able to write on Pablo's, I manage to write my comment and then my stupid laptop decided to give up on me, and I manage to lose everything I had written sadly. So my apology, you might have to endure a bit longer with me. I am not the best of person, when it comes to commenting. Sorry.

Cheers,

Huma

PS: I love your sig, love the reds and blue. Won't comment much on it, will mention it in my Pablo's comment soonish..🤔

hey!!

that was good one yaar..

first i was really confused ....i read the first few para ttwise.....but then when i conti..i got that was an act wow yaar,,,,its really diffrent....

what an discription baout human nature ....that was so true now a days...

and at last ......fianlly there were an AR...really liked it....