an AR experiment [DMG] - Page 4

Originally posted by: krazyboutkaran

heyyyy!!....dis ff sounds gud...!!
cont soon.....
loadza luv,
urvi

thanks urvi.
but this was a one shot.
will pm you when i add a diff one to the post

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Originally posted by: huda14

omg..its awesome...for a second i thought all was happening to him..but as i read further i came to knw he was acting....and in the end the sweet moment just made me smile..!!! it was brilliant ..keep writin

thanks huda. glad that you enjoyed reading the strange piece and that the end made you smile.

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Originally posted by: suv.patki

Wow ... now thats how browsing thru forum helps :)) Start is great. So Armaan's an actor here. He is all into arts - painting, acting. Cool one. And for change, Riddhima is already with him.

Well, the scene you have elaborated - sort of touched my heart. In this fast life, guess all of us are somewhat losing on being humans. Rather becoming robotic. Concept in this part was good.

A request, please PM me whenever u update this next. I don't promise to always respond back with a comment (I know am being selfish here), but will surely hit on 'Like' button and read your updates.

thanks suvi.
yes it is sad in a way...sad but humanity seems to take a back seat...at times in the world today..
i will pm you when i update next

Originally posted by: olive_green

Hi nijaL that was soulful, beautiful reply...the way I perceived it..may be it was diff the way you intended it to be...did that sound right? but then it wouldnt make sense if it wasnt..anyhow..the last part of the above reply was me talking to myself...the doubt because you say 'ticked' - source of my confusion..in general though i am surprised that MMM has generated the responses that it has

if its fine with you can i add that to the end of the MMM post..crediting you of course...

i am left to ponder, what sort of comment (read reaction) i would get if you were to read the whole thing for once...

and yes the rest is history...and its the 15th today..somethings are just too crazy...

dudette!!!!! you even have to ask me if you can??? OBV....i wrote it for your fic..if its any use to your work (i'll take it as some good addition from my side) ....i am all smiles! :D so sure thing! =)

and upon my reaction...hmmm...dont guess cause assure you....if i fail myself on that note!

happy diwali gurl !!!! ...

update soooonnn...

~nij

Originally posted by: *Huma*

I just read my comment again, and realised I should have told you my reasoning for mentioning the play part. I don't know what it was in your writing, but as I read it, it kind of reminded me of an amatuer play that I watched a while ago...It had a little soliloquy, which was some what similar to this. I think the way it was written was a give away, that it was in matter of fact an act being performed.

The mention of Shakespeare came coz I remember watching a play of his, and the writing reminded me of that..

Eeekk.. I know I should be writing on Pablo's...woopsie..😆 I will do it, I will..I will... promise😃

Intezaar ka phal meetha hota hai..maine soona hai..😆

spot on hun, thats the word...strangely i had a feeling i was writing to an audience..as i was enacting it...and i do have a big smile on my face, because shakespeare is afterall esteemed company to be in😆thank you ji😃

intezaar..intezaar...still waiting😛 for my meetha phal😆

Originally posted by: Sookie*

Awesome!
I loved this line - "For even a mad man thinks the world is mad."
Liked it lots...

Sookie.

Thank you
Glad you liked it
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a moment out of someone's day, nothing more...

heyyyy aria !!!...

Hehe ... I liked what I read .. not very sure how much I understood though. Very abstract ... and still thinking :)