an AR experiment [DMG] - Page 13

Originally posted by: missypatel

Devil with Ice maiden...how unusually classy :P i visualized all of it..befitting as it was...! i like! it is an unusual combination but you know what made it more tempting in my point of view, they are both wearing masks- so in reality they could be perfectly normal human beings...errr...somehow that sounded a lot different in my head!!

Be back after reading the continued part..:)

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Oooohhh!! Devil with dimples....thats a rarity in itself...or maybe just my mind set that's shaking heavily...!
It makes me think...of many such dreams i must have had with known and stranger disguises...a desire to be with the someone with a caliber of being different from the rest in the eyes of the beholder only...a want so strong...that it seems real...and in those incredible times...they are..! hmm..much interesting...i liked this one tons...yes! sigh! don't we all...thank you!! and i know you really enjoyed it when i see poems..


A mirror it is that reflects us
While in one, i miss seeing you
By my side, you stand real
Yet to the world you be unseen.

It is me, i take, the sold holder
there could be just, of miracles
ever touched, one known to all.

I seek pleasure, the same
as you convey, due me
Strangely, my world blurs
black and white, wiz their
wand, them like you
distinct masked strangers...

well...another of my reaction i guess you can say! :)

cheers,

nijaL

ps: would love to read your response to my request on me 2 u game ...pretty please! 😍
those words...are going you knw where...masked strangers...and mirrors that don't reflect all....Thank you nij!...

Originally posted by: spln

i was thinking reading each word of para one, why the deju vu was much too familiar to be simply deja vu... and i knew when u said, mask upon masks later... when he smiled his dimples ... have u read gone with the wind? it reminded me of the time he bids for her, and her her alone over and over and she goes dancing... with her DEVIL indeed, giving in each time... with all that looms as a consequence indeed!!! :) no sacrifice of course, as neither was ridhima's here, lol! ... ps: i did wonder, and almost really did not care about reading the RM bit... and meant to ask u why it was there???

aite! as for ur speed, aren't enough people telling u already,???!!!

cheers,
nj

Originally posted by: SunainaTM007

heyyyyyy aria !! :D

oooohh.. the charm soo doesnt fail... the man in disguise is sooo intriguing... the fact that he was not reflected in the mirror gave me the chills... the description of their perfectly syncronised dance was beautifully penned...so may be its really the devil or just the crooked mirror😉

and then she meeting up with her friends and the moment then was nice... and then her roaming aimlessly at the ball thinking abt the various masks one wears during that evening... life, is sometimes full of masked people.. its very difficult to see the real self at one glance... that part was really very beautiful !!.. aptly described our relationship with strangers in life ;) glad you saw that...yup...i agree..life is sometimes full of masked people...its very hard to see the real people...

and then him again... his promise of not disappearing was soo touching... her inner self just wanting to enjoy the moment and not worry abt anything... n then their moment again was really wonderfully penned !! :) the last line... And her heart stopped just as it had years ago' i dont know why, i really liked this one... it was really nice !!..well...it was supposed to be the obvious link to illusions...she knew it was him at that moment...but does he? or for that matter has he even noticed her?

a beautifull penned story aria !!.. loved all the parts ( counting from illusion )... this was a very sweet short tale with a hint of mystery, just how i like it !!... awesome girl !! :D Thank you Sunaina.

awaiting more such stories from u ...

continue sooooooooooon :D

n thanks for the pm ! :) no problemo...

Originally posted by: -Edelweiss-

Two updates back to back.. wow, I am impressed..Christmas treat for us.

I am reserving for now..I'll be back tonight. Promise hai 😎
I read this while I was sitting in my car awaiting my friends to come from their shopping spree, and after I finished reading the second part oops or should I say the last in the trilogy, so yes as I was saying that I was so lost that I didn't even realise when my mates came in and scared the creep out of me. So yea coming to the devils charm, that it definetly was..and that too far more than the saints. The writing flowed easily, and so did the dialogue between the two. In most of your writing specifically these shots there is a lot of Venice, Italy references..any particular reason? Even in this one, there were the Venetian masks; Dottore peste for instance. I've been meaning to ask this for a long time, but I always seem to forget. are you serious? about you in the car..? i'm truly flattered. well well..trust you to notice things that no one else mentions...why venice...well..apart from the first MMM, every other story has been based in Venice...the narrow lanes..or the plazas...or the masquerade ball..everything screams venice. i personally think venice is truly a romantic city....may be its that allure of masks and temptation of getting lost in those narrow lanes..in the sea of people...that suits these one shots..

Ice maiden with the devil; cold with hot..the line below says alot..
one beamed with mischief while the other stared back like a lifeless porcelain doll, cold and ruthless. aha! yes indeed...one of my favorite lines from the

Creepy as it may seem I really liked the idea of him being the devil himself..who says devils are bad, they only know how to charm, and aren't humans more at fault for falling for their charm leading them to commit cardinal sins..which eventually the devil gets blamed for.. Humans are like onions, layers upon layers; masks upon masks..the devil or so we say is atleast straight forward.. finally I would just say that there is a devil inside all of us and hence its all an illusion in the end, the man in question in here was all an illusion to begin with..mind me, I am in one of those weird moods right now. no it makes sense. it begins with an illusion and ends in a spark...i did think about the idea of making him the real devil..if he is not already...its very tempting....may be i will explore me on that.😉

"the charm never fails'" And with that he smiled flashing his dimples for the first time that evening. And her heart stopped just as it had years ago'

As I read these lines, I remembered Illusion and remembered you mentioning that you were planning to write another part. And eventually it all fell in to place..so were these two parts a preconceived plan when you had written Illusion or a sudden direction that you decided to take? no these two parts were not preconceived when i wrote illusion but i have mentioned that there would be more parts to follow illusion...the only preconceived idea when i posted illusion was that they would meet again...and again..

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Thank you
A

Originally posted by: olive_green

Originally posted by: aish_punk

hey aria..nice parts..sorry for the late comment..

She was sitting there all alone..bcuz he did'nt turn up..whoever he was supposed to be..but she was asked by 4 men to a dance..she was literally charmed by the 4th guys eyes..aww!..n she took it upon herself to accept his proposal..

n then they went in..and danced..n she found herself more n more attracted to him..but when she saw her reflection..she did'nt see his!..that is weird now..n then he left suddenly too..

Muskaan came there too with Rahul..n she was concerned about her..but she let RM dance..

she was about to leave..but he stopped her again..he promised not to disappear this time..lets see if he sticks to it..n she agreed to dance wid him..she just could'nt resist!

update soon

-aish