~|A VeeBa story season 3|~ part 15 pg 43 - Page 22

Created

Last reply

Replies

340

Views

48.9k

Users

36

Likes

748

Frequent Posters

overactor thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 10 years ago
Part_9

Baldev moved his hand to touch her, but then all others arrived there all of a sudden and jaggi shouted.

Jaggi; chalen paaji

Veera looked away, Baldev nodded. As veera walked the music of her anklets made baldev smile.

They got back into the jeep, Veera kept smiling throughout, Baldev smiled too. They were lost in their own world. When they reached Baldev again helped Veera to move out of the jeep. Veera walked towards the door, Baldev stood by the jeep, but then Veera stopped mid-way and turned to look at him and smiled. Baldev's heart filled with happiness. She waved at him and went inside blushing.

She closed the door of her room and lay on the bed, recalling their moments in the market, she sat up and touched the anklets.

Veera; kitni lucky hun me, jo mujhe aap jesa pati milne ja rha he

she blushed again, Amrit and Tina entered her room.

Amrit; madam esa kya hua market me jo aap abhi tak blush kr rhi hen

Tina; kahin usne chua kya, hug hua? kiss hui?

Veera; dhatt, esa kuch nhi

Amrit; to phir tere gaal ese tamatar jese laal kyun ho rahe hen?

Veera moved her trouser up a little and exposed her ankles to show them her anklets.

Tina; wow ye jeeju ne gift kiye?

Veera nodded with a smile.

Amrit; oh ho to jeeju ne payal gift ki he tabhi madam itni khush hen, acha ye payal pehnai kisne? jeeju ne

Veera nodded again and then hid her face.

Tina; aur bta na kya hua

Veera; nhi tum log jao

Amrit; Veera bata na please

Veera; unhone kaha ke hamen dosti kar leni chahiye

Tina; to tu bhi to yehi chahti thi na

Veera; haan aur wo chahte hen ke me unhe "tu" keh k bulaon

Tina; wow jeeju to bht advance hen, tune to mana krdiya hoga, Miss. Aap

Veera; mene kaha me koshish krungi

Amrit; oh ho Veera tujhe konsa pahad todne ko kaha he jo tu koshish kregi

Veera; pr me unhe shadi se pehle kese, nhi, aur shadi k baad bhi pati ki izzat krni hti he ese "tu" kese kahungi, pr unhone zid ki to..pati ki baat manna bhi zaruri he

AMrit and Tina exchanged looks.

Tina; Veera jee, aap dhanye hen, kese krleti hen aap ye sab

Veera; tum log bht bure ho, mujhe Rabjee ne itne ache pati diye hen, unke charnon me jeewan bitana chahiye mujhe

Amrit; Veera grow up, that's such an old thought

Veera; old kese? pati ko hamare dharm me parmeshwar maante hen

Tina; amrit rehne de dekhte hen kab tk ye ese rehti he, shadi ke 2 mahinon ke andar hi iska attitude change hojayega

Veera; tum log na sirf irritate krte ho bas, dekh lena kuch change nhi hoga

AMrit; okay we'll see

Baldev was thinking of Veera too. Jaggi and Billa came to him.

Jaggi; to paaji hoga parjai se pyaar mohobbat ki baaten

Baldev; o nhi oye, baat sirf dosti tk aa pai, wo itna sharmati he k, aap aap sun k kaan pak gye mere, me sher hun, bheegi billi ka kya karun, voti to esi honi chahiye jo sara din ladti jhagadti rhe aur ye to itni masum he ke "tum" tk nhi kehti, kya karun

Billa; oh paaji shadi k baad na sari bheegi billiyan sherni ban jati hen aur sher ko chooha bna deti hen, apne jaswinder ko hi dekho, uske saamne wo sukhbeer k bandon ki bolti band hojati thi, pr kya hua shadi k baad ab to dikhta bhi nhi, bas sabzi lete huye ya bache paalte huye dekha he use

Jaggi; haan paaji yaad nhi uski sagai me parjai kese sharma rhi thi aur wo bada tan rha tha meri voti wadi pyari he masum he, ab kon masum he

Baldev; nhi oye, us jasvinder ka vyah shanno se hua he, shanno ka sb ko pta tha wo kesi he jasvinder ainwayi uski jhutti tareefen krta tha, tu kaha Shanno ko meri Veera se mila rha he, uski saheliyan dekh kesi hen aur use dekh, kitni alag kitni bholli he wo, ese kese chalega, use meri voti banna he, pure 50-60 pindon ki aurton pe roub jhaadna he ye kese kr payegi ye sb, mera sach jaante hi rone beth gai to, me use dukh nhi dena chahta, papaji ko bhi sharam nhi aati bechari kudi ki zindagi barbaad krdi, menu use milate hi na, ab to dil agaya he, ab use chad bhi nhi skta

Jaggi; to ab kya karoge paaji?

Baldev; uska imtihaan lunga, jo wo khari utri to wo meri voti ban k theek hojayegi

Billa; aur paaji agr nhi hui to? to aap kya karoge

Baldev; to me use abhi sach bta dunga aur utha ke le jaonga

Jaggi; pr kyun paaji

Baldev; bas ye Baldev k kanoon he

Billa; jee paaji aapke kanoon na aap hi behtar jano

At night Veera was putting the dishes in the racks when Bansuri came.

Bansuri; Veera puttar thoda doodh thanda kr k fridge me Baldev ko de aa, thanda dood piye bagair use neend nhi aati

Veera; jee taayiji main abhi fridge me rakh deti hun

After she was done with her chores, she too the glass of milk and went to Baldev's room, the music of her anklets alarmed him, he opened the door just as she arrived.

Baldev; teri payal se pata chal hi gya k tu a rhi he

Veera smiled. He moved so she could come in, she walked in and gave him his milk. His room was a mess. His day clothes were placed on the sofa, his towel on the chair, and his bedsheet was almost down on the floor.

Veera took his stuff and opened the cupboard, Baldev ran to stop her and as she opened it all the stuff fell on her and baldev who just arrived behind her, they both fell, Veera fell on Baldev and the clothes on her.
-BeingMuslimah- thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
Poor Jaswinder 🤣
U r awesome when it comes to dialogue writing Sonu! 👍🏼 😆
Wats the test abt?! 😃 VeeBa in awkward situation 😆
Veeras gonna die blushing! ☺️


Waiting...


Edited by .Jenvita_Neha. - 10 years ago
overactor thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: .Jenvita_Neha.

Poor Jaswinder 🤣
U r awesome when it comes to dialogue writing Sonu! 👍🏼 😆
Wats the test abt?! 😃 VeeBa in awkward situation 😆
Veeras gonna die blushing! ☺️


Waiting...


ikr, i can give gabchoo and manasvi a tough competition😛 😉 😎 😆
the test u have to wait and see
zainabawoon thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update yaar!! Jaswinder ki buri kismat, bechara phas gaye 🤣 the last part veera opens the cupboard, the clothes and all fall on her and she falls on top of baldev, heart beating lub-dub moment cant wait for the next chapter, continue soon 😃
overactor thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: zainabawoon

Awesome update yaar!! Jaswinder ki buri kismat, bechara phas gaye 🤣 the last part veera opens the cupboard, the clothes and all fall on her and she falls on top of baldev, heart beating lub-dub moment cant wait for the next chapter, continue soon 😃

why didn't u comment on the previous update😡
Nikki36 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
Cute update.
Baldev wants a sherni who will fight witb him! Looking forward to the test
Loved the last bit, I can imagine that happening and veera trapped by an extremally close baldev and a pile of stuff
mansi_as18 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
veera on top of ballu... haeee
-QueenlyChitra- thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update thanks for pm 😊
pri_tanvi thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
Sher ko sherni chahiye kisi bhi haal mein!! I love Ballu's attitude!! ❤️ My baby 🤗
Aha Veeba in awkward situation 😉
Lovely_KaranIka thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
Bechara Jaswinder 🤣 awesome update loved every bit of it.. And specially the last part i can imagine that 😆
Awkward situation 😉 😆

waiting eagerly... 😳

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".