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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ManaliRoy

Surprised by the update [will tell in between,the wajah of being surprised ] :)
Jeeju ko dekhneke chakkar mein kamre ko blame kar diya Amrit ne :v ๐Ÿ˜†
Simply have lost all the words to praise :*๐Ÿค— Baldev in a dark brown kurta :* his eyes were shining <3 <3 โค๏ธwith that ever amazing naughty smirk in his own eyes<3 aise mein perfectly happened which was so obvious :*โ˜บ๏ธ that "veera's heart beat raced,and just before he entered,her heart was beating her chest walls so bad as if that was about to burst,she put a hand on her heart and took a long breath to become lil relaxed :*
Ranvi greeted Baldev and hugged him :) ๐Ÿ˜ฒ;)๐Ÿ˜†
Ballu touched Chaiji&Ratan chaachiji's feet :)
Chaaye k cup se finally veera pe nazar padi Baldev ki :* ,spark chalaa veera k body k through <3 but both of them were disconnected from the :* world into their own world ;) <3โค๏ธ lost in each other's eyes <3
Aag toh dono taraf jamke lagi hain :*โค๏ธ beautifully written <3๐Ÿค—
Veera kho gayi Baldev k deep dark eyes mein aur Baldev kho gayaa in veera's beautiful eyes <3โค๏ธ
Freezing mode se bahaar aaye dono ;) ,he left her hand ;) and looked at her from head to toe ;) ,his eyes scanned her :D ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜†:P awww and she felt awkward
Baldev :- kuch bol kyon nahi rahi yeh? Gungi toh nahi? ๐Ÿ˜†
Ballu ne haath badhaaya :* hand shaked scene was too cute :*
Baldev :- maine 10th tak padhaai ki hain, uske aagey mainu shaukh nahi tha :V ๐Ÿ˜†:P โญ๏ธ:V
Aye hayee Baldev ne abhi se compliment denaa start kar diya :* <3 โญ๏ธaur woh bhi whispered in his husky voice <3 ,โค๏ธ leaned lil close to her :*๐Ÿ˜Ž
Mainu toh bohot bolne waali biwi chaahiye jo mera sir khaa jaaye ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†, Baldev shocked lol,,koi bhi favourite nahi filmon mein :P๐Ÿ˜†
"Acchaa main pasand hoon? :* <3โญ๏ธ, yayyy in a reflex "jee" bol diya :Dโค๏ธ
Nahi ji mainu aaplogon se kuch nahi poochna,,,,itnaa Pyaar itna vishwaas. :)โค๏ธ
The situation was very unpredictable ,,but still the scene had wooing romance :*โค๏ธ "he pulled her close,pinned her to the wall,his arms around her, and her ans on his chest <3 ,his cheek touched hers,and the hair of his stubble gave her goosebumps :* and another eyelock <3 , gradually showed scene,unique aur khoobsurat.โค๏ธ
Ballu in action โญ๏ธwow he saw,he ran,he saves :* <3 brilliantly..He was superb in that scene :*๐Ÿ‘
Awww Ballu ne aap pukarna bhoolke,tu bolne lagaa veera ko :* and saath hi saath he controlled that bull too.
Binaa apne jaanki parwaah kiye binaa Ballu saved many lives :*๐Ÿ‘โญ๏ธ and this makes him so happy <3 ๐Ÿ˜ŽPind daa putaar duniyaa daa sher :*
Baldev's last dialogue of today was extra awwwiiieee <3 " ab chal,,,,mera matlab chaliye :* :D,๐Ÿ˜† gharpe sabko aisaa naa lage k main aapko bhagaa le gayaa ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜Ž
Hottie Naughty Ballu :*
He went and she watched him with love aww <3โค๏ธ

Fighting scenes with romantic touch,,those were really surprising to me,,very well blended <3 loved the update so much Overactor... ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค— โค๏ธ


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Nikki36

Great updates,

Loved baldevs entrance, he was playing in his phone while his future wife is serving tea! How rude lol.

Liking the attraction between them already, and this easily impressed, soon to be head over heels in love with baldev, slightly reseved veera is actually a nice change, look forward to how baldev brings out the louder, fighting veera.

I hope u have some phone conversations/going on a date type thing.

haha he didn't realize that she was already there๐Ÿ˜† the next update would clear it๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sonmusk

Why?this is a different story, i know u r missing ur sherni but well let the story move ahead. U knw me very well,yes i m missing my sherni,ok lets see veera's this side also. Who knows this one may will win my heart! Keep it up!

๐Ÿ˜† i know most of the ppl on this forum๐Ÿ˜‰ very well
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pri_tanha

Eeekkksss!!! Mera hero aa gaya Aur woh bhi ek dum heroic style mein ๐Ÿ˜Ž Haye kitni pyari baatein karta hai Aur kitni saari baatein karta hai ๐Ÿ˜†

I m loving this story!!! โค๏ธ Epi se zyada toh mujhe tumhare updates ka intezaar rehta hai! Waiting fr next part!!!


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Veera just stood there, Baldev looked back and asked her to follow, Veera smiled and followed him back to the house.
Baldev stopped out of the house and looked at Veera.

Baldev; aur kuch poochna ya kehna he?

Veera just stared at him, and then lowered her eyes.

Baldev; aap soch lijiye phir

Baldev went inside and sat beside jaggi again, Veera went upstairs.

Balwant; to puttar kesi lagi Veera? kya jawab he tera?

Baldev smiled and looked down.

Baldev; papaji menu..menu aapki pasand, pasand he

Balwant; mubarkan jee, Baldev nu te Veera pasand agai, ab Ranvi puttar tu ja ke Veera se bhi pooch le

Ranvi; jee tayaji

Ranvi went upstairs.

Veera was standing by her window, smiling and thinking of Baldev, her heart was so sure that he was the one for her. Ranvi came to her.

Ranvi; Veerakhdi..Baldev ne to haan keh di ab tu bta tenu kesa laga baldev

Veera turned in shock

Veera; unhone haan keh di? khud haan kahi unhone?

Ranvi; haan veerakhdi tenu bhi ko na keh skta he bhalla, ab tu bta

Veera turned again, and smiled.

Veera; veerji, me...wo sbse alag he veerji, aur sbse ache bhi, aap jante hen kya hua bahar

Veera told him everything.

Ranvi; wah e to wada changa kita Baldev, to tune kya socha ?

Veera; veerji, ese insan ko koi na keh skta he kya

Ranvi; yani teri trf se haan he?

Veera nodded.

Ranvi; tu..veerakhdi pakka na? dekh abhi tak mene tayaji ko zaban nhi di, ek baar zaban de di to me na nhi keh paonga unhe, tu bilkul pakke man se keh rhi he na

Veera; haan veerji, chaiji ne kaha tha, kisi ko parakhne k liye ek lamha hi kafi hta he, aur wo lamba wo bail se bhidne wala hi tha, mera dil unhe apna chukka he veerji

Ranvi smiled heavily and hugged her.

Ranvi; Rab tenu sari khushiyan de veerakhdi, me ja k sbko bta deta hun

Veera nodded.

Ranvi went downstairs and fixed the marriage.

Balwant; to puttar hum kal se hi tayariyon me jutt jate hen, ghar ki saaf safai me 2-3 din lag jayenge, ab hum apne pind wapas a rhe hen na

Ranvi; tayaji tab tk aap log ithe hi reh lo hamare saath, kahan baar baar ana jana kroge dikat hogi, yahan se sb changi tarah hopayega aur hum sath me acha same bhi bita lenge

Balwant; changa puttar aaj hum jaa k kal samaan le k wapas ayenge, abhi hum chalte hen.

They left, Veera came on the window to catch one glimpse of Baldev, she was disappointed when she couldn't but before she turned she saw Baldev standing and waving at her. She was looking in the wrong direction, he stood just infront of her window, she smiled and waved back. Baldev walked in reverse, Veera kept blushing, until he got to his jeep and then he waved again, she waved back, and then he got into his jeep and left.

Veera couldn't stop blushing, Tina and Amrit came to her and hugged her.

Amrit; congratulations madam aap ke un ne haan krdi

Tina; aur shadi bhi fix hogai

Amrit; aur wo kal se yahan rehne aane wale hen

Veera; kya?? wo yahan rahenge? sachi? ab mera kya hoga

Amrit; budhu..acha hi he na tu unhe aur jaan payegi

On the other side Baldev was having the same discussion with his friends

Baldev; kya khaaq acha he, papaji bhi na, agar me 24 ghante un logon ke saath rahunga to unhe meri asliyat pta nhi chal jayegi

Billa; pr paaji wo jo bhi he wo to sb shanpure me he, yahan kese pta lagega

Baldev; oye to kya me unki tarah haan jee ye jee wo jee kr k baat krta rahunga, mere mun se kuch na kuch niqal hi jana he, aur mera kisi k sath danga hogya to, aur haan Baldev Singh ka thaska pure 50 pindon me he, yahan bhi koi namuna miljayega jo menu pehchan jaye

Jaggi; paaji aap na ghar se hi mat niqalna, aur na ghar pe ziada bolna hi mat sb theek rhega

Baldev; chup kr khoteya, papaji bhi na, pehle us ladki se mera rishta te kr diya aur phir ab rehne chale hen

Billa; pr paji aap to man bna ke aaye the k use na kahoge hi kahego, phir ye haan kahan se agai?? kahin esa to nahi ke aap parjai pe lattoo hogye ho?

Baldev; oye chup kr, menu laga tha sheher se padh likh k aayi he tezz tarar madern ladki hogi, pr ye to bht bholli bhali gaon ki gori niqli yar, aur phir inna sona mukhda inni lachakdaar kamariya, aur ese kajrare nain, aakhir vyah to krna he ek din aur kisi sar phiri bandariya ko laane se acha he papaji ki pasand ki hui kudi se hi vyah kr lun, papaji bhi khush aur me bhi

Jaggi; paji aapne uski photo nhi dekhi thi kya? jo nainon ki baaten ab kr rhe ho?

Baldev; o nhi oye, papaji se jhagda kr k betha tha, photo tak nhi dekhi gusse me, lekin a is siyape ka kya karun? use pta chala ke ye jo apna transport ka buisness he uske contract kis tarah lete hen hum to hogaya mera vyah

Billa; oh ho paji ab parjai se vyah krne ko itne be chain

Baldev; oye vyah ki fiqr nhi he, ab to use utha k bhi le jaon agr wo nakhre dikhaye to, pr agr use achanaq se meri asliyat pta lag gai to

Jaggi; kya asliyat paji, konse hum gair kanuni dhande krte hen, bas chaudhri ki transport ko milne wale contract bhi dara dhamka ke hum le lete hen aur ki, baqi thoda bht logon ko dara k rakha he aur to kuch galt nhi kiya humne

Baldev; haan pr, agr usne mera gussa dekh liya to, wo to dar hi jayegi, itni masoom se he wo, uff papaji bhi na, pta nhi kya chahte hen mera vyah krwana ya meri hassi udwana

Billa; paji agr pta chal bhi gya to kya, vyah to hoga hi aur vyah ke baad bhi to pta lagna he hai na

Baldev; menu nhi pta, acha bhalla na bolne gya tha ye kudi kyun mere dil which utar gai, galat baat he ye, uski masum see nazren najane kyaa kya sapne saja rhi hen, ke wada acha hun aur me hun kya, papaji ki zubaan me chata hua badmash, shanpure da gunda, aur wo chotu kya bulata he, haan don ..siyapa, bta deta use me, phir utha k le ata, ye jhoot ka boj to nhi uthana padta menu

Billa; paji tussi chinta na kro, wo aapki voti bante hi sb smjh jayegi, rahi shadi ki baat to pandit ko dhamka ke isi hafte me shadi nipta lenge, ek hafta thodi acting kr lena

Jaggi; haan paji, ek hafte me kuch nhi pta lagne wala

Baldev was irriated and gave it a thought.
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Posted: 11 years ago
yes yes baldev is very mysterious ๐Ÿ˜ˆ veera's perfect prince charming is not so perfect๐Ÿ˜›. Baldev can never be good in my stories
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Posted: 11 years ago
Haha i knew it!!! I knew it that there will be some twist to baldev, i knew he could not be a goody too shoes and especially not your stories no! ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜† Baldev's imperfections together with his heart of gold that knows to love only unconditionally is what makes him the perfect prince charming LOVED it!!! Update soon cant wait to see Veera's reaction when she learns his truths!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: zainabawoon

Haha i knew it!!! I knew it that there will be some twist to baldev, i knew he could not be a goody too shoes and especially not your stories no! ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜† Baldev's imperfections together with his heart of gold that knows to love only unconditionally is what makes him the perfect prince charming LOVED it!!! Update soon cant wait to see Veera's reaction when she learns his truths!

She won't learn the truth anytime soon๐Ÿ˜›
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow!!๐Ÿ˜Š Read all the chapters in one go, they were amazing!!!
Mind blowing update's ...loved them!!
Love mysterious baldev...can't wait to see veera reaction after finding out baldev's truth!!
Continue soon...can't wait to read more!!
Thank u for all the pm's and I'm so sorry for not commenting on all your updates individually, but I will try to keep up to date with them from now on!!๐Ÿ˜Š

Edited by Krazzy4u786 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
bechara ballu na karne aaya tha... haan karke jaa rha h... ab to utha k hi le jaega veera ko... hae... bad boy with a good heart perfect combo... the imperfectly perfect jodi is on way...

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