an AR experiment [DMG] - Page 2

Originally posted by: ammy-ridz

hey aria,

That was a great oneshot.

I was so confused with the beggning about it until i realized that it was an Act. Good one...Actually it reminded me of a presentation-cum-act which I had visited just a few days back..There was a Water as a Prop for them and Many scenes were coincided with this one here...from the first and some more paras.

But I had to read this twice as the first time..I couldn't enjoy the first para..cauz i was so confused whom to think the person was?..Armaan or Riddhima...But still I loveddd it .

Will love to read more of them.

Thanx.

Originally posted by: spln

aha! aria, its one of those few pieces i must have read, wherein not the exact course of events or the story being told takes me half as much as the words do... kudos girl!! that was a pro at work with the words and phrases which fell into place... they made me come up with a whole new range of 'eewwish' expressions i believe, the expressions u cant avoid at such sites even when a part of ur mind toys with ur conscious and asks u if ur being just that one thing u were made: human...

*claps* :D liked it tons, in a very different way then im accustomed to liking AR!

ps: SNOW, WINDY CITY... dude! u can't mean chicago??? if u do oh hell hell hell good lord!!! buzz me, whenever! ..

hey aria sweety amzing one shot reallyyy liked, seriously i felt it had some msg, that related to me, i don't know but i felt that way!!!!!!!😕. To gudddddd, u have soo much talent

-Sanam-

Originally posted by: *Huma*

My word, Aria... I chanced upon this, and thank my stars I did. I love the way it's been written, so I think from the story, is it alright to assume that it's a one shot. For some odd reason, while reading this it was sort of reminding me of Oliver twist/ Shakespearean plays. I know it sounds odd to add the likes of Charles Dickens and Shakespeare together, but I have no idea why that came in my mind whilst reading it, I guess may be there was something in the way you had written it. I felt as if I was reading/watching an old English play.

Aria, in simple words this was absolutely beautiful, I loved loved it. I for one prefer to read stories to see how a writer weaves the story in their words and I think the way you write is mesmerising. I was wishing that this piece of writing hadn't ended. I love the way you play with words; it adds a certain charm and gives life to the story and the characters.

I prefer reading one shots, I think it's because impulsive thoughts turn out better than planned stories. Also I think one shots leave a lot to ones imagination. So I think you can safely assume that you will be seeing me on this post more often. Looking forward to reading more such wonderful writings.

Aria; I apologise I haven't been able to write on Pablo's, I manage to write my comment and then my stupid laptop decided to give up on me, and I manage to lose everything I had written sadly. So my apology, you might have to endure a bit longer with me. I am not the best of person, when it comes to commenting. Sorry.

Before I forget to mention, I have a favourite line in here; "For even a mad man thinks the world is mad" I love the irony behind that line. Aria, can I say again I love your writing, so indirectly I love you. Lol.😆

Cheers,

Huma

PS: I love your sig, love the reds and blue. Won't comment much on it, will mention it in my Pablo's comment soonish..🤔

Originally posted by: Robin_M

very interesting aria...i was confused at first, felt really sorry for armaan! but wow that was good! really well written! looking forward to more of your work :)

Originally posted by: Enigma_Swati

*Reserved* =)

Will come back soon!

*Edited*

First you gotta tell me one thing... what was this beautifully written piece? Was it a one shot, a mini story or a full fledged one? I am confused really... But hey! I just loved what I read. Very different from the rest, and very nicely written... I LOVED it totally! And the title is even better... Mad-Man-Mocking! Too good to be true...

Thanks for writing this Aria.. Keep writing more, whatever it is. Will surely pop in and read!

love you!
Swatzz

Originally posted by: dipu

hey!!

that was good one yaar..

first i was really confused ....i read the first few para ttwise.....but then when i conti..i got that was an act wow yaar,,,,its really diffrent....

what an discription baout human nature ....that was so true now a days...

and at last ......fianlly there were an AR...really liked it....

Originally posted by: Prasanthi

Aria!!! Brilliantly written one honey!! Liked it loads and heaps!!

Okay, collection of stories...ummm... interesting han! Please continue soon. Love to read more from your pen :D.