~|A VeeBa story season 3|~ part 15 pg 43 - Page 33

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Posted: 10 years ago
please give us an ending atleast sonu di.please!!!
please dont leave the story like this,please give an ending.this story is that awesome!!😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
change in dp doesn't mean i have moved on from baldev😆 i wanted a new dp and since i seldom watch veera i dnt have new pix
I still love Baldev the way i did, and u can see that since im still fighting for him😆 but i just can't stand veera and vee-ba don't exist for me anymore so its tough for me to write on a couple i dnt ship veera gives me a headache and if i write i might write something where Baldev brutally murders her😆 so im sorry guys
i will end king of my world since its almost there😳 and i might do some justice to this one but forget baazigar forever coz the surpunch track sucks😡 and if there is an end to baazigar it might be destructive😆 and balika vadhu is gone forever

Please blame mash for this loss not me😃 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: overactor

change in dp doesn't mean i have moved on from baldev😆 i wanted a new dp and since i seldom watch veera i dnt have new pix

I still love Baldev the way i did, and u can see that since im still fighting for him😆 but i just can't stand veera and vee-ba don't exist for me anymore so its tough for me to write on a couple i dnt ship veera gives me a headache and if i write i might write something where Baldev brutally murders her😆 so im sorry guys
i will end king of my world since its almost there😳 and i might do some justice to this one but forget baazigar forever coz the surpunch track sucks😡 and if there is an end to baazigar it might be destructive😆 and balika vadhu is gone forever

Please blame mash for this loss not me😃 😆


I know 😆 Its just that I've got so used to seeing Baldev as ur dp..Would instantly recognise you by the pic itself without even seeing the username 😆

The first thing I look for after visiting the forum is whether you have updated any of your stories 😳 So,it is sad to have nothing to look forward to again 😔 Anyway,just wanted to let you know that I love all your stories 😃 Thank You 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sonu...update kar na...current track main waise hi
Dimaag ka dahi ho rahan hain...tu toh Rhoda relief de na...achawala update kar de...Veeba ke golden days ko soch aur update kar daal...😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: vinu24

Sonu...update kar na...current track main waise hi

Dimaag ka dahi ho rahan hain...tu toh Rhoda relief de na...achawala update kar de...Veeba ke golden days ko soch aur update kar daal...😉

acha wala update tab dun na when i can feel for them, aaj kal mera man hi nhi lagta veeba se mash were successful in moving my interest forever😡
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: overactor

acha wala update tab dun na when i can feel for them, aaj kal mera man hi nhi lagta veeba se mash were successful in moving my interest forever😡

I understand that its very irritating to imagine things and write at this stage...but motivation ke liye purane scenes dekh ke yaar...likh na...kuch toh
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Posted: 10 years ago
But ur stories were really awsm..
Will miss dem😒
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Veera returned home and collided with Baldev, she was sweating and breathing heavily, Baldev grabbed her shoulders.

Baldev; tu theek to he na?

Veera hugged him, resting her head on his chest and holding his waist tightly, he patted her.

Baldev; kya hua kuch bol to sahi..dekh kisi ne kuch kaha kya tenu? bol me abhi uski khatiya khadi krdunga

Veera; kisi ne kuch nhi kaha, bas haalat ne ajeeb dhuwidha me daal diya he menu

Baldev hugged her tight and then kissed her forehead.

Baldev; tu apni har pareshaani bhool ja, tenu har mushqil se niqaalne ka zimma ab mera he, tenu duniya ki saari khushiyan dunga me, badle me tu menu apni sari taqleefen de de, pr aaj k baad kabhi ye aansoo mat bahana, sherni k aankhon me sirf aag achi lagti he, aansoo nahi

Veera smiled. Gunjan came

Gunjan; tu ab aa rhi he Veera..inni der kahan thi, shuqar he bg chaiji bahar hen wrna bg shuru hojati abhi, chal ab andar, aaj se tera aur veerji ka milna band, tera bahar niqalna bhi band, ab chal

Veera blushed as she turned to look at Baldev, he winked and send a flying kiss to her. She pretended to catch the kiss and then went away.

Veera told Amrit and Tina what Pammi told her.

Amrit; he is a don?

Veera; nahi

Tina; a criminal?

Veera; nahi

Amrit; Veera you better tell veerji about this and back off, tum ek gunde se shadi nhi kr skti

Veera; par

Tina; no way Veera, tum ek criminal se kese shadi krskti ho what if he does domestic violence on you after marriage, socho kya kya hoskta he, what if us pe murder charges lag jayen aur use jail hojaye

AMrit; Veera you are a simple girl, tum us jaanwar k saath shadi,,,not happening

Veera; shut up!! gunda criminal jaanwar?mat bhulo ye wahi Baldev Singh he jiske naam ki mala tum log kal raat tak jap rhe the

Amrit; haan pr hamen pta nhi tha na, tum jaan k bhi anjaan banna chahti h kya veera? dekh k to bilkul sweet lagta he aur he kya, sach me, dnt judge a book by its cover

Veera; kya jaana he mene? kisi k kehne se kya sb badal jata he? mene khud dekha he unhe, apni jaan pe khel k us bache ko bachate huye, wo jaanwar nhi hen, he is a good human being, haan shayad gusse me kuch esi cheezen hogai hon jiske kaaran wo badnaam hogye

Tina; badnaam? are u kidding me Veera? Pammi clearly called him a gunda right? uske dost muft ki cheezen utha lete hen shopkeepers se paise lete hen, what else do you want to hear?

Veera; main kuch nahi jaanti, me apne dil ki awaaz aur rabjee k ishare pe ziada bharosa krti hun, aur wese bhi veerji zubaan de chuke hen

Amrit; veerji apni zubaan ki khatir apni veerahdi ki zindagi barbaad nhi krenge, Veera for God's sake unhe sb bta do and get out of this mess

Tina; don't tell me that you are still marrying him

Veera; i am (she said firmly) mujhe apne hone wale pati ka saath dena he, patni pati ka saath har mod pe deti he aur me aaj bhi dungi aur shadi k baad bhi

Amrit; tum ek gangster se shadi krogi

Veera; enough amrit, mere husband k liye ab ek aur shabd nhi tujhe nhi pasand to teri marzi, par tum dono veerji ko kuch nhi btaogi, mene tum dono pe dost smjh k bharosa kiya aur sb bta diya, i hope u won't disappoint me

Tina; fine, bhaad me jaa tu, krle shadi us gunde se, but we are not gonna be a part of this

Amrit; haan Veera aaj se hum tujhse door rahenge, hamare raaste ab juda hen, be happy with your gunda mawali

Veera; theek he, wese bhi jo mere pati ki izzat na kre esi doston ka faida bhi kya

Amrit and Tina decided to leave, all were shocked at their decision

Ranvi; par veerakhdi ki saheliyan ho tum dono

Baldev; aur meri saliyan, o mere joote kon churayega

Amrit looked at him with disgust, Balde was unable to understand her reaction. She turned to Ranvi

Amrit; sorry veerji hamara admission hogya he to hamen join krna hi hoga

Tina; hamen maaf krdijiye veerji

Ranvi; are maafi ki khedi gal he, padhai to sbse zaruri he na, kyun bg

Ratan; haan bachon tum log jao, Rab Rakha.

They both left, Veera cried watching them leave as she stood in the balcony, she closed her eyes

Veera; Rab jee is vyah waaste mene apne doston ko bhi naraz kr ditta, aap menu sahi sabit krna, mere dil ki awaz ko sahi sabit krna please Rabjee, dikha dena sb nu k mere Baldev kitne ache hen

she went inside her room when Tina and Amrit looked up.
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Posted: 10 years ago
okay so i decided to continue this 😆 dnt know how long i would stay on my decision till then enjoy😳 i miss u guys 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh wow!! I am so glad to see this! 😃

Thank u very much sonu!! 🤗 The story is going great!! 👍🏼

I hope u will continue all other stories too 😳

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