~|A VeeBa story season 3|~ part 15 pg 43 - Page 12

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Tina came running upstairs.

Tina; Veera wo log agaya, veerji unhe lene gye hen.

Amrit; chal Veera hum window se dekhte hen

Amrit pulled her and they stood by the window, but they were unable to see anything from there, they were on the other side and the huge balcony in the middle blocked their view.

Amrit; kuch nhi dikh rha, tera kamra us taraf kyun nhi

Veera sat down and was very nervous

Veera; meri to jaan niqli jaa rahi hai

Tina gave her some water

Tina; pani pee le aur relax kr gehri saans le, sab theek hoga.

Veera took a few sips and then stood up.

Amrit; Veera relax, sab theek hi hoga

Veera nodded.

Downstairs Ranvi, Ratan and Chaiji welcomed Balwant Bansuri and Gunjan

Ranvi; aayi tayaji tayiji

when they were well settled, Ratan gestured to Chaiji

Chaiji; Balwante, Baldev kithe he wo nahi ayega kya?

Balwant; oh Chaiji kesi galan kr rheho uska rishta he wo kese nhi ayega, apne doston ke saath a rha he

Chaiji; changa

Gunjan; chachiji chaiji main ja ke Veera se mil aaon? mujhse raha nahi ja raha

But before they could reply Bansuri spoke

Bansuri; sabar kr puttar, abhi wo neeche ajayegi to mil lena, apne veer ko to ajane de

Gunjan made a face.

Chaiji; Kuch lo na aap log, ye sab kuch Veera ne banaya he

Bansuri; acha? wada kuch bana leti he lagta he

Ranvi; jee tayiji sab kuch bana leti he meri veerakhdi, delhi which oh course kiya tha meri veerakhdi ne

Chaiji; haan aur apne college me pratiyogita bhi jeeti he kai baar usne

Bansuri faked a smile.

Tina was eaves dropping and returned with the news.

Tina; jeeju to abhi tak aye hi nahi, aur Veera teri saas kataq lag rhi he

Veera; tu menu aur mat dara

And then there was a sound of a jeep's breaks, and after a few seconds Ranvi and all heard some footsteps.

Balwant; lagta he baldev agaya

Ranvi, Ratan and Chaiji stood up to welcome him, Tina and Amrit peeked from a upstairs, and called Veera too, they were hiding behind a clothes that were drying.

As the steps got closer Veera's heart beat raced, and just before he entered her heart was beating her chest walls so bad as if it would burst out soon. Veera put a hand on her heart and took a long deep breath.

Baldev walked in, he was in a dark brown kurta with golden embroidery on the collars and neck borders, his hair combed well and shining, the curls perfectly running like long waves of the sea, a huge golden shalwar and brown mojdis, his eyes shining, a smile on his face that was more like a naugty smirk, his shoulders standing perfectly like that of a body builder, his biceps clearly visible from his tight fit kurta, a complete punjabi boy look. Veera's eyes were glued on him, she just couldn't believe that she was so lucky to have him come for her. Veera turned away then and ran back to her room, her cheeks flushed with blood, her heart banging her chest.

Ranvi greeted Baldev and hugged him. Baldev's friends Jaggi and Billa had entered with him too but the girls didn't notice them. Baldev touched chaiji and Ratan's feet and then sat down.

Ranvi; bohot der lag gai

Baldev; wo kya hai na doston ke saath tha raaste me chai peene ruk gye the

Ratan; beta chai to tayar he yahan bhi

Baldev; koi nhi chachiji, me aur mere yaar din me 3-4 baar chai pee lete hen, aap ko mana thodi krenge.

Ratan smiled.

Bansuri; kudi ko bulwa lo Ratan, jise dekhne aye hen wo kab ayegi

Ratan; jee..

Chaiji; me le kr aati hun Veera ko

Chaiji came to Veera's room

Chaiji; chal cheechdi, rasoi se chai ubaal ke le aa

Veera; jee chaiji

Veera went to the kitchen got the tea ready and then accompanying chaiji she went to meet them.
Veera walked with slow steps, she watched her steps and tried to compose herself, her heart was still racing, she reached the place where all sat and keeping the tray n the table she greeted everyone without uttering a word, just a silent namaste, and then she touched the feet of Balwant and Bansuri. She didn't look at Baldev and he was busy on his phone too. Then she gave tea cups to everyone and when it was Baldev's turn she moved the cup towrads him and he saw the cup, he put aside his phone and taking the cup he looked up, their eyes and hands met. And an electric spark moved through Veera's body. For a moment both were disconnected from the world, and lost in each other's eyes. Veera kept staring into his deep dark eyes, trying to reach his heart, and Baldev lost in her big beautiful eyes searching for something. Gunjan saw this and before anyone else could notice she coughed a little. Veera immediately got back to her senses and looked away, Baldev left her hand and then looked at her completely, from her head to toe, his eyes scanned her and she felt awkward.

Bansuri; Veera puttar ithe aa mere paas beth

Veera sat beside Bansuri, Baldev followed her with his eyes, and then moved a little forward to see her because Bansuri was coming in his way.

Bansuri; bht hi soni kudi he teri ratan, acha Veera bta to ghar ke saare kaam krleti ho?

Veera nodded.

Balwant; puttar teri padhai to puri hogai na

Veera nodded again. Jaggi, who was sitting with Baldev whispered

Jaggi; paaji parjai pe latto hogye ho kya

Baldev looked at him irritated.

Baldev; kuch bol kyun nahi rahi ye, gungi to nhi?

Gunjan; beeji papaji aap dono hi baat krte rahoge kya bhabhi se, veerji ko baat krne do na

Balwant; haan puttar, Chaiji Ratan parjaiji agar aap ki ijazat ho to Veera se baldev akele me baat kr skta he kya?

Veera closed her fist, and bit her lip

Ratan; haan kyun nahi, Veera ja Baldev ko hamara ghar dikha ja

Veera nodded and stood up,

Balwant; ja Baldev

Baldev nodded and followed Veera, veera walked slowly, and Baldev followed, as soon as they were out of the elder's site, Baldev came and stood infront of her. He stretched his hand out for her.

Baldev; aap ke sheher me to ese hi milte honge na, hello jee

Veera hesitantly gave her hand to his, the touch again got her goosebumps, he held her hand gently and shaked it. He left it then , Veera was about to put her hands in her hair but she remembered what her friends said and she didn't.

Baldev; Mera naam Baldev Singh hai, mene 10th tak padhai ki hai, uske aage menu shoq nhi tha aur pind me college bhi nahi tha, mera apna transport ka buisness he "Baldev transport company" ke naam se, changa chal raha he, ese hi chalta raha to kuch hi saalon me papaji ko taqar de dunga main, aur aap sawal poochengi to main jawab de paonga na,

Veera looked up and then lowered her eyes.

Baldev leaned a little close and whispered in his husky voice

Baldev; wese aap pe ye rang bht khil rha he, mera man pasand rang he ye

Veera smiled a little.

Baldev; ab aap bhi apna pariche de dijiye na

Veera swallowed hard and tried to find her voice, she some how did and then spoke slowly and softly, her voice barely audible

Veera; main Veera Sampooran Singh, abhi graduation ki hai

Baldev smiled widely.

Baldev; aapki to awaz bhi bht meethi he, phir aap bolti kyun nahi? dekhiye menu to na bht bolne wali bv chahiye jo mera sir kha jaye, ese chup rahengi aap to kese chalega

Veera; jee..me ..

Baldev; acha aap filmen to dekhti hongi, aapka favorite hero konsa he?

Veera; jee..kabhi kabhi dekhti hun, koi bhi favorite nhi

Baldev was shocked

Baldev; sachi main koi nhi ya aap mujhe bna rahi hen

Veera; sachi me koi nhi, mujhe filmy hero pasand nhi

Baldev; acha..to phir cricketer model koi to pasand hoga

Veera; nahi

Baldev; acha main pasand hun

Veera; (in a reflex) jee..(oops what did she do)

Baldev smiled again.

Baldev; yani me aapko pasand hun,to phir itna ghabra kyun rahi hen aap, me kha thodi jaonga aapko, chaliye ab aap kuch poochiye na

Veera; aapki favoirte heroine konsi he?

Baldev; meri favorite to kareena kapoor he

Tina and Amrit came to help her.

Amrit; hi hone wale jeeja ji me hun Amrit aur ye he Tina hum Veera ki best friends hen

Baldev; hello jee, aapki awaz kahin suni hui lag rhi he

Veera's eyes opened wide

Amrit; acha, wo meri awaz boht common he na, bht logon ki awaz mujhse milti he

Tina; chodiya na jeeja ji, aap ye batayiye ke aap ko hamari dost kesi lagi

Baldev; bht ziada bholli he jee apki dost, inhe mere sath zindagi bitani he to thoda tez hona padega, wo kya he na aag ko bardasht krne k liye da to hona chahiye na

Amrit; don't worry jeeja ji, Veera abhi aapse frank nhi hui na tabhi esi he, thode dino me sb sahi hojayega.

Tina; jeeja ji ye bht pareshan he abhi, aapko jo poochna he wo humse pooch lijiye

Baldev raised one eye brow,

Baldev; nahi jee menu aap log se kuch nhi poochna

Amrit; to aapko akele me hi baat krni he Veera se, theek he hum chalte hen

Veera and Baldev walked and they came out of the house from the back door.

Veera went to sunny singh , her sheep

Veera; ye sunny singh he, mera dost

Baldev smiled.

Baldev; aapko bhed bakriyan pasand hen? mere paas bhi ek bakri he bht masum si

Suddenly they heard some noise a man was shouting

Man; hat jao hat jao

Veera's dupatta was half red and she saw a bull coming towards her in full speed. She was shocked and stunned.

Baldev; oh teri, ye to pagal hogya, Veeraaa

he pulled her close and pinned her to the wall, her dupatta was now hidden behind him, the bull didn't notice and went away. They stood very close, his arms around her, her hands on his chest. His cheek touched hers, the hair of his stubble gave her goosebumps and tickled her soft skin. she was breathing heavily. Baldev looked at her and they were again lost in each other's eyes.

There was another voice , this time of a woman. Baldev moved away from Veera.

Woman; bachao bachao mere bache ko koi bachao

Baldev saw the bull running towards a kid who sat on the cot, the woman screaming, Baldev ran towards the kid, Veera was unable to make out she followed from a distance. Baldev pulled a red cloth hanging on one of the strings outside a house and then jumping from a cart he landed infront of the cot and was now in between the bull and the kid,

Veera; (shouting) Baldevvv...ye aap kya kr rhe hen,

Baldev; Veera tu jaa yahan se, ye bht khatarnaq he tenu kuch hojayega

Veera; pr aap ko kuch hogya to please wapas ayi na

Baldev; veera tu jaaa

Baldev ran with the cloth in his hand, the bull followed him hungry to rip him apart, Veera's heart sank, she was unable to think, teras fell from her eyes. Baldev kept running and entered an empty go down, the bull entered as well, Veera ran towards the go down and peeked, Baldev moved carefully having an eye contact with the bull, and slowly moving by the sides of the wall he moved out of the godown and closed the doors, the doors were of iron, he threw the cloth inside and sighed in relief.

The woman came to Baldev.

woman; tera bht bht dhanyewaad beta, tune mere bete ki jaan bachai

Baldev; koi nhi chachiji ye to mera farz tha.

The man came running too.

Man; beta tune mere bail ko qaid kr k wada ehsan kiya wrna ye dusron ko bhi nuqsan pohnchata aur khud ko bhi

Baldev; haan chachaji pr ab iska dhyan rkhna kahin phir se pagal na hojaye

Baldev came to Veera who was still i shock.

Baldev; tujhe mana kiya na phir yahan kyun chali aayi?

veera; wo main..aap ko kya zarurat thi ese mout k mun me jaane ki aapko kuch hojata to?

Baldev; to? us bache ki jaan ko khatre me dekh pure pind ko museebat me dekh me khada rehta? phir to thu thi meri mardangi pe, main sher hun, sher bail se nhi darta, balke uska shiqar krta he. samjhi? ab chal..mera matlab chaliye, ghar pe sab ko esa na lage k me aap ko bhaga le gya

Baldev walked towards the house, Veera watched him with love as he went.
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Posted: 10 years ago
I was so anxious for Ballu's entry...read it right after posting 😳

Heroic Baldev...Veera ke dil main hi nahin...mere dil main bhi guitar bajwaa di tune Sonu 😳. nice update 👍🏼

Mera Shona Ballu

Lagta hain Veera aur Baldev ke role reversals ho gaye hain...Ballu itna kuch bol rahan hain aur Veera chup 😆

Tune maari entriyaan re
Dil mein baji ghantiyaan re
Tang tang tang...

Dil ki sun commentriyan re
Pyaar ki guarantiyan re
Tang tang tang...

Thanks for the PM, saw just now 😆
Edited by vinu24 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Its too good Sonu !
I just love how the story is cooking up !

Badly waiting...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update yaar!!! Loved every bit of it ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
Eeekkksss!!! Mera hero aa gaya Aur woh bhi ek dum heroic style mein 😎 Haye kitni pyari baatein karta hai Aur kitni saari baatein karta hai 😆
I m loving this story!!! ❤️ Epi se zyada toh mujhe tumhare updates ka intezaar rehta hai! Waiting fr next part!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: zainabawoon

Awesome update yaar!!! Loved every bit of it ❤️


i want a bigger comment😡
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update

thanks for pm 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Finally!Our hero is here Baldev
Loved the update ❤️ VeeBa's convo was very nice!Waiting for the next part 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing dr... it was sooo heroic... baldev my sher ❤️... nd continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Aww so beautiful Sonu ❤️
loved it Veera aur Baldev's first meeting

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