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Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#161

Hey Aria

I reead this thread in one go...except the first piece which I had read earlier. And I am glad that I read it this way, with the parts linked together.

The pieces in this thread a so very...different. They have a dreamy yet bitter edge about them as though they are something more solid than smoke or clouds but may just disappear in a puff! Okay this was a bit weird.

Search was nice... The dream part, ofcourse was very well put.

and Lost and Found was so very very romantic. Its the kind of thing that makes you grin for a long time ;)

As for illusion, it was pretty mesmerizing, you may call it. Small encounters beaded into wonderful words. Great work!!

Devil's waltz was charming, as you intended it to be. Smart wrods never fail to impress, do they?

The spark is my favorite with disappearing Devils and all. Man, why is the Devil so attractive? like Forbidden fruit.

Elmer and Rouge I was sad... the pain of disappointment and the straneg joy of reunion...everything pieced really well

And it was good to see the second part of course. Sometimes I wonder why dont u make a full fledged fic of it, but then even this has its own charm.

beautiful work

and apologies for the very very late comment

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Escapist

@Escapist

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#162

Aria,

I not much of an AR fan..but reading Sookie has got me hooked to them but then again its just the selected ones that I read and the ones I read I try to take time out and drop a comment! After all its the writing that matters and not the couple its based on to some extent...This one was suggested to me by a friend and I'm glad she did.

The whole bunch of chapters was simply mystical they had an aura around them that you usually don't find in stories it was as good as living and roaming the streets of Rome knowing the unknown. There was a touch of reality and a bite of dream in all of them and that kept me grounded whilst reading them. Devil's Waltz was too alluring and dark the mystery made it sound sensually sinful at least to me! Then again the romance in any of them didn't go unnoticed though it was not too vague and subtle but then that kept it alive all through the end !

It was a pleasure reading you and I intend on reading more of your works, seen the length of some and realized I need to be free to read them..coz I just don't like reading I like to get into it !! :)

Cheers,
Fatima

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Tahmina Aliya Begum

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Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#163

I really like how you write, it suits the theme of the writing. in this case, theres the feeling of melancholy in the writing and it flows so nicely.

Very interesting so far. please continue Aria