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Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: Prasanthi
Reserving my space for now and promise to be back soon Aria. Sorry for the delay. :)

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A very nice read Aria. The charm, the perfect dance, dissappearance, realization, desperation, re-union. History repeats. Awesome!

Thanks Prasanthi. Yes, at least they have happy endings in our stories.😊

Aria

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: Riddss
heyyy dear,
nice FF
continue soon

love
Riddss

Thank you Riddss, haven't written for this thread for a while. Will PM you when/if I do.

Thanks again,

Aria

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Rabia

@SuhanaSafar

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#133

Reopened at the request of the author.

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Sookie

@-Sookie-

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#134

Aria, get to this thread! Phasssttt!!!!

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#135

Edited.

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ps. Here you go night13 - this one's for you! As suggested by the title, and in keeping with the history of the thread, I hope to follow this up with part II.Thank you Rabia for re-opening the thread.

Edited by -Aria- - 12 years ago

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Garima

@ScatteredCastle

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#136

Me phirst! Me phirst! I beat you to it, Sookie - Superstar! :-)

Well, as for the two paragraphs up there, brilliantly written. I could really imagine that thing taking place and I dunno why, I imagine R in a long red gown! Du'h and white nail-paint that clutches that red scarf that she let fall in the water body, she was on who's/which's edge! :S *Ignore, please!*

I liked the underlying depth and the storyline! PS: Isn't he suffering from some memory loss of smg? 😳 Other than that, I adored the witty-writing style; did i say that before for smg else?? *geek*

Anyways, liked it, loved it!

pps: why wasn't i told about these thread, ever before?! or was I? ={ Whatever!!

You continue soon, and I was assuming, IoL had to come first, but nevertheless, it was a good read! :)

Edited by Angel-Pebby - 14 years ago

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@spln

Inactive

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Posted: 14 years ago

#137

This was very involving. Especially so, in the vague way it forms a very discrete picture inside of my head - I could imagine the faces, the place, the canal, the scarf, the inn - the surrounding, and all the words that were not formed... like letters of words floating in the air between them (you like animations show musical symbols?!) No not the comic way really though. I just like (very much) the expanse of possibilities the end of this piece leaves to my discretion as a read. yeh you said you'll continue, but I'm talking of just this, and just now, atm.

Reading this on my phone - stuck in a place I didn't expect, but one that i don't have reason to complain about ... a place and situaton that's made me think in no order or chronology all night long - this piece in strange ways is like a reflection!

Special pointing of the way the scene is suspended, and yet traveling in time. Or maybe the characters are suspended, even as time moves. =)

Continue soon...?
nj

ps: I know now, the reason behind that quick note on AoL - sigh! :P

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Sookie

@-Sookie-

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#138

:-) Welcome back to the thread A!

I have to echo NJ's comment here - characters seem to be suspended in time, Armaan more than Riddhima.

There is something with the style of writing which I cannot put a finger on but I guess I will figure it out when we talk about this more..

Like the way it goes with the thread, everything will make more sense with the last syllable of the last part of the series itself :-)

Looking forward for next part.

S