~|A VeeBa story season 3|~ part 15 pg 43 - Page 16

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ManaliRoy thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
Finally dheere dheere sher Baldev is revealing :* these imperfections makes him(Baldeva) the most perfect <3
Ballu was so eager to reveal his actual ownself infront of his yet to become sherni veera :)
He literally asked her "aur kuch poochna ya kehnaa hain?" :)
Yeh naazook si ladki aur kitni shock hogi? "Unhone haan keh di? ;) , khud haan kahi unhone? :v
"Meraa dil unhe apnaa chukaa hain" aww :*
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Posted: 10 years ago
VeeBa's waving at each other :* <3 khoobsurat...
veera :D "kya?woh yahan rahenge?toh mera kya hoga?" :v
Baldev's taunt on papaji :D "pehle rolishta tay kar diya,aur ab rehne chale" :P
Veera's description through Baldeva's eyes :* ^_^ <3 "inna sonaa mukhda,inni lachakdaar kamariya :D , aur aise kajraare nain :*
Aye vekho :v ek taraf boltaa hain viyah ki fiqr nahi hain mainu, aur doosri taraf usey uthaake le jaane ko bhi taiyaar hain :* :D
Abhi se apne princess ki itni fiqr :* ke usko kuch pataa naa chale, awww "agar usne mera gussa vekh liyaa toh,woh toh dar jaayegi :( itni maasoom si hain woh :( aww
Hilarious Baldeva :v "accha bhalaa naa bolne gayaa tha,yeh kudi kyon mere dil vich utar gayi" hehe dilpe aakhir kiska bass chaltaa hain ;)
Aww aww "ghalat baat hain yeh,uski maasoom si nazren najaane kya sapne sajaa rahi hain"
"Bataa detaa usey main,phir uthaake le aata :D " veera ko uthaane ke liye kitnaa besabr huye jaa rahaa hain ;)
[Yeh uthaane waali baat ;) Overactor :* you naughty,,I know barbar yeh kyon aa rahaa hain :D ]

Waise yeh Veera itni bhi maasoom nahi hain jitnaa Baldeva usko samajh rahaa hain ;)
Many more mystries to unfold and Baldeva k funny kartoote,,aur ek hi ghar mein shaadi se pehle VeeBa ^_^ so much to going mad for :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Was so happy to find another update 😳 I'm already in love with this story ❤️
It was strange to see Baldev as a good boy 😆 Loving the mysterious Baldev 😈
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Posted: 10 years ago
I read 5 and 6 parts 2 times because u write it very well 👏 ufff baldev k itna shareef rop sirf Sonu apki update m hi mil skta tha 😛 Veeba ki 1st meeting was just awww I am specless for that aur baldev k veera ko bachany waly scene pr to mujhe gosebumps any lg gay thy veera ko to any banty hi thy kitny sweetly baldev aur veera ny rishty k liay haan ki ☺️ baldev k wapis jany wala scene to itna sweet aur cute tha na k bs m khud blush krny lg gai thi haayyyeee sachi m dono boht hi sweet lg rhy thy meri imaginations m aur I knew k apki imagination m aur b ziyada piyary lg rhy hon gy aur agly hi lamhy baldev k sher wala rup haaayyyeee sadkey bechara naa krny aya tha haan kr betha aur phas gya haaan to krni banti hi thi akhir sher ko sirf veera hi pasand aa sakti hai aur koi kuri nahi 😆 ab to sach m mujhe b baqiyon ki trhan epi sy ziyada apki update k wait hota hai 😳 plzzz plzzz plzzz jaldi sy nxt part update kr do 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
My don ballu ..
Nice updare sobu
Waiting for my bholi bhali veera to learn my shaitaan ballu's truth ..
Maza aayega .. plz update soon ..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update Sonu..
Sonu ka Ballu aur seedha-saadha, ho hi nahin sakta 🤣Laga tha ki daal main zaroor kuch kaala hain and u did it.

Ab toh bholi si Veera ka kya hoga...lagta hain zor ka jhatka dheere se lagega 😆

Jaldi update kariyo..intezaar nahin hota 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Mysterious! Cant wait! :) Update soon.. Thank u for updating quicker. Hope u continue to :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part_7

Baldev's family arrived the next day with their luggage. Ranvi gave them four rooms, Baldev's room was the one with Veera's and Gunjan's on the other side, but Baldev's room was in the corner and though the next room to Veera's it was not very close.

Jaggi and Billa had relatives so they stayed there with them. Veera was hiding in her room ever since they arrived. Chaiji came to her.

Chaiji; cheechdi ye kya he? tu chup ke kyun bethi he tab se? tere sasural wale aaye hen kya sochenge kudi to neeche hi nhi aayi, chal sbke liye chai ka intizam kr jaa

Veera; jee chaiji

Veera went downstairs and after greeting Balwant and bansuri she went inside the kitchen to make tea and snacks.

Veera served tea to everyone but baldev had not come down, he was still in his room.

Chaiji; puttar ja Baldev ko upar hi chai de aa, thandi hojayegi

Veera was hesitant but she had to obey, she walked slowly with heavy breaths and fast paced heart, She opened the door slowly and entered, Baldev was trying to adjust his stuff in the cupboard.

Veera; jee..chai

Baldev turned, he saw Veera again from head to toe, she was wearing a simple yellow shalwar kameez and her dupatta covered her front, her hair were in a braid. He came close to her.

Baldev; ese saadgi me to aap aur bhi sundar lagti hen jee

Veera blushed and lowered her eyes not knowing what to do. Baldev took the cup from her hands, their hands touched and electric sparks ran down her spine. Baldev felt awkward then, as she just stood there.

Baldev; chai bht achi banni he

Veera; thank you, main chalti hun kuch chahiye ho to bta dijiyega

Veera left. Baldev sat down on the bed.

Baldev; ye jee aap se gaadi aage kab bhade gi? kya museebat he, dikhne me phataka aur baaton se jalebi, ye kya he, ese jee jee krte krte mene to mithas se mar jana he, sher naal chuhiya nahi nahi ye to siyapa hojayega, ise meri sachai pta lagne k baad bht kuch sehna he, ye to toot jayegi kese saamna kregi.

Veera returned to her room. Amrit and Tina looked at her curiously

Veera; kya?

Amrit; room me akele? kya kya hua?

Veera; mene chai di aur chali aai

Tina caught her head with both hands.

Amrit; tu pagal he? kuch baaten hi krleti, chai khatam krne ka hi wait krleti, bechare jeeju

Tina; Veera you are a fool, ese kese chalega, tu apni understanding bna unke saath, ese chai degi kya sirf zindagi bhar

Veera; me kya karun, unke saamne me sun pad jati hun. Mujhe kuch samjh nhi aata me kya karun.

Baldev was thinking of ways to spend some time alone with her, he wanted to talk to her and know her more.

Baldev; kya karun esa jo wo bolne lage , kuch to krna hi hoga

He went downstairs and sat with Balwant.

Balwant; puttar parson hi tum dono ki sagai kr dete hen theek he?

Baldev; jee papaji..(suddenly he got an idea) papaji wo me soch rha tha ke kyun na me Veera ko anghooti pasand krwane le jaon? uski pasand ki honi chahiye na

Balwant; haan puttar changa he ye to

Chaiji; haan le ja puttar Veera aur uski saheliyon ko

Baldev made a face, he wanted privacy and her friends were accompanying.

Gunjan; me bhi chalungi veerji

Baldev; haan haan me jaggi billa ko bhi keh deta hun wo bhi chalenge, Ranvi tu bhi chal

Ranvi; nhi mujhe wada kaam he tum sb jao.

Chaiji; me veera se kehti hun tayar hojaye

Veera and her friends got ready and came outside the house where Baldev awaited. He was wearing a maroon kurta and a black jacket with black shalwar and black rayban glares covered his eyes.

Tina; Veera why are you s lucky?

Veera smiled. Gunjan came too and so did jaggi and billa.

Jaggi; paaji hum sb jeep me thusenge kese?

Baldev; tum sb peeche betho, Veera tum..aap...age beth jayie

Veera nodded , Baldev got into the driving seat and gave his hand to Veera, she caught his hand tightly and got inside the jeep, she sat down and looked at Baldev who was still holding her hand and staring. Veera moved her hand, Baldev closed his eyes and regretted doing that.

Baldev; sb beth gye?

Billa; jee paaji chalo

Baldev started the engine.

Veera; suniye, wo aapne seat belt nhi bandhi

Baldev raised an eyebrow then he faked a smile and tied the belt. He hit the accelerator and they set of for the market.

Baldev tried to look at her, she was looking straight to the road, her hands on her lap.

Baldev; (in his mind) puri foj ko sath bhej diya us chaiji ne, museebat

Amrit Tina Billa Jaggi and Gunjan were chatting constantly.

Baldev; (in his mind) ye acha he in sb ki yariyan hogai aur me hi apni hone wali voti se bat nhi kr paa rha shadi meri ho rhi he ya in sb ki, in sbka kuch krna hoga.

Baldev thought of ways to get rid of them
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Posted: 10 years ago
meri fast updates ko nazar lag gai😭
im sorry guys i had some net issues so was unable to update. sorry to keep u guys waiting so long
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Posted: 10 years ago
thanks for pm it's ok dear nice update 😊

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