Ariya FF: Tumhay wapis ana hogha UPD,pt 7, pg 17 - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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very emotional loved it 😭diz made me cry awww
waiting for nxt part huggiee
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guys, i am sooo over-whelmed with the appreciation, comments and likes I have recieved from you guys!

A BIGGG HUG TO ALL OF YOU!

Sorry for the late update, have been quite busy lately! AGAIN REALLY SORRY!

anyway here it goes...hope you guys like it!

Part 2

11:00 pm Arjun In his car on the way back home

Arjun was driving home as he recalled all the moments he had spent with Roshni, how they got married and how his Roshni left him and he couldn't do anything, but as he saw Roshni fading away he saw Riya's enchanting face drift into his memories, he re-called her dimpled smile and how her milky eyes would high lighten her mesmerising complexion. He remembered her antics and how her eyes would speak everything that rested with her innocent heart! Mr. Arjun Suryakant Raute was heading towards his first step towards realisation of that one particular emotion that he had killed from within himself, his thoughts were interrupted by a phone call be shree.

Shree: hello, sir, sorry to disturb you, meinay app ko isiliyah phone kia tha takay app ko remind kar doon kay woh Reema Prakash ki file app ko Rathore sir kay ghar drop karni hay, khunki woh office mein he bhool gahay thay.

Arjun: mein...woh..haan mujhay yaad hay Shree, phikar maat karo and saying this Arjun put the phone down as if he was trying to run away, run away from the awakening within him.
Arjun (thinking to himself): baas Arjun! Meri zindagi sirif Roshni kay liyah thi aur rahay ghi, par phir kyun mujhay Roshni mein Riya dikhay day rahi hay! Darn it! In Arjun's frustration he took a violent U-turn towards Rathore's house, being unaware of the shock that was awaiting him.
Arjun parked the car infront of Rathores flat and got out the car, while coming out he saw a driver waiting for someone to come down, ignoring his surroundings he made his way towards the lift to go to the 13th floor, the doors of the lift opened on the 13th floor and Arjun marched down the corridor and was just about to turn, but then he remembered that he had left the file in the car, he turned back and his body completely froze! He couldn't react; it wasn't possible, a thousand thoughts zapped through his head in a matter of seconds.

Arjun:...R.R..Riya...
Those were the only words that came out of Arjun's mouth as he saw that familiar figure standing inside the lift fading away as the lift door closed. As the door closed Arjun came back to reality.

Arjun: RIYAAA! RIYA RUKO, WAIT! He screamed at the top of his voice and immediately ran towards the lift, he pressed the button numerous times in a matter of seconds but the doors weren't opening, without thinking that he was on the 13th floor, Arjun ran down the stairs, keeping his eyes open to catch her, catch the person he just saw.
Arjun heard the car start downstairs and looked out the window.

Arjun: RIYAAA!!

The girl suddenly froze as she was about to get into the car, she looked up and stood there staring into the man's eyes who had just screamed, they both just looked at each other...until the silence was broken.

Arjun: ...R...R...Riya...tum..tum..zinda..hoo.. As Arjun spoke these words a smile appeared on his lips as if his lifelong prayer was answered, he felt as if his soul had entered his lifeless body again, but this happiness didn't last for long, Arjun's words immediately brought the girl back to reality and she pretended to turn a blind eye and sat inside the car. Arjun was shocked, he didn't know how to react but when he realised the girl's intention he screamed again.

Arjun: RIYA, RIYA RUKO! Using all the power that persisted within him he started to sprint down the stairs again, constantly screaming her name!

Arjun: RIYAA..RIYA.. RUKO... PLEASE.. RIYA!!

The Girl: ..D..Driver..hurry..GO!

As Arjun laid his foot on the last step towards his destination the car instantly dashed away!

Arjun: RIYAAA! Arjun tried running after the car but it was useless, his body couldn't take it anymore and he collapsed on his knees as he saw the car leaving right in front of his eyes, he felt like he was losing himself all over again, but he wasn't going to let that happen.

Precap:

ETF office

Shree: Rathore sir mein soch raha tha kay Riya ki..ki..maut ko howay 1 mahina ho gaya hay, toh humein uss kay liya kuch karna chahiyah!

Arjun: NAHI! AISA KUCH NAHI HO GHA!

well thats the end guys! will be sending PM's to everyone on my buddy list!

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INDEX

Part 1: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/arjun/3265725/ariya-ff-tumhay-wapis-ana-hogha-upd-pt-7-pg-17

Part 2: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/68757417

Part 3-a: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/68897377

Part 3-b: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/arjun/3265725/ariya-ff-tumhay-wapis-ana-hogha-upd-pt-7-pg-17?pn=6

Part 4: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/69343959

Part 5: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/69598638

Part 6: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/70110475

Part 7: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/arjun/3265725/ariya-ff-tumhay-wapis-ana-hogha-upd-pt-7-pg-17

Edited by simple_dimple93 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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is it really riya.
if not why did that girl avoided arjun.
the suspense always kills me




overall so interesting⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Just read both parts and they were awesome. Loved how Arjun was confused in the first part. The second part had my heart thumping and I literally thought I was going to have a heart attack.
Please update soon and please pm me.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks you so much, will be sending PMs
tomorrow when I'm on the laptop x
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow very intersting
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Great update ...
I really loved it ...
The way Arjun's emotions were portrayed were beautiful ...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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kya wo relly riya thi??

amazing loved it dear waitng for nxt part huggiee
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow amazing part
i wish in our show too riya makes a comeback
eagerly waiting for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
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THAT was really good. Brought a smile on my face. Someone send this to Gorky!

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