~|A VeeBa story season 3|~ part 15 pg 43 - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome update dear loved it thanks for pm 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Well veera = sherni suits a lot(we had habbit of watching her like that),this is a way real nature of any girl. Its nice to read that she's nt interested in 'love' sort thing having importance to heq family. Bt i think even if she's calmed nature,its nt like that she'l take anything.(silent people r so patient). Opposite pair,looks interesting! Gr8!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Great start sonu 👍🏼 Veera all shy and studious!!! Hazam hi nahin ho raha 😆
Waiting for Baby's entry 😎
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Great start!Will take some time to get used to this Veera 😆
Can't wait to read Baldev's entry
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb Kick start 👍🏼,Waiting 4 my Ballu's entry ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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WOW Sonu di Superb Start ... their are no Words for your updates 👏😳 Waiting for Ballu Entry ...
Continue Soon Di ... 😃
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really nice...great job ⭐️
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Compenstion for my last and short reply.😳 iss reply ko last reply se jod lena,,I hope tab okay ho jaaye 😳
Starting from the way you have described Delhi's weather,and Veera's attire & appearance 👏
Veera's innocent heart 👍🏼 ,her nature, her behaviour, her appearnce reminds me of myself,Lol 😉
Her friends had boyfriends,break up,patch up,party nights and all,but she is totally different 😎 ,she barely spoke to boys.
Sabki madad karne waala,sabkaa khayaal rakhne waala groom is on the way to snatch her for lifetime.Aww 🤗

Hope you are happy now Overactor 🤗

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sonu Dear...dhamaakedhar opening hain, loved it 🤗
An entirely different characterization of the characters, loved it to the core. I am so very eager for the next update. Plz update it soon 😊
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Part_2

Veera returned after her writing her last exam paper, she was tired and lay on her bed straight and closed her eyes to relax. A few minutes later there was a knock on the door, Veera was almost asleep so Amrit opened the door and soon as she closed it back she yelled, "Veera!! uth tere veerji ka letter aya he"

Veera opened her eyes and jumped out of the bed, and snatched the letter from Amrit's hand. But Amrit snatched it back.

Amrit; hone wale jeeju ka photo he isme wo to pehle main hi dekhungi

Amrit teared the envelope took out the letter and handed it to Veera.

Veera; ruk ja na, abhi mat dekh photo please

Amrit; okay tu padh le letter

Veera read the letter,

"pyaari veerakhdi,
apna khayal rakheen yahan sab change he, roz tujhse phone pe baat to hoti he to aur kya likhun, bas ye photo dekh ke bta de k tenu ladka kesa laga, yaad rakheen papaji da sapna, ladka ziada padha likha nahi pr boht wada karobar he iska transport ka, aur ghar bhar to tenu pata hi hai ke kesa he, tu ache se soch le aur phir ithe aa k mil ke paka faisla dena
tera veer"

Veera looked at Amrit

Amrit; letter padh liya?

Veera nodded, Amrit opened the door of the room and shouted in the corridor.

Amrit; girls jaldi aao, Veera ke hone wale dulhe ki photo aayi he

All girls came out of their rooms and Amrit ran to the common room, Veera ran behind her.

Veera; Amrit ruk na kya kr rahi hai

Amrit; nahi main nahi rukun gi

All girls of their floor who were mostly Veera's friends gathered in the common room and started questioning Veera.

"teri shadi fix hogai?"

"tu arrange marriage kar rahi he?"

"tu jaanti bhi hai use?"

Amrit; girls sit and calm down, Veera madam to bas naam janti he aur photo yahan mere haath main hai

Tina; dikha na Amrit, dikha na hamare jeeju kese dikhte hen

Veera; pehle mujhe to dekhne do

All girls stared at her, and she regretted saying that

Tina; oh ho madam bht uthawli ho rahi hen

Amrit; kyun Veera finally kisi ladke me to tujhe interest aya, wrna to tu film stars pe bhi drool krne se ghabrati thi

Veera; Amrit chup kr na

the girls started teasing her

"hmm Veera agar wo mota hua to?"

"agar uski badi badi moochen hui to"

"agar wo kala hua to?"

"agar uski height bht choti hui to?"

"agar uski awaz bht darawni hui to"

"agar uski ankhen bhengi hui to"

Veera; chup karo tum sab log, mere veerji ne ese hi haan nahi kahi hogi uske liye, wo ache hi honge mujhe yaqeen he

Tina; Veera, pind ke aadmi ese hi hte hen, muchen to hongi heen, tere papaji jesi

Amrit; acha girls ab to mujhse bhi wait nahi ho rha let's see

Tina; haan okay

Veera turned her face and caught the curtain, she was very tense and she closed her eyes.

There was a sudden silence in the room, and only the breaths of Veera were audible. Veera turned after gathering some courage and saw all girls staring blankly at the photo.

Veera; kya hua? tum sab ese kyun dekh rahi ho? Batao na..dekho mera dil boht ghabra raha he, batao na

All girls looked at Veera and then looked back at the photo. Veera's heart skipped a few beats...

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