~|A VeeBa story season 3|~ part 15 pg 43

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Season 3

A new beginning 😃 but this story is a complete fanfictionšŸ˜† so read the following points.
In this story
- Balwant left Pritampura when Veera was very small, so she doesn't remember them
- Baldev and Veera have never interacted when they were small and hence they are not childhood nemesisšŸ˜†šŸ˜†
- Veera knows about her birth truth already and is a shy, innocent sweet girl who can never disobey her elders, she is not a sherni
- Veera studies in delhi but has never made a male friend ever because her family might not like the idea
- Balwant left to take care of his uncle's property which is in shanpura, but he would return to pritampura after his uncle's grandson is capable enough to take the responsibility alone.
- Sampooran always wished to make Baldev his son-in-law and ratan and ranvi know about his wish


Hope you enjoy😃
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Prologue

Ranvi was busy making pots, he was all covered with mud, pot

making was his obsession and he was completely cut out from the

surroundings when he did it but when he heard ratan say those

words, his newly made pot fell from his hands and lost its shape.

Ratan; Ranvi puttar, Balwant bhai sahab ka phone aya tha, wo keh

rhe the ab waqt agaya he k hum Veera ki shadi ke baare me sochen,

wo jald hi Baldev ki photo bhejne wale hen

Ranvi's breathed in relief, finally the day he always dreamed of was

coming close, his little sister would soon get married and his

biggest responsibilty would soon be over. He looked at

Sampooran's photo,

Ranvi; papaji waqt agaya he k me veerakhdi ko dholi me bitha ke

wida krdun, aapka beta aapka har sapna pura kre ga papaji, agar

Rab ne chaha, to Baldev hi aapka jamai banega

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Edited by overactor - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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AWESOME yaar!! Veera is a shy girl, not a sherni?😲 Ok i already wanna know how this is going to go šŸ˜† but i hope she becomes a sherni atleast after marriage,i love VeeBa nokjoks😳 waiting eagerly for the 1st chapter!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Haha i read this even before the PM arrived see how eager i am for ur updates šŸ˜†
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Originally posted by: zainabawoon

AWESOME yaar!! Veera is a shy girl, not a sherni?😲 Ok i already wanna know how this is going to go šŸ˜† but i hope she becomes a sherni atleast after marriage,i love VeeBa nokjoks😳 waiting eagerly for the 1st chapter!


wait for it, Veera will go through many phases, but for nw she is a shy sweet girlšŸ˜†. Might update the first part today itself of 2moro, and u have to wait for knok jhoks they r in every story already so this is going to be different

im eager for ur updates too but u never tell me when u update😔
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Cant wait, cant wait, cant wait !!!
I love u for this ...veera gaun ki gori 😃
Kal se i was waiting for ur update...sabar ka phal meetha nikla 😳

Update it today itself pleeej ...
Edited by .Jenvita_Neha. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome!!! Loved it 😳 cant wait plzzz update soon 😃
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Originally posted by: overactor


wait for it, Veera will go through many phases, but for nw she is a shy sweet girlšŸ˜†. Might update the first part today itself of 2moro, and u have to wait for knok jhoks they r in every story already so this is going to be different

im eager for ur updates too but u never tell me when u update😔

Aww šŸ˜† but vibha sends u the PM right? And yup this one seems different, which makes me more eager to know how its going to shape up😃
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I can't get over the fact lol 'my pov' smashed me hard :v
Sampooran aur Ranvi se kaise pyaar kiyaa jaaye yeh moto hain :D
Ranvi :O 'rab ne chaahaa toh Baldev hi aapkaa jamaai banegaa'
;) ;) <3 arranged marriage love of VeeBa <3 Waiting madly for Baldeva's entry :*

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