Ariya FF: Tumhay wapis ana hogha UPD,pt 7, pg 17 - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
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its wounderful update
continue soon
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Hey guys, so here is part 7! updating from phone so PMs will be sent later

Part 7

Shree: sir, mil jahay...

Everyone rushed to Shree's computer and were sure that Shree was right. They had spotted the two and immediately found out where they had come from. KOLKATA.

Rathore: Shree, tum hum sab ki Kolkata ki tickets karwa lo, kal subha ki.

Shree: yes sir.

While Rathore and Chotu were busy talking to Mr.Dixit to try and gain more information about these boys and Shree was booking the tickets, Arjun decided to carry on watching the footage in which the men had be spotted by Shree. Arjun kept watching and saw someone approaching the two, they hugged and left but unfortunately Arjun was not able to see the face of the 3rd person, they could have been a huge help in this case.

Arjun: Mr. Dixit, mujhay iss footage ki copy chahiya hay.

Mr.Dixit: theek hay, mein kal subah he, app kay office iss ki copy bhijwa doon gha.
Hearing this Arjun exited the office and went in the SUV to be followed by everyone.

9:00 pm ETF office

Shree: sir, kal subha 8 bajay ki tickets hain, is that ok?

Rathore: theek hay Shree, kal subah sab saat (7) bajay ETF office mein miltain hain.
Everyone nodded in agreement.

Chotu: sir forensic reports aa gahein hain. Said Chotu while handing one to Rathore and the other to Arjun.

Arjun: iss report kay hisaab say, inn downo ko pahlay, Benzodiazepines day kar behosh kiya gaya hay, inpay torture bhi howa aur phir, Benzodiazepines aur alcohol kay mixture aur abuse ki waja say inki maut ho gahi hay.

Rathore: Yah case aur bhi ujal raha hay! Kuch samaj nahi aa raha.

Arjun: yah case, kuch bohot bara samnay lahay gha Rathore, baas abb kal ka intazaar hay.

Rathore: hmm.! Ok team, ab saab ghar jatay hain aur araam kar kay kal subha miltay hain.
While everyone was leaving Arjun signalled Shree to stay and Shree understood this and stayed seated.

Chotu: chal na Shree, ajj yahein rahna hay kya?

Shree: haan Chotu, mujhay kuch kaam hay, toh jaa.

Chotu: achaa...! Abb samjha, tumhari dosti abb iss samjhay ya samjahown say itni ho jahi hay kay toh apnay puranay dost ko bhol he jaya. Chotu said while making out as if he was wiping his tears.
This did not go un heard by Arjun and he decided to tease Chotu now.

Arjun: abb kya karein Chotu, Shree kay standards tohray high ho jahaein hain, abb tumhay bhi Rathore ko makhan lagana chahiya, agar tum kaho toh mein kuch help kar doon?

Shree could not help but laugh at this and Chotu was dumbstruck by how Arjun was acting and didn't know what to say!

Chotu: BYE SHREE, BYE SIR! That's all Chotu could say as he rushed out the office, leaving Arjun and Shree with a smirk.

9:30 pm ETF office - Arjun and Shree

Shree: sir...mujhay... Arjun understood what Shree wanted to say, Shree needed to know about how Arjun was so sure about Riya being alive, so Arjun told Shree everything, how he met Riya outside Rathores flat, how she went even though she looked at him, when he spotted her today and how she ran away.

Arjun: Shree mujhaya paaka yakein hay kay woh Riya hay, wohi ankhein, wohi baal, wohi chehra, Shree mein Riya ko pechanay mein ghalti nahi kar sakta aur...

Shree; kya howa sir...aur kya?

Arjun: Shree mujhay lagta hay kay Riya kisi bohot bari musibat mein hay, shahid issi wajha say mujhsay, I mean humsay bhaag rahi hay.

Shree: par sir, aysi kya baat ho sakti hay?

Arjun: pata nahi Shree, I just hope kay Riya safe ho.

Shree: Sir...app nay kaha kay Riya app ko Rathore sir kay flat kay paas nazar ahii aur ussi floor pay, toh kya aysa ho sakta hay kay... But before Shree could finish, Arjun completed his sentence for him, now being able to connect the dots.

Arjun: RATHORE KO SAB PATA HO! As Arjun completely this sentence him and Shree simultaneously looked at each other. Arjun immediately stood up from his chair and continued...

Arjun: Tum sahi kah rahay ho Shree, jab mein Rathore kay floor pay tha, udhar meinay Riya ko deyka, phir jab mein Rathore kay paas jaya toh woh mujhay dheek kay bohot tensed laag raha tha, aur jab mein andar jaya toh meinay dow mug coffee kay dhekhay..SHIT! Mein itni important baat kaysay nazaar andaz kar sakta hoon!

Shree: par sir, yah eik itafaq bhi toh ho sakta hay? Kya app ko sach mein lagta hay kay..

Arjun: Haan Shree! Iskay ilawa jab Rathore ko ajj site pay phone aya tha toh jab meinay answer kiya toh kisi nay jawab nahi diya likin mujhay pata tha kay...mera matlab jab meinay Rathore ko phone diya aur kaha kay private number say phone tha, toh woh eik daam ghabra gaya. Phir usnay door jaa kay phone pay bata ki aur humein immediately wahan say nikal nay ka order diya jab humari investigation abhi baaki thi.

Shree: haan sir, aur jab hum wahan wapis jaya toh Rathore sir ko kitna ghusa aya!

Arjun: exactly! Aur Rathore ko kaysay pata chala kay hum wahan hain, humnay say kisi nay Rathore yaa Chotu ko nahi baataya kay hum wapis jaa rahein hain.

Shree: toh kya, uss ladk...mera matlab Riya nah he Rathore sir ko phone kiya takaay hum usay dhoond naa pahay.

Arjun: haan shree, abb toh baas eik kaam rah jaya hay... Arjun said this with a naughty smile on his face and Shree understood exactly what Arjun wanted.

Shree: NAHI SIR, NAHI! MEIN AHSA NAHI KAR SAKTA!

Arjun: Shree, ITS AN ORDER!

Shree: sir, AGAR RATHORE SIR KO PATA CHAAL JAYA KAY MEINAY UNKA PHONE TAP KIYA HAY TOH WOH MUJHAY MAAR DEIN GHAY. Said a petrified Shree!

Arjun: Shree! Agar tumnay nahi kiya toh mein tumahy ZINDA KAA JAHOON GHA!
Shree was stuck between a die die situation and he knew he had to help Arjun because that's the only way he was getting his Rii back!

Shree (thinking to himself); RII KI BACHI! MEINAY KAHA THA NAA KAY TAYRA YAH ARJUN SIR MUJHAY ZINDA NAHI CHORAY GHA TERI WAJA SAY, AUR AJJ DHEK, WOHI HO RAHA HAY!

Arjun: SHREE! NOW! This was enough to get Shree out of his trance and he quickly and quietly did what he was supposed to.

Shree: sir...Ho...ho...gaya!

Arjun: GOOD! Baas abb humein intazar karna ho gha! Eik baar Riya mil jahay phir iss Rathore ko mein nahi choron gha!

Precap:
ETF in kolkata
Arjun and Shree listening to Rathores convos
New discoveries on case


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Edited by simple_dimple93 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
it was wounderful,
rathore's phone taped,
precap intersting
continue soon,
send me pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesomee bt next part jaldi upload karo na plzzz..

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice part ... poor Shree kaham phas gayi...luvd the way Arjun teased Chotu... continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow!!! rathore's phone is getting tapped... rathore ko pata chala toh sree ko zinda kha jaayenga n arjun rathore ko mar dalega!!!

interesting.. wanna see the team cornering the chief!!! hehehe

update soon!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97


Outstanding..love it dear...Exited precap...
Love Chotu-Arjun-Shree scene...And also Arjun-Shree Scene..
Awsome update..really love it...wating for the next part...hope you will update it soon...
love the dialouge of Shree (thinking to himself):RII KI BACHI! MEINAY KAHA THA NAA KAY TAYRA YAH ARJUN SIR MUJHAY ZINDA NAHI CHORAY GHA TERI WAJA SAY,AUR AJJ DHEK, WOHI HO RAHA HAY!

Edited by Moumimon - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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superbbb
uff bechra shreee awww phas gya

awsome update dear loved it waitng for nxt prt
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Posted: 12 years ago
#99
bechara chotu😆, shree left him for Arjun😆
N wow they gonna tap Rathore's phone😆
hope Rathore doesnt have any gf😉
please continue😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey ...
That was amazing ...
Yesss Arjun n Shree are finally joining the dots n finding where Riya is ...
Omg love the way Arjun replied to Chottu ... Lol ...
N poor Shree he has to tap Rathod's phone ...
N wow the precap sounds interesting ... :)

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