Ariya FF: Tumhay wapis ana hogha UPD,pt 7, pg 17

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Mimi2609

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Posted: 13 years ago

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very interesting

So Riya is alive?

And she was coming from Rathod's place

Please continue soon😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

nice

continue soon and pm me

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Posted: 13 years ago

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haiii...deadly suspense yaar!!!

Riya running away from Arjun?!!

wowowowow!!!

update soon...and thanks fr the pm

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pravallika

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Posted: 13 years ago

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awesome yaar...arjun OMG..he was so restless...nice update...thanks for pm

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Part 3 coming up guys!

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MystiqueDew

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Arjun is so restless & fighting with himself.

OSM update

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simple_dimple93

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Hey guys! back with my next update! Thank you for everyone for your likes and comments! love to read them, encourages me to carry on writing! please keep showering me with your love!

Hope i dont Disappoint you, here it goes...

Recap from previous: Arjun: RIYAAA! Arjun tried running after the car but it was useless, his body couldn't take it anymore and he collapsed on his knees as he saw the car leaving right in front of his eyes, he felt like he was losing himself all over again, but he wasn't going to let that happen.

Part 3-a

Arjun was bought back by a call by Shree yet again, he got up, composed himself and answered the phone.

Shree: sir, app nay woh file Rathore sir ko drop kar dhi?

Arjun: SHREE, MEINAY TUMHAY EIK DAFA KAHA NA KAY MEIN DROP KAR DOON GHA, TOH TUMHARI PROBLEM KYA HAY! Screamed Arjun,

Shree was surprised and scared of this sudden change in Arjun's behaviour

Shree: I'm sorry sir,
Arjun realised that he was being a little to harsh and changed his tone

Arjun: mein bas abhi file drop kar raha hoon Shree, thanks for reminding me

Shree: its ok sir, I'm sorry I won't disturb you again. Saying this Shree put the phone down and Arjun walked upto his car got lost in his thoughts again, he was confused, confused about the fact that what he had just seen and experienced in a matter of a few minutes...was it actually true.

Arjun: (talking to himself) ...meinay...abhi...Riya ko..par aisa kaysay ho sakta hay...par meri ankhen mujhay dhoka nahi day sakti, wohi masoom ankhen, wohi bal...wohi khubsoorat chayhra... Arjun then realised what he was saying and banged his fist on the car and let out a confused, frustrated and loud scream, he wasn't able to understand anything, why was he so worried about her, why did he think she was the most beautiful angel that had descended from heaven only for him, was she really there, if yes then why did she run away, if no then why did he see her, was it his imagination, was he only hallucinating, if he was then WHY! Arjun was going mad with all these questions taking over his mind, so many questions and he had to find the answer for EACH and EVERY question otherwise these questions would not let him live!

Arjun: Riya...MEIN TUMHAY DHOOND KAR HE RAHOON GHA, CHAHAY TUM KITNA BHAG LO...

Precap

Shree:
sir, actually hum soch rahay thay kay, riya ko gahay howay eik mahina ho gaya
hay toh humara farz banta hay kay hum uskay liyah kuch karein...
But before anyone could react or say anything everyone heard a loud roar strike
them...

Well that it for now...Will be posting part b tomorrow. I just wanted to separate them because I really wanted focus on Arjun's feelings and inner conflict, its important for Arjun to understand his emotions and this will help develop the love story! Sorry if it didnt live up to your expectations, please like and leave comments, your feedback means a lot to me.

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INDEX

Part 1: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/arjun/3265725/ariya-ff-tumhay-wapis-ana-hogha-upd-pt-7-pg-17

Part 2: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/68757417

Part 3-a: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/68897377

Part 3-b: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/arjun/3265725/ariya-ff-tumhay-wapis-ana-hogha-upd-pt-7-pg-17?pn=6

Part 4: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/69343959

Part 5: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/69598638

Part 6: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/70110475

Part 7: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/arjun/3265725/ariya-ff-tumhay-wapis-ana-hogha-upd-pt-7-pg-17