Ariya FF: Tumhay wapis ana hogha UPD,pt 7, pg 17 - Page 12

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Posted: 12 years ago
kab karogi nxt update? tum itna wqt keu lag rahi ho update karne k liye? :( jaldi karo na nxt update... :( :( :(
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Hey guys! Im back with chapter 8! Sorry for the late Update but i have some interesting surprises for you in this chapter so DO read, like and comment.

Recap from previous Chapter: Arjun: GOOD! Baas abb humein intazar karna ho gha! Eik baar Riya mil jahay phir iss Rathore ko mein nahi choron gha!

Arjun: chalo Shree mein tumhay ghar chor dyta hoon, par eik baat yaad rakhna kay yah tumhara system puri raat on rahna chahiya aur iss ko meray laptop say connect kar do, takay mein bhi saab soun sakoon

Shree: don't worry sir, mein kaar chuka hoon.

Arjun: theek hay, app chalo.

After their intense meeting Arjun dropped Shree home and all night kept his eyes on his laptop for any calls.

1:30 am - Arjun and Shree notice an incoming call in their respective homes

Rathore: hello

A Girl: hi darling Hearing this Arjun and Shree's eyebrows suddenly rise up in curiosity, they know that its definitely not Riya but there was no harm in listening! 😉

Rathore: TUM! Tum mujhay baar baar phone kyun kar rahi ho?

A girl: come on sweetheart, itnay naraz ho kay apni girlfriend ko pehchanay say manna kar rahay ho!

Rathore: dhekho, tum woh pehli ladki ho ghi jisay eik ETF officer bheek mang raha hay! MUJHAY CHOOR DOH YAAR! MEINAY TUMHARA KYA BIGARA HAY!

A girl: pata hay, mujhay akroo lowg BOHOT passand hain!

Rathore: ...akroo...TUMHAY AKROO PASAND HAIN NAA! TOH MEIN TUMHAY APNAY ETF OFFICER KA NUMBER DAYTA HOON, USKA NAAM HAY ARJUN SURYAKANT RAWTE! Please! Tum usay taang karo, par PLEASE mujhay choorr doh!

A girl: offer buri nahi hay, PAR MEIN TUMHAY KAYSAY DHOOKA DAY SAKTI HOON! CHALO MEIN TUMHAY KAAL PHONE KARTI HOON! BYE HONEY!

Rathore: get lost!

Arjun: shree! Yah number apnay phone mein save karo, mujhay iski saab detail chahiyein!

Shree: (whispers but doesn't know Arjun can hear him): Abb maaza ahay gha, downo eik ladki kay liyah larein ghay! Abb Riya tayra kya hoo ghaa, Arjun sir toh iski awaaz say he itnay impress ho jahay!

Arjun: Shree! Apni bakwaas band karo! Mujhay details issi liyah chahiyein takay mein Rathore ko sabak sikha sakoon! Mera number day gha, abb dhekna mein iski kya haalat karta hoon!

Shree: s...sorry sir! Mein ABHI kara hoon!

Arjun: good! Saying this Shree quickly got the information that Arjun had asked for and went to sleep while keeping his eyes on his laptop continuously, he wanted to Riya to be back. And on the other hand Arjun had decided to pierce his eyes into his laptop, he wanted to hear Riya's voice once again! He hadn't heard that sweet melody in his ears for ages, his eyes and ears were longing to hear and see that beautiful face in front of his eyes once again! Lost in memories, Arjun didn't realise went he fell asleep...but his senses were always alert!

Next day, 6:30 am, Arjun and Shree see an outgoing call on Rathores phone

Rathore: hello, hum sab kolkata jaa rahain hain, case kay silsilay mein, par tumhay yahein rahna ho ga. Then they heard the voice that they were dying to hear, their ears NEEDED to hear that enchantment and they finally got it...

RIYA: par sir... As soon as Riya spoke Arjun and Shree ran towards their laptops to hear her voice once again, they both had tears in their eyes! Their Riya was back! They wanted to talk to her, they wanted to feel her presence but they knew they couldn't...for now.

Rathore: RIYA, nothing else, its an order. Koi tumhari call trace kar sakta hay aur yah mein afford nahi kar sakta agar tumhay kuch hoo jaya toh mein Shree, Chotu aur khaas kar kay Arjun ko kaysay moun dhikhaown gha. Please Riya.

Riya: bye sir and thank you. Saying this their conversation ended and the call was also traced. Shree immediately called Arjun so they could go and meet Riya, he wanted to meet his Ri again and smack her for doing this to them.

Shree: HELLO SIR! CALL TRACE HO JAHI! MEIN APP KO LOCATION SEND KARTA HO, GALDI CHALTEIN HAIN!

But to Shree's amazement Arjun had something else in mind, with a heavy heart he gave his order.

Arjun: NAHI SHREE! Hearing this Shree nearly had tears in his eyes, he wanted to see his Ri and he didnt want to delay any further but all of a sudden why was Arjun sir saying no.

Shree:..but...but...WHY SIR?

Arjun: Shree tumnay suna nahi kay Rathore nay kya kaha Riya say jab woh anna chaha rahi thi, woh Riya ko hamaray saath annay nahi day raha khunkay uski JAAN KHATRAY MEIN HAY! Riya humaray paas aa nahi rahi kyunkay ussay paata hay kay agar kisi nay usay humaray saath dheekh liya toh uski aur shahid humari jaan bhi khatray mein ho sakti hay. Riya kisi bohot bari musibat mein hay Shree...koi usay dhoound raha hay...aur shahid yah case bhi usay joura waha hay...hummay yah case jald solve karna hoja Shree...agar humein Riya wapis chahiya... 😲

Precap:
ETF in Kolkata
Shocking revealtions about the case 😲
That it guys! Hope you liked it and i didnt disappoint you!

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PMs have been sent, hope you like it guys 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update :) loved it
waiting for next part update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great update..
Thanks for the pM
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update!!!!!!!!!❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
😭i too had tears reading diz happyyy relly superb update
n rathod's part was juz amazing waz laughinggg 🤣 waitng for nxt prt ty for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey ...
That was amazing ...
I loved it ... :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey nice update. thanx for pm. pm me . waiting for revealations!!..
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Posted: 12 years ago
1st part was Rofl man... Rathores adimirer...😆... oh no Riya's life n danger... update soon...

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