Ariya FF: Tumhay wapis ana hogha UPD,pt 7, pg 17 - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guys! im back with part 6! thank you for liking my FF, im so happy
to see all the likes and comments!

Part 6:

After making their promise to each other Arjun and Shree make their way back to the ETF office as they enter they see Rathore stumping in anger from one side of the other while Chotu sat there, probably thinking about his sarain jyaran wali! Arjun casually went and sat in his seat while Shree went and nudged Chotu to bring him back to the drama that was about to happen!

Arjun: Rathore, sit! Meinay tumhay permission day di! Arjun said as he had a devilsh smirk on his face while playing with his pen. At this comment by Arjun, Rathore was infuriated!

Rathore: thank you Arjun! Tum agar permission nahi daytay toh mein toh yahan pouri raat khara rahta!
After making his final statement Rathore sat down and resumed the case.

Rathore: Aur agli bar Rawte, jab mein tumhay order doon, toh usay chup chap accept karo! Arjun: yes...SIR!

Throughout all this Shree and Chotu were literally trying to control their laughter and this did not go unnoticed by Arjun and to Chotu's surprise Arjun winked at them!

Chotu: orri baba..! This is all Chotu could say after getting a shock of a lifetime!

Rathore: Chotu! Abb tumhein bhi kuch kheina hay kya! Warna case par dehan dein?

Chotu:...na...nahi..sorry sir!

Rathore: haan toh, humein pata chala hay kay joh lowg marein hain unka naam Dhruv Prakash aur Siddharth Shah tha, yah downo thoray dil phelay he yahan ayy thay, baki hamaray paas koi information nahi hay.

Arjun: Shree woh forensic reports kab tak ayen ghi?

Shree: um...ajj shaam 8 bajay taak sir,

Arjun: acha, sab say phelay humein inn downo kay barein mein aur information chahiya hay! Rathore yah lowg yahan kasay ayy thay, mera matlab, car, train..

Rathore: yah downo yahan pay train say ahay thay, kyun? Arjun: Rathore agar hum inn downo ka route track karein toh shahid hum inn kay baray mein aur jaan pahein

Rathore:..hmm...tum sahi kay rahay ho Rawte, Shree, pata karo kay yaah downo yahan kaisay ahay aur kab, exact information chahiya mujhay, galdi!

Shree: Ok sir.
Saying this Shree started to gather all the information he needed!

Shree: (to himself): bohot jald Riya tum humaray saath ho ghi aurr mujhay yah boring kaam nahi karnay hoon ghay. While Shree was gathering this information, Arjun went to make everyone some coffee, while making the coffee Arjun had a flashback of Riya: how she had made him drink the coffee and wanted to be a brilliant officer like him! As Arjun was making the coffee he bought 5 mugs into the conference room, where Chotu had already ordered his cutting chai and Shree was ready with the information, Chotu, Shree and Rathore were shocked to see Arjun coming with 5 mugs, and they knew who the 5th one was intended for...

Chotu: sir, app 5 mug coffee kay kyun...meinay app ki cutting chai order...
But as Chotu was speaking Shree could see Arjun's facial expression changing, he realised that while thinking about Riya he had made her favourite coffee for himself and her!

Shree: Chotu yaar...meinay Arjun sir say kaha tha kay mein dow cup coffee kay piyun gha, toh bhi na!

This was enough to convince Chotu but Rathore still knew that Arjun was missing Riya deeply.
Chotu: chalow yah cutting chai mein he pee layta hoon,
Chotu tried whispering but it was heard by everyone and this bought a smirk to their face.

Shree: sir, inn downo naam say flights check kien hain par iss name say koi bhi nahi hay!

Rathore: WHAT...are you 100% sure shree?

Shree: yes sir
This made the whole team ponder over this strange mystery.

Arjun: Rathore eik kaam kartein hain, hum cctv footage mangwatain hain, train station say

Shree: par sirf train station say kyun sir, woh toh plane, car kisi mein bhi yahan aa saktay thay?

Arjun: Shree inn downo nay apnay yah name use nahi kiyain hain, yah toh confirm hay aur agar inow nay apnay name badaal kay travel kiya hay toh phir train mein anna sab say simple ho gha, kyun passport banwanay mein time lagta hay, par train ticket mein name change karna koi bari baat nahi hay, abb samjhay ya...samjhown?

Rathore: team let's go!

Train station office

Rathore: ACP, Sameer Rathore, ETF! Mr. Dixit, Humein app ki cctv footage chahiya hay.

Mr. Dixit (man in-charge) : acha sir, abhi mill jahay ghi, par kab ki?

At this point Rathore wasn't too sure but fortunately our super cop knew exactly what to ask for.

Arjun: last week ki
Rathore, shree and Chotu looked at Arjun seeking for an explanation for his immediate and confident response. Mr. Dixit started looking for the footage while Arjun explained.

Arjun: Rathore, yah lowg apni identity badal kar ayy thay, yah toh pakka hay, phir kuch dinow baad inka murder, woh bhi drugs say. Yah lowg kisi say bhaag rahay thay par pakray gahay aur immediately inko maar diya! toh yah takreeban last week yahan ayein hoon ghay. Samjhay ya...samjahown?
As Arjun finished, Mr.Dixit had the CCTV footage ready, each member watched a day of the week to speed the process.
Shree who was watching Thursdays footage let out a confident confirmation.

Shree: sir, mil jahay...

Precap:

1) Arjun and Shree's secret mission, meeting 1!
2) ETF team in Kolkata

So thats it for now guys! Hope I havent disappointed you guys too much! i am just trying to finish the next part so it will be posted soon.
Edited by simple_dimple93 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
its wounderful update
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
nxt update vi jaldi karo. plz... :(
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update...
love Shree & Arjun today...
love their chemistry too...update soon...

Edited by Moumimon - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wonderful.. loved it... esp that coffee scene...😊 update soon!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome yaar...
loved the chemistry b/w arjun & shree.
precap sounds interesting...
update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome...thnks fr the pm...continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice part...nd intresting precap... continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nyc 1..
Rathod & Arjun is always ossam.
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wow superb yaar...
Waiting for the secret mission to start soon...

arjun made 5cups of coffee...and was missing ria..Aww that's so sweet...

cont soon

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