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@-Aria-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: hinanaziri
hey aria,

that was one brilliant pice of writing
loved the writing ,language and the set up
always have :)

cheers and reading more wud be a delight

luv
Hina

Thank you for 'finally' showing up😆 glad to know you enjoyed this one shot. will try to post more here..soon😊

aria

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: aish_punk
hey aria..nice _______?!..u decide..=P

So Armaan was an actor?!..i really thought that he was dying in the streets with no1 to help and all..but that was pretty touchin..

n aww..AR aldready dating?..thats smtn kewl..

okay, if ure gonna update plzz PM me!

-aish

thanks for commenting aish...and care to help me fill up the blanks..i was never too good with that in school😆.. glad to know that you enjoyed readng the ff. and yes this is a one shot..so no more updates on MMM but hopefully..i will have more one shots here..will add you to the pm list...

aria

Edited by olive_green - 15 years ago

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: SunainaTM007
heyyy aria...!!!

that was an amazing one hun...

the whole act was described soooo realisticallly... the emotions, the reactions were penned sooo well...

it was a completely new concept and i loved it loads...

*claps* awesome hun :)

brilliant girl !!..awaiting more such wonderful stories from ur collection :D

thanks sunaina..for all the nice things you just said😳😆..thrilled to know you enjoyed this one off unusual AR ff. will try to add more to this thread soon..

aria

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: bheegi
Great writing Aria! Loads of talent on this forum for sure

I couldn't help noticing this line and felt an uncanny resemblance to current affairs in 'our madman's' life:

the world that watches but does not care to lift a falling man.

I could see young tiny girls laughing at my expense, for them it was sheer fun belying the pain in my back.

Is that what inspired u to post this one???

"am i dreaming?..are you really here??😲 lol...good to see you here and hear from you.. thank you for commenting ..now that you pointed that out....there seems to be some uncanny parallell here!.but no i did not post this with the current affairs of'our madman's life' in mind.. just a really bizzare coincidence...really bizzare when you read the last line you highlighted in your comment..

aria

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pickytg

@pickytg

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Posted: 15 years ago

#25

heya! :)

Saw your post yesterday and right away scrolled down to read your ps (nj dislikes it but i am such a sucker for that habit) and read the windy city :D rest....is history!

I skimmed through the post...i was ticked then by something i don't recall...and decided to leave it at that. I got back to it now, something made me i guess :P

heres something...i scribbled...cause i don't think i can respond to it any other way (remember? i hate commenting when i feel am not saying enough :S)

Laughter, the challenge I chanced upon so well

Tears, the result that surged me with such warmth

While I lay, "the mad man" ha!, not one, but all spoke

Blossoming in the depth of sorrows, my world; I called..

Truth however, the only reality that we build on

Mad man, once when it happened, smiled feeling loved.

I am not sure of my reaction to the post....but this happened to its will....whatever you make of it...must be what's in my head 🤔

cheers!

nijaL

ps: i am certain i didn't read ALL of it the 2nd time either...ahh!

Edited by missypatel - 15 years ago

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krazyboutkaran

@krazyboutkaran

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Posted: 15 years ago

#26

heyyyy!!....dis ff sounds gud...!!
cont soon.....
loadza luv,
urvi

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suzanne

@suzzane14

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Posted: 15 years ago

#27

omg..its awesome...for a second i thought all was happening to him..but as i read further i came to knw he was acting....and in the end the sweet moment just made me smile..!!! it was brilliant ..keep writin

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Suvarna

@Suvarna....

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Posted: 15 years ago

#28

Wow ... now thats how browsing thru forum helps :)) Start is great. So Armaan's an actor here. He is all into arts - painting, acting. Cool one. And for change, Riddhima is already with him.

Well, the scene you have elaborated - sort of touched my heart. In this fast life, guess all of us are somewhat losing on being humans. Rather becoming robotic. Concept in this part was good.

A request, please PM me whenever u update this next. I don't promise to always respond back with a comment (I know am being selfish here), but will surely hit on 'Like' button and read your updates.

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-Edelweiss-

@-Edelweiss-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#29

I just read my comment again, and realised I should have told you my reasoning for mentioning the play part. I don't know what it was in your writing, but as I read it, it kind of reminded me of an amatuer play that I watched a while ago...It had a little soliloquy, which was some what similar to this. I think the way it was written was a give away, that it was in matter of fact an act being performed.

The mention of Shakespeare came coz I remember watching a play of his, and the writing reminded me of that..

Eeekk.. I know I should be writing on Pablo's...woopsie..😆 I will do it, I will..I will... promise😃

Intezaar ka phal meetha hota hai..maine soona hai..😆

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: missypatel

heya! :)

Saw your post yesterday and right away scrolled down to read your ps (nj dislikes it but i am such a sucker for that habit) and read the windy city :D rest....is history!

I skimmed through the post...i was ticked then by something i don't recall...and decided to leave it at that. I got back to it now, something made me i guess :P

heres something...i scribbled...cause i don't think i can respond to it any other way (remember? i hate commenting when i feel am not saying enough :S)

Laughter, the challenge I chanced upon so well

Tears, the result that surged me with such warmth

While I lay, "the mad man" ha!, not one, but all spoke

Blossoming in the depth of sorrows, my world; I called..

Truth however, the only reality that we build on

Mad man, once when it happened, smiled feeling loved.

I am not sure of my reaction to the post....but this happened to its will....whatever you make of it...must be what's in my head 🤔

cheers!

nijaL

ps: i am certain i didn't read ALL of it the 2nd time either...ahh!

Hi nijaL that was soulful, beautiful reply...the way I perceived it..may be it was diff the way you intended it to be...did that sound right? but then it wouldnt make sense if it wasnt..anyhow..the last part of the above reply was me talking to myself...the doubt because you say 'ticked' - source of my confusion..in general though i am surprised that MMM has generated the responses that it has

if its fine with you can i add that to the end of the MMM post..crediting you of course...

i am left to ponder, what sort of comment (read reaction) i would get if you were to read the whole thing for once...

and yes the rest is history...and its the 15th today..somethings are just too crazy...

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