~|A VeeBa story season 3|~ part 15 pg 43 - Page 9

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Posted: 11 years ago
#81
Didnt have time before but now read all parts at once.. Two words.. TOO GOOD!! I like this part the bestest so far.
Veera wanting to see the photo first and the girls teasing her and then Amrit drooling over her Jeeju 😆 and Veera saying "Kaash... aap camera me dekh rhe hte" awww that was just too cute.

Waise I even think ke inke Jeeju Ranbir aur Arjun ke tarha dikhte he but I always came to one conclusion.. The Kapoors are no match for our Vish.. Vish is the bestest, hottest, cutest, sexiest, funniest, and most drool-worthy of all ☺️

Anyways love the story, love the pms, love ur writing.. Keep it up 😉


Also I just wanted to make a tiny correction, epilogue is what comes at the end of the story, what you're trying to say is prologue 😊




... you did ask for a long comment 😆
Edited by veeba4eva - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82
aapne mere dil ke taarif ke sab shabd nikal diya...because i dont have anything to say...
it was perfect sonu di...and the photos was beyond cute...this is very different and its also one of ur best ff stories...i loveddd it👏👏🤗...superb sonu di.cant wait to see my baldev's reaction when he meete veera...😆.waiting for the next update now.ha ha lol! iam very greedy.😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: overactor


Drooling on guys is natural😆 all have an attraction to the opposite gender😳 how would u choose ur husband then😛


Did she ever tell you? that she wants to choose her husband :P
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
Haha many girls asks me such question,i don't knw bt i didn't took interest in such things :-D
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: veeba4eva

Didnt have time before but now read all parts at once.. Two words.. TOO GOOD!! I like this part the bestest so far.
Veera wanting to see the photo first and the girls teasing her and then Amrit drooling over her Jeeju 😆 and Veera saying "Kaash... aap camera me dekh rhe hte" awww that was just too cute.

Waise I even think ke inke Jeeju Ranbir aur Arjun ke tarha dikhte he but I always came to one conclusion.. The Kapoors are no match for our Vish.. Vish is the bestest, hottest, cutest, sexiest, funniest, and most drool-worthy of all ☺️

Anyways love the story, love the pms, love ur writing.. Keep it up 😉


Also I just wanted to make a tiny correction, epilogue is what comes at the end of the story, what you're trying to say is prologue 😊




... you did ask for a long comment 😆


Oh yeah such a blooper prologue ko epilogue bna diya mene😆 thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanks all for the long comments 🤗
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Veera's graduation ceremony went well and she was all set to return back to her home town with veerji, they were just about to leave the hostel when Amrit and Tina came running.

Amrit; hum bhi aapke saath chal skte hen veerji? Veera ki shadi te hone wali he humen uske sath hona he

Ranvi; han han kyun nahi, pura haq he tum log ka, chalo

Tina; thanks Veerji

All of them left for pritampura together.

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After meet and greet, Veera and her friends changed and lay down on her bed to relax.

Amrit; Veera..jeeju kab aa rhe hen milne?

Veera; parson

Tina; oh God itna intizar kese hoga, mujhe to jeeju ki awaz sunni he

Amrit; idea

Tina; kya?

Amrit; veerji k phone se jeeju ka no. me chura lungi, phir meri purani sim se hum jeeju ko prank call krenge, hello to bolenge na, awaz sun lenge hum

Veera; tum log pagal ho kya? nhi nhi esa kuch mat krna

Tina; are its an awesome idea, veera tu bhi kitni darpok he, kuch nhi hoga kisi ko kano kaan khabar nhi hogi, jeeju ko din me najane kitni ladkiyon ki prank calls ati hi hongi

Veera; nhi nhi, ye sab galat he, unhe pta chala to

Amrit; kese pta chalega, tu bilkul darpok he, me aaj raat ko no. chura rhi hun bas, hum teri sun hi nhi rhe

Veera; tum log mujhe phaswa k hi manoge

Tina; uff Veera just relax, aaj tu apne unki awaz sunne wali he

At night Amrit sneeked into veerji's room and carefully took his cell phone out, she saved Baldev's number in her phone and returned Ranvi's phone.

Veera; mat kr na, bas kal hi wo aa rhe hen na, ek din ka intizar hi to he, kyun muft me siyape krne hen

Amrit; shut up veera, mene purani sim insert krdi he, im calling

Veera; itni raat ko, tu subah krlena, wo so rhe honge to?

Tina; oho madam ko abhi se kitni chinta he, oh madam sb teri tarah nhi hte, nhi so rhe honge, aur so bhi rahen ho to hum saliyan hen unhe disturb krna hamara farz he

Veera; nhi subah kr lena

Amrit: Veera chup kr wrna dial kr k tujhe btaongi bhi nhi aur unhe bhi teri awaz ajayegi ya me bta dungi unhe k hum kon he, ab chup im dialling

Amrit hit the call icon and Veera closed her eyes. It rang 3 times and with each ring Veera's heart skipped a beat. It was after the 3rd ring that some one picked up the phone.

Voice; Kya hua? kon itni raat ko tang kar raha he?

The voice send electric sparks through Veera's body. The voice was sharp and sounded irritated but there was an innocence in it that couldn't go unnoticed.

Amrit; (faking voice) jee aap kon?

Voice; jee phone aapne kiya to aapko pta hoga

Amrit; kya ye Baldev Kumar ka number he?

Voice; nahi jee Baldev Singh ka

Veera was stunned, Amrit looked at Tina, Tina gestured to end the call

Amrit; sorry jee wrong number lag gaya

she hung up.

Amrit; kitni cute awaz he na

Tina; haan, veera tujhe kesi lagi?

Veera was not responding, Tina and Amrit shook her and she returned to the world around her

Veera; unki awaz kitni pyari he, masum si

Amrit; Veera you are head over heels in love with him, control yourself

Veera started sobbing.

Tina; ab kya hua?

Veera; wo mujhe kabhi pasand nhi krenge, he would just reject me aur phir me, kitni asan thi meri zindagi inhe dekhne se pehle, kyun Rabjee mera dil kyun tod rhe ho

Amrit; tera dimag khrab he kya? wo nhi krenge reject dekh lena, wo haan kahenge bada wala, tu bas unhe dikhana mat k you like him

Veera; pr me hide kese krungi

Tina; ziada smile mat krna, blush mat krna, shy mat hna, aur balon me haath mat bherna, be confident he will surely agree

Veera; aur nhi kiya to?

Amrit; esa nhi hoga kaha na mene, ab bas chup kr

Tina; haan aur so ja, apni beauty sleep k sath compromise mat kr wrna jeeju ko tu pasand nhi ayegi dark circles ke saath

They forced her to sleep, she lay down and kept thinking of ways to not get rejected.

Veera; (in her mind) please Rabjee mera dil mat todna, jis k liye mera dil pehli baar itna bechain hua he wo mujhe miljaye, please Rabjee

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On the day when Baldev and family were expected to arrive, Veera woke up very early, took a bath ate half her breakfast and sat worrying in her room.

Veera; mujhe bht dar lag rha he me kya baat krungi unse

Amrit; tu tension mat le na..wo kab ayenge

Veera; 2 baje

Tina; abhi to sirf 9 bje hen Veera chill sab theek hoga, tu thoda aur so ja

Veera; mujhe neend nahi aa rhi na

Chaiji came inside.

Chaiji; kudiyon bahar ja ke Ratan ki madat kro menu cheechdi se akele me kuch baat krni he

Amrit and Tina left, Chaiji sat down beside Veera

Chaiji; Cheechdi menu pta he tenu bht ghabrahat ho rhi he pr tu chinta kyun kr rhi he esa to sbke sath hta he

Veera; chaiji..agr unhone mana krdiya to?

Chaiji; kyun mana krenge bhala? unhone se saamne se rishta maanga he puttar, haan ya naa to tenu krni he

Veera; chaiji par menu pta kese chalega ke wahi he wo jo mere liye bana he, mujhe unki dil ke baare me kese pta chalega

Chaiji; puttar tu na uski choti choti baton se hi ye smjh payegi

Veera; wo kese

Chaiji; tu dekhna uska badon ke sath bartao choton ke sath bartao, doston ke sath wo kesa he, naukaron se kese paish ata he aur tujhse kese baat krta he

Veera; pr chaiji ek hi mulaqat me sb kese dekh paongi me

Chaiji; puttar kisi ko jaanne k liye na ya to ek lamha hi kafi hta he ya phir sari zindagi lag jati he, aur haan cheechdi apne dil ki gawahi pe hi yaqeen krna, dil ne haan kaha to yani sb changa hi hoga, is dimag ki mat sunna ye to sirf nuqs hi niqalna jaanta he pr dil..dil dusre k dil se judna chahe to koi nuqs khami nhi lagta balke har cheez achi lagti he, esa hi to hta he pyar ka rishta, jab kisi ki khamiyan bhi achi lagne lagen

Veera nodded

Chaiji; chal ab ye chinta krna chod, sab changa hi hoga, tu thoda aram kr le, phir neeche aja, apne Baldev ke liye pakwan nhi banayegi?

Veera blushed.

Chaiji; hayo Rabba dekho to kese laal ho rhi he meri cheechdi, chal aja phir.

Veera made alot of things, kheer, samosas, pakodas, jalebi, custard, chaat and more, She had learned cooking during her holidays whenever she visited home and had attended cooking classes in delhi as well when she was in 8th standard.

After all the cooking she took another bath and then Amrit and Tina helped her in getting ready

Veera; kya pehnun? agr mene koi esa color pehen liya jo unhe bilkul na pasand hua to

Tina; Veera tera problem kya he? wo tujhse shadi krenge tere kapdon se nhi

Veera; nhi phir bhi..pink nhi pehenti pink ladkon ko nhi pasand hta, blue pehen leti hun, blue sb ladkon ko pasand hta he

Amrit; acha tu blue pehen pr bas ab chinta krna chod

Veera put on a blue anarkali dress, and matching jewellery too.

Veera; unhe baal khule pasand honge ya bandhe huye? aur agr unhe ziada jewellery nhi pasand ayi to

Amrit; Veera just stop panicking, agr yehi haal rha to pakka na hogi, itni panicked ladki se koi shadi nhi krna chahe ga now just shutup aur chup chaap hamen hamara kaam krne de

They let her hair loose, and applied a little makeup. Finally she looked like a doll as she sat on the dressing chair and stared at herself in the mirror.

Chaiji entered the room.

Chaiji; tayar hogai cheechdi..aaye haye nazar na lage meri cheechdi ko

she put some kajal behind her ear.

Chaiji; wo log aate hi honge tayar rehna haan

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Baldev's entry in next part😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
Aww man veera is panicking a lot😆...poor girl ! Kisi ki bhi aisi hi halat hoti baldev ko dekh kar that too as her to-be husband ke roop me

Yay Baldev's entry on our way

Awesome update !!!

Waiting...
Edited by .Jenvita_Neha. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89
You are truely baldev fan,mann gaye tumko!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90
Ek saath 2part update nahi kar sakti sonu i cant wait more to see baldev's entry pls updat soon.nd wa baldev ki awaj nd 2line me hi uska atitude tune jo dikhaya na man gai mai tujhe.aaj kal epi.ka intazar jitana nahi utana tere update ka intazar karti hu.

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